Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMRCE51JPEXZQCRCWKNBJ02

Run Details

Duration:
1m 42s
Cost:
$0.001654
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air grew thick the moment they crossed the threshold. It wasn’t a physical weight, like smoke or fog, but a density that pressed against Aurora’s eardrums, muting the hum of London traffic that had been fading for the last mile. Beside her, Nyx dissolved. For a heartbeat, the shadow cast by the ancient oak of Richmond Park’s standing stones stretched unnaturally long, rippling like oil on water, before coalescing back into a humanoid silhouette. The Shade took a deep, gasping breath that seemed to suck the very light out of the gap between the world-tree roots. When Nyx solidified, their faintly glowing violet eyes were wide, tracking the chaotic shift in the ambient magic. “Strange,” Nyx whispered, their voice immediately swallowed by the stillness. “The wall is thin here. I taste the rotting meat and the wine. It’s pungent.” Isolde moved ahead, her silver hair catching a light that Aurora couldn’t see. She stepped over a patch of moss that looked suspiciously like a weeping face frozen in stone. The Half-Fae’s bare feet made no sound as she navigated the overgrown path that had formed overnight. “Don’t look back,” Isolde murmured, not turning around. Her voice was like wind chimes struck too softly. “What you left behind is already changing. London is wet and gray; this place is loud in its richness.” Aurora tightened her grip on the backpack strap across her chest. Inside, resting against the cold aluminum, was the Heartstone. She hadn’t felt it warm up since Cardiff, but as they stepped fully onto the other side of the standing stones, the pendant shifted against her ribs. It felt heavy, like a small stone dropped into a water pail. It was vibrating—a low, frantic thrum that seemed to sync with the frantic beating of her own heart. They had crossed the Veil, and they had arrived in Dymas. The first thing Aurora noticed wasn’t the sky, though that was a dizzying sight all on its own. Above them, the expanse of Hel wasn’t black or bruised purple, but a smoky, warm amber—the color of a setting sun trapped in a honey jar. It cast long, golden shadows that stretched toward the horizon where… vines? Trees? They were massive, twisting structures that defied the imagination of a Londoner used to parklands. Their bark was the color of parchment, and from the branches hung fruit the size of melons, glowing with an inner, ruby luminescence. The scent hit them next. It was the smell of a banquet hall on New Year’s Eve multiplied by a thousand. Roasted meats hung heavy in the air, mixed with the sweet, cloying aroma of figs and citrus, and beneath it all, the smell of old copper and dust. “Keep moving,” Aurora said. Her voice sounded tinny in her own ears. She wasn’t the leader; she was the delivery girl, the one who got things done, but in the face of this absurdity, her training kicked in. “The stone says we’re close.” “Directions are not my strength,” Nyx replied, flickering slightly as they stepped into the amber light. “I only see shadows. And all I see are… things to eat.” “It’s not real, Nyx. It’s magic,” Aurora said, though the doubt lingered at the back of her throat. The scenery here was too perfect. The grass beneath their boots was a vibrant, impossible shade of green, unmarred by worms or jagged rocks. Even the light seemed to cling to the leaves of the giant flora, magnifying every detail. Isolde stopped. She was standing at the edge of a clearing, a bowl of lush greenery surrounded by the towering, parchment-like trees. “The Grove was small,” Isolde observed, her pale lavender eyes scanning the horizon. “This is a table. A feast for one.” Aurora stepped up beside her. The Heartstone in her pocket suddenly flared hot, searing a line of fire across her hip. She stumbled forward, clutching her side, and peered into the center of the clearing. There was a lake, but it was made of honey or oil, reflecting the amber sky perfectly. And floating in the center was a structure that looked less like architecture and more like a cell from a nightmare made opulent. It was a stone pavilion, draped in heavy silks of crimson and gold, but the most arresting feature was the interior. Through the open door, Aurora could see a table spread with platters so large they looked built for giants. Silverware gleamed in the light, condensation dripping from goblets of rich red wine. “Showtime,” Aurora breathed, stepping into the light. The heat was immediate. It wasn’t an unpleasant heat, but a humidity that slicked the back of her neck with sweat. She took the Heartstone out, holding it in her palm. The crimson gem inside swirled, pulsing erratically. “It’s drawing us in,” Aurora said, looking down at the artifact. “To the center,” Nyx added, their voice lacking its usual edge of amusement. They drifted toward the pavilion, their form flickering in and out of solidity, as if the magic of the place was trying to absorb them. Isolde stepped onto the stone bridge that spanned the honey lake. Her feet hovered inches above the surface. “Belphegor does not share,” the Seer warned softly. “We are intruders. And to the Glutton, hunger is never a sin. It is a virtue.” Aurora quickened her pace, matching Isolde’s glide. As they drew closer to the pavilion, the details sharpened. The smell grew overwhelming—a heady mix of spices and roasted poultry. She saw a cake on a platter that resembled a mountain range, layers upon layers of icing dusting its peaks. There was movement inside the pavilion. A figure turned. It was enormous, bloated with a layer of pale fat that rippled over velvet robes. Its eyes were milky white, pits of vacuum that drank in the light. It was Prince Belphegor, or a creature wearing his visage. The Heartstone in Aurora’s hand burned, forcing her eyes shut against the sudden glare of crimson light erupting from the gem. She stumbled, almost falling, but Nyx caught her. The Shade didn’t touch her; they were a cold void of shadow that wrapped around her arm, anchoring her. “Close your eyes,” Nyx whispered. “It smells better when you can’t see it.” Aurora forced her eyes open. The pavilion was empty again. The feast remained, a static image of abundance. But the Heartstone was no longer warm; it was cold. It pulsed with a rhythmic, mechanical thud, like a clock wound too tight. “Did it leave?” Aurora asked, her voice shaking. “The feast is a mirage,” Isolde said, her hand resting on the hilt of the sword at her hip—the Fae-Forged Blade she had given Aurora earlier. “It is a distraction. It offers the soul the only thing it thinks it wants: satisfaction.” Aurora looked around. The light in Dymas was changing. The amber sky began to bruise purple, the stars blinking into existence in the gaps of the drifting clouds. The alien heat was turning chill, the air thickening with a sudden, unnatural frost. “We need to leave,” Aurora said, clutching the Heartstone. “The solstice weakens the Veil, yes? It’s weakening now.” “It is weakening fast,” Isolde confirmed, turning back toward the woods. “The portal opens soon. We must not be here when it slams shut.” They began to run. The pavilion, the lake of honey, the massive fruit trees—all of it began to dissolve, turning to mist as Aurora’s lungs burned and her legs felt heavy. Nyx ran beside her, their movement fluid, a single dark streak cutting through the golden fog. “Go, Rory!” Nyx shouted, their form flickering as they turned to face a looming shape—perhaps a beast of Gluttony, perhaps just a trick of the light. “Jump!” Aurora didn’t wait to ask why. The tree line loomed ahead, dark and looming. The Heartstone was blindingly bright in her hand, shattering the mist around them. She saw the gap in the trees, the space where the London sky—gray and wet and unremarkable—should have been. She took a leap of faith. The sensation of falling stretched out for an eternity, suspended in a void of violet and gold. Then, gravity reasserted itself with a jarring jolt. She landed hard on asphalt, breath knocked from her lungs. The smell of exhaust and rain hit her immediately. She scrambled up, wiping mud from her hands. She was on a London street corner, wet with drizzle, the Golden Empress restaurant sign buzzing overhead. “Rory?” Aurora spun around. Nyx was solid again, standing under the streetlamp, shaking off drops of water that had never fallen from the London sky. Isolde was adjusting her shawl, looking bored, though the amber light still lingered in her lavender eyes. “You missed the catch,” Nyx said, a smirk returning to their features. “I caught myself,” Aurora retorted, though her hand was still trembling as she looked down at the Heartstone. The crimson gem was dark again, cooling rapidly, no longer pulsing with the heartbeat of the realm they had just left. It felt heavy, a dead weight of stone in her pocket. She looked back toward the gap in the road, where there was nothing but a brick wall and a pigeon pecking at some crumbs. But for a second, just a second, she swore she could smell roasted figs and old copper. “Let’s go,” Aurora said, turning away from the world of the living. “I have a delivery to make.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
10.5263% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"Nyx whispered, their voice immediately swallowed by the stillness [immediately]"
1"Isolde murmured, not turning around [around]"
2"Nyx replied, flickering slightly as they stepped into the amber light [slightly]"
3"the Seer warned softly [softly]"
4"Isolde confirmed, turning back toward the woods [back]"
5"Aurora retorted, though her hand was still trembling as she looked down at the Heartstone [still]"
6"Aurora said, turning away from the world of the living [away]"
62.2879% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1591
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
3"suddenly"
4"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.7172% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1591
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"searing"
count1
1
word"loomed"
count1
2
word"looming"
count2
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"navigated"
count1
highlights
0"searing"
1"loomed"
2"looming"
3"velvet"
4"weight"
5"navigated"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences109
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean34.35
std21.2
cv0.617
sampleLengths
045
170
225
347
436
577
611
795
849
943
1028
1158
1222
1321
1435
1593
167
1738
1811
1938
2018
2124
2248
236
2441
2548
2613
2741
288
2942
3042
3118
3224
3331
3416
3527
3646
376
3844
3925
401
4141
4212
4350
4441
4518
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"was made"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs241
matches
0"was vibrating"
1"was standing"
2"was trying"
3"was turning"
4"was adjusting"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1399
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.034310221586847746
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.010007147962830594
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean12.95
std6.98
cv0.539
sampleLengths
010
131
24
330
422
518
610
715
813
917
1017
118
129
1319
1411
159
1627
1712
1818
1911
2018
2126
2211
231
241
2515
2623
275
2816
2928
304
318
3226
335
3416
3512
3618
376
3818
3916
402
4120
4213
438
445
4516
4614
4717
4823
4921
54.9180% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.36885245901639346
totalSentences122
uniqueOpeners45
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount17
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered, their voice immediately swallowed by the stillness (whisper, immediately swallow)"
1"Isolde murmured, not turning around (murmur, does not turn around)"
2"Nyx replied, flickering slightly as they stepped into the amber light (reply, flicker slightly step)"
3"Aurora said, though the doubt lingered at the back of her throat (say, linger)"
4"Isolde observed, her pale lavender eyes scanning the horizon (observe, scan)"
5"Aurora breathed, stepping into the light (breathe, step)"
6"Aurora said, looking down at the artifact (say, look down)"
7"Nyx added, their voice lacking its usual edge of amusement (add, lack)"
8"the Seer warned softly (warn softly)"
9"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
10"Isolde said, her hand resting on the hilt of the sword at her hip—the Fae-Forged Blade she had given Aurora earlier (say, rest give)"
11"Aurora said, clutching the Heartstone (say, clutch)"
12"Isolde confirmed, turning back toward the woods (confirm, turn)"
13"shouted (shout)"
14"Nyx said, a smirk returning to their features (say, return)"
15"Aurora retorted, though her hand was still trembling as she looked down at the Heartstone (retort, be still look down)"
16"Aurora said, turning away from the world of the living (say, turn away)"
81.0264%