| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "they said softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.458 | | leniency | 0.917 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |
| 86.28% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1093 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "utterly" | | 2 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.23% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1093 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "yearning" | | 5 | "chill" | | 6 | "intricate" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "traced" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "shimmered" | | 12 | "dance" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | | |
| 19.70% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1082 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.45% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 37 | | wordCount | 899 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.89 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 17 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Nyx | 5 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Ripples | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Isolde | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.555 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "light that seemed to emanate from the very air within the grove" | | 1 | "Not quite music, not quite voice, but something that made Aurora's chest tight with inexplicable longing" | | 2 | "not quite voice, but something that made Aurora's chest tight with inexplicable longing" | | 3 | "looked like liquid light—some golden, som" | | 4 | "not-quite music rose and fell like breathing" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.773 | | wordCount | 1082 | | matches | | 0 | "not the canopy above but stars, countless stars wheeling in patterns she didn't recog" | | 1 | "Not quite music, not quite voice, but something" | | 2 | "not quite voice, but something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 96.02% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 38.64 | | std | 18.78 | | cv | 0.486 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 57 | | 1 | 59 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 72 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 61 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 60 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 61 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 39 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 38 | | 19 | 66 | | 20 | 50 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 40 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 18 |
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| 99.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 146 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.141 | | matches | | 0 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—winter roses bloomed alongside summer daisies, their petals shimmering with dew that never seemed to evaporate." | | 1 | "It stretched further than should have been possible within the confines of Richmond Park—a clearing that seemed to breathe with its own life." | | 2 | "The half-Fae seer paused beside a pool that hadn't been there moments before—or perhaps it had always been there, and Aurora simply hadn't known how to see it." | | 3 | "Ripples spread outward, and for a moment Aurora could have sworn she saw faces in the waves—distant, beautiful, and utterly alien." | | 4 | "In the star-touched water, they appeared almost human—angular features sharp with old pain, violet eyes bright with curiosity." | | 5 | "The grove was warm despite the impossible flowers, the air thick with the scent of growing things and something else—something that reminded her of lightning and copper pennies." | | 6 | "At the center, a tree that defied description reached toward a sky that showed glimpses of other skies—sometimes blue, sometimes star-scattered void, sometimes the warm amber of distant Dymas." | | 7 | "They hung like lanterns from the branches, each one containing what looked like liquid light—some golden, some silver, some deep purple like Nyx's eyes." | | 8 | "The air around the tree shimmered like heat waves, and she could see movement within that distortion—shapes that might have been people, or might have been dreams given form." | | 9 | "Aurora looked at her companions—the ancient exile who had brought them here, the shadow-bound soul searching for memories of mortality." |
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| 96.96% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 920 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 40 | | adverbRatio | 0.043478260869565216 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005434782608695652 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 15.24 | | std | 6.96 | | cv | 0.457 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 28 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 6 |
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| 83.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.5352112676056338 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 57.47% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Then she looked at the" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "She straightened, her bright blue" | | 1 | "It stretched further than should" | | 2 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 3 | "she said without turning" | | 4 | "they said softly" | | 5 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 6 | "She paused beside one, studying" | | 7 | "They looked almost like writing," | | 8 | "Their whispered voice carried a" | | 9 | "They crested a small rise," | | 10 | "They hung like lanterns from" | | 11 | "She took another step forward," |
| | ratio | 0.207 | |
| 63.45% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 46 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain felt warm" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed once," | | 2 | "Isolde had warned them before" | | 3 | "The quality of light shifted" | | 4 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 5 | "Aurora knelt to touch one," | | 6 | "The flower hummed beneath her" | | 7 | "Nyx whispered, their voice carrying" | | 8 | "She straightened, her bright blue" | | 9 | "It stretched further than should" | | 10 | "The Heartstone grew warmer against" | | 11 | "Aurora pulled it free of" | | 12 | "Isolde moved between the stone" | | 13 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 14 | "she said without turning" | | 15 | "Aurora followed, conscious of how" | | 16 | "The half-Fae seer paused beside" | | 17 | "The water reflected not the" | | 18 | "Isolde replied, dipping one pale" | | 19 | "Ripples spread outward, and for" |
| | ratio | 0.793 | |
| 86.21% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, as Aurora's boots touched" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 3.48% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Nyx materialized from shadow, their violet eyes reflecting the strange light that seemed to emanate from the very air within the grove." | | 1 | "Her bare feet left no impression in the soft earth, and where she walked, the flowers seemed to lean toward her as if drawn by an invisible current." | | 2 | "The half-Fae seer paused beside a pool that hadn't been there moments before—or perhaps it had always been there, and Aurora simply hadn't known how to see it." | | 3 | "The grove was warm despite the impossible flowers, the air thick with the scent of growing things and something else—something that reminded her of lightning an…" | | 4 | "Not quite music, not quite voice, but something that made Aurora's chest tight with inexplicable longing." | | 5 | "At the center, a tree that defied description reached toward a sky that showed glimpses of other skies—sometimes blue, sometimes star-scattered void, sometimes …" | | 6 | "In the distance, that haunting not-quite-music rose and fell like breathing." | | 7 | "Aurora looked at her companions—the ancient exile who had brought them here, the shadow-bound soul searching for memories of mortality." |
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| 79.55% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice reverent" |
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| 66.67% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde confirmed (confirm)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |