Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMXQ71YTS9V38CRP1QYY0MB

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47.5s
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$0.031131

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The threshold felt like stepping through a soap bubble made of starlight. Aurora's breath caught as the familiar weight of London's grey sky lifted from her shoulders, replaced by something altogether more intoxicating. The amber light that bathed everything here wasn't quite sunset, wasn't quite sunrise—it existed in some perpetual golden hour that made her skin tingle with warmth. "Well," she murmured, her voice carrying farther than it should in the still air, "I don't think we're in Richmond Park anymore." Beside her, Nyx's form rippled like heat waves rising from summer pavement. Their violet eyes brightened as they took in the sprawling landscape before them. "Dymas," they whispered, and the name seemed to hang in the air like incense smoke. "The realm of Prince Belphegor." Isolde stepped through behind them, her silver hair catching the amber light and throwing it back in impossible prisms. Where her feet touched the ground—soft, loamy earth that smelled of honey and wine—no impression remained. "The first of the seven circles you must walk," she said, though her pale lavender eyes held secrets she wouldn't name. "Choose your steps with care, Aurora Carter. Here, even the earth remembers what feeds upon it." They stood at the edge of what could only be described as paradise twisted into something more complex. Rolling hills stretched before them, covered in vineyards whose vines bore fruit Aurora had never seen—clusters of berries that shifted color as she watched, from deep purple to golden amber to a red so rich it looked like liquid garnets. Between the rows, she caught glimpses of trees heavy with fruit that seemed to pulse with their own inner light. The Heartstone Pendant against her chest had grown noticeably warmer since they'd crossed the threshold. Its crimson surface pulsed in rhythm with her heartbeat, or perhaps her heart had begun to match its tempo—she couldn't tell which anymore. "The air tastes different," she observed, running her tongue over her lips. It was true. Each breath carried flavors—cinnamon and cardamom, the bright pop of citrus, something darker like aged wine and bitter chocolate. Her stomach rumbled in response, though she'd eaten before entering Isolde's grove. "Everything here is designed to tempt," Nyx said, their form solidifying as they moved deeper into the realm. In this amber light, their shadow-body seemed less stark, more like a figure carved from twilight itself. "Belphegor rules through excess, not force. The chains here are golden, but they bind just as surely." They walked along a path that had appeared beneath their feet without Aurora noticing—white stone that felt pleasantly warm through the soles of her boots. To their left, the vineyards continued in neat, abundant rows. To their right, orchards began, and Aurora found herself slowing despite her better judgment. The trees were wrong in the most beautiful way possible. Apple trees bore fruit the size of melons, their skin bearing patterns like stained glass windows. Pear trees dripped with golden fruit that chimed softly when the warm breeze moved through them. And there—she stopped entirely—a tree whose branches held what looked like crystallized honey, each drop the size of her fist and glowing from within. "Don't," Isolde said softly, appearing at Aurora's elbow with her unnerving ability to move without sound. "One taste binds you. The first bite is always free, but the price for the second..." She trailed off, but her meaning hung heavy in the sweet air. Aurora's hand had been reaching for one of the crystal fruits without her conscious decision. She jerked it back, flexing her fingers. "Right. Good to know." The Fae-forged blade at her hip felt cold against her leg, a sharp contrast to the seductive warmth that surrounded them. They continued along the path, and the sounds began to reach them. Laughter, first—rich and genuine, the kind that came from deep satisfaction. Then music, instruments Aurora couldn't identify playing melodies that made her want to dance, or weep, or both at once. And underneath it all, a sound like distant feasting—the clink of glasses, the soft sounds of appreciation, conversations that rose and fell like waves. "There," Nyx pointed ahead where the path crested a low hill. "The palace of indulgence." Aurora's breath caught again. The structure before them defied every architectural principle she knew. It seemed to be built from crystallized wine—deep reds and burnished golds forming walls that curved and flowed like frozen liquid. Towers rose in spirals that hurt to follow with the eye, and bridges of what looked like spun sugar connected buildings that floated at impossible angles. But it was the garden surrounding the palace that truly struck her. Massive trees whose trunks were easily fifty feet around supported branches heavy with every fruit she'd ever imagined and many she hadn't. Between them, tables had been set—not the rough wooden affairs she might expect, but delicate things that looked like they'd been grown rather than built, their surfaces inlaid with mother-of-pearl and precious metals. At these tables sat figures that were almost human. Almost. They laughed and feasted with expressions of pure bliss, but something in their eyes suggested they'd been laughing for far longer than was natural. Their movements had a quality of repetition, as if they were actors in a play that had run too many nights. "The bound souls," Nyx murmured. "Master chefs from Earth, contracted to create wonders for Belphegor's court. They find their paradise here, but..." They gestured, and Aurora saw it now—the way the diners never quite finished their plates, how the laughter never quite reached those eyes, the subtle desperation in their pursuit of the next perfect bite. A warm breeze carried scents that made Aurora's mouth water involuntarily—roasting meats glazed with something that smelled like starlight, bread that crackled as it cooled, soups that seemed to contain the essence of comfort itself. Her stomach clenched with sudden, sharp hunger. "The temptation grows stronger the deeper we go," Isolde observed, though she seemed unaffected herself. "Your human blood calls to the offerings here. Steel yourself, child. We have far yet to walk before this path releases you." Aurora pressed her hand to the Heartstone Pendant, using its warmth to anchor herself. The crimson gem pulsed more rapidly now, and she realized it wasn't just reacting to the realm—it was reacting to her growing hunger, her increasing susceptibility to Dymas's lures. "How do we get through?" she asked, watching as one of the bound souls at a nearby table caught sight of them and raised a goblet in invitation. The liquid inside swirled with colors that didn't exist in the natural world. "Carefully," Nyx replied, but their violet eyes held something that might have been anticipation. "Very, very carefully." The path led them closer to the palace, and with each step, the sensory assault intensified. Aurora's vision swam with colors too vivid, her nose filled with aromas that promised satisfaction beyond earthly pleasure, her ears rang with music that seemed designed to unmake her will to resist. But the Fae blade remained cold at her side, and the pendant's warmth kept her grounded in purpose. Whatever lay ahead in Prince Belphegor's realm of golden excess, she would face it as Aurora Carter—not as another soul bound to eternal, hollow feasting. The amber sky pulsed overhead like a slow heartbeat, and deeper they went into the beautiful trap of Dymas.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said softly, appearing at Aurora's elbow with her unnerving ability to move without sound [softly]"
44.0000% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"carefully"
1"softly"
2"truly"
3"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.0000% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1250
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"crystallized"
count2
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"anticipation"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"crystallized"
1"stark"
2"anticipation"
3"weight"
4"dance"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences64
matches(empty)
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences64
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
55.4752% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean47.27
std16.27
cv0.344
sampleLengths
059
122
245
372
478
538
646
752
849
966
1044
1147
1267
1315
1461
1567
1655
1756
1842
1937
2043
2141
2217
2348
2443
2519
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences64
matches
0"been grown"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs190
matches
0"was reacting"
100.0000% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1098
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.039162112932604735
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010018214936247723
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences70
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences70
mean17.56
std8.91
cv0.507
sampleLengths
012
121
226
322
412
513
615
75
819
916
1021
1116
1218
1340
1420
1515
1623
1712
183
1919
2012
2118
2217
2317
2425
2510
2614
2710
2816
2916
3024
3116
3228
3315
347
3525
3612
3711
3820
3924
4011
414
424
4310
4421
4526
4612
4722
4833
499
98.5714% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.6
totalSentences70
uniqueOpeners42
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"she murmured, her voice carrying farther than it should in the still air (murmur, carry should)"
1"they whispered, and the name seemed to hang in the air like incense smoke (whisper, seem hang)"
2"she said, though her pale lavender eyes held secrets she wouldn't name (say, hold does not name)"
3"she observed, running her tongue over her lips (observe, run)"
4"Nyx said, their form solidifying as they moved deeper into the realm (say, solidify move)"
5"Isolde said softly, appearing at Aurora's elbow with her unnerving ability to move without sound (say softly, appear move)"
6"Nyx pointed ahead where the path crested a low hill (point crest)"
7"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
8"Isolde observed, though she seemed unaffected herself (observe, seem)"
9"Nyx replied, but their violet eyes held something that might have been anticipation (reply, hold be)"
85.2969%