Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMRCZQA1YAAJM8WZRPT40KA

Run Details

Duration:
42.3s
Cost:
$0.039371
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air grew thick, honeyed, clinging to the back of Rory’s throat. It was the smell of overripe fruit and damp earth, a scent that didn't belong in the crisp autumn air of Richmond Park. Ahead, reality wavered, distorting the familiar oaks into shimmering, watery shapes. The Veil. Beneath her jacket, the Heartstone Pendant throbbed against her sternum, a warm, insistent pulse that matched the frantic beat of her own heart. It was more than warmth now; it was a low, steady heat that bled through the fabric of her t-shirt. Proof. “The tear is close,” a voice whispered, seeming to coalesce from the breeze itself. Nyx stood at her shoulder, a figure of living shadow whose faintly glowing violet eyes were fixed on the distortion. In the fading twilight, their form was barely distinguishable from the deepening gloom beneath the trees, a tear in the world just like the one they approached. On her other side, Isolde Varga moved with an unnerving grace, her silver hair a splash of moonlight against the grey evening. She drifted over the fallen leaves and damp soil, leaving no trace of her passage. Her pale lavender eyes, ancient and knowing, met Rory’s. “The door that is opened may also be a mouth that swallows.” “Comforting,” Rory muttered, her hand straying to the hilt of the Fae-forged blade tucked into the back of her jeans. The moonsilver was unnaturally cold, a sliver of ice against her skin that did little to calm her nerves. They stopped before the shimmering rift. It was like looking through heated air rising from asphalt, only this distortion smelled of nectar and decay. Rory could see the familiar world of the park on the other side, but it was muted, distant, as if viewed through a faulty lens. The pendant burned now, a small coal against her skin. “Once we cross, time will be… inconstant,” Nyx’s voice rustled. “Stay close.” Isolde simply inclined her head, a silent promise or a warning, Rory couldn’t tell. She took a breath, the cloying air feeling heavy in her lungs, and stepped through. The sensation was one of falling and being pulled apart simultaneously. Colors bled at the edges of her vision, and a low hum vibrated through her bones. Then, her boots met solid ground with a soft thud. The pressure vanished. She blinked, her eyes struggling to adjust. The sky wasn't blue, or grey, or black. It was a deep, warm amber, as if they were trapped inside a fossilized jewel. There was no sun, no moon, just this pervasive, honey-colored light emanating from the sky itself. A slow, gentle warmth settled on her skin, pleasant but deeply unnatural. “Welcome to Dymas,” Nyx whispered, their form more solid here, a sharp-edged silhouette against the golden light. Rory’s jaw went slack. They stood on a path of moss-soft turf that wound through a landscape of impossible bounty. To her left, a sprawling vineyard climbed a gentle slope, the grapes swollen to the size of plums, their skins gleaming a purple so dark it was almost black. To her right, an orchard of trees she didn't recognize groaned under the weight of their fruit. Some were star-shaped and glowed with a soft internal luminescence; others were a startling crimson, twisted into elegant spirals. The air, thick with the scent of fermentation and floral perfume, was so heavy she felt she could chew it. A soft, melodic chiming drifted on the breeze, a sound like a thousand tiny glass bells. It seemed to come from everywhere at once. Music, or just the sound the realm made? “The hungriest mouths sing the prettiest songs,” Isolde said, her gaze fixed on a stand of flowers whose petals were the color of her eyes, a pale, ethereal lavender. She was the one thing in this place that seemed to belong, yet her otherworldly beauty was a stark contrast to the gluttonous ripeness surrounding them. Rory took a cautious step forward. The ground felt springy, alive. She reached out, her fingers brushing against a broad, velvety leaf on a nearby bush. It was warm to the touch, and for a fleeting, sickening moment, she thought she felt a faint pulse within it, like the skin of some great, sleeping creature. She snatched her hand back, her gaze darting around. There was no sign of anyone, no gardeners, no workers. The entire realm felt curated and wild all at once. Perfect, yet abandoned. The unease began as a knot in her stomach. This place was beautiful, an artist’s dream of paradise, but it was the beauty of a venus flytrap. Everything was too much. The colors were too vibrant, the scents too strong, the silence beneath the chiming too profound. It was a place of excess, and it set her teeth on edge. Nyx drifted ahead, their shadowy form flowing over the path. “The souls bound to this plane are kept in the feasting halls and kitchens of Prince Belphegor. Close to the heart of the realm. We are on the periphery.” “Good,” Rory said, her voice tight. “Let’s keep it that way.” Her eyes scanned the horizon, but the amber sky met rolling hills of impossibly lush foliage in every direction. There were no landmarks, no points of reference. She rubbed the small, crescent-shaped scar on her wrist, a nervous habit from childhood. It was a tangible link to home, to a world where skies were blue and fruit didn't glow. They followed a stream for a time, its waters slow and viscous. As they drew closer, Rory realized it wasn't water at all. It was a dark, shimmering liquid that smelled of spiced wine. Golden fish with feathery fins swam in its sluggish currents, their scales glinting in the amber light. One of them broke the surface, its mouth opening in a silent ‘o’, before it submerged again, leaving concentric rings of treacle-like liquid to spread slowly outward. Isolde paused by the bank, tilting her head. “That which sustains can also intoxicate. That which quenches can also drown.” She looked at Rory, her lavender eyes seeming to pierce right through her. “The Heartstone you carry feels a familiar hunger here.” Rory’s hand instinctively went to the pendant, which still pulsed with a steady, reassuring warmth. She didn't like the way Isolde said that, the careful phrasing that wasn't a lie but felt like a trap. The benefactor who had sent it to her was unknown, a mystery that felt more dangerous with every step she took into this world. As they moved deeper, the landscape grew more extravagant. Fungi sprouted from the sides of trees in wide, pearlescent shelves that dripped a sweet, sticky nectar. Birds with plumage like spun gold flitted between branches, their songs a complex, liquid melody that was both beautiful and sorrowful. Rory watched one land on a low-hanging branch, pluck a glowing, star-shaped fruit, and swallow it whole. For a moment, the bird’s chest glowed with the same soft light as the fruit before fading. A flicker of movement in the distance caught her eye. It was indistinct, a humanoid shape working amidst a grove of the spiral-crimson fruit trees. They were too far away to see clearly, but their movements were slow, methodical, without energy or purpose. A helbound soul, Nyx had said. A chef, a gardener, a prisoner. The word echoed in her mind. This wasn't a paradise; it was a plantation. A beautiful, sprawling prison built to feed an insatiable appetite. The sense of being watched prickled at the back of her neck. She slowed, turning her head, but saw only the oppressive fecundity of the realm. “Do you feel it?” she asked, her voice low. “It is the nature of this place,” Nyx’s whisper surrounded her. “The air itself is possessive. The ground covets your footsteps. Dymas consumes all things.” Rory drew the Fae blade. The cold moonsilver was a comfort, a stark, clean sensation against the cloying warmth of the realm. It didn't glow here, not without a moon, but its leaf-shaped blade seemed to drink the amber light, leaving its edges terrifyingly sharp and dark. They came to a clearing where a single, immense tree stood. Its bark was the color of polished mahogany, and its branches, laden with heavy, blood-orange spheres of fruit, wept a clear, crystalline sap that hardened into amber teardrops on the ground. The melodic chiming was louder here, emanating from the tree itself. As they approached, a new sound became audible over the chimes: a soft, rhythmic thumping. It was the sound of a heartbeat. Huge, deep, and slow. It was coming from the tree. Rory stared, mesmerized and repulsed. The ground vibrated with each beat. This was the source. This was the heart of the grove, maybe the heart of this whole section of the realm. “A Life-Tree,” Nyx breathed, their form solidified in awe. “Ancient. They are…” A sharp crack echoed from the feasting halls in the distance, followed by a chorus of triumphant shouts. The sounds were faint, but they cut through the placid atmosphere like a knife. The slow-moving figures she had seen earlier suddenly straightened, turning as one toward the sound, their movements becoming hurried, frantic. The spell of the place was broken. This was enemy territory. Isolde laid a cool, delicate hand on Rory’s arm. Her touch was feather-light, yet it sent a jolt through her. “The cooks have been summoned. The feast is about to begin.” Rory’s gaze followed the seer’s to a ridge overlooking their position. Silhouetted against the amber sky were three figures. They were tall and broad, clad in ornate armor that gleamed like polished beetle shells. They hadn’t been seen. Not yet. She tightened her grip on the Fae-forged blade, the cold biting into her palm. The wonder of Dymas had curdled into pure, sharp dread. The mouth was opening, and they were standing on the tongue.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
59.2593% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Nyx whispered, their form more solid here, a sharp-edged silhouette against the golden light [more]"
1"Isolde said, her gaze fixed on a stand of flowers whose petals were the color of her eyes, a pale, ethereal lavender [pale]"
88.0383% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1672
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"suddenly"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1672
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"tangible"
count1
1
word"ethereal"
count1
2
word"crystalline"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"flicker"
count1
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"glinting"
count1
7
word"wavered"
count1
8
word"oppressive"
count1
9
word"otherworldly"
count1
10
word"methodical"
count1
11
word"profound"
count1
12
word"stark"
count2
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"footsteps"
count1
15
word"amidst"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count2
highlights
0"tangible"
1"ethereal"
2"crystalline"
3"throbbed"
4"flicker"
5"gleaming"
6"glinting"
7"wavered"
8"oppressive"
9"otherworldly"
10"methodical"
11"profound"
12"stark"
13"weight"
14"footsteps"
15"amidst"
16"echoed"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a jolt through"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences119
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"said that, the"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean46.03
std23.11
cv0.502
sampleLengths
048
144
261
358
439
559
612
729
847
951
1017
11105
1232
1355
1487
1560
1639
1770
1878
1942
2059
2181
2279
2326
249
2525
2647
2768
2817
2932
3012
3152
3211
3331
3440
3535
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences119
matches
0"were fixed"
1"being pulled"
2"was unknown"
3"been seen"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs231
matches
0"was coming"
1"was opening, were standing"
82.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1538
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"pervasive, honey-colored light"
1"small, crescent-shaped scar"
2"heavy, blood-orange spheres"
adverbCount46
adverbRatio0.02990897269180754
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.00975292587776333
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean13.15
std6.93
cv0.527
sampleLengths
012
123
211
32
423
520
61
714
820
927
1022
1115
129
1312
1420
1519
166
1718
1825
1910
2010
212
2214
2315
2411
2516
2610
273
287
298
3015
3116
3212
3317
344
3516
3629
3717
3819
3920
4016
418
428
4329
4426
456
465
4715
4829
499
50.0000% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners42
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"a voice whispered, seeming to coalesce from the breeze itself (whisper, seem coalesce)"
1"Rory muttered, her hand straying to the hilt of the Fae-forged blade tucked into the back of her jeans (mutter, stray tuck)"
2"Nyx’s voice rustled (rustle)"
3"Nyx whispered, their form more solid here, a sharp-edged silhouette against the golden light (whisper)"
4"Isolde said, her gaze fixed on a stand of flowers whose petals were the color of her eyes, a pale, ethereal lavender (say, fix be)"
5"Nyx’s whisper surrounded her (surround)"
6"Nyx breathed, their form solidified in awe (breathe, solidify)"
81.1351%