Run: 2026-02-17-01KHMXSXGQ0KSSP47NDGKZTDGC

Run Details

Duration:
51.3s
Cost:
$0.035052

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The deadbolts clicked one by one, and Aurora's stomach dropped when Eva's voice called through the door, "Just leave it on the mat, thanks." Three more seconds of fumbling with locks, then the door swung open to reveal not Eva's familiar face, but Lucien Moreau's mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—widening in surprise. "Merde." The word escaped him like a breath. Aurora's hand tightened on the takeaway bag from Golden Empress, the plastic crinkling. "Where's Eva?" Lucien stepped back, his ivory-handled cane tapping against the doorframe. Even caught off-guard, he looked immaculate in his tailored charcoal suit, not a platinum hair out of place. "She's at the British Library. Research emergency, apparently." He paused, studying her face. "She didn't tell you I was staying here." It wasn't a question. Aurora pushed past him into the cramped flat, needing distance from his cologne—something expensive that reminded her of late nights in shadowy clubs and conversations that meant too much. Books and scrolls covered every surface, Eva's organized chaos somehow more chaotic than usual. Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, looked up from his perch on a stack of grimoires and flicked his tail in greeting. "She mentioned a houseguest." Aurora set the bag on the only clear spot on Eva's kitchen counter. "She failed to mention it was you." "Would you have come if she had?" The question hung between them like smoke. Aurora turned to face him, taking in the way he favored his left leg slightly, the cane more necessity than affectation these days. The last time she'd seen him, he'd been bleeding out in a warehouse in Bermondsey, his demon heritage the only thing keeping him alive while she pressed her hands to the wound in his chest. "I don't know," she said finally. It was honest, at least. Lucien closed the door, each deadbolt sliding home with deliberate precision. The sound felt final. "Your friend has impeccable timing. Or terrible timing, depending on perspective." "She's helping you with something." Aurora crossed her arms. "What kind of trouble are you in now?" A smile ghosted across his lips—the same smile that had once made her forget her own name. "Direct as always, ma chérie. Some things don't change." "Don't." The word came out sharper than intended. "You don't get to call me that anymore." His expression shifted, the practiced charm sliding away to reveal something rawer underneath. "No. I suppose I don't." He moved to the window, looking down at Brick Lane through the grimy glass. "Eva is helping me track down information about my father's realm. Avaros has been... unstable lately. The boundaries between worlds are thinning." Aurora felt the familiar chill that came with supernatural problems—the kind that usually ended with someone bleeding. "And you're involved because?" "Because demons from Avaros have been appearing in London. Because they're looking for me." He turned back to her, and in the afternoon light, the heterochromatic eyes seemed to glow. "Because I may be the only one who can stop them from tearing a permanent hole between our worlds." She should leave. Should walk out of Eva's flat and pretend this conversation never happened. Instead, she found herself moving closer, close enough to see the fine lines around his eyes that hadn't been there two years ago. "How bad is it?" "Bad enough that I'm willing to risk your hatred by being here when you arrived." The words hit like a physical blow. Aurora's hand drifted unconsciously to the crescent scar on her left wrist, an old nervous habit. "I don't hate you." "No?" Lucien's voice was soft, dangerous. "Then what do you call it, this thing between us? This careful distance you've maintained?" "Self-preservation." He laughed, but there was no humor in it. "Ah. Of course." He took a step closer, and Aurora caught herself breathing in that damned cologne again. "You know, I used to think you left London because of the job. Because things got too complicated with the supernatural elements." "Lucien—" "But it wasn't the job, was it? It was me. It was us." The flat suddenly felt too small, the walls pressing in. Ptolemy yowled from his perch, sensing the tension. Aurora wanted to deny it, to throw up the careful walls she'd built over the past two years. Instead, she found herself trapped by his gaze, by the weight of everything they'd never said to each other. "You almost died," she whispered. "In that warehouse. You almost died, and you looked at me like it was my fault for being there. Like you regretted—" She cut herself off, shaking her head. "Like I regretted what, exactly?" His voice was gentle now, coaxing. "Like you regretted letting me get close. Like you regretted that night we—" Heat flooded her cheeks. "You know what night." Lucien moved closer, close enough that she could see gold flecks in his amber eye. "The night I told you I loved you." The words hung in the air between them, heavy with memory. Aurora's breath caught. She'd replayed that night a thousand times—his hands in her hair, the desperate way he'd kissed her, the words whispered against her throat in French and English and something that might have been demonic. "You never said it back," he continued, his voice barely above a whisper. "Because you were dying." The words tumbled out before she could stop them. "Because you were bleeding out in my arms, and I thought—I thought if I said it, if I admitted how I felt, it would be like admitting you were going to die." Lucien's good hand—not the one gripping his cane—reached up to cup her cheek. His thumb brushed across her skin, and Aurora felt herself leaning into the touch despite everything. "And after? When I lived?" Aurora closed her bright blue eyes, unable to meet his heterochromatic stare. "After, you looked at me like you wished you could take it back. Like it was a mistake." "Never," he breathed, and when she opened her eyes, his face was inches from hers. "Never a mistake. But I am what I am, Aurora. Half-demon, tied to a realm that could destroy everything you care about. Loving me—it's dangerous." "Everything about this life is dangerous." She pulled back, creating space between them. "That's not why I left." "Then why?" The question she'd been avoiding for two years. Aurora looked around Eva's flat—at the books and research notes, at Ptolemy watching them with knowing green eyes, at the late afternoon light filtering through windows that had witnessed a thousand supernatural secrets. "Because I was falling too hard, too fast. Because when I saw you bleeding, I realized I'd do anything to keep you safe. Even if it meant compromising everything I believed about staying objective, staying smart." She met his eyes again. "I left because I was terrified of what I might become if I stayed." Lucien was quiet for a long moment, processing her words. Finally, he asked, "And now? What are you terrified of now?" Aurora's heart hammered against her ribs. The smart answer was that she was terrified of falling again, of making the same mistakes. But looking at him now—older, wearier, but still achingly familiar—she realized that wasn't quite true. "Now I'm terrified that I never really left at all," she admitted. "That despite everything, despite the distance and the time and all my very good reasons, I'm still..." "Still what, ma—" He caught himself, the endearment dying on his lips. "Still in love with you," she finished, the words barely audible. The confession hung between them like a bridge neither was sure they should cross. Outside, London carried on—traffic humming, people calling to each other in a dozen languages, the eternal pulse of a city that had seen stranger things than a half-demon and a human woman standing in a cramped flat above a curry house, finally admitting what they'd both known all along. Lucien's cane clattered to the floor as he reached for her with both hands, framing her face like something precious. "Aurora—" "Don't," she whispered, but she didn't pull away. "Don't say anything that will make this harder than it already is." Instead of speaking, he kissed her. Soft at first, tentative, as if testing whether she would disappear. When she kissed him back, her hands fisting in his perfectly tailored jacket, he deepened it, pouring two years of longing into the contact. They broke apart breathing hard, foreheads pressed together in the space between Eva's research notes and Ptolemy's judgmental stare. "This doesn't solve anything," Aurora said against his lips. "No," Lucien agreed, his thumb tracing the line of her jaw. "But perhaps it doesn't have to. Perhaps we can work out the rest as we go." Aurora pulled back just enough to meet his mismatched eyes—one amber, one black, both looking at her like she was the answer to a question he'd forgotten how to ask. "The demons from Avaros," she said. "How much trouble are we talking about?" His smile was answer enough.

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.0000% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount6
adverbTags
0"The deadbolts clicked one by one, and Aurora's stomach dropped when Eva's voice called through the door, Three more seconds of fumbling with locks, then the door swung open to reveal not Eva's familiar face, but Lucien Moreau's mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—widening in surprise. [more then]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"he continued, his voice barely above a whisper [barely]"
3"Finally, he asked, [Finally,]"
4"she finished, the words barely audible [barely]"
5"she whispered, but she didn't pull away [away]"
60.6299% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
2"suddenly"
3"barely above a whisper"
4"really"
5"very"
100.0000% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.0000% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
86.8766% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsms2
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"weight"
100.0000% Cliche density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"hung in the air"
100.0000% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences76
matches
0"was terrified"
100.0000% Filter word density
Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.0000% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences109
matches
0"regretted that night"
1"replayed that night"
2"was that she"
3"terrified that I"
100.0000% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean27.35
std17.56
cv0.642
sampleLengths
052
18
215
349
467
524
67
765
811
926
1017
1126
1216
1354
1421
1549
1642
1715
1827
1921
201
2149
221
2313
2455
2534
2611
2721
2823
2948
3013
3145
3229
335
3430
3540
3618
372
3841
3955
4021
4137
4229
4312
4411
4563
4621
4720
4841
4919
100.0000% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤5% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"was terrified"
100.0000% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs176
matches(empty)
84.8527% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount991
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"clear spot on Eva's"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.050454086781029264
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.013118062563067608
100.0000% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.0000% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean13.8
std9.52
cv0.69
sampleLengths
052
18
213
32
410
518
613
78
84
929
1014
1120
1217
137
147
157
1623
1735
186
195
2011
214
2211
239
248
2517
269
278
288
2913
3019
3122
3217
334
3430
3519
363
3712
3823
394
4015
417
4216
434
446
4515
461
479
4818
4922
62.0795% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.42201834862385323
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners46
0.0000% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"The deadbolts clicked one by one, and Aurora's stomach dropped when Eva's voice called through the door, Three more seconds of fumbling with locks, then the door swung open to reveal not Eva's familiar face, but Lucien Moreau's mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—widening in surprise. (click drop call fumble swing do reveal not mismatch)"
1"she said finally (say finally)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he continued, his voice barely above a whisper (continue)"
4"he breathed, and when she opened her eyes, his face was inches from hers (breathe, open be)"
5"she admitted (admit)"
6"she finished, the words barely audible (finish)"
7"she whispered, but she didn't pull away (whisper, does not pull away)"
8"Lucien agreed, his thumb tracing the line of her jaw (agree, trace)"
82.0258%