Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNETGYQVHH8GH159CNFY5GA

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Duration:
2m 14s
Cost:
$0.002717
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came again, insistent, a sharp rap of knuckles against wood that cut through the low hum of Eva’s ancient refrigerator. Rory froze, a half-eaten container of chicken tikka masala poised halfway to her mouth. It was past ten. Eva wasn’t due back from her late shift at the library for another hour, and no one else had any business at the third-floor flat on Brick Lane, especially not without calling first. Ptolemy, the ginger tabby, lifted his head from a nest of parchment on the sofa, ears twitching. Rory set the container down on the cluttered coffee table, her appetite gone. Three deadbolts stood between her and the hallway, a security measure Eva insisted upon for a world she claimed was far stranger than Rory cared to admit. Rory’s hand went instinctively to the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, tracing the familiar ridge. A childhood reminder of a fall from a tree, but lately, it felt like a touchstone for a different kind of caution. She crossed the small, book-choked living room, her trainers silent on the worn Persian rug. Peering through the fisheye lens, the world warped into a distorted corridor of peeling floral wallpaper. And standing in the center of it, impossibly sharp and out of place, was Lucien Moreau. Her breath caught. It had been six months. Six months since she’d last seen him leaning against the polished bar downstairs at Silas’s place, a glass of something amber in his hand, watching her with that unreadable, dual-colored gaze. Six months of silence, of unanswered texts, of a hollow space in her life she’d tried to fill with delivery routes and takeaway containers. He looked exactly the same. Impeccable. A charcoal suit that probably cost more than her entire year’s rent, tailored to his lean, 5’11” frame. His platinum blond hair was slicked back from his forehead, not a strand out of place. He leaned lightly on his ivory-handled cane, the picture of a man waiting patiently for an audience he had no doubt he would receive. Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drumbeat of surprise and something hotter, sharper. Attraction, yes, that old, familiar pull that had always been there, a low thrum under her skin whenever he was near. But it was layered over with a fresh coat of hurt, a residue of abandonment she’d sworn she wouldn’t feel. She could pretend she wasn’t home. The flat was dark except for the single lamp by the sofa. He might go away. As if reading her thoughts, his voice filtered through the solid wood, smooth as aged whiskey, laced with that faint French accent that had once made her knees weak. “Aurora. I can hear you breathing.” Damn him. Damn his half-demon hearing. She scowled at the door, then, with a sigh of resignation, began sliding the deadbolts open. The heavy metal clunks echoed in the quiet flat. She opened the door just enough to peer out, blocking the entrance with her body. “Lucien.” She kept her voice flat, cool. She hoped it sounded cool. It was the tone she used on difficult customers. “What do you want?” His eyes, one a warm, molten amber, the other a bottomless black, scanned her face. They missed nothing—the takeaway container on the table, her old Cardiff University sweatshirt, the faint shadows under her blue eyes that even a cool demeanor couldn’t hide. A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Not even a ‘hello’? Not even after all this time?” “Time implies a mutual awareness of its passage,” she said, tightening her grip on the doorframe. “From my perspective, you vanished.” “Business,” he said, the single word a well-practiced excuse. “Unavoidable.” “In Marseille?” she asked, the name of his birthplace a deliberate prod. She remembered the stories, whispered late at night: a human mother, a demon father from a realm called Avaros. His amber eye narrowed slightly, the only sign her barb had landed. “Among other places. May I come in? It’s a matter of some… delicacy.” He gestured with his cane, a slight, elegant movement. “And the scent of vindaloo, while intoxicating, is rather pervasive in the hall.” Rory hesitated. Letting him in felt like a surrender, an admission that the door she’d tried so hard to close wasn’t actually locked. But standing in the hallway, having this conversation where any of Eva’s peculiar neighbors might overhear, was worse. She stepped back, pulling the door wide. “Fine. Five minutes.” He swept past her, bringing with him the scent of cold night air, expensive cologne, and something else, something metallic and ancient that was uniquely his. He surveyed the chaotic flat with a critic’s eye, his gaze skipping over the towers of books, the scrolls cascading from chairs, the layers of dust on every surface that wasn’t part of Eva’s immediate research. Ptolemy, who usually hid from strangers, merely blinked at him from the sofa, then began washing a paw with an air of supreme indifference. Of course the cat would approve of him. “Charming,” Lucien remarked, his tone neutral. “It’s home,” Rory said defensively, closing the door and re-engaging the deadbolts. The sound was final, trapping them together. She turned to face him, crossing her arms over her chest. “Your five minutes are ticking.” He turned from his inspection, leaning his weight on the cane. The gesture seemed more habitual than necessary. “Straight to business. I always admired that about you, Rory. Your efficiency.” “Don’t,” she warned, the casual use of her nickname feeling like a violation. “Just say what you came to say.” “I need your help.” The words hung in the air, simple and unbelievable. Lucien Moreau, the most connected fixer in London’s shadowy underworld, needed help from a part-time delivery driver hiding from her past. She let out a short, incredulous laugh. “You’re joking.” “I am rarely accused of having a sense of humor.” His face was serious, the lamplight catching the sharp planes of his cheeks, deepening the darkness of his black eye. “There is an item. A text. It was… mislaid during my recent travels. It has found its way to London. I believe it is currently in the possession of one of your clients.” “My clients?” The laugh died in her throat. “You mean the people I deliver shrimp fried rice to?” “The Golden Empress services a more diverse clientele than you might realize,” he said smoothly. “Yu-Fei Cheung has connections that run deep. You deliver to a residence in Mayfair. A townhouse with a green door, number forty-seven.” Rory’s mind raced, flipping through the mental map of her rounds. She knew the place. An older, reclusive gentleman who always tipped generously and never made eye contact. The orders were always large, always paid in cash. “Mr. Albright,” she murmured. “His name is not Albright,” Lucien corrected gently. “And the text he now holds is not a cookbook. It is dangerous, Aurora. In the wrong hands, it could cause… significant disruption.” “So go get it yourself,” she snapped, a flare of anger overriding her confusion. “Break in. Charm your way in. That’s what you do, isn’t it? You’re the master of getting what you want.” He took a step closer, closing the distance between them. The air seemed to thicken. She could see the individual lashes framing his heterochromatic eyes, the faint line of a scar near his temple she’d never noticed before. “It is not that simple. The townhouse is warded. Magically sealed. My particular… heritage… sets off alarms quieter than a whisper. But a human, a simple delivery person… you could walk right through.” “A simple delivery person,” she repeated, the words tasting bitter. “That’s all I am to you? A key for a locked door you can’t pick?” “That is not what I meant.” His voice dropped, softened. “You are clever. You see things others miss. That is why I’m here. Not because you are simple, but because you are singular.” The compliment, delivered with such earnest intensity, disarmed her. The anger bled away, leaving behind the raw hurt. “You left, Lucien. No call, no text. For six months. You can’t just reappear and ask me to commit burglary for you because I’m *singular*.” His gaze dropped for a moment, a rare show of contrition. When he looked up, the mask of the unflappable broker had slipped. She saw genuine conflict in his eyes. “I had to leave. The business in Marseille… it was family. My mother.” He paused, choosing his words with uncharacteristic care. “There are debts in my world, Aurora. Old, bloody debts. My absence was a form of protection.” “Protection?” The word was a whisper. “For who?” “For you.” The admission hung between them, stark and undeniable. “My associates… my enemies… they see connection as vulnerability. My presence in your life painted a target on your back. A target I had to remove by removing myself.” All the air left Rory’s lungs. The cool-headed logic she prided herself on shattered. He hadn’t vanished because she didn’t matter. He’d vanished because she did. The realization was a seismic shift, cracking open the defensive walls she’d spent months building. “You should have told me,” she said, her voice thick. “And put you in more danger by making you aware of it?” He shook his head. “Ignorance is a fragile shield, but it is a shield nonetheless. I thought… I thought it was better.” “You thought wrong.” She uncrossed her arms, her hands falling uselessly to her sides. The space between them felt charged, electric with everything that had been left unsaid for half a year. The attraction she’d tried to stifle roared back to life, amplified by his proximity and this devastating confession. He was close enough now that she could feel the warmth radiating from him. He lifted his hand, slowly, giving her every chance to pull away. His fingers, long and elegant, brushed a stray strand of black hair from her cheek. The touch was feather-light, but it sent a jolt straight through her. “I am not asking for forgiveness,” he murmured, his amber eye holding hers captive while the black one seemed to see straight into her soul. “I am asking for your help. But know this, Aurora Carter. I came to you not only because you are the only one who can do this, but because these last six months have been an interminable exile. Seeing you now… it is like coming up for air.” His words washed over her, undoing her completely. The hurt was still there, a dull ache, but it was now intertwined with a overwhelming, terrifying hope. He needed her. Not just as a tool, but as *her*. She looked past him, at the safe, chaotic mess of Eva’s flat. She could say no. She could send him away, back into the night, and return to her chicken tikka and her uncomplicated existence. She could protect herself. But Rory had never been particularly good at playing it safe. Her gaze shifted back to his face, to the stark contrast of his eyes, to the faint hope she saw warring with the fear in their depths. She took a shallow breath. “What does this text look like?”
created_at"2026-02-17T09:29:54.35428+00:00" 2/17/2026, 9:29:54 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
95.95% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags37
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"His amber eye narrowed slightly [slightly]"
1"Rory said defensively [defensively]"
2"he said smoothly [smoothly]"
3"Lucien corrected gently [gently]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.712
leniency1
rawRatio0.108
effectiveRatio0.108
86.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1885
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slightly"
2"gently"
3"slowly"
4"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1885
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count2
8
word"cascading"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"sense of"
count1
11
word"raced"
count1
12
word"charm"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count2
14
word"intensity"
count1
15
word"stark"
count2
16
word"shattered"
count1
17
word"charged"
count1
18
word"electric"
count1
19
word"could feel"
count1
20
word"warmth"
count1
21
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"familiar"
2"reminder"
3"unreadable"
4"silence"
5"echoed"
6"scanned"
7"chaotic"
8"cascading"
9"weight"
10"sense of"
11"raced"
12"charm"
13"whisper"
14"intensity"
15"stark"
16"shattered"
17"charged"
18"electric"
19"could feel"
20"warmth"
21"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
65.64% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen94
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1872
ratio0.001
matches
0"singular"
1"her"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1579
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity0.7
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva6
Brick1
Lane1
Rory11
Persian1
Lucien4
Moreau2
Silas1
French1
Damn2
Cardiff1
University1
Avaros1
London2
You4
Mayfair1
Aurora3
Charm1
Marseille1
Carter1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"You"
5"Aurora"
6"Carter"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Silas"
3"Cardiff"
4"London"
5"Mayfair"
6"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
13.01% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like a touchstone for a different"
1"As if reading her thoughts, his voice filtered through the solid wood, smooth as aged whiskey, laced with that faint French accent that had once made her knees weak"
2"felt like a surrender, an admission tha"
3"seemed more habitual than necessary"
93.16% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.068
wordCount1872
matches
0"not only because you are the only one who can do this, but because these last six months have been an interminable exil"
1"Not just as a tool, but as *her*"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean39
std22.18
cv0.569
sampleLengths
073
196
247
363
464
556
622
735
846
925
1060
1121
1210
1331
1447
1551
1694
176
1835
1930
2020
214
2230
239
2463
2518
2637
2741
2831
2934
3071
3125
3233
3343
3468
358
3639
3741
3810
3934
4050
4153
4273
4337
4439
4511
4632
476
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences111
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was layered"
2"been left"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs280
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences113
ratio0.009
matches
0"His eyes, one a warm, molten amber, the other a bottomless black, scanned her face. They missed nothing—the takeaway container on the table, her old Cardiff University sweatshirt, the faint shadows under her blue eyes that even a cool demeanor couldn’t hide. A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “Not even a ‘hello’?"
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1371
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"small, book-choked living"
2"unreadable, dual-colored gaze."
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.03574033552151714
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.016046681254558718
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean16.57
std15.99
cv0.965
sampleLengths
022
114
24
333
417
513
627
717
822
915
1016
1116
123
135
1431
1524
165
171
1858
1956
2022
2130
225
2346
2425
2554
266
2721
2810
2931
3015
314
325
3323
3449
352
3694
376
3835
3921
407
412
4220
434
4430
459
4634
472
482
495
69.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4336283185840708
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners49
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.98% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences99
matches
0"It was past ten."
1"She crossed the small, book-choked"
2"Her breath caught."
3"It had been six months."
4"He looked exactly the same."
5"She could pretend she wasn’t"
6"I can hear you"
7"She kept her voice flat,"
8"His eyes, one a warm,"
9"she said, tightening her grip"
10"he said, the single word"
11"she asked, the name of"
12"His amber eye narrowed slightly,"
13"It’s a matter of some…"
14"He swept past her, bringing"
15"He turned from his inspection,"
16"I always admired that about"
17"she warned, the casual use"
18"She let out a short,"
19"His face was serious, the"
ratio0.505
61.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences99
matches
0"The knock came again, insistent,"
1"Rory froze, a half-eaten container"
2"It was past ten."
3"Eva wasn’t due back from"
4"Ptolemy, the ginger tabby, lifted"
5"Rory set the container down"
6"Rory’s hand went instinctively to"
7"A childhood reminder of a"
8"She crossed the small, book-choked"
9"Her breath caught."
10"It had been six months."
11"He looked exactly the same."
12"A charcoal suit that probably"
13"Rory’s heart hammered against her"
14"She could pretend she wasn’t"
15"I can hear you"
16"She kept her voice flat,"
17"His eyes, one a warm,"
18"she said, tightening her grip"
19"he said, the single word"
ratio0.798
50.51% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"As if reading her thoughts,"
ratio0.01
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic drumbeat of surprise and something hotter, sharper. Attraction, yes, that old, familiar pull that had always b…"
1"He swept past her, bringing with him the scent of cold night air, expensive cologne, and something else, something metallic and ancient that was uniquely his. H…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"She kept, cool"
1"she asked, the name of his birthplace a deliberate prod"
2"Lucien remarked, his tone neutral"
3"she snapped, a flare of anger overriding her confusion"
4"she repeated, the words tasting bitter"
5"she said, her voice thick"
6"She uncrossed, her hands falling uselessly to her sides"
53.85% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she warned (warn)"
1"Lucien corrected gently (correct)"
2"she snapped (snap)"
3"she repeated (repeat)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.212
leniency0.423
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.192
76.8060%