Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNETS1VG49KMZQYATMZQ2XQ

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Duration:
12.4s
Cost:
$0.000353
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station hung thick and cold, smelling of damp stone and something faintly metallic, like old blood. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath misted in the dim light filtering through the cracked concrete ceiling. Her worn leather watch ticked steadily on her left wrist, a metronome marking the silence. She stood over the scene, her sharp jawline set in a line of grim concentration, her salt-and-pepper hair cropped close to her skull, framing a face etched with fatigue and resolve. Her military bearing was rigid, every muscle coiled, as she studied the empty space where a body should have been. Detective Quinn’s partner, DS Morris, had been found here three years ago, vanished without a trace, the circumstances shrouded in supernatural mystery. Quinn hadn’t slept well since. Now, another disappearance. Or perhaps a murder without a corpse? The evidence was confounding. The floor was clean, no drag marks, no obvious struggle. The only disturbance was a faint, shimmering residue on the concrete near the far wall – a residue Quinn recognized from her partner’s case: residual magical energy, cold and dead. “What do you make of it, Quinn?” Eva Kowalski’s voice cut through the silence. Eva, Quinn’s childhood friend and an occult researcher, stood nearby, her round glasses perched on the bridge of her nose, her red curls escaping a loose braid to frame her freckled face. She clutched a worn leather satchel, its contents likely books on ancient rituals or forbidden texts. Her nervous habit was evident as she tucked a stray strand of hair behind her left ear. Quinn didn’t turn immediately. She knelt, her gloved hands brushing the residue. “It’s not a crime scene, Eva. Not as we know it.” She rose, her gaze sweeping the cavernous space. “No body. No blood. No sign of a struggle. Just this... echo.” She pointed at the shimmering patch. “And the Veil Compass is silent. It should be humming, pointing towards a rift. But it’s dead. Or worse, it’s pointing *away*.” Eva frowned, her green eyes narrowing. “But the residue is there. And the location... it’s the Veil Market. The hidden black market beneath Camden. Only accessible with a bone token.” She pulled a small, intricately carved bone token from her satchel, holding it up. “I found this near the entrance. It’s not human. The craftsmanship is... ancient.” Quinn’s brow furrowed. “A bone token. That’s the entry requirement. But why leave it here? If this was a hit, why not take the body? Or if it was a ritual, why leave the residue?” She walked towards the far wall, her footsteps echoing. “The Compass should be reacting to the rift beneath us. It’s not. That means the rift is either dormant, or... shielded. Or something else is happening here.” Eva followed, her satchel swaying. “Perhaps the rift is closed. Or the magic is being contained. But why? And where is the victim?” She paused, her eyes scanning the shadows. “Unless... the victim isn’t here. Not physically. Maybe they were taken through the rift, but the residue is a decoy. A magical signature planted to mislead.” Quinn stopped, turning to face Eva. “A decoy? That’s possible. But why go to the trouble of planting residue if the body is gone? Unless... the residue isn’t the only thing planted.” She gestured at the empty space. “Look at the floor. No signs of a struggle, no drag marks. But the residue is concentrated here. What if the victim was taken *through* the floor? Or the wall?” Eva’s eyes widened. “Through the wall? But that would require a significant rift opening. The Compass should detect it.” She pulled the Veil Compass from her own satchel, a small brass compass with protective sigils etched on its face. “I brought it. It’s calibrated for supernatural energy. Let me try it.” Quinn watched as Eva held the compass level. It remained stubbornly still, its needle unmoving. Eva’s lips pressed into a thin line. “It’s dead. Or shielded. But the residue is real. It’s cold, like the magic used to open a rift is spent. Like it was used recently, but the rift is now closed.” “Or the rift never opened,” Quinn countered, her voice low. “The residue is a remnant, a leftover echo. But why leave it? And why no body? Unless... the victim was never here. This is a trap. A place set to lure someone in, to make them think a rift is open, to make them come here, to... what? Steal the bone token? Or something else?” Eva’s gaze darted around the station, her freckled complexion paling slightly. “Steal the bone token? But why? And how? If the rift is closed, how did the token get here? Unless... the rift is open elsewhere. The Compass is pointing to a different location. But it’s silent. It’s not pointing at all.” Quinn’s sharp eyes scanned the walls, the ceiling, the floor. Her military training honed her senses. “The Compass isn’t silent. It’s pointing. But not to a rift. It’s pointing to something else. Something hidden. Something that doesn’t belong here.” She walked to the far wall, her gloved hand tracing the cold concrete. “Look at the texture. It’s smooth, but... not quite. There’s a slight indentation, like something was pressed against it recently. And the residue... it’s not just on the floor. It’s on the wall too, near that indentation.” Eva leaned in, her glasses magnifying her intent gaze. “An indentation? But what could cause that? And the residue... it’s thinner there. Like it was wiped away.” She pulled a small, handheld UV light from her satchel. “Let me check for traces.” Quinn watched as Eva swept the light across the wall. A faint, almost invisible pattern emerged under the UV light – a complex, swirling symbol, barely visible to the naked eye. “A symbol,” Quinn breathed. “A protective sigil. But it’s been disturbed. Wiped away, but not completely. The residue is still there, mixed with the symbol’s energy.” “A sigil,” Eva murmured, her voice tight. “But why wipe it? And what does it protect against? Or protect?” She looked at Quinn, her green eyes intense. “The residue is cold. Like it was used to seal something, not open it. Like the rift was closed, but the seal is weakening. Or... the seal is broken.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. “The seal is broken. That’s why the residue is cold. The magic used to close the rift is fading. But the rift itself is gone. So what’s left? What’s drawing the residue? What’s hiding in the shadows?” She stepped back, her gaze sweeping the empty station once more. “The victim isn’t here. They were never here. This isn’t a crime scene. It’s a trap. A place set to lure someone in, to make them think a rift is open, to make them come here, to... steal the bone token. Or to be taken. But why leave the residue? Why set the trap?” Eva’s satchel thudded softly as she set it down. “The bone token. It’s the key. It’s the entry requirement. But it’s also a lure. A way to identify those who know about the Veil Market. Those who are involved. Or those who are being hunted.” Quinn’s worn watch ticked louder in the silence. “The Compass isn’t pointing to a rift. It’s pointing to the bone token. It’s pointing to the person who left it. Or the person who took it. The residue is the signature. The trap is the lure. The victim... is the bait.” She looked at Eva, her eyes hard. “We need to find the bone token. And whoever is using it. Because whoever is using the Veil Market is playing a game. And the next move might be ours.” She turned, her military bearing snapping back into place. “Let’s find the token, Eva. Before whoever set this trap decides to play again.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.424
leniency0.848
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1312
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.02% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1312
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"etched"
count2
2
word"resolve"
count1
3
word"echo"
count2
4
word"furrowed"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"calibrated"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"tracing"
count1
11
word"complex"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"etched"
2"resolve"
3"echo"
4"furrowed"
5"footsteps"
6"echoing"
7"scanning"
8"calibrated"
9"scanned"
10"tracing"
11"complex"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences51
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1312
ratio0.002
matches
0"away"
1"through"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount540
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity2.96
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn16
Morris1
Kowalski1
Eva14
Veil1
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.019
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1312
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
27.70% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean62.48
std15.43
cv0.247
sampleLengths
0103
181
279
371
457
571
656
768
851
954
1065
1152
1289
1342
1457
1556
1640
1765
1845
1950
2060
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"been found"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs90
matches
0"was confounding"
60.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences69
ratio0.029
matches
0"The only disturbance was a faint, shimmering residue on the concrete near the far wall – a residue Quinn recognized from her partner’s case: residual magical energy, cold and dead."
1"A faint, almost invisible pattern emerged under the UV light – a complex, swirling symbol, barely visible to the naked eye."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount540
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.03888888888888889
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.018518518518518517
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean19.01
std13.33
cv0.701
sampleLengths
022
115
215
331
420
522
65
73
87
94
1010
1130
1214
1332
1416
1517
164
178
1819
1918
2022
216
2238
2313
243
2541
2627
275
2825
2926
306
3132
3230
333
3436
3512
368
377
387
3932
4010
4155
4211
4341
4410
456
4636
4737
489
4928
48.31% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
52.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences50
matches
0"Her worn leather watch ticked"
1"She stood over the scene,"
2"Her military bearing was rigid,"
3"She clutched a worn leather"
4"Her nervous habit was evident"
5"She knelt, her gloved hands"
6"She rose, her gaze sweeping"
7"She pointed at the shimmering"
8"She pulled a small, intricately"
9"She walked towards the far"
10"She paused, her eyes scanning"
11"She gestured at the empty"
12"She pulled the Veil Compass"
13"It remained stubbornly still, its"
14"Her military training honed her"
15"She walked to the far"
16"She pulled a small, handheld"
17"She looked at Quinn, her"
18"She stepped back, her gaze"
19"She looked at Eva, her"
ratio0.42
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences50
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath misted"
2"Her worn leather watch ticked"
3"She stood over the scene,"
4"Her military bearing was rigid,"
5"Detective Quinn’s partner, DS Morris,"
6"Quinn hadn’t slept well since."
7"The evidence was confounding."
8"The floor was clean, no"
9"The only disturbance was a"
10"Eva Kowalski’s voice cut through"
11"Eva, Quinn’s childhood friend and"
12"She clutched a worn leather"
13"Her nervous habit was evident"
14"Quinn didn’t turn immediately."
15"She knelt, her gloved hands"
16"She rose, her gaze sweeping"
17"She pointed at the shimmering"
18"Eva frowned, her green eyes"
19"She pulled a small, intricately"
ratio0.96
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Now, another disappearance."
ratio0.02
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"She walked, her footsteps echoing"
1"She paused, her eyes scanning the shadows"
2"Quinn countered, her voice low"
3"She walked, her gloved hand tracing the cold concrete"
4"Eva murmured, her voice tight"
5"She looked, her green eyes intense"
6"She turned, her military bearing snapping back into place"
89.39% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn breathed (breathe)"
1"Eva murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.061
leniency0.121
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.121
76.7807%