Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNETTQWMDHDP5XMHXD4GN1S

Run Details

Duration:
1m 59s
Cost:
$0.001825
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain fell in silver sheets, slicking the cobblestones of Soho with a treacherous sheen. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath came in ragged clouds, her worn leather watch strap digging into her wrist as she pumped her arms, her legs burning with a familiar, hated fire. Ahead, a dark shape—a man in a long coat—darted through the neon-lit gloom, a ghost slipping between the late-night crowds spilling from pubs. Her sharp jaw was set, her body moving with the military precision that eighteen years on the force had carved into her. Three years. It had been three years since she’d lost Morris on a night not unlike this one, chasing a suspect who moved with that same unnatural grace into shadows that swallowed all light and reason. She wouldn’t lose another. Not to the unexplained. Not to *them*. The suspect—a weaselly informant named Finch who’d promised her answers about a new, potent alchemical poison hitting the streets—vanished down an alleyway too narrow for anything but desperation. Quinn followed, her shoulder scraping against damp brick, the sound of her own pursuit echoing back at her. The alley dead-ended at a brick wall adorned with a faded, peeling poster for a circus that had left town decades ago. Finch was gone. Her eyes scanned the ground, the walls, the overflowing bins. Nothing. A dead end. A cul-de-sac of failure. The rain plastered her salt-and-pepper hair to her scalp. She was about to turn, to radio for a perimeter, when a sliver of green light caught her eye. A doorway, almost invisible in the shadows, recessed deep into the wall. Above it, a distinctive green neon sign buzzed faintly, depicting a stylized bird: *The Raven’s Nest*. She knew the place. A dive bar, a known haunt for lowlifes and those who preferred their business conducted away from prying eyes. Silas’s bar. She’d never had cause to raid it, but its reputation preceded it. Her hand went to the service weapon holstered at her hip, a cold comfort. Pushing the heavy door open, she was met with a wave of warm, beer-soaked air and the low murmur of clandestine conversation. The interior was exactly as she’d heard: dimly lit, the walls a gallery of old maps and blurred black-and-white photographs of a London that no longer existed. Patrons hunched over their drinks, their faces half-hidden in shadow. None looked like Finch. Her eyes swept the room, cataloging exits, potential threats. A bartender with tattooed knuckles polished a glass, his gaze lingering on her just a moment too long. She was a cop. She stuck out like a sore thumb. Then she saw it. At the far end of the room, a bookshelf swung silently inward, revealing a sliver of deeper darkness before clicking shut. Finch. He’d gone to ground. She moved quickly, weaving between tables, ignoring the stares. The bookshelf was solid, packed with cheap-looking paperbacks and knickknacks. She ran her fingers along the edge, searching for a latch, a mechanism. Nothing. Frustration boiled in her gut. She was so close. Morris’s face flashed in her mind, his laugh, the way he’d always called her “Quinn, my favorite pessimist.” Then the static-filled radio call, the abandoned warehouse, the blood on the floor that didn’t make any sense. The official report had been a masterpiece of obfuscation. She knew, with a certainty that went beyond evidence, that the truth was in places like this. Behind doors that shouldn’t open. She was about to give up, to call it in and have the place surrounded, when a hand touched her elbow. She spun, her hand instinctively moving toward her hip. “Easy, Detective.” The man held up his hands. He had warm brown eyes, short curly dark brown hair, and olive skin. A faint scar ran along his left forearm. A Saint Christopher medallion rested against his throat. He smelled of antiseptic and something else, something herbal and faintly coppery. “Looking for your friend? The jumpy one?” “Who are you?” Quinn’s voice was a low growl, her body tense. “A concerned citizen,” he said, his accent hinting at Spain. “Tomás Herrera. You’re making people nervous. Your friend, he didn’t come out for a pint.” He nodded toward the bookshelf. “He bought a token. Went down.” “Down where?” Tomás’s expression was unreadable, a mix of pity and caution. “Somewhere you don’t have a warrant for. Somewhere your badge is just a shiny piece of metal that might get you killed.” “Try me.” He sighed, rubbing the scar on his arm absently. “It’s called the Veil Market. It moves. Tonight, it’s in an old Tube station under Camden. You need a bone token to get past the… guardians. Your man had one. You don’t.” The words settled over her like a shroud. An underground market. Supernatural black markets were the stuff of rumor, of the wilder case files that got laughed out of the briefing room. But Morris hadn’t been laughing. He’d been taking notes. “How do I get a token?” Tomás looked genuinely alarmed. “You don’t. That’s the point. It’s not for your kind. Look, I used to be a paramedic. I’ve seen what comes out of that place. People missing pieces of their souls, bleeding light instead of blood. You’re a cop. A good one, I’ve heard. Don’t follow him down there. Call it a night. Some doors stay closed for a reason.” He was right. It was the smart play. The professional play. Secure the area. Get a warrant for the bar, tear the bookshelf apart, do it by the book. But the book had failed Morris. The book was full of lies. She saw Finch’s smug face, knew he was down there right now, trading the secrets of a poison that could kill in ways her forensics lab couldn’t even comprehend. He was her only link, her only thread to pull to unravel the whole rotten tapestry that had consumed her partner. She made her decision. It wasn’t a choice made with her mind, but with the raw, bleeding nerve of her grief. “The token. How did he get it?” Tomás studied her face, and something in her expression—the desperation, the grim resolve—must have convinced him arguing was futile. His shoulders slumped in defeat. “Probably bought it from Silas,” he said, nodding toward the bartender. “But he won’t sell to you. Not in a million years.” Quinn’s gaze locked onto the bartender. She could lean on him. Flash her badge, threaten him with a raid. But that would blow any chance of subtlety. She’d be announcing her presence to everyone in the damn market before she even set foot inside. Her eyes fell on Tomás’s medallion, then darted to the scar on his arm. A former paramedic who’d lost his license. Administering unauthorized treatments. To supernatural patients. He had one foot in that world already. “You have one,” she stated, her voice flat. It wasn’t a question. He flinched, his hand moving unconsciously to cover the medallion. “That’s none of your business.” “It is now. I need to get down there. You’re going to help me.” “Why in God’s name would I do that?” “Because I’m not asking.” Her voice dropped, low and dangerous. “I can make your life very difficult, Mr. Herrera. Or you can lend me your token, point me in the right direction, and I will be out of your hair. Your choice.” A war waged behind his warm eyes. Fear, resentment, and a grudging understanding that she was a force of nature he couldn’t stop. With a sound of pure exasperation, he reached under his collar and pulled a thin, pale sliver of bone, intricately carved with runes, from where it had hung beside his saint medal. He pressed it into her palm. It was warm from his skin. “It’s in the Camden tunnels. The old Northern Line station they sealed up in the fifties. The entrance is behind a false wall in the men’s loo of the World’s End pub. You show that to the thing that asks for it. Don’t speak. Don’t make eye contact. Just show it and walk through.” He grabbed her wrist, his grip surprisingly strong. “And for the love of God, don’t buy anything. Don’t eat anything. Don’t make any promises. Find your man and get out. That place… it gets inside your head.” She closed her fingers around the bone token. It felt alien, wrong. A key to a door that should never be unlocked. “Thank you,” she said, the words feeling inadequate. “Don’t thank me,” he whispered, his face pale. “I’ve just probably signed your death warrant. Now go, before I change my mind.” Quinn didn’t need to be told twice. She turned and strode out of The Raven’s Nest, back into the cleansing cold of the rain. The bone token burned a hole in her pocket. Above her, the green neon raven buzzed, a silent sentinel to the threshold she was about to cross. She was leaving her world behind, descending into the underworld on a thread of grief and a sliver of bone. She was going to find Finch, and she was going to get her answers, no matter what awaited her in the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.37
leniency0.741
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1552
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1552
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"treacherous"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"clandestine"
count1
6
word"potential"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"unravel"
count1
9
word"tapestry"
count1
10
word"resolve"
count1
11
word"sentinel"
count1
highlights
0"treacherous"
1"familiar"
2"gloom"
3"echoing"
4"scanned"
5"clandestine"
6"potential"
7"unreadable"
8"unravel"
9"tapestry"
10"resolve"
11"sentinel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords4
totalWords1533
ratio0.003
matches
0"them"
1"The Raven’s Nest"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1178
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.51
worstName"Finch"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn5
Morris4
Finch6
Raven2
London1
Saint1
Christopher1
Spain1
Tomás4
Nest2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Finch"
4"Raven"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Tomás"
8"Nest"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Spain"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences74
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1533
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean41.43
std26.7
cv0.644
sampleLengths
068
169
271
374
473
579
663
776
830
956
1012
1136
122
1332
142
1541
1641
176
1864
1929
206
216
2250
2328
2446
2544
2635
2712
2815
2914
308
3142
3267
3391
3430
3522
3693
95.78% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences111
matches
0"was gone"
1"was met"
2"got laughed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs194
matches
0"was leaving"
75.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences127
ratio0.024
matches
0"Ahead, a dark shape—a man in a long coat—darted through the neon-lit gloom, a ghost slipping between the late-night crowds spilling from pubs."
1"The suspect—a weaselly informant named Finch who’d promised her answers about a new, potent alchemical poison hitting the streets—vanished down an alleyway too narrow for anything but desperation."
2"Tomás studied her face, and something in her expression—the desperation, the grim resolve—must have convinced him arguing was futile."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1197
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"new, potent alchemical poison"
1"warm, beer-soaked air"
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.028404344193817876
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.013366750208855471
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean12.07
std10.26
cv0.85
sampleLengths
015
130
223
322
42
534
64
74
83
928
1018
1122
123
1310
141
153
164
179
1819
1912
2016
214
2219
232
2412
2514
2622
2727
2810
294
309
3118
324
337
344
3521
361
374
389
3910
4013
411
425
434
4436
459
4617
475
4821
499
61.42% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.4015748031496063
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners51
31.45% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"Then she saw it."
ratio0.009
31.32% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount50
totalSentences106
matches
0"Her sharp jaw was set,"
1"It had been three years"
2"She wouldn’t lose another."
3"Her eyes scanned the ground,"
4"She was about to turn,"
5"She knew the place."
6"She’d never had cause to"
7"Her hand went to the"
8"Her eyes swept the room,"
9"She was a cop."
10"She stuck out like a"
11"He’d gone to ground."
12"She moved quickly, weaving between"
13"She ran her fingers along"
14"She was so close."
15"She knew, with a certainty"
16"She was about to give"
17"She spun, her hand instinctively"
18"He had warm brown eyes,"
19"He smelled of antiseptic and"
ratio0.472
54.34% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences106
matches
0"The rain fell in silver"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath came"
2"Her sharp jaw was set,"
3"It had been three years"
4"She wouldn’t lose another."
5"The suspect—a weaselly informant named"
6"Quinn followed, her shoulder scraping"
7"The alley dead-ended at a"
8"Finch was gone."
9"Her eyes scanned the ground,"
10"A dead end."
11"A cul-de-sac of failure."
12"The rain plastered her salt-and-pepper"
13"She was about to turn,"
14"A doorway, almost invisible in"
15"She knew the place."
16"A dive bar, a known"
17"She’d never had cause to"
18"Her hand went to the"
19"The interior was exactly as"
ratio0.811
47.17% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"To supernatural patients."
ratio0.009
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath came in ragged clouds, her worn leather watch strap digging into her wrist as she pumped her arms, her legs burning with a famil…"
1"It had been three years since she’d lost Morris on a night not unlike this one, chasing a suspect who moved with that same unnatural grace into shadows that swa…"
2"The suspect—a weaselly informant named Finch who’d promised her answers about a new, potent alchemical poison hitting the streets—vanished down an alleyway too …"
3"Quinn followed, her shoulder scraping against damp brick, the sound of her own pursuit echoing back at her."
4"The alley dead-ended at a brick wall adorned with a faded, peeling poster for a circus that had left town decades ago."
5"She saw Finch’s smug face, knew he was down there right now, trading the secrets of a poison that could kill in ways her forensics lab couldn’t even comprehend."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Morris’s face flashed, his laugh, the way he’d always called her"
1"he said, his accent hinting at Spain"
2"she stated, her voice flat"
3"He grabbed, his grip surprisingly strong"
4"she said, the words feeling inadequate"
5"he whispered, his face pale"
75.93% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she stated (state)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.185
leniency0.37
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.148
82.0372%