Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMRCY2VCN4A9T15KCMKVP9N

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Duration:
4m 31s
Cost:
$0.022960
Provider:
SiliconFlow

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Heartstone seared against Rory's sternum, a coal-hot heartbeat that had nothing to do with her own. She yanked the pendant out from beneath her collar, the silver chain biting into her nape, and stared at the deep crimson gem. It pulsed, deep and rhythmic, like a second heart trapped in crystal and blood. "It’s close," she said. Nyx drifted beside her, approximately six feet of living shadow that somehow still managed to loom. In the twilight of Richmond Park, they were nearly invisible, only the faint violet glow of their eyes marking their presence against the darkening trees. "The Veil wears thin here," they whispered, their voice carrying the sound of autumn leaves scraping ancient cobblestones. "Can you feel it, Aurora? The hunger in the air?" Rory could. It had started as a gnawing in her stomach three blocks back, an emptiness that no amount of leftover dumplings from her delivery route had satisfied. Now it was a bone-deep ache, a hollowness that made her teeth hurt and her hands shake. Isolde moved ahead of them, her waist-length silver hair catching light that didn't seem to exist in the December dusk. The Half-Fae seer walked barefoot over the frost-killed grass, leaving no depressions behind her, as though the earth itself refused to claim her. She paused near a cluster of ancient oak standing stones—massive, gnarled trunks that shouldn't have grown in such a formation, their bark black with age. "Through the teeth of stone," Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes fixed on something Rory couldn't see. "Where the amber sky weeps excess. The Glutton waits, but the meal is not yet served." Rory's fingers brushed the hilt of the dagger at her hip—the Fae-Forged Blade Isolde had given her three nights prior. It was cold even through her jeans, a chill that bit deeper than London's winter air, the moonsilver faintly luminescent against her palm. "Is it safe?" "Safety is a flavor," Isolde replied, stepping between two of the oaks. "Some find it sweet. Others choke on it." The air shimmered. Not like heat haze—sharper, more deliberate, a faint shimmering distortion that made Rory's eyes water. The standing stones framed it perfectly. This was a rift point, a tear in the Veil that separated Earth from Hel, monitored in theory by the Wardens but clearly unattended here. The Heartstone flared against Rory's chest, bright enough to cast red shadows across her hands. "Together," Nyx said, and for a moment their shadow-form solidified enough to touch Rory's shoulder. Their grip was cold, insubstantial as fog, but it anchored her. They stepped through. The transition felt like being turned inside out through a keyhole. Rory's ears popped, then kept popping, a chain of explosions that cascaded down her spine. The smell of London—exhaust, damp wool, fried onions from street vendors—vanished, replaced by something rich and cloying. Honey roasted with rosemary. Wine reduced to syrup. Butter browning in copper pans. Her straight shoulder-length black hair lifted in a wind that felt warm and sticky, like breath. Rory opened her eyes. The sky was amber. Not orange, not gold, but a deep, translucent honey-color that cast everything in warm, saturated light. It pressed against her retinas, alien and beautiful, turning the world into a photograph tinged with sepia. She looked at her own hands; her skin seemed burnished, gilded, and the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist stood out pale against the strange light. "God," she breathed. "Not here," Nyx whispered. They had gone translucent, their form flickering like candle smoke caught in a draft. "Not in Belphegor's domain." They stood on a terrace of white marble that stretched into impossible distance. Below, the land rolled away in waves of cultivation. Vineyards climbed hillsides in geometric perfection, the grapes swollen to the size of plums, purple and obscene, dripping nectar that steamed when it hit the soil. Orchards bore fruits Rory couldn't name—things that looked like pears but shimmered with iridescent skin, trees heavy with what appeared to be crystallized sugar rather than blossoms, humming with bees the size of her thumb. And everywhere, the smell of food. Not just food—feasting. Roasting meat, yes, but also chocolate bitter and dark, truffles dug from earth that smelled of myrrh, bread crusts crackling with steam, the brine of oysters opened moments ago. Rory's mouth flooded with saliva. The hollowness in her gut sharpened into a cramp. She pressed her hand against her stomach, feeling the outline of her ribs, trying to remember the cool-headed thinking that had always defined her. "It consumes you already," Isolde said. She stood at the terrace's edge, her silver hair moving in a wind that didn't touch Rory's face. "The air here is appetite. To breathe is to hunger." "Then stop breathing," Rory snapped, more harshly than she intended. She focused on the crescent scar on her left wrist, touching it with her right thumb—a grounding technique she'd used since childhood, since the accident with the broken bottle. The physical memory helped. She was Rory. She was solid. She was not just a stomach with legs. They descended a staircase that spiraled down through clouds of steam rising from kitchens built into the hillside. The architecture made Rory's eyes water—towers built of stacked copper pots that somehow stood two hundred feet high, archways made of crossed breadsticks that supported tons of stone, windows glazed with what looked like solidified consommé, through which warm light glowed. In a courtyard paved with what appeared to be fossilized cheese wheels, they found the first inhabitants. They might have been human once. Now they were... stretched. A woman with skin the color of burnt caramel stirred a cauldron that bubbled with scarlet liquid, her arms elongated to twice normal length to reach the bottom, fingers multiplied into wooden spoons. A man nearby had no mouth, only a second set of nostrils flaring above his upper lip, yet he was tasting wine by dipping his fingers into a barrel and rubbing the liquid behind his ears, his body swollen with stored calories that distorted his silhouette. "Helbound," Nyx said, their voice barely audible. They were thinner here, as though the realm's density pressed upon them. "Contracted souls. They can never eat enough, or eat right. The hunger is their punishment and their purpose." The long-armed woman turned. Her eyes were milky, cataract-white, but she smiled with genuine pleasure. "New tasters? The Prince requires judges for the midnight competition. Come, come—the fourth course is beginning." Rory's hand fell to the Fae-Forged Blade. The weapon was painfully cold now, the cold of deep winter nights, and that chill helped clear the fog of scent from her head. Her cool-headed thinking reasserted itself, analyzing exits, counting enemies, calculating distances. "We're not here to eat." "But you are," the woman said, her smile widening until it cracked the corners of her lips. They bled, viscous and dark like balsamic reduction, but she didn't seem to notice. "Everyone is here to eat. Even the shadows." She gestured to Nyx. "Even the pretty lie-walker." To Isolde. Isolde had gone still, her feet hovering an inch above the marble, leaving no footprints. "We seek the source of the bleeding sky," she said, her voice musical and strange, carrying the weight of her Fae compulsion not to lie, though her words wrapped themselves in riddles. "The orchard where the trees bear stone instead of fruit." The helbound woman's smile faltered. "The Petrified Grove. Yes. But you cannot go there without tasting. The Prince's law." Rory felt the pendant pulse against her chest—not with heat now, but with a warning thrum. Something was wrong. The amber sky seemed to press closer, heavy as syrup, and she realized the courtyard had no visible exits anymore, the walls rising around them like the sides of a throat. "What happens if we taste?" Rory asked, playing for time, her eyes scanning for the rift-point, for any shimmer in the air. The woman's mouth opened, and kept opening. Her jaw unhinged with a wet click. "You stay," she said, voice dropping to a gurgle. "You always stay. The food is so good here. The best meal you ever had, over and over, until you are the meal." Unease prickled down Rory's spine, cold and electric. She stepped back, her shoe squeaking on the marble. The sound was too loud. Everything was too loud—the bubbling pots, the sizzling of unseen grills, the wet sounds of chewing from somewhere just out of sight where other helbound feasted on things that screamed. "Run," Isolde said softly. But there was nowhere to run. The courtyard had changed while they stood there. The archways were gone, replaced by walls of stacked plates that rose to the amber sky, clattering together in a percussive rhythm like teeth. The helbound souls were advancing, their movements jerky, wrong, like marionettes with tangled strings, their extended limbs reaching, dripping with sauces and hunger. Nyx became solid in an instant, drawing shadows around them like a cloak, their violet eyes blazing. "The rift," they hissed. "It moves. We must find the anchor." Rory pulled the Heartstone from her shirt. It was glowing steadily now, crimson light pushing back against the amber gloom, pulsing with warmth. The pulse was directional, pulling toward the far end of the courtyard where a fountain gurgled not with water, but with thick, dark gravy that smelled of rosemary and regret. "There," Rory said, her voice steady despite the fear. They ran. The helbound screamed, a sound like tearing meat, and pursued. Rory sprinted, her boots slipping on grease-slicked marble, her breath burning in her lungs, the Fae-Forged Blade gripped tight in her sweating hand. She didn't look back. The air was thick, resisting her movement like walking through warm caramel, trying to hold her, to keep her for the feast. Isolde moved beside her, floating, her feet never touching the ground, leaving no footprints even on the marble. She moved through the helbound like smoke, and where she passed, the pursuing creatures stumbled, confused by her Fae nature, by the inability of the realm of Gluttony to claim someone who needed no sustenance. "Through the fountain," Isolde called out, her silver hair streaming behind her. "Where the liquid flows up, not down!" Rory saw it. The gravy in the fountain wasn't falling; it was rising, defying gravity, floating in droplets that caught the amber light like perverse stars. The Heartstone tugged her toward it, magnetic, desperate, burning against her skin. Nyx reached the fountain first and plunged their hand into the rising liquid. "Here! The rift is here!" Rory didn't slow down. She leaped, tucking her legs, and hit the column of rising liquid with her shoulder. Cold. Freezing, absolute cold that made the Fae blade feel lukewarm. The gravy wasn't gravy; it was the essence of the Veil itself, liquid boundary between worlds, between the sin of excess and the gray reality of Earth. She tasted cinnamon and grave dirt and something else—the metallic tang of the pendant's silver chain. Then she was falling up, or down, or sideways through the color amber. She hit grass. Real grass, cold and wet with English dew. Rory rolled onto her back, gasping, the Heartstone still clutched in her fist. Above her, the sky was gray, London gray, beautiful and dull and perfect. Rain began to fall, fat drops that tasted of nothing but sky and pollution and relief. Nyx materialized beside her, their form solid but trembling, less shadow and more shape than they had been in Dymas. Isolde stood nearby, watching the standing stones, her ethereal face unreadable. The oaks were just oaks again, ancient and gnarled. The shimmer was gone, the Veil sealed. "The Petrified Grove is not there," Isolde said, her lavender eyes troubled as she turned to Rory. "It was a lie I told, to test the Veil's strength. It held. But barely." Rory sat up, shaking, rainwater plastering her black hair to her forehead. Her left wrist throbbed where the crescent scar lay. She touched it, grounding herself. She was Rory. She was solid. She was home. But she could still smell the roasting honey. And part of her—a small, terrible part that the amber light had awakened—wanted to go back and taste just one bite.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
80.7018% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Rory snapped, more harshly than she intended [more harshly]"
1"Nyx said, their voice barely audible [barely]"
2"Isolde said softly [softly]"
90.3939% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount2082
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"softly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.9539% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount2082
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"tinged"
count1
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count2
4
word"marble"
count5
5
word"crystallized"
count1
6
word"calculating"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"magnetic"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"tinged"
2"throbbed"
3"shimmered"
4"marble"
5"crystallized"
6"calculating"
7"unreadable"
8"magnetic"
9"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences139
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences139
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seem to"
2"appeared to"
3"seemed to"
4"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences155
matches(empty)
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean37.24
std21.52
cv0.578
sampleLengths
054
14
269
345
468
533
646
720
849
915
1026
113
1272
134
1464
153
1622
1783
1838
1938
2034
2157
2259
2317
2489
2537
2631
2747
2849
2957
3019
3150
3222
3346
3452
354
3661
3728
3853
399
402
4159
4253
4319
4438
4518
4619
4754
4813
4911
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences139
matches
0"were gone"
1"was gone"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs318
matches
0"was tasting"
1"were advancing"
2"was glowing"
3"was rising"
4"was falling"
94.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1838
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.028291621327529923
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.006528835690968444
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences155
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences155
mean13.21
std8.92
cv0.675
sampleLengths
017
123
214
34
416
525
618
710
82
926
1017
1120
1223
1325
1417
1516
1620
1723
183
1912
208
213
2215
236
2425
2515
2615
2711
283
2911
3015
3117
324
334
345
3516
364
374
3816
3917
4027
413
424
4314
444
4513
469
4726
4835
496
46.2366% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.33548387096774196
totalSentences155
uniqueOpeners52
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount14
fancyTags
0"they whispered, their voice carrying the sound of autumn leaves scraping ancient cobblestones (whisper, carry scrape cobblestone)"
1"Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes fixed on something Rory couldn't see (say, eyes fixed does not see)"
2"Isolde replied, stepping between two of the oaks (reply, step)"
3"Nyx said, and for a moment their shadow-form solidified enough to touch Rory's shoulder (say, solidify touch)"
4"she breathed (breathe)"
5"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
6"Rory snapped, more harshly than she intended (snap, intend)"
7"the woman said, her smile widening until it cracked the corners of her lips (say, widen crack)"
8"she said, her voice musical and strange, carrying the weight of her Fae compulsion not to lie, though her words wrapped themselves in riddles (say, lie, wrap)"
9"she said, voice dropping to a gurgle (say, voice dropping)"
10"Isolde said softly (say softly)"
11"they hissed (hiss)"
12"Isolde called out, her silver hair streaming behind her (call out, stream)"
13"Isolde said, her lavender eyes troubled as she turned to Rory (say, eyes troubled turn)"
84.6639%