Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMXSAQ33ZYPJ2RQSAXVMGSN

Run Details

Duration:
19.3s
Cost:
$0.003554

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain slashed diagonal against the sodium-bright streetlamps, turning Soho's cobblestone alleys into a gleaming canvas of reflected light. Detective Harlow Quinn's boots struck hard against wet pavement, her breath coming in controlled exhales that matched her military-precise stride. Her target—a wiry figure in a dark windbreaker—darted between parked cars and delivery trucks. Quinn's hand instinctively brushed her hip, checking her service weapon. Eighteen years on the force had taught her that pursuit was as much about strategy as speed. The suspect cut left, diving toward an alleyway beside The Raven's Nest. Its distinctive green neon sign flickered overhead, casting strange shadows across wet brick walls. Quinn recognized the bar—she'd interviewed the owner, Silas, during previous investigations. Something about this neighborhood always felt slightly off-kilter, like reality was stretched thin. "Metropolitan Police! Stop!" Her command carried the practiced authority of someone used to being obeyed. The figure didn't break stride. Quinn's salt-and-pepper hair was plastered against her forehead, rainwater tracking down her sharp jawline. Her leather watch—a gift from her late partner Morris—was water-spotted but still keeping precise time. Three years since Morris disappeared under circumstances she still couldn't explain. Circumstances that hinted at something beyond standard police procedure. The suspect's movements were too practiced, too fluid to be a random street criminal. Each motion suggested training, precision. Something underneath this chase felt deliberate. At the alley's end, instead of turning to fight or flee further, the figure descended a rusted metal staircase leading underground. Quinn hesitated. Protocol suggested calling backup. Her instincts—honed by years of investigating cases that brushed against inexplicable boundaries—urged immediate pursuit. The staircase descended into darkness, each metal step producing a hollow ring that echoed strangely. Quinn drew her weapon, checking her grip. The ambient sounds changed—from street noise to something more enclosed, more alien. Distant murmurs. Strange mechanical clicks. Whispers in languages she didn't recognize. When she reached the bottom, she realized she was no longer in a standard London underground tunnel. Vendor stalls lined a cavernous space that seemed impossibly large for its subterranean location. Merchants sold objects that defied rational explanation: bottled liquids that shifted color, intricate mechanical devices that seemed to move without human interaction, carved tokens that pulsed with an inner light. The Veil Market. She'd heard rumors, dismissed them as urban mythology. Yet here she stood. Her suspect was visible fifty meters ahead, moving confidently through crowded stalls. Merchants in elaborate masks and layered clothing barely seemed to notice the pursuit happening in their midst. A woman with silver-threaded skin sold what looked like preserved human hearts in glass containers. A bent figure with too many fingers exchanged something that looked like living smoke for a bone token. Quinn's police training warred with her survival instinct. Follow the suspect deeper into this impossible space? Or retreat and report what she'd discovered? Her watch ticked. Steady. Precise. She took another step forward.
total_cost0.0035536

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount489
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.98% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount489
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"standard"
count2
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"mechanical"
count2
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"flickered"
2"standard"
3"echoed"
4"mechanical"
5"intricate"
6"pulsed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences45
matches(empty)
15.87% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences45
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences45
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords481
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.78% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount478
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.46
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn7
Raven1
Nest1
Silas1
Morris2
London1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Silas"
3"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
2"London"
globalScore0.768
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"seemed impossibly large for its subterranean location"
1"devices that seemed to move without human interaction, carved tokens that pulsed with an inner light"
2"looked like preserved human hearts in gla"
3"looked like living smoke for a bone token"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount481
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean32.07
std19.37
cv0.604
sampleLengths
039
141
250
315
45
549
625
741
845
961
1015
1162
1223
135
145
81.87% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences45
matches
0"was stretched"
1"being obeyed"
2"was plastered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs86
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences45
ratio0.111
matches
0"Her target—a wiry figure in a dark windbreaker—darted between parked cars and delivery trucks."
1"Quinn recognized the bar—she'd interviewed the owner, Silas, during previous investigations."
2"Her leather watch—a gift from her late partner Morris—was water-spotted but still keeping precise time."
3"Her instincts—honed by years of investigating cases that brushed against inexplicable boundaries—urged immediate pursuit."
4"The ambient sounds changed—from street noise to something more enclosed, more alien."
99.50% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount493
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.04056795131845842
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.012170385395537525
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences45
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences45
mean10.69
std6.25
cv0.585
sampleLengths
019
120
214
310
417
512
614
711
813
915
105
1114
1215
1311
149
1514
165
176
1821
192
204
2114
2215
237
2412
252
263
276
2817
2914
3030
313
328
334
3412
3517
3615
3718
388
398
407
413
421
431
445
94.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5777777777777777
totalSentences45
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences41
matches
0"Her target—a wiry figure in"
1"Its distinctive green neon sign"
2"Her command carried the practiced"
3"Her leather watch—a gift from"
4"Her instincts—honed by years of"
5"She'd heard rumors, dismissed them"
6"Her suspect was visible fifty"
7"Her watch ticked."
8"She took another step forward."
ratio0.22
57.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences41
matches
0"The rain slashed diagonal against"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn's boots struck"
2"Her target—a wiry figure in"
3"Quinn's hand instinctively brushed her"
4"The suspect cut left, diving"
5"Its distinctive green neon sign"
6"Quinn recognized the bar—she'd interviewed"
7"Something about this neighborhood always"
8"Her command carried the practiced"
9"The figure didn't break stride."
10"Quinn's salt-and-pepper hair was plastered"
11"Her leather watch—a gift from"
12"Circumstances that hinted at something"
13"The suspect's movements were too"
14"Each motion suggested training, precision."
15"Something underneath this chase felt"
16"Protocol suggested calling backup."
17"Her instincts—honed by years of"
18"The staircase descended into darkness,"
19"Quinn drew her weapon, checking"
ratio0.805
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Her instincts—honed by years of investigating cases that brushed against inexplicable boundaries—urged immediate pursuit."
1"The staircase descended into darkness, each metal step producing a hollow ring that echoed strangely."
2"Vendor stalls lined a cavernous space that seemed impossibly large for its subterranean location."
3"Merchants sold objects that defied rational explanation: bottled liquids that shifted color, intricate mechanical devices that seemed to move without human inte…"
4"A bent figure with too many fingers exchanged something that looked like living smoke for a bone token."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.1137%