| 69.57% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx's shadow-hand closed around [around]" | | 1 | "Nyx turned back [back]" | | 2 | "Isolde said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.575 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.13 | | effectiveRatio | 0.13 | |
| 94.50% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1818 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 56.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1818 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "chill" | | 5 | "reminder" | | 6 | "unsettled" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "quickened" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 109 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 48 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1802 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 24 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 64 | | wordCount | 1517 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.32 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | November | 1 | | Park | 2 | | English | 1 | | Seer | 2 | | Rory | 20 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Isolde | 11 | | Nyx | 13 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Courts | 1 | | Awe | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Seer" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Richmond" |
| | globalScore | 0.841 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 81.51% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "purples that seemed to hum, whites that glowed faintly from within as though each flower held a trapped candle flame" | | 1 | "looked like liquid glass, and where it ca" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.555 | | wordCount | 1802 | | matches | | 0 | "not painfully, but strangely, the way touching a television screen felt in the" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 36.04 | | std | 33.29 | | cv | 0.924 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 65 | | 2 | 115 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 74 | | 5 | 58 | | 6 | 36 | | 7 | 36 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 145 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 80 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 53 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 96 | | 19 | 38 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 95 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 61 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 49 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 100 | | 36 | 63 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 34 | | 45 | 67 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 40 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 98.83% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 269 | | matches | | 0 | "were listening" | | 1 | "were singing" | | 2 | "were pulling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 14 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.111 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory felt it first in her lungs—a fullness, as though each breath carried more oxygen than London air had any right to offer." | | 1 | "Not hidden behind them, not obscured by mist or magic—simply gone, as if the grey English afternoon had been a curtain someone had pulled aside." | | 2 | "Nyx materialized into something approaching solidity—a tall silhouette with edges that drifted like smoke, their violet eyes the only points of color in an otherwise dark form." | | 3 | "The geometry was wrong—she could feel it in her bones, the way the space seemed to unfold as they walked, revealing more of itself with each step." | | 4 | "The sky—she looked up and her breath caught." | | 5 | "Near the boundary they'd been small—crocuses and things that could almost pass for earthly wildflowers if you didn't look too hard." | | 6 | "\"Don't touch that.\" Nyx's shadow-hand closed around her wrist, and the contact shocked her—not painfully, but strangely, the way touching a television screen felt in the days of cathode rays, a buzzing static charge against her skin." | | 7 | "Her reflection stared back at her—black hair, blue eyes, the sharp lines of a face that hadn't been sleeping well—but the reflection was wrong." | | 8 | "She rolled the sleeve of her jacket down over the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—an old reflex, nothing to do with the grove—and looked away from the stream." | | 9 | "Each step felt heavier, not because the ground resisted but because the air itself seemed to thicken, growing warmer, sweeter—that bakery smell again, but richer now, almost cloying." | | 10 | "Through the gaps between the oaks she could see it—a shimmer in the air, barely there, like heat haze rising from summer asphalt." | | 11 | "They looked at each other—or rather, Rory looked at the violet points of light where Nyx's eyes burned, and Nyx looked back with whatever senses a being of living shadow used instead of sight." | | 12 | "Close up, Isolde smelled of nothing at all—no perfume, no soap, no human scent of any kind." | | 13 | "It caught the strange starlight and gleamed, cold and luminescent, and in its glow the shimmer between the trees solidified into something almost visible—a boundary, a threshold, a door." |
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| 97.43% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1537 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 66 | | adverbRatio | 0.04294079375406636 | | lyAdverbCount | 17 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011060507482108002 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 14.3 | | std | 10.15 | | cv | 0.71 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 32 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 37 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 60.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3888888888888889 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it hit her skin," | | 1 | "Only those violet eyes marked" | | 2 | "Then it was gone, and" |
| | ratio | 0.033 | |
| 80.87% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "She stopped two paces past" | | 1 | "She moved across the flowers" | | 2 | "She pulled her jacket tighter," | | 3 | "It had been doing that" | | 4 | "They tilted what passed for" | | 5 | "Their voice carried the way" | | 6 | "She didn't turn around." | | 7 | "She was too busy looking." | | 8 | "She exhaled through her teeth" | | 9 | "She reached out without thinking." | | 10 | "She pulled her hand back" | | 11 | "She could swear she felt" | | 12 | "They reached the stream, and" | | 13 | "She stood at its bank" | | 14 | "Her pale lavender eyes were" | | 15 | "Her reflection stared back at" | | 16 | "It lagged behind her movements" | | 17 | "She was sure of it." | | 18 | "Her own eyes were bright" | | 19 | "She rolled the sleeve of" |
| | ratio | 0.348 | |
| 46.96% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed the moment" | | 1 | "Rory felt it first in" | | 2 | "She stopped two paces past" | | 3 | "Richmond Park was gone." | | 4 | "The trees ringing the glade" | | 5 | "Isolde said from ahead, already" | | 6 | "She moved across the flowers" | | 7 | "Rory looked down and saw" | | 8 | "She pulled her jacket tighter," | | 9 | "The Heartstone pendant beneath her" | | 10 | "It had been doing that" | | 11 | "A shadow peeled away from" | | 12 | "Nyx materialized into something approaching" | | 13 | "They tilted what passed for" | | 14 | "Their voice carried the way" | | 15 | "She didn't turn around." | | 16 | "Rory opened her mouth to" | | 17 | "She was too busy looking." | | 18 | "The geometry was wrong—she could" | | 19 | "A stream cut through the" |
| | ratio | 0.826 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it thrummed in a" | | 1 | "As if she existed only" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Then it hit her skin, a warmth that didn't belong to late November, rich and honeyed and faintly sweet, like walking into a kitchen where something magnificent …" | | 1 | "In its place stretched a clearing carpeted with wildflowers she couldn't name, their petals in colors that sat wrong against what she knew of botany: blues too …" | | 2 | "The trees ringing the glade were oaks, or had been once, but their bark spiraled in patterns too deliberate for nature, carved or grown into knotwork that made …" | | 3 | "Now it thrummed in a rhythm that didn't match her own pulse, syncopated, as if the pendant were listening to music she couldn't hear." | | 4 | "Nyx materialized into something approaching solidity—a tall silhouette with edges that drifted like smoke, their violet eyes the only points of color in an othe…" | | 5 | "Near the boundary they'd been small—crocuses and things that could almost pass for earthly wildflowers if you didn't look too hard." | | 6 | "One of them opened as Rory passed, releasing a puff of golden pollen that drifted upward and hung in the air, each mote glowing like an ember." | | 7 | "Nyx released her immediately, their form rippling as though the contact had cost them something too." | | 8 | "She could swear she felt it vibrating, a frequency too fine for sound, as though the metal were singing at a pitch only other Fae things could hear." | | 9 | "Her reflection stared back at her—black hair, blue eyes, the sharp lines of a face that hadn't been sleeping well—but the reflection was wrong." | | 10 | "When she tilted her head, the reflection tilted a beat later, as though it had to think about mimicking her." |
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| 81.52% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 23 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx's shadow-hand closed around, and the contact shocked her—not painfully, but strangely, the way touching a television screen felt in the days of cathode rays, a buzzing static charge against her skin" | | 1 | "Rory said, not turning from the shimmer" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 20 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 40 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |