Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMT9H92PKW8R68H986AEWMV

Run Details

Duration:
40.1s
Cost:
$0.027486

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled branches twisted into impossible arches that seemed to bend reality itself. Rory felt the Heartstone pendant grow warm against her chest as they approached the boundary markers, its crimson glow barely visible through her jacket. "The Grove accepts you," Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes fixed on something beyond mortal sight. "Step between the stones, but keep your minds tethered to purpose. Time flows like honey here—sweet but treacherous." Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, whose violet eyes flickered with uncharacteristic uncertainty. The Shade's form wavered at the edges, as if the very air around the Grove challenged their existence between realms. "After you, Carter," Nyx whispered, their voice carrying on a wind that shouldn't exist in the stillness of Richmond Park. Rory stepped forward first, feeling the air thicken like warm syrup around her ankles. The moment she passed between the oak arches, the world transformed. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion beneath her feet—winter roses alongside summer daisies, autumn chrysanthemums nestled beside spring crocuses. The petals seemed to pulse with their own inner light, shifting colors that had no names in any human language. The grass beneath was not quite grass, each blade edged with silver that caught light from no visible source. "Christ," Rory breathed, then immediately wondered if such words carried weight in this place between worlds. The sky above stretched endless and opalescent, neither day nor night but something altogether other. Stars wheeled lazily through clouds that moved with deliberate purpose, casting shadows that fell upward instead of down. The air itself hummed with a music just beyond hearing, a harmony that resonated in her bones. Nyx materialized fully as they entered, their shadow-form solidifying into something more substantial than Rory had ever seen. The Grove seemed to anchor them, giving weight to their existence. "I can feel myself here," they murmured, wonder threading through their whispered voice. "Not just existing between, but... being." Isolde drifted past them both, her feet indeed leaving no prints on the silver-touched grass. "All things find their truest nature in the Grove. It remembers what was, what is, and what might yet come to pass." They walked deeper into the clearing, past trees that grew in spirals, their bark inscribed with symbols that shifted and changed when viewed directly. Fruit hung heavy from branches—some recognizable, others that defied classification. One tree bore what looked like crystallized moonlight, another drooped with pods that chimed softly in the strange wind. "Don't eat anything," Rory warned, her practical mind asserting itself despite the wonder surrounding them. "Fairy tale rules still apply, yeah?" "Wise child," Isolde agreed. "Though here, hunger is not of the body but of the spirit. The Grove feeds other needs." At the heart of the clearing stood a pool of water so clear it seemed like liquid diamond. Its surface reflected not their faces, but glimpses of other places—fleeting images of London streets, shadow-wrapped alleys, and stranger vistas still. Rory caught a flash of amber sky and sprawling vineyards that made the pendant pulse more urgently against her skin. "Dymas," she said, recognizing the warm golden light from her unwelcome visits to that realm of excess. "The Scrying Pool shows what weighs upon the seeker's heart," Isolde explained, settling gracefully beside the water's edge. "Your destiny calls from many realms, Aurora Carter. The Grove knows this." Nyx knelt beside the pool, their reflection appearing solid and human—a young man with dark hair and eyes that held centuries of sorrow. "I remember this face," they said softly. "Aldric. I had almost forgotten." The water rippled, and the reflection changed. Now it showed not the man Nyx had been, but the shadow they had become, yet somehow beautiful in its ethereal nature. The image seemed to suggest possibility rather than loss. Rory felt drawn to touch the water but held back, sensing that some discoveries couldn't be undone. Instead, she studied the grove around them, noting how each element seemed to exist in perfect harmony despite defying natural law. The very wrongness of it felt right, as if this place operated on older, truer rules than the mundane world she knew. "How long have we been here?" she asked, suddenly aware that the question itself felt different in this space. "Long enough for the world to turn thrice," Isolde replied with a riddling smile. "Brief enough that your morning tea grows cold." Time twisted around them like the branches overhead. Rory could feel minutes stretching into hours while simultaneously compressing into heartbeats. The Grove existed outside mortal constraints, a bubble where possibility bloomed eternal. A sound drew her attention—not quite music, not quite voice, but something that spoke directly to her soul. Following the melody, she discovered its source: a tree whose leaves rustled with whispered secrets, each one containing fragments of futures yet unwritten. "The Whispering Oak," Isolde said, appearing beside her without seeming to move. "It speaks of choices not yet made, paths not yet taken. Listen well, but do not lose yourself in its song." Rory pressed closer, catching fragments of words in languages she didn't recognize yet somehow understood. Warnings and promises intertwined, speaking of darkness gathering, alliances needed, and a choice that would reshape the very Veil between worlds. The Fae-forged blade at her side grew cold, its moonsilver surface gleaming with urgent light. Even here, in this place of peace and wonder, danger's echo reached through time and possibility. "We can't stay," Rory realized, though part of her wanted to sink into the Grove's timeless embrace and forget the weight of prophecy and responsibility. "No," Isolde agreed. "But you will carry this place within you now. The Grove leaves its mark on all who enter with pure intent. When the darkness comes, remember what you have seen here—that beauty and wonder persist even in the spaces between worlds." As they prepared to leave, Rory took one last look around the impossible garden. The Grove had shown them truth—that magic existed not as something to be conquered or controlled, but as a force of creation and connection that bound all realms together. The pendant's warmth against her heart felt different now, not a warning but a reminder of the responsibilities that waited beyond the standing stones.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
61.9048% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Rory breathed, then immediately wondered if such words carried weight in this place between worlds [then immediately]"
1"Isolde explained, settling gracefully beside the water's edge [gracefully]"
2"they said softly [softly]"
33.9623% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1060
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"lazily"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1060
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"ethereal"
count1
1
word"resonated"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"wavered"
count1
5
word"loomed"
count1
6
word"crystallized"
count1
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"ethereal"
1"resonated"
2"flickered"
3"gleaming"
4"wavered"
5"loomed"
6"crystallized"
7"weight"
8"echo"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences64
matches
0"sensing that some"
1"truth—that magic"
63.0160% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean33.81
std12.53
cv0.371
sampleLengths
044
134
233
320
425
557
616
750
829
919
1037
1153
1221
1321
1459
1517
1630
1735
1838
1960
2019
2122
2232
2341
2433
2536
2631
2725
2844
2943
3024
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs155
matches(empty)
96.8219% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount848
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.04363207547169811
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.014150943396226415
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences64
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
97.5111% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences64
mean16.38
std6.45
cv0.394
sampleLengths
020
124
216
318
413
520
620
714
811
918
1020
1119
1216
1315
1418
1517
1618
1711
1813
196
2015
2122
2224
2310
2419
2515
266
274
2817
2918
3021
3120
3217
3318
3412
3523
367
375
387
3922
409
4117
4221
4322
4419
4514
468
478
4812
4912
96.8750% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.609375
totalSentences64
uniqueOpeners39
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes fixed on something beyond mortal sight (say, eyes fixed)"
1"Nyx whispered, their voice carrying on a wind that shouldn't exist in the stillness of Richmond Park (whisper, carry on does not exist)"
2"Rory breathed, then immediately wondered if such words carried weight in this place between worlds (breathe, immediately wonder carry)"
3"they murmured, wonder threading through their whispered voice (murmur, wonder threading)"
4"Rory warned, her practical mind asserting itself despite the wonder surrounding them (warn, assert surround)"
5"Isolde agreed (agree)"
6"she said, recognizing the warm golden light from her unwelcome visits to that realm of excess (say, recognize)"
7"Isolde explained, settling gracefully beside the water's edge (explain, settle gracefully)"
8"they said softly (say softly)"
9"Isolde said, appearing beside her without seeming to move (say, appear seem move)"
10"Rory realized, though part of her wanted to sink into the Grove's timeless embrace and forget the weight of prophecy and responsibility (realize, want sink be embrace forget)"
11"Isolde agreed (agree)"
79.4171%