| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Mills shifted uncomfortably [uncomfortably]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |
| 91.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1200 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 60.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1200 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "stark" | | 1 | "fluttered" | | 2 | "echoing" | | 3 | "dancing" | | 4 | "gloom" | | 5 | "navigate" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "wavering" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "whisper" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 56 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "began to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "appeared to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1192 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 864 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.27 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Mills" | | discoveredNames | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 11 | | London | 1 | | Underground | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Mills | 10 | | Victorian | 1 | | Hampstead | 1 | | Heath | 1 | | Morris | 3 | | Thomas | 1 | | Aldrich | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Underground" | | 3 | "Mills" | | 4 | "Heath" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Thomas" | | 7 | "Aldrich" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.863 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed almost warm to the touch" | | 1 | "cases that seemed to slip through her fingers like smoke, she'd learned to trust the itch between her shoulder blades that said something was deeply wrong" | | 2 | "his confidence visibly wavering" | | 3 | "quite look human" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.839 | | wordCount | 1192 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just near the body, but everywhere" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | 0 | "understand that belief" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 38 | | mean | 31.37 | | std | 18.79 | | cv | 0.599 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 44 | | 1 | 72 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 41 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 42 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 38 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 50 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 49 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 42 | | 30 | 25 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 47 | | 34 | 34 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 31 | | 37 | 14 |
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| 73.93% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "were curled" | | 1 | "were caked" | | 2 | "been found" | | 3 | "been deflected" | | 4 | "was covered" |
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| 67.55% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "was constructing" | | 1 | "was staring" | | 2 | "was starting" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.092 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the usual cocktail of decay and neglect that characterized London's abandoned Underground tunnels, but something else—ozone mixed with burnt copper, like the air after lightning strikes too close." | | 1 | "The surface came away gritty, but underneath the grime, she felt something else—a texture that seemed almost warm to the touch." | | 2 | "\"Then explain this.\" Quinn pointed to the victim's shoes—expensive leather oxfords, but the soles were caked with the distinctive reddish clay that marked certain areas of Hampstead Heath." | | 3 | "Not random scratches—deliberate marks, carved with desperate urgency." | | 4 | "Not just near the body, but everywhere—covering pillars, scratched into walls, even etched into the rusted railway tracks." | | 5 | "In the purple glow, she could see something else—footprints leading away from the body, but not the kind made by shoes." | | 6 | "She checked her watch—nearly midnight." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 873 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "eerie blue-green glow," |
| | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.03436426116838488 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010309278350515464 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 15.68 | | std | 8.17 | | cv | 0.521 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 28 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 28 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 14 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 8 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 77.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.47368421052631576 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 60.61% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Just a middle-aged man in" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "Her worn leather watch caught" | | 1 | "She dropped the final few" | | 2 | "His fingers were curled into" | | 3 | "She stood, brushing dust from" | | 4 | "She began to pace the" | | 5 | "She'd seen similar markings before," | | 6 | "She was remembering Morris, remembering" | | 7 | "She played the UV light" | | 8 | "Her voice was steady, controlled," | | 9 | "She stood slowly, keeping the" | | 10 | "She checked her watch—nearly midnight." | | 11 | "She knelt one final time" |
| | ratio | 0.218 | |
| 69.09% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 43 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | | 0 | "The stench hit Detective Harlow" | | 1 | "Her worn leather watch caught" | | 2 | "The old Camden tube station" | | 3 | "Crime scene tape fluttered in" | | 4 | "Sergeant Mills looked up from" | | 5 | "She dropped the final few" | | 6 | "The victim lay sprawled near" | | 7 | "Mills read from his notes" | | 8 | "Quinn knelt beside the body," | | 9 | "The man's eyes were wide" | | 10 | "His fingers were curled into" | | 11 | "Mills shifted uncomfortably" | | 12 | "She stood, brushing dust from" | | 13 | "The abandoned platform stretched into" | | 14 | "Quinn asked, running her finger" | | 15 | "The surface came away gritty," | | 16 | "Quinn pointed to the victim's" | | 17 | "Mills leaned closer, squinting at" | | 18 | "Quinn straightened, her sharp jaw" | | 19 | "She began to pace the" |
| | ratio | 0.782 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The victim lay sprawled near what had once been the ticket office, arms flung wide as if he'd been dancing." | | 1 | "But something nagged at her, a detail that didn't fit the tidy narrative Mills was constructing." | | 2 | "The surface came away gritty, but underneath the grime, she felt something else—a texture that seemed almost warm to the touch." | | 3 | "The pieces weren't fitting together, and after three years of cases that seemed to slip through her fingers like smoke, she'd learned to trust the itch between …" | | 4 | "The scratched symbols fluoresced with an eerie blue-green glow, revealing a pattern that made her stomach clench with recognition." | | 5 | "She was remembering Morris, remembering the way his body had been found in an impossible position, the way the official report had glossed over details that did…" |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Sergeant Mills looked up, his face pale in the harsh lighting" | | 1 | "Quinn pointed, but the soles were caked with the distinctive reddish clay that marked certain areas of Hampstead Heath" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Mills breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 30 | | tagDensity | 0.067 | | leniency | 0.133 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.067 | |