Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNETGYZMA4ZPYKC9Z6F0EFR

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Duration:
38.6s
Cost:
$0.001617
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain fell in slanting silver sheets, needling the pavement of the Soho street and turning the neon signs into blurry smears of color. Beneath the distinctive green glow of The Raven’s Nest, a figure burst from the doorway, a dark shape swallowed by the downpour. Detective Harlow Quinn didn’t hesitate. She was after him in three long strides, her movements honed by military precision, rainwater already plastering her salt-and-pepper hair to her scalp. Her worn leather watch, strapped tight to her left wrist, felt like a cold, familiar weight. *Elusive little bastard.* Her target, a weasel-faced informant named Finn, glanced back, panic in his eyes, before darting down a service alley. Harlow pushed harder, her waterproof coat flapping behind her like a dark wing. The chase was a brutal, physical puzzle. She catalogued his movements—the slight favoring of his right leg, the way his head swiveled looking for an escape route. It was the same pattern as Morris’s last case, the one that had ended with blood on the tiles and questions that still haunted her three years later. She saw Morris’s face now, a ghost in the rain, and her jaw tightened. Finn swerved, slipping on the wet cobbles, and vanished down a set of crumbling stone steps Harlow had never noticed before, hidden in the shadows of a Victorian-era archway. A gust of damp, cold air, smelling of moss and ozone, wafted up from the darkness. She skidded to a halt at the top, hand going to the service weapon holstered under her arm. This wasn't on any city map. This was something else. From below, she heard the frantic slap of footsteps echoing. And then, faintly, the murmur of a crowd. A market? Down here? Taking the steps two at a time, her boots slipping on the slick stone, Harlow descended into a gloom pierced by flickering, uneven light. The stairwell opened onto a disused platform of an abandoned Tube station. Camden Town, by the faded signs, but transformed. The air was thick with the scent of strange incense, frying food, and the metallic tang of ozone she now recognized as magic. This was the place whispered about in the files she’d marked ‘unsubstantiated.’ The Veil Market. It sprawled before her, a cavernous underworld lit by lanterns that burned with green and violet flames. Stalls fashioned from old train cars and patched-up tents lined the ghostly tracks, selling things that made the fine hairs on her arms stand up. Glowing bottles of liquid, roots that twisted like skeletal fingers, books bound in what looked like human skin. The crowd was a mosaic of the impossible—figures with iridescent scales, others whose shadows moved independently, humans with eyes that shone like polished coins. Finn was already dissolving into this throng, a minnow disappearing into a strange sea. Harlow stood at the edge of the platform, the rain from the world above a distant memory. Protocol screamed at her to call for backup, to cordon off the area. But what would she say? *Dispatch, I’m in a magical flea market under Camden, send everyone?* They’d think she’d finally cracked. Morris had tried to tell her, in his last, delirious moments. She’d written it off as trauma. Now, standing here, she felt the weight of her ignorance like a physical blow. A presence materialized beside her. “You look lost, Detective.” She turned, her hand instinctively staying near her weapon. The man was tall, with warm brown eyes and short, curly dark brown hair. Olive skin. He wore a simple dark sweater, but a silver chain with a Saint Christopher medallion glinted at his neck. His demeanor was calm, assessing. He didn’t belong here, either, but he wasn’t startled by it. “Who are you?” she asked, her voice sharper than intended. “Tomás Herrera.” He didn’t offer a hand. His gaze flickered over her, from her sodden hair to her professional stance, missing nothing. A former medic’s eye. She noticed a faint, silvery scar running along his left forearm. “This is not a good place for the Metropolitan Police. They tend to… disappear.” “I’m pursuing a suspect.” “Finn?” Tomás said, a flicker of a smile touching his lips. “He’s small-time. A runner. He’ll be gone through one of the bolt-holes by now. But the people he answers to are not small-time. If you go deeper, they will know you are here.” Harlow’s sharp jawline set. “It’s my job.” “Is it?” He looked at her not with fear, but with a weary sadness. “Your job is to uphold the law of the city above. Down here, there are different laws. And different penalties.” He gestured with his chin towards the bustling market. A hulking figure with tusks curling from its lower jaw was watching them from a stall selling shimmering blades. “You chased a ghost from Silas’s bar into a world you don’t understand. That is a very dangerous thing to do.” Silas’s bar. The Raven’s Nest. It was all connected. The clique she’d been investigating, the one she believed was behind the smuggling, the disappearances… Morris’s death. They were part of this hidden world. This was the territory she’d been skirting for three years, and now she was standing right in the heart of it. She looked past Tomás, into the shifting, shadowy depths of the market. Somewhere in there were answers. The truth about what happened to her partner. But Tomás was right. She was a foreign agent in hostile land, armed with a badge that meant nothing and a service weapon that might be useless against what lurked here. To go forward was to abandon everything she knew, to step into the unknown for a truth that might destroy her. To turn back was to return to the rain-soaked streets, to the cold case files and the echoing silence of questions never answered. It was the choice between the comfortable lie of the world she policed and the terrifying truth of the one she was only beginning to see. Tomás watched her, silent, letting the weight of the decision settle on her alone. The market hummed around them, a living entity of secrets and danger. Harlow Quinn took a deep breath, the strange air filling her lungs, and made her choice. She stepped off the platform and into the crowd.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.31% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1061
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count2
4
word"gloom"
count1
5
word"mosaic"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"hulking"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"comfortable"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"weight"
2"footsteps"
3"echoing"
4"gloom"
5"mosaic"
6"flickered"
7"flicker"
8"hulking"
9"depths"
10"silence"
11"comfortable"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences74
matches
0"t with fear"
84.94% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords14
totalWords1050
ratio0.013
matches
0"Elusive little bastard."
1"Dispatch, I’m in a magical flea market under Camden, send everyone?"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount939
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Raven2
Nest2
Harlow7
Quinn2
Finn3
Morris4
Victorian-era1
Tube1
Town1
Camden2
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Finn"
4"Morris"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
1"Town"
2"Camden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a cold, familiar weight"
1"looked like human skin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.952
wordCount1050
matches
0"not with fear, but with a weary sadness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean52.5
std29.27
cv0.557
sampleLengths
051
142
2101
373
422
582
698
782
89
960
1010
1151
124
1344
147
1583
1654
1756
1870
1951
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs157
matches
0"was watching"
1"was standing"
71.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences80
ratio0.025
matches
0"She catalogued his movements—the slight favoring of his right leg, the way his head swiveled looking for an escape route."
1"The crowd was a mosaic of the impossible—figures with iridescent scales, others whose shadows moved independently, humans with eyes that shone like polished coins."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount951
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.019978969505783387
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007360672975814932
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean13.13
std7.92
cv0.603
sampleLengths
024
122
25
323
416
53
619
713
87
920
1028
1114
1229
1316
1418
156
164
1710
188
192
202
2124
2212
238
2423
2515
2617
2725
2818
2924
3014
3117
3213
335
3416
3511
366
3714
385
394
409
4114
422
4319
445
4511
4610
477
4815
494
72.50% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.45
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners36
48.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"Somewhere in there were answers."
ratio0.014
75.07% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences69
matches
0"She was after him in"
1"Her worn leather watch, strapped"
2"Her target, a weasel-faced informant"
3"She catalogued his movements—the slight"
4"It was the same pattern"
5"She saw Morris’s face now,"
6"She skidded to a halt"
7"It sprawled before her, a"
8"She’d written it off as"
9"She turned, her hand instinctively"
10"He wore a simple dark"
11"His demeanor was calm, assessing."
12"He didn’t belong here, either,"
13"she asked, her voice sharper"
14"He didn’t offer a hand"
15"His gaze flickered over her,"
16"She noticed a faint, silvery"
17"He looked at her not"
18"He gestured with his chin"
19"It was all connected."
ratio0.362
54.20% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences69
matches
0"The rain fell in slanting"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn didn’t hesitate."
2"She was after him in"
3"Her worn leather watch, strapped"
4"Her target, a weasel-faced informant"
5"Harlow pushed harder, her waterproof"
6"The chase was a brutal,"
7"She catalogued his movements—the slight"
8"It was the same pattern"
9"She saw Morris’s face now,"
10"Finn swerved, slipping on the"
11"A gust of damp, cold"
12"She skidded to a halt"
13"This wasn't on any city"
14"This was something else."
15"The stairwell opened onto a"
16"Camden Town, by the faded"
17"The air was thick with"
18"This was the place whispered"
19"It sprawled before her, a"
ratio0.812
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences69
matches
0"Now, standing here, she felt"
1"To go forward was to"
2"To turn back was to"
ratio0.043
57.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Taking the steps two at a time, her boots slipping on the slick stone, Harlow descended into a gloom pierced by flickering, uneven light."
1"It sprawled before her, a cavernous underworld lit by lanterns that burned with green and violet flames."
2"Stalls fashioned from old train cars and patched-up tents lined the ghostly tracks, selling things that made the fine hairs on her arms stand up."
3"The crowd was a mosaic of the impossible—figures with iridescent scales, others whose shadows moved independently, humans with eyes that shone like polished coi…"
4"She was a foreign agent in hostile land, armed with a badge that meant nothing and a service weapon that might be useless against what lurked here."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she asked, her voice sharper than intended"
1"Tomás said, a flicker of a smile touching his lips"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"the place whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.182
83.6228%