Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNETGYSJP9XB507BQGK772G

Run Details

Duration:
7.8s
Cost:
$0.000246
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Thebrass knocker on Eva’s flat thudded twice, sharp and insistent. Aurora Carter, leaning against the counter in the tiny kitchen, paused mid-sweep of crumbs from the worn linoleum. Her eyes, bright blue and sharp, flicked towards the door. She didn’t move immediately, her expression unreadable. The flat above Silas’ bar was a fortress, its front door secured by three deadbolts. She’d installed them herself after Evan. The third bolt scraped home with a final, definitive click, and she turned, wiping her hands on a flour-dusted apron. The door swung open. Lucien Moreau stood framed in the doorway, the late afternoon sun catching the platinum sheen of his slicked-back hair. He didn’t smile. His gaze, one amber and one black, swept the cramped space with detached appraisal. His tailored charcoal suit looked impossibly crisp against the faded wallpaper. He held an ivory-handled cane, its tip tapping a precise rhythm on the worn floorboards. “Aurora,” he said, his voice smooth as aged brandy, carrying a faint French lilt. “Or should I call you Rory? Laila? Malphora?” He stepped inside, closing the door behind him with a soft click that echoed in the small flat. The scent of curry from Silas’ bar below mingled with the sharp tang of old paper and dust. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, leapt from the sofa, tail bristling, and skittered towards the door, hissing softly. Aurora didn’t flinch. She crossed her arms, her black hair falling straight past her shoulders. “Lucien.” Her voice was cool, precise. “To what do I owe the... unexpected pleasure?” He inclined his head, a gesture of respect that felt entirely out of place in the chaos of her flat. “Unexpected is a relative term, I suppose. I needed information, and you’re the only one who can provide it.” He gestured vaguely towards the wall lined with books and scrolls. “Your flat is... well-documented.” “My flat is my sanctuary,” Aurora countered, her eyes never leaving his. “Not a library for your convenience.” She moved past him, heading towards the kitchen. “Tea? Coffee? Something stronger?” “Tea,” he replied, his gaze lingering on the scar on her left wrist, a small crescent moon of pale skin against the dark. “Black, no sugar.” He settled into the worn armchair, his cane resting beside him. The ivory handle gleamed. “I understand you’re working for Yu-Fei Cheung now. Delivery driver. Quite the career pivot from Cardiff.” “Life’s about pivots,” Aurora said, pouring boiling water into a chipped mug. “And avoiding ex-boyfriends with a taste for violence.” She set the mug down in front of him. “What information?” He took a slow sip, watching her reflection in the dark liquid. “A lead. A name. Someone connected to the recent disturbances in the East End. A man named Silas Thorne. You know him?” Aurora stiffened. Silas Thorne was the owner of the bar below her flat. A man with a reputation for being tight-lipped and dangerous. “I know the bar,” she said, her voice tight. “What about him?” “He’s involved,” Lucien stated flatly. “Deeply. And he’s looking for someone. Someone who knows things.” He leaned forward slightly, his amber eye locking onto hers. “You know who that someone is?” The air crackled. Aurora felt the familiar heat of old attraction, the sting of old hurt. “I know people,” she said, her voice low. “But I don’t know Silas Thorne’s business.” She picked up a stray book from the floor, brushing crumbs off the cover. “And I don’t know why you’re here, Lucien. Not really.” He stood, his movements fluid, and walked to the window overlooking Brick Lane. The city lights were beginning to twinkle. “Because, Rory,” he said, his voice soft but carrying, “sometimes the past refuses to stay buried. Sometimes it walks right up to your door, demanding answers.” He turned, his gaze sweeping the cluttered room. “And sometimes, the only person who can help you face it... is the one who helped bury it.” Aurora felt the familiar ache, a physical pang in her chest. The attraction was still there, a raw nerve. The hurt was a scar, still tender. “What do you want, Lucien?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “Truth? Revenge? Something else?” He didn’t answer immediately. He looked at her, really looked at her, the cool blue eyes meeting his heterochromatic gaze. “I want to know if you’re still running, Rory. Or if you’ve finally stopped.” The silence stretched, thick and heavy. Ptolemy, sensing the tension, retreated to the safety of the sofa. Aurora stared at the steam rising from her tea, the weight of the past pressing down. Lucien Moreau, the half-demon fixer, had come to her door. And the game, whatever it was, had just begun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
87.50% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Lucien stated flatly [flatly]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.552
leniency1
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.125
68.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount792
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount792
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"lilt"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"sanctuary"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"pang"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"tension"
count1
10
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"unreadable"
2"lilt"
3"echoed"
4"sanctuary"
5"familiar"
6"pang"
7"whisper"
8"silence"
9"tension"
10"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences54
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences66
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords784
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
76.34% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions22
wordCount543
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.47
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Carter1
Evan1
Moreau2
French1
Ptolemy2
Aurora8
Thorne1
Lucien3
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Carter"
2"Evan"
3"Moreau"
4"Aurora"
5"Thorne"
6"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.763
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount784
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
61.12% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs16
mean49
std17.83
cv0.364
sampleLengths
086
166
275
329
454
530
657
731
834
935
1031
1155
1272
1343
1434
1552
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs94
matches
0"were beginning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences66
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount574
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.027874564459930314
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.017421602787456445
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences66
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences66
mean11.88
std6.81
cv0.573
sampleLengths
010
118
210
37
415
56
620
74
819
93
1014
1111
1215
1314
1426
1518
1617
173
1812
196
208
2120
2230
234
2412
2514
264
2723
2814
294
3016
3112
3217
332
3412
3522
362
3711
3810
399
403
415
4220
436
443
4513
468
4721
4810
4913
63.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.42424242424242425
totalSentences66
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.23% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences53
matches
0"Her eyes, bright blue and"
1"She didn’t move immediately, her"
2"She’d installed them herself after"
3"He didn’t smile."
4"His gaze, one amber and"
5"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
6"He held an ivory-handled cane,"
7"he said, his voice smooth"
8"He stepped inside, closing the"
9"She crossed her arms, her"
10"Her voice was cool, precise"
11"He inclined his head, a"
12"He gestured vaguely towards the"
13"She moved past him, heading"
14"he replied, his gaze lingering"
15"He settled into the worn"
16"She set the mug down"
17"He took a slow sip,"
18"she said, her voice tight"
19"He leaned forward slightly, his"
ratio0.509
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences53
matches
0"Thebrass knocker on Eva’s flat"
1"Aurora Carter, leaning against the"
2"Her eyes, bright blue and"
3"She didn’t move immediately, her"
4"The flat above"
5"She’d installed them herself after"
6"The third bolt scraped home"
7"The door swung open."
8"Lucien Moreau stood framed in"
9"He didn’t smile."
10"His gaze, one amber and"
11"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
12"He held an ivory-handled cane,"
13"he said, his voice smooth"
14"He stepped inside, closing the"
15"The scent of curry from"
16"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, leapt"
17"Aurora didn’t flinch."
18"She crossed her arms, her"
19"Her voice was cool, precise"
ratio0.981
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences53
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"He inclined his head, a gesture of respect that felt entirely out of place in the chaos of her flat."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"He settled, his cane resting beside him"
1"she said, her voice tight"
2"He leaned, his amber eye locking onto hers"
3"she said, her voice low"
4"he said, his voice soft but carrying,"
5"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Lucien stated flatly (state)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.276
leniency0.552
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.069
76.5664%