| 24.56% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "He stepped aside [aside]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "He stood smoothly [smoothly]" | | 3 | "She turned away [away]" | | 4 | "he continued quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.386 | | leniency | 0.772 | | rawRatio | 0.227 | | effectiveRatio | 0.175 | |
| 85.49% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1378 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "intensity" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "tension" | | 6 | "comforting" | | 7 | "charged" | | 8 | "electric" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "determined" | | 12 | "racing" | | 13 | "chilled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 83 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "happened to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1370 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 945 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.85 | | worstName | "Eva" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Moreau | 1 | | French | 1 | | Eva | 8 | | Lucien | 8 | | Aurora | 1 | | Heat | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Celtic | 1 | | Close | 1 | | Evan | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Heat" | | 5 | "Ptolemy" | | 6 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1370 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 54 | | mean | 25.37 | | std | 16.76 | | cv | 0.661 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 2 | | 4 | 42 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 39 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 24 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 59 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 24 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 60 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 47 | | 33 | 28 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 58 | | 36 | 27 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 37 | | 40 | 32 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 62 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 22 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 40 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "was looking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 117 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "Eva had sounded strange on the phone—distracted, almost frantic—but she'd insisted Rory bring dinner." | | 1 | "His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her with an intensity that made her stomach clench." | | 2 | "\"Don't what? Tell the truth?\" He moved closer, close enough that she could smell his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, more dangerous." | | 3 | "The familiar chaos of Eva's flat surrounded her—towers of books on demonology, Celtic mythology, and theoretical magic; scrolls covered in symbols she couldn't read; the lingering scent of jasmine incense and old paper." | | 4 | "She did remember—the way he'd looked at her after they'd escaped the warehouse, blood on his shirt, something wild and desperate in his mismatched eyes." | | 5 | "She'd forgotten that about him—how surprisingly tender he could be when he thought no one was looking." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 955 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "clear spot on Eva's" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 35 | | adverbRatio | 0.03664921465968586 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011518324607329843 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 117 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 117 | | mean | 11.71 | | std | 6.9 | | cv | 0.589 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 9 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 26 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 1 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 71.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.46153846153846156 | | totalSentences | 117 | | uniqueOpeners | 54 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 30.53% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "His mismatched eyes—one amber, one" | | 1 | "His voice held that familiar" | | 2 | "She'd forgotten how he made" | | 3 | "It had been three months" | | 4 | "He stepped aside, gesturing with" | | 5 | "She didn't move." | | 6 | "You don't understand what you're" | | 7 | "His amber eye caught the" | | 8 | "He moved closer, close enough" | | 9 | "He paused, jaw tightening almost" | | 10 | "She lifted her chin, meeting" | | 11 | "It should have been comforting," | | 12 | "She set the takeaway bag" | | 13 | "he said quietly" | | 14 | "Her hand moved instinctively to" | | 15 | "She turned to face him," | | 16 | "He studied her for a" | | 17 | "He leaned forward, amber and" | | 18 | "He stood smoothly, crossing to" | | 19 | "Her breath caught." |
| | ratio | 0.474 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 70 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolts clicked open one" | | 1 | "Rory shifted her weight from" | | 2 | "Eva had sounded strange on" | | 3 | "The door swung open, and" | | 4 | "Lucien Moreau stood framed in" | | 5 | "The ivory handle of his" | | 6 | "His mismatched eyes—one amber, one" | | 7 | "His voice held that familiar" | | 8 | "She'd forgotten how he made" | | 9 | "It had been three months" | | 10 | "The words came out sharper" | | 11 | "A ghost of a smile" | | 12 | "Rory glanced past him into" | | 13 | "Books and scrolls covered every" | | 14 | "Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, wound" | | 15 | "He stepped aside, gesturing with" | | 16 | "She didn't move." | | 17 | "The last time they'd been" | | 18 | "You don't understand what you're" | | 19 | "His amber eye caught the" |
| | ratio | 0.921 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 86.47% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "His mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her with an intensity that made her stomach clench." | | 1 | "It should have been comforting, but with Lucien's presence filling the small space, everything felt charged, electric." | | 2 | "She met Lucien's gaze, seeing the careful way he was watching her, the protective tension in his shoulders despite everything between them." |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He paused, jaw tightening almost imperceptibly" | | 1 | "she said, but her voice came out too soft, too breathless" |
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| 97.37% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he continued quietly (continue)" | | 1 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 2 | "he clarified (clarify)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.105 | | leniency | 0.211 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |