| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Quinn said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Eva asked softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.354 | | leniency | 0.708 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 89.68% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1454 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "barely above a whisper" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.66% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1454 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "footsteps" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "intricate" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "magnetic" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "quickened" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "navigate" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 84.15% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 73 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1446 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 28.95% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 950 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.42 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 2 | | Camden | 1 | | Quinn | 23 | | Sergeant | 1 | | Collins | 4 | | Eva | 19 | | Morris | 5 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Sergeant" | | 3 | "Collins" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Museum" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.289 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "darkness that seemed to swallow light, revealing graffitied walls and debris scattered across cracked platform tiles" | | 1 | "satchel that seemed to strain under the weight of books, and her freckled complexion looked pale in the harsh illumination" | | 2 | "looked like a brass compass" | | 3 | "seemed familiar though she couldn't place where she'd seen such craftsmanship" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1446 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 30.13 | | std | 17.3 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 55 | | 3 | 34 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 62 | | 6 | 5 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 58 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 38 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 64 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 49 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 67 | | 30 | 39 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 29 | | 33 | 41 | | 34 | 37 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 40 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 33 | | 40 | 47 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 47 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 25 | | 45 | 35 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 73 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.24% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 167 | | matches | | 0 | "was staring" | | 1 | "was studying" | | 2 | "was suggesting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.059 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden reeked of damp concrete and something else—something metallic that made Quinn's teeth ache." | | 1 | "She knelt and touched the edge with her fingertip—cold as winter morning." | | 2 | "A figure emerged from the darkness—a young woman with curly red hair catching the light, round glasses reflecting their torch beams." | | 3 | "The woman paused, tucking a strand of hair behind her left ear—a nervous gesture that made Quinn's detective instincts sharpen." | | 4 | "The instrument reminded her of something—a case from three years ago, when her partner Morris had been investigating strange deaths in Whitechapel." | | 5 | "They found the second burn circle exactly where Eva predicted—another perfect geometric pattern scorched into the tunnel floor." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 959 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.03023983315954119 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01564129301355579 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 14.18 | | std | 6.88 | | cv | 0.485 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 79.08% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.4803921568627451 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "She descended the rusted maintenance" | | 1 | "she said, crouching beside the" | | 2 | "Her movements carried the precise" | | 3 | "She stood, her salt-and-pepper hair" | | 4 | "She knelt and touched the" | | 5 | "Her sergeant shifted uncomfortably." | | 6 | "She carried a worn leather" | | 7 | "she murmured, setting down her" | | 8 | "He'd mentioned unusual evidence, geometric" | | 9 | "His footsteps faded into the" | | 10 | "She tucked hair behind her" | | 11 | "She'd dismissed it as stress-induced" | | 12 | "Her footsteps echoed off the" | | 13 | "They found the second burn" | | 14 | "Her partner's photograph stared back" | | 15 | "She turned to find Eva" |
| | ratio | 0.232 | |
| 54.20% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | 0 | "The abandoned Tube station beneath" | | 1 | "She descended the rusted maintenance" | | 2 | "The beam from her torch" | | 3 | "Quinn paused at the platform's" | | 4 | "The victim lay sprawled near" | | 5 | "she said, crouching beside the" | | 6 | "Her movements carried the precise" | | 7 | "Collins fumbled with his notebook," | | 8 | "Quinn's torch beam swept the" | | 9 | "She stood, her salt-and-pepper hair" | | 10 | "Quinn walked the perimeter of" | | 11 | "She knelt and touched the" | | 12 | "Her sergeant shifted uncomfortably." | | 13 | "The sound of footsteps on" | | 14 | "A figure emerged from the" | | 15 | "She carried a worn leather" | | 16 | "Quinn called out, her voice" | | 17 | "The woman paused, tucking a" | | 18 | "Quinn's tone remained flat, professional" | | 19 | "she murmured, setting down her" |
| | ratio | 0.812 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 51.67% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The beam from her torch carved through darkness that seemed to swallow light, revealing graffitied walls and debris scattered across cracked platform tiles." | | 1 | "She carried a worn leather satchel that seemed to strain under the weight of books, and her freckled complexion looked pale in the harsh illumination." | | 2 | "The woman paused, tucking a strand of hair behind her left ear—a nervous gesture that made Quinn's detective instincts sharpen." | | 3 | "Quinn studied the young woman's face, noting the way she avoided eye contact when discussing the compass." | | 4 | "Three years ago, Morris had mentioned thin places, dimensional barriers, impossible things that made rational police work seem inadequate." | | 5 | "And at its center sat a small object that made Quinn's breath catch." |
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| 36.76% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "muttered Sergeant Collins from behind her, his voice echoing off the curved ceiling" | | 1 | "Quinn's tone remained, professional" | | 2 | "Quinn moved, but her gaze lingered on the compass" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "muttered Sergeant Collins from behind her (mutter)" | | 1 | "Quinn called out (call out)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 48 | | tagDensity | 0.146 | | leniency | 0.292 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |