| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.381 | | leniency | 0.762 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 92.44% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1323 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.86% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1323 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "oppressive" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "sense of" | | 7 | "shimmered" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "echoes" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "racing" | | 12 | "etched" | | 13 | "unreadable" | | 14 | "intensity" | | 15 | "footsteps" | | 16 | "steeled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.17% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 95 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1305 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 89.29% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "At times, Rory swore she heard music—a lilting, wordless melody playing just outside her understanding." |
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| 72.66% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1099 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 1.55 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 2 | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 13 | | Seer | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Shade | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Laila | 1 | | Motes | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Grove | 3 | | Nyx | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Shade" | | 6 | "Eva" | | 7 | "Evan" | | 8 | "Laila" | | 9 | "Grove" | | 10 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.727 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 75.37% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed deeper as if painted by light instead of pigment" | | 1 | "seemed further ahead" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.766 | | wordCount | 1305 | | matches | | 0 | "not walking, but undulating, legs dissolving into shadows" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 95 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.53% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 32.63 | | std | 15.92 | | cv | 0.488 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 75 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 39 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 67 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 62 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 54 | | 17 | 33 | | 18 | 49 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 42 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 57 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 37 | | 34 | 38 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 36 | | 38 | 37 | | 39 | 37 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 199 | | matches | | 0 | "was already moving" | | 1 | "were splintering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 6 | | flaggedSentences | 19 | | totalSentences | 95 | | ratio | 0.2 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, she trampled last autumn's brittle leaves along Richmond Park’s brambled edge, boots squelching in mud, hoodie zipped tight against a gray city chill; the next, she felt as if she’d plunged into a waking dream." | | 1 | "The space between the oaks shuddered—she glimpsed a quicksilver ripple, barely more than a trick of light, then air smelled abruptly of unfamiliar wildflowers and turned warmer, humming with something indefinable." | | 2 | "She looked back—behind her, the London skyline lagged, receding in oppressive fog." | | 3 | "The Seer moved with unhurried confidence, not so much disturbing the grass as gliding atop it—leaving no mark at all." | | 4 | "Shadows shifted around her boots—they had lost all sense of direction, of time." | | 5 | "As she passed under a branch veined with silvery moss, she felt an invisible resistance—static prickling her skin—like crossing from one waking world into another." | | 6 | "Nyx moved beside her—not walking, but undulating, legs dissolving into shadows." | | 7 | "Flowers pulsed with gentle, golden light when bent; one large blue bloom, brushed by Rory’s fingers, let out a tiny laughter—the sound of a child’s giggle." | | 8 | "Rory’s heart twisted—she saw herself and Eva as children, racing through autumn grass, Evan’s hand gripping her arm too tight, her mother’s soft scolding." | | 9 | "She heard her name—Laila—whispered as if by a memory she hadn’t meant to bring along." | | 10 | "At times, Rory swore she heard music—a lilting, wordless melody playing just outside her understanding." | | 11 | "Her gown—woven from grass and shadow—shifted with each breeze." | | 12 | "“Rifts open; rifts close. The Veil wears thin on such days as this, with the sun indecisive yet longing for solstice.” Her pale eyes did not blink." | | 13 | "Around her, the Grove fell silent; even the breeze seemed to pause." | | 14 | "“Protection is the first lie mortals crave. What you will have is choice.” She lifted one hand; moonlight pooled in her palm, coalescing into a leaf-shaped blade—slender, glimmering with its own cold radiance." | | 15 | "The dagger felt impossibly cold, even through callused fingertips; it hummed with unfamiliar power, the promise of moonsilver and dangerous possibility." | | 16 | "As the gift exchanged hands, the Grove itself seemed to shudder—shadows crawling, branches bending closer, the boundaries between worlds stretching to their limits." | | 17 | "Time felt stretched thin, thoughts drifting treacherously—she had no idea whether minutes or months were splintering outside these trees." | | 18 | "She took Isolde’s gift, met the gaze of her companions, and stepped deeper still into the heart of the Grove—where the ordinary world already felt a half-remembered dream, and every footstep whispered of things unraveled and wild." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1124 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "strange five-petaled blooms" |
| | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.03291814946619217 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012455516014234875 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 95 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 95 | | mean | 13.74 | | std | 7.99 | | cv | 0.582 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 31 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 81.05% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5052631578947369 | | totalSentences | 95 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 85.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Light warped along the Shade’s" | | 1 | "Somewhere, at the edge of" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "She hesitated, pulse thrumming in" | | 1 | "She looked back—behind her, the" | | 2 | "Their colors seemed deeper, as" | | 3 | "Her phone’s screen, when checked," | | 4 | "Their violet eyes widened." | | 5 | "She paused before a toppled" | | 6 | "They pointed at a pool" | | 7 | "She heard her name—Laila—whispered as" | | 8 | "She tore her gaze away." | | 9 | "They pressed on deeper, past" | | 10 | "It faded when she turned" | | 11 | "Her gown—woven from grass and" | | 12 | "Her face was unreadable, ageless," | | 13 | "Her voice struck the ear" | | 14 | "Her pale eyes did not" | | 15 | "She lifted one hand; moonlight" | | 16 | "She extended it to Rory." | | 17 | "She clung to the warmth" | | 18 | "They were not alone." | | 19 | "They had come seeking answers," |
| | ratio | 0.269 | |
| 62.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "The world changed the instant" | | 1 | "The space between the oaks" | | 2 | "She hesitated, pulse thrumming in" | | 3 | "She looked back—behind her, the" | | 4 | "A slender hand reached from" | | 5 | "The Seer moved with unhurried" | | 6 | "Nyx drifted behind Rory, half-emerged" | | 7 | "Nyx’s voice brushed Rory’s ear," | | 8 | "The ground welcomed her, vaulting" | | 9 | "Their colors seemed deeper, as" | | 10 | "The air itself tasted sweet" | | 11 | "Lichen crept along the lowest" | | 12 | "Aurora touched the crescent scar" | | 13 | "Shadows shifted around her boots—they" | | 14 | "Her phone’s screen, when checked," | | 15 | "Rory tried to keep her" | | 16 | "Rory could see their shapes" | | 17 | "The air between the trees" | | 18 | "Rory hurried, boots thumping, breath" | | 19 | "Nyx moved beside her—not walking," |
| | ratio | 0.795 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "Before her, the world brightened," | | 1 | "Even as marvel and terror" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 88.95% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 53 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "One moment, she trampled last autumn's brittle leaves along Richmond Park’s brambled edge, boots squelching in mud, hoodie zipped tight against a gray city chil…" | | 1 | "Three oaks loomed ahead, their trunks fused together, so ancient their bark curled in whorled ridges that resembled sleeping faces." | | 2 | "But Isolde was already moving, trailing a finger along the standing stones that ringed the dream-quiet glade." | | 3 | "Rory’s heart twisted—she saw herself and Eva as children, racing through autumn grass, Evan’s hand gripping her arm too tight, her mother’s soft scolding." |
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| 62.50% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "The word came out, afraid" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.095 | | leniency | 0.19 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |