| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.548 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1175 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 53.19% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1175 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stomach" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "chill" | | 4 | "dances" | | 5 | "comfortable" | | 6 | "tracing" | | 7 | "footsteps" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 47 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1163 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 868 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.96 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Dymas | 4 | | Aurora | 17 | | Isolde | 8 | | Veil | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Nyx | 6 | | Shade | 2 | | Gluttony | 2 | | Fae | 4 | | Courts | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Envy | 1 | | Wrath | 1 | | Pride | 1 | | Sloth | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Dymas" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Gluttony" | | 6 | "Fae" | | 7 | "Silas" | | 8 | "Wrath" | | 9 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.521 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if existing in the spaces between places was a homecoming" | | 1 | "seemed more comfortable here than Aurora had ever seen them, as if existing in the spaces between places was a homecoming" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1163 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 36.34 | | std | 19.67 | | cv | 0.541 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 40 | | 3 | 36 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 37 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 75 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 64 | | 11 | 69 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 70 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 43 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 45 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 141 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 82 | | ratio | 0.098 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the gentle pulse that usually warned of nearby portals—this was an insistent heat that made her reach up and lift the chain away from her skin." | | 1 | "She'd seen this clearing in every season—wildflowers blooming impossibly through winter snow, spring blossoms falling like rain in autumn." | | 2 | "Grand pavilions rose in the distance, and even from here she could smell it—roasted meat and exotic spices, wine and honey and things that had no earthly names." | | 3 | "Gluttony's mark—a chalice overflowing." | | 4 | "Greed's—a hand clutching coins." | | 5 | "More of Dymas bled through, close enough now that she could hear music—lutes and pipes playing a melody that wound through her mind like smoke." | | 6 | "\"Now.\" Aurora grabbed Nyx's arm—solid enough to grip, barely—and ran." | | 7 | "But Aurora's hand shook as she touched the Fae blade's hilt, and when she looked back at the grove, she could still see it—just for a moment—overlaid with amber light and endless vineyards and a tall figure moving closer, drawn by the scent of prey." |
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| 93.33% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 882 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.047619047619047616 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011337868480725623 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 82 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 82 | | mean | 14.18 | | std | 8.7 | | cv | 0.613 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 10 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 1 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 85.77% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.5365853658536586 | | totalSentences | 82 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 52.91% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "More of Dymas bled through," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 11 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd crossed the threshold into" | | 1 | "She glanced back at Nyx," | | 2 | "They paused, their violet eyes" | | 3 | "Their bark felt warm under" | | 4 | "She'd seen this clearing in" | | 5 | "Her mouth watered despite her" | | 6 | "Her silver hair moved in" | | 7 | "They seemed more comfortable here" | | 8 | "She recognized the symbols from" | | 9 | "she said, and for once" | | 10 | "She stumbled through, Nyx flowing" |
| | ratio | 0.175 | |
| 79.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 48 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber light of Dymas" | | 1 | "She'd crossed the threshold into" | | 2 | "The Heartstone pendant burned against" | | 3 | "The crimson gem's inner glow" | | 4 | "Isolde's voice drifted from somewhere" | | 5 | "Something sweet and cloying, like" | | 6 | "She glanced back at Nyx," | | 7 | "The Shade's whisper seemed to" | | 8 | "They paused, their violet eyes" | | 9 | "Aurora stepped forward, past the" | | 10 | "Their bark felt warm under" | | 11 | "Nyx murmured, but they followed" | | 12 | "The grove opened before them," | | 13 | "She'd seen this clearing in" | | 14 | "Flowers bloomed and withered in" | | 15 | "A stream cut through the" | | 16 | "Her mouth watered despite her" | | 17 | "That was Gluttony's pull, she" | | 18 | "The realm's nature seeping through" | | 19 | "Isolde materialized beside a tree" |
| | ratio | 0.762 | |
| 79.37% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, with Dymas bleeding through," |
| | ratio | 0.016 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber light of Dymas seeped through the grove's boundary like honey through muslin, wrong and viscous in a way that made Aurora's stomach clench." | | 1 | "Not the gentle pulse that usually warned of nearby portals—this was an insistent heat that made her reach up and lift the chain away from her skin." | | 2 | "A stream cut through the center, its water flowing backward and forward at once, catching light that came from no visible sun." | | 3 | "Grand pavilions rose in the distance, and even from here she could smell it—roasted meat and exotic spices, wine and honey and things that had no earthly names." | | 4 | "They seemed more comfortable here than Aurora had ever seen them, as if existing in the spaces between places was a homecoming." | | 5 | "The standing stones that ringed the inner grove were older than Isolde, older perhaps than the Fae Courts themselves." | | 6 | "A figure moving through the vineyards, too tall and too perfect to be human, crowned with something that caught the amber light and scattered it like broken gla…" |
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| 36.76% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "They paused, their violet eyes flaring brighter" | | 1 | "Isolde appeared, her footsteps silent as always" | | 2 | "Nyx's form had, their humanoid shape sharp-edged and tense" |
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| 53.23% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 31 | | tagDensity | 0.161 | | leniency | 0.323 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.194 | |