| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |
| 80.43% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 511 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 2.15% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 511 | | totalAiIsms | 10 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "etched" | | 1 | "trembled" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "intensity" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 32 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 8.93% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 32 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 505 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.58% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 458 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.53 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 7 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Nyx | 4 | | Isolde | 3 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 0.736 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "symbols that seemed to shift and breathe even as Aurora stared" | | 1 | "runes that seemed to pulse with a hidden heartbeat" | | 2 | "ing wrapped in seemingly casual observation" | | 3 | "light that seemed to breathe and shift" | | 4 | "not quite insects, not quite something else" | | 5 | "not quite something else" |
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| 1.98% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.98 | | wordCount | 505 | | matches | | 0 | "Neither human voice nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 36 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.53% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 15 | | mean | 33.67 | | std | 12.54 | | cv | 0.372 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 52 | | 2 | 42 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 40 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 18 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 79 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 36 | | ratio | 0.167 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition was seamless—one moment outside, the next inside a realm that defied earthly logic." | | 1 | "Beside her, Nyx remained perfectly still—their violet eyes scanning the surroundings with an intensity that suggested they were perceiving far more than mere visual information." | | 2 | "The environment wasn't just alien; it felt sentient, watching, evaluating their presence." | | 3 | "Aurora noticed tiny creatures moving through the undergrowth—not quite insects, not quite something else." | | 4 | "A distant sound—somewhere between a song and a whisper—drifted through the grove." | | 5 | "In the Fae Grove, nothing was quite what it seemed—and everything was precisely what it chose to be." |
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| 88.06% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 466 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.0536480686695279 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017167381974248927 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 36 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 36 | | mean | 14.03 | | std | 5.68 | | cv | 0.405 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 26 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 14 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 20 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 14 | | 35 | 18 |
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| 89.81% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.5555555555555556 | | totalSentences | 36 | | uniqueOpeners | 20 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | | 0 | "Her pale lavender eyes scanned" | | 1 | "Her fingers brushed the silver" | | 2 | "Their movements were liquid, almost" | | 3 | "Her Fae-forged blade, gifted by" |
| | ratio | 0.129 | |
| 24.52% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | | 0 | "The stone archway rose before" | | 1 | "Nyx moved first, their shadowy" | | 2 | "The transition was seamless—one moment" | | 3 | "Wildflowers Aurora had never seen" | | 4 | "Each step produced no sound," | | 5 | "Isolde murmured, her silver hair" | | 6 | "Her pale lavender eyes scanned" | | 7 | "The standing stones circling the" | | 8 | "Roots twisted above ground in" | | 9 | "Aurora's Heartstone pendant grew warm" | | 10 | "Her fingers brushed the silver" | | 11 | "A sound like distant wind" | | 12 | "Aurora felt the hair on" | | 13 | "The environment wasn't just alien;" | | 14 | "Nyx whispered, their voice like" | | 15 | "Isolde traced a symbol in" | | 16 | "The word felt weighted with" | | 17 | "Patches of moss glimmered with" | | 18 | "Aurora noticed tiny creatures moving" | | 19 | "Their movements were liquid, almost" |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 31 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 25 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The transition was seamless—one moment outside, the next inside a realm that defied earthly logic." | | 1 | "Wildflowers Aurora had never seen before carpeted the ground: blossoms of deep indigo and silver-tipped crimson that trembled without wind, their petals translu…" | | 2 | "The standing stones circling the grove were massive oaks, their bark etched with runes that seemed to pulse with a hidden heartbeat." | | 3 | "Isolde traced a symbol in the air, leaving a trail of pale luminescence that hung momentarily before dissolving." | | 4 | "Patches of moss glimmered with an inner phosphorescence, creating pools of soft green light that seemed to breathe and shift." | | 5 | "The moonsilver weapon hummed with a barely perceptible energy, as though awakened by the mystical environment." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her silver hair floating around her shoulders like liquid moonlight" | | 1 | "Nyx said again, their shadowy form momentarily fragmenting before reconstituting" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 7 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |