| 100.0000% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | |
| 53.0516% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism adverbs (57 tracked) | | wordCount | 213 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.0000% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <1% AI-ism words (140 tracked) | | wordCount | 213 | | totalAiIsms | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "otherworldly" | | 2 | "loomed" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "etched" |
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| 100.0000% | Cliche density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 11 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.1225% | Filter word density | Target: ≤12% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 11 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.0000% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤10% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 13 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.5929% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 6 | | mean | 34.67 | | std | 14.01 | | cv | 0.404 | | sampleLengths | | |
| 100.0000% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤5% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 11 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.0000% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤10% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 29 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.1228% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 190 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.03684210526315789 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.021052631578947368 | |
| 100.0000% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 13 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 80.0549% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 13 | | mean | 16 | | std | 5.6 | | cv | 0.35 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 6 |
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| 92.3077% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.6923076923076923 | | totalSentences | 13 | | uniqueOpeners | 9 | |
| 0.0000% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤30% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice like wind through dry reeds (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured, their whisper-voice sliding between the stones (murmur, slide)" |
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