| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "they said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.583 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.071 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 66.86% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1056 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "lazily" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 14.77% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1056 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "treacherous" | | 2 | "flickered" | | 3 | "wavered" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "resonated" | | 7 | "crystallized" | | 8 | "fleeting" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "gleaming" | | 12 | "echo" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 10.58% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 54 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1048 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.40% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 838 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 1.43 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Nyx | 5 | | Shade | 1 | | Grove | 5 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | London | 1 | | Time | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.784 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "arches that seemed to bend reality itself" | | 1 | "not quite grass, each blade edged with silver that caught light from no visible source" | | 2 | "looked like crystallized moonlight, anoth" | | 3 | "not quite music, not quite voice, but something that spoke directly to her soul" | | 4 | "not quite voice, but something that spoke directly to her soul" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 9 | | per1kWords | 8.588 | | wordCount | 1048 | | matches | | 0 | "neither day nor" | | 1 | "Not just existing between, but" | | 2 | "not of the body but of the spirit" | | 3 | "not their faces, but glimpses of other places" | | 4 | "not the man Nyx had been, but the shadow they had become, yet somehow beautiful in its eth" | | 5 | "not quite music, not quite voice, but something" | | 6 | "not quite voice, but something" | | 7 | "not as something to be conquered or controlled, but as a force of creation" | | 8 | "not a warning but a reminder of the responsibilities" |
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| 62.50% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "sensing that some" | | 1 | "truth—that magic" |
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| 63.02% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 33.81 | | std | 12.53 | | cv | 0.371 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 34 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 37 | | 11 | 53 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 59 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 60 | | 20 | 19 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 33 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 31 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 44 | | 29 | 43 | | 30 | 24 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 54 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 155 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion beneath her feet—winter roses alongside summer daisies, autumn chrysanthemums nestled beside spring crocuses." | | 1 | "Fruit hung heavy from branches—some recognizable, others that defied classification." | | 2 | "Its surface reflected not their faces, but glimpses of other places—fleeting images of London streets, shadow-wrapped alleys, and stranger vistas still." | | 3 | "Nyx knelt beside the pool, their reflection appearing solid and human—a young man with dark hair and eyes that held centuries of sorrow." | | 4 | "A sound drew her attention—not quite music, not quite voice, but something that spoke directly to her soul." | | 5 | "The Grove had shown them truth—that magic existed not as something to be conquered or controlled, but as a force of creation and connection that bound all realms together." |
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| 95.79% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 848 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 38 | | adverbRatio | 0.04481132075471698 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014150943396226415 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 97.51% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 16.38 | | std | 6.45 | | cv | 0.394 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 19 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 9 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 22 | | 44 | 19 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 12 |
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| 96.88% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.609375 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 64.10% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she studied the grove" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "they murmured, wonder threading through" | | 1 | "They walked deeper into the" | | 2 | "Its surface reflected not their" | | 3 | "she said, recognizing the warm" | | 4 | "they said softly" | | 5 | "she asked, suddenly aware that" |
| | ratio | 0.115 | |
| 36.92% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 1 | "Rory felt the Heartstone pendant" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender" | | 3 | "Rory exchanged a glance with" | | 4 | "The Shade's form wavered at" | | 5 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying" | | 6 | "Rory stepped forward first, feeling" | | 7 | "The moment she passed between" | | 8 | "Wildflowers bloomed in impossible profusion" | | 9 | "The petals seemed to pulse" | | 10 | "The grass beneath was not" | | 11 | "Rory breathed, then immediately wondered" | | 12 | "The sky above stretched endless" | | 13 | "Stars wheeled lazily through clouds" | | 14 | "The air itself hummed with" | | 15 | "Nyx materialized fully as they" | | 16 | "The Grove seemed to anchor" | | 17 | "they murmured, wonder threading through" | | 18 | "Isolde drifted past them both," | | 19 | "They walked deeper into the" |
| | ratio | 0.846 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 52 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it showed not the" | | 1 | "Even here, in this place" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 7.72% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oak standing stones loomed ahead, their gnarled branches twisted into impossible arches that seemed to bend reality itself." | | 1 | "Fruit hung heavy from branches—some recognizable, others that defied classification." | | 2 | "Rory caught a flash of amber sky and sprawling vineyards that made the pendant pulse more urgently against her skin." | | 3 | "The very wrongness of it felt right, as if this place operated on older, truer rules than the mundane world she knew." | | 4 | "A sound drew her attention—not quite music, not quite voice, but something that spoke directly to her soul." | | 5 | "Warnings and promises intertwined, speaking of darkness gathering, alliances needed, and a choice that would reshape the very Veil between worlds." | | 6 | "The pendant's warmth against her heart felt different now, not a warning but a reminder of the responsibilities that waited beyond the standing stones." |
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| 53.57% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes fixed on something beyond mortal sight" | | 1 | "Rory warned, her practical mind asserting itself despite the wonder surrounding them" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 13 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Rory warned (warn)" | | 4 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" | | 5 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 6 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.542 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.538 | | effectiveRatio | 0.538 | |