| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said gently [gently]" | | 1 | "she said aloud [aloud]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.586 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 85.84% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1412 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "truly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 15.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1412 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "footsteps" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "charged" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "dancing" | | 8 | "pang" | | 9 | "echo" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "profound" | | 13 | "silk" | | 14 | "dance" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "resolved" | | 17 | "otherworldly" | | 18 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "a pang of sympathy" | | 1 | "was surprised" |
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| 42.25% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "managed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 83 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1404 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 21 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 81.27% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 65 | | wordCount | 1164 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.37 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 16 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 10 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Pendant | 4 | | Nyx | 7 | | Isolde | 10 | | December | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 2 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Heart | 1 | | Tree | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "December" | | 5 | "Veil" | | 6 | "Tree" | | 7 | "Evan" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Fae-forged" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.813 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them" | | 1 | "quite oak, wasn't quite anything she could name" | | 2 | "quite anything she could name" | | 3 | "whisper that seemed to come from everywhere at once" | | 4 | "blossoms that seemed to glow from within, their petals shifting through spectrums of blue and violet" | | 5 | "not quite music, not quite voices, but something that made her chest tight with homesickness for places she'd never been" | | 6 | "not quite voices, but something that made her chest tight with homesickness for places she'd never been" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.137 | | wordCount | 1404 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite music, not quite voices, but something" | | 1 | "not quite voices, but something" | | 2 | "not painful, but profound, like touching a live wire made of starlight" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.04% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 41.29 | | std | 18.77 | | cv | 0.455 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 40 | | 6 | 62 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 65 | | 12 | 34 | | 13 | 33 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 66 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 64 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 35 | | 21 | 72 | | 22 | 56 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 43 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 66 | | 29 | 35 | | 30 | 67 | | 31 | 40 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 36.60% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 5 | | totalVerbs | 204 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't looking" | | 1 | "was calling" | | 2 | "was taking" | | 3 | "wasn't just responding" | | 4 | "was responding" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 8 | | totalSentences | 83 | | ratio | 0.096 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, as they moved deeper into the Grove, the air itself felt different—thicker, charged with possibility." | | 1 | "They continued along what might generously be called a path—a winding track where the grass grew shorter and softer, cushioning their steps." | | 2 | "Then, gradually, a sound emerged—not quite music, not quite voices, but something that made her chest tight with homesickness for places she'd never been." | | 3 | "The tree's presence filled her with a mixture of awe and terror—like standing at the edge of an ocean during a storm, simultaneously drawn to its power and aware of her own insignificance." | | 4 | "The contact sent a shock through her entire body—not painful, but profound, like touching a live wire made of starlight." | | 5 | "In that brief contact, she'd felt the tree's awareness—ancient beyond measure, patient as stone, watching the dance of mortals and immortals with eyes that had seen the birth of worlds." | | 6 | "A sound echoed across the clearing—distant but growing closer, like footsteps on leaves that were both there and not there." | | 7 | "In response, the Grove laughed—a sound like silver bells and running water, ancient and eternally young, welcoming her deeper into its mysteries." |
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| 97.73% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 540 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.04259259259259259 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011111111111111112 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 83 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 83 | | mean | 16.92 | | std | 7.44 | | cv | 0.44 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 23 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 18 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 33 |
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| 53.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3614457831325301 | | totalSentences | 83 | | uniqueOpeners | 30 | |
| 47.62% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, gradually, a sound emerged—not" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "It filtered through leaves that" | | 1 | "she said, remembering Isolde's warning" | | 2 | "They continued along what might" | | 3 | "she whispered, wonder creeping into" | | 4 | "She reached out to touch" | | 5 | "They pressed deeper into the" | | 6 | "they said, their whisper-voice tighter" | | 7 | "She could see how the" | | 8 | "They emerged into a circular" | | 9 | "Its trunk was silver-white, like" | | 10 | "she breathed, then immediately felt" | | 11 | "they said, their voice fading" | | 12 | "She gasped and pulled her" | | 13 | "It was responding to the" | | 14 | "She was a delivery driver" | | 15 | "she said aloud, and was" |
| | ratio | 0.229 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 60 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain around Aurora's" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed once," | | 2 | "Isolde said, her voice carrying" | | 3 | "Aurora touched the pendant through" | | 4 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 5 | "The first thing that struck" | | 6 | "It filtered through leaves that" | | 7 | "The canopy overhead wasn't quite" | | 8 | "The leaves were the right" | | 9 | "Nyx asked, their voice a" | | 10 | "Aurora checked her phone and" | | 11 | "The screen showed no signal," | | 12 | "she said, remembering Isolde's warning" | | 13 | "They continued along what might" | | 14 | "Wildflowers bloomed on either side" | | 15 | "Aurora knelt to examine a" | | 16 | "Isolde said, though she offered" | | 17 | "Aurora tilted her head, straining" | | 18 | "she whispered, wonder creeping into" | | 19 | "She reached out to touch" |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 71.43% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, as they moved deeper" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain around Aurora's neck grew warm against her skin as she stepped through the shimmering distortion that marked the boundary of the Fae Grove." | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones they'd passed between still hummed with residual energy, their bark smooth as glass and marked with spiraling symbols that seeme…" | | 2 | "The leaves were the right shape but wrong in their substance, catching light like stained glass and casting it in colors that had no earthly names." | | 3 | "Then, gradually, a sound emerged—not quite music, not quite voices, but something that made her chest tight with homesickness for places she'd never been." | | 4 | "Its trunk was silver-white, like moonlight made solid, and its branches spread in perfect spirals that hurt to follow with her eyes." | | 5 | "The leaves were transparent, catching and reflecting light that came from no visible source." | | 6 | "Images flashed through her mind: London's streets from impossible angles, shadows moving with purpose through alleyways that existed between the spaces of the r…" | | 7 | "In that brief contact, she'd felt the tree's awareness—ancient beyond measure, patient as stone, watching the dance of mortals and immortals with eyes that had …" | | 8 | "A sound echoed across the clearing—distant but growing closer, like footsteps on leaves that were both there and not there." | | 9 | "Aurora felt watched, evaluated, as if the Grove itself was taking her measure." | | 10 | "The footsteps resumed their circling, and Aurora straightened her shoulders, meeting the Grove's invisible scrutiny with the same steady determination that had …" |
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| 66.18% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "they said, their whisper-voice tighter than usual" | | 1 | "they said, their voice fading to barely audible" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 16 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.552 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |