Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNETGZ4PJ0XJH5TW2E6YNSH

Run Details

Duration:
51.3s
Cost:
$0.121455

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain hammered against Detective Harlow Quinn's shoulders as she rounded the corner onto Chalton Street, her boots splashing through oily puddles. Ahead, Tomás Herrera's figure darted between the amber pools of streetlight, his dark jacket billowing behind him like wings. She'd been watching the Raven's Nest for three weeks, and finally—finally—she'd caught one of them making a move. "Metropolitan Police! Stop where you are!" Her voice cut through the rain's percussion, but Herrera didn't slow. If anything, he picked up speed, vaulting over a row of chained bicycles with surprising agility. Quinn cursed under her breath and pushed harder, her lungs burning. The leather watch on her wrist caught on her jacket sleeve as she pumped her arms. Three years since Morris died, and she was still chasing shadows through London's labyrinth. But this time was different. This time she had a face, a name, a lead that might finally crack open whatever the hell was happening in that Soho bar. Herrera cut left into an alley. Quinn followed, her hand instinctively moving to the radio clipped to her belt before she thought better of it. No backup on this one—she'd learned that lesson the hard way. The moment she'd mentioned the Raven's Nest to her DI, she'd been reassigned to traffic violations for a month. Someone didn't want the police sniffing around that place. The alley dumped them out near Camden Market, its shuttered stalls looking skeletal in the rain. Herrera glanced back, and for a moment their eyes met. Even from twenty meters away, she could see something flash across his face—not just fear, but calculation. He was leading her somewhere specific. Quinn's military training kicked in, every sense sharpening. The rain masked sounds, but she caught the echo of their footsteps bouncing off the wet brick, the distant rumble of late-night traffic, the particular silence that meant they were moving away from populated areas. Her fingers found the grip of her asp baton. Herrera disappeared down a flight of stairs she hadn't even noticed—a dark mouth in the pavement surrounded by construction barriers. The old Camden tube extension, abandoned since the sixties. Quinn hesitated at the top, rain streaming down her salt-and-pepper hair. This was exactly the kind of place Morris would have charged into without thinking. The kind of place that got good cops killed. But Herrera knew something about the Raven's Nest. She'd seen him coming and going at odd hours, always through the back entrance. She'd run his prints—former NHS paramedic, license revoked for reasons that had been curiously redacted from the official records. He was connected to whatever was happening in that bar, and she wasn't letting him slip away. Quinn descended the stairs, each step taking her further from the streetlights above. The rain couldn't follow her here, but water dripped from her jacket, echoing in the tunnel. Emergency lighting cast everything in a sickly green glow. The air smelled of rust and something else—incense? Herbs? Twenty meters ahead, Herrera had stopped at what looked like a maintenance door. He was fumbling with something at his neck. Quinn drew her baton, extending it with a practiced flick. "Don't move, Herrera. Hands where I can see them." He turned slowly, hands raised. In his right fist, he clutched something that caught the emergency lighting—his Saint Christopher medallion. No, wait. As Quinn moved closer, she saw it wasn't the medallion at all, but something white and curved. Bone. "You don't want to be here, Detective." His Sevillian accent made the words musical despite their warning. "Turn around. Walk away. Forget you saw me." "Not happening." Quinn kept the baton between them, though Herrera made no aggressive moves. "You're going to tell me what's going on at the Raven's Nest. What are you people doing in that back room?" A sad smile crossed his face. "Trying to help people. People your system can't—or won't—protect." "Spare me the Robin Hood act. I've seen the types coming in and out of that place. Whatever you're dealing, whatever you're—" The maintenance door swung open behind Herrera, though he hadn't touched it. Quinn's words died as she stared into what should have been a utility closet but was instead a vast underground space lit by hundreds of paper lanterns. The smell of incense was stronger now, mixed with leather and spices and something animal. Figures moved between market stalls that shouldn't exist, couldn't exist, not here beneath Camden where she'd walked a thousand times before. "The Veil Market only opens to those who carry a token," Herrera said softly, holding up the piece of bone. "I'm sorry you followed me here, Detective Quinn. Truly. But now you have a choice to make." Quinn's mind raced. This was impossible. The kind of impossible that got Morris killed, that made the brass reassign anyone who asked too many questions. The kind of impossible that meant everything she thought she knew about the Raven's Nest and its patrons was just scratching the surface. "If you come through this door," Herrera continued, "you'll find answers. But they won't be the answers you want. They won't fit in a police report. They won't stand up in court. And they'll change everything you think you know about this city." Behind him, something large moved between the stalls—a shadow that didn't match any human silhouette Quinn had ever seen. Her hand trembled on the baton, but her jaw set with the same determination that had carried her through eighteen years on the force. "My partner died chasing answers," she said. "I've spent three years in the dark. So yes, Herrera. I'm coming through that door." He studied her for a long moment, then stepped aside. "Then may Saint Christopher protect us both. The Market doesn't usually allow entry to those who serve the Crown. You being here at all means something's changing. Something's coming." Quinn squared her shoulders and walked through the doorway into the impossible. The last normal thing she heard was the rain hammering on the London streets above, a world away from whatever waited in the lantern light below.
total_cost0.121455

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
78.57% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Herrera said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.143
85.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"softly"
2"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"footsteps"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"streaming"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"echoing"
count1
6
word"raced"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"footsteps"
2"silence"
3"streaming"
4"charged"
5"echoing"
6"raced"
7"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1017
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
70.25% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount815
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn13
Chalton1
Street1
Tomás1
Herrera11
Raven4
Nest4
Morris3
London2
Soho1
Camden3
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
Sevillian1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Raven"
5"Morris"
6"Saint"
7"Christopher"
places
0"Chalton"
1"Street"
2"London"
3"Soho"
4"Camden"
globalScore0.702
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like a maintenance door"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.983
wordCount1017
matches
0"not just fear, but calculation"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences71
matches
0"learned that lesson"
70.33% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs24
mean42.38
std16.79
cv0.396
sampleLengths
059
133
270
364
449
552
663
758
847
931
109
1140
1225
1335
1415
1522
1675
1737
1848
1943
2043
2122
2239
2338
94.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences63
matches
0"been reassigned"
1"was connected"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs137
matches
0"was happening"
1"was leading"
2"were moving"
3"was happening"
4"was fumbling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences71
ratio0.113
matches
0"She'd been watching the Raven's Nest for three weeks, and finally—finally—she'd caught one of them making a move."
1"No backup on this one—she'd learned that lesson the hard way."
2"Even from twenty meters away, she could see something flash across his face—not just fear, but calculation."
3"Herrera disappeared down a flight of stairs she hadn't even noticed—a dark mouth in the pavement surrounded by construction barriers."
4"She'd run his prints—former NHS paramedic, license revoked for reasons that had been curiously redacted from the official records."
5"The air smelled of rust and something else—incense?"
6"In his right fist, he clutched something that caught the emergency lighting—his Saint Christopher medallion."
7"Behind him, something large moved between the stalls—a shadow that didn't match any human silhouette Quinn had ever seen."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount827
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03506650544135429
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.012091898428053204
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean14.32
std7.69
cv0.537
sampleLengths
022
119
218
317
416
511
616
714
85
924
106
1119
1211
1319
149
1516
1610
1717
186
198
2035
219
2220
239
2411
2514
269
278
2814
2919
3017
3113
3216
339
348
351
3613
378
3810
399
405
4115
422
4317
441
4517
468
4714
4821
496
74.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4647887323943662
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences58
matches
0"She'd been watching the Raven's"
1"Her voice cut through the"
2"He was leading her somewhere"
3"Her fingers found the grip"
4"She'd seen him coming and"
5"She'd run his prints—former NHS"
6"He was connected to whatever"
7"He was fumbling with something"
8"He turned slowly, hands raised."
9"His Sevillian accent made the"
10"Her hand trembled on the"
11"He studied her for a"
ratio0.207
54.83% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences58
matches
0"The rain hammered against Detective"
1"She'd been watching the Raven's"
2"Her voice cut through the"
3"Quinn cursed under her breath"
4"The leather watch on her"
5"This time she had a"
6"Herrera cut left into an"
7"Quinn followed, her hand instinctively"
8"The moment she'd mentioned the"
9"Someone didn't want the police"
10"The alley dumped them out"
11"Herrera glanced back, and for"
12"He was leading her somewhere"
13"Quinn's military training kicked in,"
14"The rain masked sounds, but"
15"Her fingers found the grip"
16"Herrera disappeared down a flight"
17"The old Camden tube extension,"
18"Quinn hesitated at the top,"
19"This was exactly the kind"
ratio0.81
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences58
matches
0"If anything, he picked up"
1"Even from twenty meters away,"
ratio0.034
48.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The rain masked sounds, but she caught the echo of their footsteps bouncing off the wet brick, the distant rumble of late-night traffic, the particular silence …"
1"She'd run his prints—former NHS paramedic, license revoked for reasons that had been curiously redacted from the official records."
2"In his right fist, he clutched something that caught the emergency lighting—his Saint Christopher medallion."
3"The kind of impossible that got Morris killed, that made the brass reassign anyone who asked too many questions."
4"Behind him, something large moved between the stalls—a shadow that didn't match any human silhouette Quinn had ever seen."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Herrera continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.143
80.5615%