| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.476 | | leniency | 0.952 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.095 | |
| 89.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1375 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1375 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "wavering" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "marble" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "warmth" | | 9 | "depths" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "flicked" | | 13 | "echo" | | 14 | "chill" | | 15 | "etched" | | 16 | "echoes" | | 17 | "quivered" | | 18 | "trembled" | | 19 | "flickered" | | 20 | "traced" | | 21 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1365 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.64% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1228 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.55 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Isolde | 11 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 10 | | Warmth | 1 | | Aurora | 19 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Veil | 1 | | Together | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "Warmth" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.726 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like a smile" |
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| 53.48% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.465 | | wordCount | 1365 | | matches | | 0 | "not just a boundary but centuries of silence" | | 1 | "not earth but smooth, burnished marble flecked with gold" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 120 | | matches | | |
| 82.45% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 42.66 | | std | 18.71 | | cv | 0.439 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 53 | | 2 | 29 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 72 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 43 | | 8 | 35 | | 9 | 50 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 35 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 65 | | 16 | 80 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 76 | | 21 | 37 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 44 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 59 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 223 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 120 | | ratio | 0.108 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Isolde’s silver hair drifted in a breeze that smelled of wildflowers and something colder—old moonlight." | | 1 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes swept over the courtyard of abandoned feast tables—each set with tarnished silver platters, bowls carved from polished ivory, now empty or crusted with dust." | | 2 | "Beyond, a vast archway beckoned—its lintel carved with scenes of feasting, knives flashing, mouths gaping as though the stone itself were hungry." | | 3 | "The honey was sweet, too sweet—cloying, with a bitter undertow that curled her stomach." | | 4 | "Torches along the walls flared to life—flames the color of sunset." | | 5 | "The walls pressed close; rough-hewn stone etched with sigils that pulsed in time with her heartbeat." | | 6 | "Aurora knelt to trace one sigil—three interlocking spirals around an eight-pointed star." | | 7 | "The stair ended in a narrow tunnel hung with phosphorescent fungi glowing pale lavender—echoes of Isolde’s hair." | | 8 | "She considered slicing one grape free—but the instant the blade sliced air, the grapes quivered, exuding a bright red juice that pooled across the dais and dripped down like blood." | | 9 | "The phosphorescent fungi flickered out; the sigils along the tunnel corridors ignited, casting grotesque shadows." | | 10 | "Aurora lifted her pendant; a thin filigree of crimson light cut through the black." | | 11 | "Aurora pressed her blade’s pommel to the dais door—locked by unseen wards." | | 12 | "She felt the weight of the pendant against her heart—an anchor to this place, a warning that the Veil bulged at its edges." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1245 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "slender leaf-shaped dagger" |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.024096385542168676 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004819277108433735 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 120 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 120 | | mean | 11.38 | | std | 5.99 | | cv | 0.526 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 2 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 13 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 14 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 60.83% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.375 | | totalSentences | 120 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she guided her gaze" | | 1 | "Then, in her riddle-song," | | 2 | "Somewhere in the walls, metal" | | 3 | "Then the vault doors slammed" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "They emerged beneath an impossible" | | 1 | "she whispered in her riddling" | | 2 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 3 | "She approached a low table" | | 4 | "She resisted the urge to" | | 5 | "She forced herself back." | | 6 | "She brushed a finger against" | | 7 | "She gripped the Fae-forged blade" | | 8 | "She moved to one basin" | | 9 | "She shook her hand and" | | 10 | "She glanced at Isolde." | | 11 | "She let it pass." | | 12 | "They had no time for" | | 13 | "She climbed to her feet" | | 14 | "Their light revealed a massive" | | 15 | "She dared one step closer." | | 16 | "She considered slicing one grape" | | 17 | "She backed away, dragging Isolde" | | 18 | "They stood in darkness so" | | 19 | "She exhaled, her breath thick." |
| | ratio | 0.24 | |
| 51.35% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the final" | | 1 | "Nyx hung at the edge" | | 2 | "Aurora’s heart thudded, matching the" | | 3 | "They emerged beneath an impossible" | | 4 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 5 | "A hush pressed in, as" | | 6 | "Isolde tipped her head, pale" | | 7 | "she whispered in her riddling" | | 8 | "Nyx drifted forward, shadowed feet" | | 9 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 10 | "The silence felt the weight" | | 11 | "The pendant throbbed, a heartbeat" | | 12 | "She approached a low table" | | 13 | "The cup brimmed with thick," | | 14 | "She resisted the urge to" | | 15 | "Nyx’s whisper slithered at her" | | 16 | "She forced herself back." | | 17 | "Marble pillars stood in pairs," | | 18 | "Aurora murmured, stepping beneath the" | | 19 | "Warmth rippled through the corridor," |
| | ratio | 0.817 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 82.32% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Isolde’s silver hair drifted in a breeze that smelled of wildflowers and something colder—old moonlight." | | 1 | "Lucent vines trailed overhead, heavy with copper-hued grapes that glowed like embers." | | 2 | "Beyond, a vast archway beckoned—its lintel carved with scenes of feasting, knives flashing, mouths gaping as though the stone itself were hungry." | | 3 | "Mammoth iron chains drooped from the ceiling, holding gourds that swung gently, releasing spores that drifted like motes of gold." | | 4 | "She considered slicing one grape free—but the instant the blade sliced air, the grapes quivered, exuding a bright red juice that pooled across the dais and drip…" |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, voice urgent" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.476 | | leniency | 0.952 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.476 | |