Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNETN7S25N5ACC74HS71B1X

Run Details

Duration:
59.9s
Cost:
$0.001914
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the streets of Soho, turning the neon lights into smears of color on slick pavement. Detective Harlow Quinn hunched her shoulders against the downpour, her sharp jaw clenched as she followed the silhouette weaving recklessly through the crowd ahead. Tommy Herrera darted between umbrellas and raincoats, his Saint Christopher medallion catching the light as he glanced over his shoulder. Quinn’s fingers tightened around the radio in her hand, the worn leather strap of her watch digging into her skin. She’d been chasing leads on Tommy for weeks, ever since she’d connected him to a string of underground medical operations that smelled too rotten to ignore. Tonight, she’d finally cornered him outside The Raven’s Nest, but Tommy had bolted the moment he saw her. "Unit Three," she barked into the radio, her voice cutting through the static. "Suspect heading south on Dean Street. I’m in pursuit." The response crackled back barely intelligible over the drumming rain. Quinn shoved the radio into her coat pocket and quickened her pace. Tommy was fast, but Quinn’s military precision gave her an edge. She kept him in sight, her eyes narrowed against the rain, her breath steady despite the ache in her side. Tommy veered into an alley, and Quinn’s instincts flared. Alleys were traps—or escapes. She hesitated for a split second before plunging in after him, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the faint glow of distant streetlights. The alley twisted and narrowed, the walls closing in like a throat. Tommy’s footsteps echoed ahead, muffled by the rain. Quinn’s hand went to her sidearm, but she didn’t draw it. Not yet. She needed answers, not a body. The alley spilled out into a deserted courtyard, the rain drumming harder against the cobblestones. Tommy was nowhere in sight. Quinn scanned the area, her eyes darting to every shadow, every conceivable hiding place. Her jaw tightened. He hadn’t just vanished—there had to be a way out. Then she saw it: a rusted grate in the corner of the courtyard, partially lifted and propped open. Water cascaded over its edges, pooling in the darkness below. Quinn crouched beside it, peering into the abyss. A ladder descended into the gloom, slick with rain and rust. Her radio crackled again, but she ignored it. This was her chance. Quinn swung her legs over the edge and lowered herself onto the ladder. The rungs were cold and slippery beneath her fingers, but she moved with practiced efficiency, descending into the darkness. The rain grew distant above her, replaced by the steady drip of water echoing through the tunnel. When her boots hit solid ground, she paused, letting her eyes adjust. The tunnel was narrow and damp, the air thick with the scent of mildew and something else—something metallic, like coins left to tarnish. She drew her flashlight and clicked it on, the beam cutting through the darkness. The tunnel led deeper, branching off into smaller passages. Quinn hesitated, her instincts warring with her training. She was out of her jurisdiction—whatever this place was, it wasn’t on any map. But Tommy had gone this way, and she wasn’t about to let him slip through her fingers. She followed the main tunnel, her footsteps echoing against the curved walls. The beam of her flashlight caught glimpses of graffiti—symbols she didn’t recognize, spirals and eyes and letters in languages she couldn’t read. The air grew colder, and the dripping water sounded almost rhythmic, like a heartbeat. Finally, the tunnel opened into a vast, cavernous space. Quinn’s flashlight swept across rows of makeshift stalls, their tarps swaying in the damp air. The place was eerily silent, save for the drip of water and the faint rustle of fabric. It was an abandoned Tube station, she realized, repurposed into some kind of market. Her pulse quickened. She’d heard whispers of a place like this—an underground bazaar where the city’s underbelly traded in things best left unseen. The Veil Market, they called it. A black market for the supernatural. Quinn stepped forward, her hand resting on her sidearm. The stalls were empty now, their wares packed away, but the scent lingered—herbs and oils, blood and ash. She moved cautiously, her flashlight cutting through the shadows. Then she heard it: a faint scraping sound, like metal against stone. She turned, her beam catching a flicker of movement in the corner of the station. Tommy. He stood there, watching her, his face pale in the harsh light. "Tomás Herrera," Quinn said, her voice steady despite the chill in her bones. "You’re under my jurisdiction now." Tommy didn’t answer. He glanced over his shoulder, toward a narrow archway adorned with more of those strange symbols. Quinn stepped closer, her flashlight trained on him. "Don’t make this harder than it has to be," she said. "You’re coming with me." Tommy shook his head, his expression unreadable. "You don’t understand, Detective. You don’t belong here." "Funny," Quinn said dryly. "I was about to say the same to you." Tommy turned and bolted toward the archway. Quinn cursed under her breath and gave chase. The archway led to another tunnel, this one narrower and darker than the last. The air grew thicker, heavier, and the walls seemed to press in around her. She rounded a corner and skidded to a halt. Tommy stood at the end of the tunnel, his back to her, facing a makeshift gate made of wrought iron and bone. The gate creaked open, revealing a space beyond that Quinn couldn’t quite make out. He glanced back at her, his eyes dark with something she couldn’t name. "Last chance, Detective. Turn back." Quinn’s grip tightened on her flashlight. "Not a chance." Tommy stepped through the gate, and it began to swing shut behind him. Quinn lunged forward, her boots slamming against the damp stone. She grabbed the gate just before it closed, her muscles straining against the weight of it. The space beyond was a blur of shadows and movement. She stepped through, her heart pounding in her chest. The air shifted, growing warmer, thicker. The scent of incense and something metallic filled her lungs. She was in a chamber now, lit by flickering candles and draped with curtains of black silk. Figures moved in the shadows, their faces obscured. Tommy stood in the center of the room, his hands raised as if in surrender. "Detective Quinn," a voice said, low and resonant. It came from everywhere and nowhere, echoing off the walls. "You’ve come a long way." Quinn’s hand went to her sidearm as she scanned the room. "Identify yourself." The shadows parted, and a figure emerged. Tall and lean, draped in a cloak embroidered with silver thread. The face beneath the hood was pale and sharp, the eyes a cold, unnatural blue. "This is my domain," the figure said. "And you, Detective, are trespassing." Quinn’s jaw tightened. "I’m here for Tommy Herrera. He’s wanted for questioning." The figure tilted its head, a faint smile playing on its lips. "And what makes you think he’ll go with you?" Quinn didn’t answer. She drew her sidearm, the metal cold and familiar in her hand. "Step aside." The figure laughed, a sound like ice cracking. "Brave words, Detective. But bravery alone won’t save you here." The figures in the shadows moved closer, their shapes indistinct but menacing. Quinn’s pulse thundered in her ears. She was outnumbered, out of her depth. But she’d faced worse—she hoped. Tommy stepped forward, his hands still raised. "Detective," he said quietly. "This isn’t your fight." Quinn’s eyes flicked to him, then back to the figure. "If you’re involved in this," she said, "then it is." The figure’s smile widened. "Very well, Detective. Let’s see how far your bravery takes you." The room seemed to close in around her, the shadows deepening, the air growing heavier. Quinn tightened her grip on her sidearm, her mind racing. She’d come this far. She wasn’t turning back now. Even if it killed her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Quinn said dryly [dryly]"
1"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.167
92.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1335
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
6.37% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1335
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"jaw clenched"
count1
1
word"quickened"
count2
2
word"footsteps"
count2
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count2
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count3
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
14
word"silk"
count1
15
word"familiar"
count1
16
word"thundered"
count1
17
word"flicked"
count1
18
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"quickened"
2"footsteps"
3"echoed"
4"scanned"
5"gloom"
6"echoing"
7"rhythmic"
8"pulse"
9"flicker"
10"chill"
11"unreadable"
12"weight"
13"pounding"
14"silk"
15"familiar"
16"thundered"
17"flicked"
18"racing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
90.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1327
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"The Veil Market, they called it."
45.66% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1198
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.09
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn25
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tommy16
Raven1
Nest1
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Tommy"
places
0"Soho"
1"Raven"
globalScore0.457
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences90
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite make out"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1327
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean30.86
std16.17
cv0.524
sampleLengths
061
164
222
353
457
519
647
747
812
949
1049
1148
1248
1355
1435
1536
1640
1718
1827
1915
2015
2113
2243
2345
2418
259
2639
2735
2840
2923
3013
3133
3212
3312
3421
3517
3618
3730
3815
3920
4015
4134
425
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"was outnumbered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs220
matches
0"wasn’t turning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences126
ratio0.063
matches
0"Alleys were traps—or escapes."
1"He hadn’t just vanished—there had to be a way out."
2"The tunnel was narrow and damp, the air thick with the scent of mildew and something else—something metallic, like coins left to tarnish."
3"She was out of her jurisdiction—whatever this place was, it wasn’t on any map."
4"The beam of her flashlight caught glimpses of graffiti—symbols she didn’t recognize, spirals and eyes and letters in languages she couldn’t read."
5"She’d heard whispers of a place like this—an underground bazaar where the city’s underbelly traded in things best left unseen."
6"The stalls were empty now, their wares packed away, but the scent lingered—herbs and oils, blood and ash."
7"But she’d faced worse—she hoped."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1206
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.024875621890547265
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008291873963515755
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean10.53
std5.41
cv0.513
sampleLengths
017
124
220
320
426
518
613
79
810
912
1011
1120
129
134
1424
1512
168
1711
182
196
2015
215
2214
233
2410
2518
2610
278
2811
298
304
3113
3219
3317
3412
3523
3614
379
388
3914
4017
4112
4222
4314
449
4515
4617
4714
483
4920
46.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.2857142857142857
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners36
94.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences106
matches
0"Then she saw it: a"
1"Finally, the tunnel opened into"
2"Then she heard it: a"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences106
matches
0"She’d been chasing leads on"
1"she barked into the radio,"
2"She kept him in sight,"
3"She hesitated for a split"
4"She needed answers, not a"
5"Her jaw tightened."
6"He hadn’t just vanished—there had"
7"Her radio crackled again, but"
8"She drew her flashlight and"
9"She was out of her"
10"She followed the main tunnel,"
11"It was an abandoned Tube"
12"Her pulse quickened."
13"She’d heard whispers of a"
14"She moved cautiously, her flashlight"
15"She turned, her beam catching"
16"He stood there, watching her,"
17"He glanced over his shoulder,"
18"She rounded a corner and"
19"He glanced back at her,"
ratio0.274
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences106
matches
0"Rain lashed the streets of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn hunched her"
2"Tommy Herrera darted between umbrellas"
3"Quinn’s fingers tightened around the"
4"She’d been chasing leads on"
5"Tonight, she’d finally cornered him"
6"she barked into the radio,"
7"The response crackled back barely"
8"Quinn shoved the radio into"
9"Tommy was fast, but Quinn’s"
10"She kept him in sight,"
11"Tommy veered into an alley,"
12"Alleys were traps—or escapes."
13"She hesitated for a split"
14"The alley twisted and narrowed,"
15"Tommy’s footsteps echoed ahead, muffled"
16"Quinn’s hand went to her"
17"She needed answers, not a"
18"The alley spilled out into"
19"Tommy was nowhere in sight."
ratio0.925
47.17% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"Even if it killed her."
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She’d been chasing leads on Tommy for weeks, ever since she’d connected him to a string of underground medical operations that smelled too rotten to ignore."
1"She hesitated for a split second before plunging in after him, her boots splashing through puddles that reflected the faint glow of distant streetlights."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she barked, her voice cutting through the static"
1"Quinn said, her voice steady despite the chill in her bones"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.083
78.5440%