Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMXPB470XD3XGPJG69KD4GR

Run Details

Duration:
12.7s
Cost:
$0.002778

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station swallowed sound like a hungry beast. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots echoed against tiled walls streaked with decades of grime, her flashlight cutting a surgical path through the darkness. Something was off. The crime scene felt... wrong. Blood spatter traced an impossible pattern across the platform's cracked tiles. Not random. Deliberate. Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as she crouched, her salt-and-pepper hair catching the harsh beam of her light. Her worn leather watch caught a glint of reflection as she traced the blood droplets with a gloved finger. "Not consistent with a standard assault," she muttered. Eva Kowalski stood nearby, her round glasses reflecting the forensic lights. Her curly red hair was pulled back, freckled hands clutching a leather satchel that bulged with research materials. "The pattern suggests ritualistic placement," she said, voice tight with academic precision. Quinn knew Eva wasn't just a research assistant. Her expertise in occult studies ran deeper than the museum's official records. They'd worked together before, though Quinn typically maintained a professional distance. "Ritualistic how?" Quinn's brown eyes narrowed. Eva stepped closer, tucking a stray curl behind her left ear—a nervous habit Quinn had noticed before. "The blood droplets form a sigil. Not one I immediately recognize, but definitely not random." Quinn's military-trained mind processed the information. Eighteen years on the force had taught her to question everything, especially when supernatural markers emerged. Three years ago, her partner DS Morris had disappeared under circumstances that still haunted her nightmares. She pulled out a small brass compass from her coat pocket. The Veil Compass, its face etched with protective sigils and a patina of verdigris, seemed to vibrate slightly in her hand. The needle twitched, pointing not toward magnetic north, but toward something else entirely. "This scene isn't just a crime," Quinn said slowly. "It's a message." Eva nodded, her green eyes intense. "A summoning, perhaps. Or a warning." The abandoned Tube station felt alive around them, secrets pressed into every crumbling tile and shadowed corner. Something fundamental had been disrupted here—something that went far beyond a simple metropolitan police investigation.
total_cost0.0027776

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
71.35% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount349
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount349
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"traced"
count2
2
word"jaw clenched"
count1
3
word"glint"
count1
4
word"standard"
count1
5
word"processed"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"magnetic"
count1
8
word"disrupted"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"traced"
2"jaw clenched"
3"glint"
4"standard"
5"processed"
6"etched"
7"magnetic"
8"disrupted"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences29
matches(empty)
44.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences29
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences32
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords347
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
18.42% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount304
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.63
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube2
Harlow1
Quinn8
Eva4
Kowalski1
Morris1
Veil1
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
4"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.184
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences21
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords5.764
wordCount347
matches
0"Not one I immediately recognize, but definitely not random"
1"not toward magnetic north, but toward something else entirely"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs12
mean28.92
std14.76
cv0.51
sampleLengths
040
150
28
341
431
56
632
738
845
912
1012
1132
81.06% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences29
matches
0"was pulled"
1"been disrupted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs52
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences32
ratio0.063
matches
0"Eva stepped closer, tucking a stray curl behind her left ear—a nervous habit Quinn had noticed before."
1"Something fundamental had been disrupted here—something that went far beyond a simple metropolitan police investigation."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount309
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.025889967637540454
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.019417475728155338
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences32
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences32
mean10.84
std5.89
cv0.543
sampleLengths
010
122
23
34
41
511
62
71
817
919
108
1111
1218
1312
148
1512
1611
176
1817
1915
206
2116
2216
2311
2421
2513
269
273
286
296
3017
3115
90.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5625
totalSentences32
uniqueOpeners18
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount6
totalSentences25
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught"
1"Her curly red hair was"
2"she said, voice tight with"
3"Her expertise in occult studies"
4"They'd worked together before, though"
5"She pulled out a small"
ratio0.24
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount23
totalSentences25
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station swallowed"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots echoed"
2"Something was off."
3"The crime scene felt..."
4"Blood spatter traced an impossible"
5"Quinn's sharp jaw clenched as"
6"Her worn leather watch caught"
7"Eva Kowalski stood nearby, her"
8"Her curly red hair was"
9"she said, voice tight with"
10"Quinn knew Eva wasn't just"
11"Her expertise in occult studies"
12"They'd worked together before, though"
13"Quinn's brown eyes narrowed"
14"Eva stepped closer, tucking a"
15"Quinn's military-trained mind processed the"
16"She pulled out a small"
17"The Veil Compass, its face"
18"The needle twitched, pointing not"
19"Quinn said slowly"
ratio0.92
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences25
matches(empty)
ratio0
58.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Her curly red hair was pulled back, freckled hands clutching a leather satchel that bulged with research materials."
1"Something fundamental had been disrupted here—something that went far beyond a simple metropolitan police investigation."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, voice tight with academic precision"
7.14% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.286
61.2809%