Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNETTX0SA5K8GAA524BZPYX

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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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The knock was soft, the kind that sounded more like a sigh against the wood than a warning. Aurora’s fingers paused over the stack of case briefs, the bright blue of her eyes flicking to the deadbolt on the front door. She had learned to trust the three deadbolts on Eva’s flat—three clicks, a turn of the key, a weight that settled her mind. The cat, Ptolemy, flicked his tail from the windowsill, his amber eyes narrowing as if he sensed the shift before she did. She set the papers down, the scar on her left wrist catching a sliver of light from the hallway lamp. The crescent-shaped mark was a reminder of a childhood accident she rarely thought about, but tonight it seemed to pulse with a strange, unspoken urgency. She turned the knob, the lock giving its familiar, satisfying click, and eased the door open. The hallway beyond was a narrow strip of plaster, the scent of curry from the house below mingling with the faint musk of old paper. The door to the flat stood ajar, a thin line of amber light spilling into the hallway. Aurora hesitated, one hand resting on the brass knob, the other hovering near the scar as if it might be a lever for some hidden mechanism. The quiet was broken by a soft meow, and Ptolemy padded forward, his paws silent on the worn carpet. “Luc?” she called, the name a breath, her throat. “What are you doing here?” From the shadows stepped Lucien Moreau, his charcoal suit a perfect silhouette against the dim light. The suit was tailored to his 5’11” frame, the fabric catching the glow of the hallway lamp in a way that made him look both polished and dangerous. His hair—slicked back platinum blond—shimmered faintly, a stark contrast to the dark hair that fell in loose strands around Aurora’s shoulders. One eye burned amber, the other a deep, unyielding black, the heterochromatic gaze that had haunted her thoughts for months. He lifted a hand, the ivory-handled cane tapping the floor in a measured rhythm. The cane concealed a thin blade, the tip glinting just enough to catch Aurora’s peripheral vision. He smiled, a thin, practiced line that didn’t quite reach his eyes. “I’m sorry to bar you like this,” he said, his voice low, the accent of a Frenchman softened by years of London streets. “I didn’t mean to—” “Don’t,” Aurora cut in, the word sharp as a blade. “You didn’t have to. I’m not in the habit of letting strangers into my life.” He stepped forward, the cane’s tip clicking against the wood. The cat, Ptolemy, arched his back, his tail puffed, and let out a low hiss. Lucien’s amber eye softened, and he knelt, extending a hand that was both gentle and rehearsed. “Ptolemy, it’s just you,” he murmured, his voice a whisper that seemed to carry an apology older than the present moment. The cat hesitated, then brushed his head against Lucien’s palm, the tension in his shoulders easing. Aurora watched the exchange, the scar on her wrist throbbing as if it were a pulse syncing with her heartbeat. She could feel the weight of the past pressing against her ribs—late nights in the cramped flat, the smell of incense and old books, the way Lucien’s hand had brushed hers when they’d sorted through a stack of arcane legal documents for a case that had never seen a courtroom. The memory of his laugh, low and warm, echoing off the walls of the flat, a laugh that had once seemed to promise something more than the fleeting connection they’d shared. “Why are you here?” she asked, the question a blade wrapped in silk. She could hear the faint rustle of the scrolls and research notes that covered every surface of the flat, the inked margins of ancient texts whispering in the background. The room felt cramped, the walls closing in around them, yet there was a strange openness in the air, as if the house itself were holding its breath. Lucien’s gaze flicked to the books, the scrolls, the scattered papers that marked Aurora’s life. “I need your help,” he said, the words deliberate, each one placed with care. “There’s a… a situation. Something that requires a mind like yours.” Aurora raised an eyebrow, the scar on her wrist catching the light again. “You always did have a way of making things sound like a job. What kind of situation?” He hesitated, the cane tapping a soft rhythm against the floor. “It’s… complicated. A client of mine—well, not exactly a client. Someone who’s… not entirely human. I’m looking for a legal loophole, something that can protect… someone.” She stared at him, the amber eye of his gaze meeting her bright blue. The contrast was jarring, a living reminder of his half-demon nature. “You’re a half-demon, Luc. You know the law doesn’t recognize your kind. What are you really after?” Lucien’s hand tightened around the cane, the ivory handle pressing into his palm. “You know why I left,” he said, his voice dropping to a whisper that seemed to vibrate with the weight of unspoken apologies. “I left because I thought I could protect you from… from the things that follow me. From the blood that runs in my veins.” Aurora’s breath caught. The scar on her wrist ached, a reminder of the accident that had once left her with a permanent mark, a mark that now seemed to echo the bruises of her heart. She thought of the night she had run from Evan, the abusive ex who had threatened to tear her apart, and how Lucien had been there, a steady hand in a storm of chaos. She remembered the way his hand had brushed her wrist, the warmth of his touch against the scar, the way he’d whispered, “You’re stronger than you think.” “Luc,” she said, the name a plea, a warning. “You can’t just show up and expect… anything. I’m not… I’m not the same person you left behind.” He looked at her, the black eye deep and endless, as if it held a night sky full of stars she could never reach. “I know,” he said, his tone softening. “I know I’ve hurt you. I know I left you with questions that never got answers. But I need you, Aurora. I need your mind, your eyes. There’s a trial coming—one that could expose a lot of… things. If we don’t stop it, the whole city could be… compromised.” Aurora’s gaze drifted to the cat, now settled on the windowsill, his tail flicking lazily. The flat was a chaos of books and scrolls, the walls lined with research notes in various scripts, the faint smell of incense mingling with the lingering curry aroma from the house below. She could feel the weight of the world pressing down, the expectation that she would be the one to untangle the legal knots that bound Lucien’s world to hers. She took a step back, the scar on her wrist now a vivid line of red against her skin, a reminder of the fragility beneath her cool-headed exterior. “You’re asking me to risk everything,” she said, her voice steadier than she felt. “My job, my safety, the little peace I have left in this flat. And for what? A chance to… what? To be together again?” Lucien’s amber eye flickered, a flash of something that might have been hope. “I’m not asking for anything more than your help. Not for promises, not for… anything else. Just… for a chance to make right what I broke.” She stared at the cane, the ivory handle gleaming in the dim light, the thin blade hidden within. The thought of that blade, the potential for violence, made her stomach twist. Yet there was something else—an ache that had settled deep in her chest, a yearning she had tried to smother with work and distance. “Do you ever think about why we left?” she asked, the question a soft, trembling thread. “Why we walked away, even when we knew we could have stayed?” Lucien’s gaze softened, the black eye reflecting the flickering hallway light. “I think about it every night, Aurora. I think about the night we… when we first kissed in the back of that bar, the way your breath hitched, the way the world seemed to stop for a heartbeat. I think about the way you looked at me, like you were trying to see past the demon inside me.” She swallowed, the scar on her wrist throbbing as if it were a pulse that matched the rhythm of her heart. “You were always… different, Luc. You had this… this darkness that I couldn’t understand. And I was scared. I thought I could protect you by walking away.” He stepped closer, the cane tapping a steady rhythm that seemed to echo the beat of her heart. “I was scared too,” he admitted, his voice low, almost a whisper. “Scared that I’d bring you into a world you didn’t belong to. Scared that I’d lose you again.” The cat, Ptolemy, leapt onto the sill, his whiskers twitching as he stared at them both. The room felt smaller, the walls closing in, the books and scrolls now a backdrop to a conversation that had been years in the making. Aurora’s breath hitched, the scar on her wrist now a vivid reminder of the accident that had left her with a permanent mark. She could feel the weight of the past, the hurt, the attraction, the unsaid words that had lingered like dust in the corners of the flat. She looked at Lucien, his suit immaculate, his cane a silent promise of danger and protection. “Fine,” she said, the word a decisive crack. “I’ll help you. But you have to understand—this is not about us. It’s about the law, about the people who could get hurt. And if we’re going to do this, we do it on my terms.” Lucien’s amber eye lit up, a flicker of relief crossing his face. He nodded, the black eye deepening with resolve. “Your terms. I’ll follow them. I promise.” She turned away, the scar on her wrist catching the light once more, a reminder that even the deepest wounds could be bandaged, if only you were willing to tend them. She walked back to the table, the stack of case briefs waiting, the inked margins of ancient texts whispering in the background. She could feel the weight of the world pressing down, the expectation that she would be the one to untangle the legal knots that bound Lucien’s world to hers. “First,” she said, her voice steady, “we need to get a clear picture of what we’re dealing with. Who’s the client? What’s the threat?” Lucien placed his hand on the table, the cane’s tip resting lightly against the wood. “The client is a… a member of the Avaros court. He’s been trying to claim a parcel of land in the East End, land that’s been in the hands of a family for generations. He’s using a loophole in the old charter that we can’t see. It’s… complicated.” Aurora’s eyes narrowed, the bright blue of them narrowing like a blade. “A loophole? In a charter that’s centuries old? I’ll need the original documents, the amendments, the—” He lifted a small leather satchel from his coat, the ivory cane sliding out as he did. “I have the copies. I thought you’d have the expertise to spot the flaw.” She took the satchel, the weight of it grounding her. The scar on her wrist tingled, a reminder of the accident that had left her with a permanent mark, a mark that now seemed to echo the bruises of her heart. She opened the satchel, the inner lining revealing a stack of parchment, inked in a script that seemed to pulse with an ancient rhythm. “Let’s see,” she said, unrolling a sheet, the paper crackling under her fingers. The ink was black, the script elegant, the words forming a lattice of legal language that seemed to hum with hidden meaning. Lucien leaned over her shoulder, his amber eye tracing the lines, his black eye reflecting the dim light. “I know you can see what I can’t. You have the mind for this, Rory.” She felt a shiver run down her spine, the scar on her wrist a vivid line of red against her skin. She glanced at Ptolemy, now perched on the table, his tail flicking lazily. The cat’s amber eyes met hers, a silent acknowledgment of the tension that filled the room. “Fine,” she said, her voice a low hum. “We start with the original charter. Then we look at the amendments. If there’s a loophole, we’ll find it. And if there’s a demon behind it, we’ll… we’ll deal with it.” Lucien’s smile was faint, the kind that didn’t quite reach his eyes but hinted at a relief that had been hidden for too long. “Thank you, Aurora. I… I’m sorry for everything.” She didn’t answer, the scar on her wrist pulsing as if it were a heartbeat. She turned back to the parchment, the inked words a labyrinth she was determined to navigate. The cat, Ptolemy, settled onto the paper, his weight a reminder that even in the midst of legal battles and supernatural intrigue, there was still a simple, ordinary life that continued. The night stretched on, the flat’s walls humming with the soft rustle of pages, the occasional sigh of the cat, the faint clink of Lucien’s cane against the wood. The scent of curry drifted up from the house below, a reminder of the world outside, a world that continued to spin regardless of the secrets they were unravelling. Aurora’s mind worked in tight, precise bursts, each thought a dagger of logic, each conclusion a blade that cut through the tangled legal web. She could feel the scar on her wrist a reminder of the accident that had left her with a permanent mark, a mark that now seemed to echo the bruises of her heart. She glanced up, catching Lucien’s gaze. The amber eye met her bright blue, a silent acknowledgment passing between them. The unsaid things lingered in the space between them, a tension that felt both dangerous and familiar. The cat, Ptolemy, stretched, his tail flicking as he settled into a comfortable position on the table. “Luc,” she said, her voice softer now, “if we’re going to do this, you have to be honest with me. No more secrets. No more half‑truths.” He nodded, the black eye deepening with resolve. “I promise. No more half‑truths.” She smiled, a small, genuine curve of her lips, the scar on her wrist catching the light. “Good. Then let’s get to work.” The night deepened, the flat’s cramped walls holding their breath as they pored over ancient legal texts, the scent of incense and curry mingling with the faint hum of the city outside. The cat, Ptolemy, fell asleep on the parchment, his breathing slow and steady, a reminder that even in the midst of chaos, there could be moments of quiet peace. Aurora felt the weight of the past lift, just a little, as she and Lucien worked side by side, their hands occasionally brushing over a page, a spark that seemed to ignite something deeper. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a reminder that she had survived, that she could endure, that she could love even when the world threatened to tear her apart. The night stretched on, the flat’s walls humming with the soft rustle of pages, the occasional sigh of the cat, the faint clink of Lucien’s cane against the wood. The scent of curry drifted up from the house below, a reminder of the world outside, a world that continued to spin regardless of the secrets they were unravelling. She turned a page, her eyes scanning the legal jargon, her mind a blade cutting through the tangled web. Lucien watched her, his amber eye reflecting the dim light, his black eye a void that seemed to hold a thousand unspoken words. The cat, Ptolemy, stretched, his tail flicking lazily as he settled into a comfortable position on the table. “Luc,” she said, her voice softer now, “if we’re going to do this, you have to be honest with me. No more secrets. No more half‑truths.” He nodded, the black eye deepening with resolve. “I promise. No more half‑truths.” She smiled, a small, genuine curve of her lips, the scar on her wrist catching the light. “Good. Then let’s get to work.” The night deepened, the flat’s cramped walls holding their breath as they pored over ancient legal texts, the scent of incense and curry mingling with the faint hum of the city outside. The cat, Ptolemy, fell asleep on the parchment, his breathing slow and steady, a reminder that even in the midst of chaos, there could be moments of quiet peace. Aurora felt the weight of the past lift, just a little, as she and Lucien worked side by side, their hands occasionally brushing over a page, a spark that seemed to ignite something deeper. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a reminder that she had survived, that she could endure, that she could love even when the world threatened to tear her apart. The night stretched on, the flat’s walls humming with the soft rustle of pages, the occasional sigh of the cat, the faint clink of Lucien’s cane against the wood. The scent of curry drifted up from the house below, a reminder of the world outside, a world that continued to spin regardless of the secrets they were unravelling. She turned a page, her eyes scanning the legal jargon, her mind a blade cutting through the tangled web. Lucien watched her, his amber eye reflecting the dim light, his black eye a void that seemed to hold a thousand unspoken words. The cat, Ptolemy, stretched, his tail flicking lazily as he settled into a comfortable position on the table. “Luc,” she said, her voice softer now, “if we’re going to do this, you have to be honest with me. No more secrets. No more half‑truths.” He nodded, the black eye deepening with resolve. “I promise. No more half‑truths.” She smiled, a small, genuine curve of her lips, the scar on her wrist catching the light. “Good. Then let’s get to work.” The night deepened, the flat’s cramped walls holding their breath as they pored over ancient legal texts, the scent of incense and curry mingling with the faint hum of the city outside. The cat, Ptolemy, fell asleep on the parchment, his breathing slow and steady, a reminder that even in the midst of chaos, there could be moments of quiet peace. Aurora felt the weight of the past lift, just a little, as she and Lucien worked side by side, their hands occasionally brushing over a page, a spark that seemed to ignite something deeper. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a reminder that she had survived, that she could endure, that she could love even when the world threatened to tear her apart.The dawn began to bleed through the cracked curtains, the first light of morning casting pale gold across the cramped flat. The scent of fresh bread from the curry house below drifted up, mingling with the lingering aroma of incense and ink. Ptolemy woke with a lazy stretch, his amber eyes half‑closed, and padded onto the table, nudging a stack of papers with his paw. Aurora blinked, the bright blue of her eyes meeting the soft morning light. She felt the scar on her wrist, a faint line of red that had faded with the night. She looked at Lucien, his charcoal suit now slightly rumpled, the ivory cane leaning against the table, its blade hidden but ever present. “Morning,” he said, his voice low, the black eye reflecting the new light. “Did you get any sleep?” She chuckled, a sound that surprised even her. “Barely. My mind was too busy untangling legal knots and… other things.” He smiled, a genuine curve that reached his eyes. “You always were the one who could think in the middle of chaos.” She shook her head, the scar on her wrist catching the light once more. “I’m not sure what I’m doing here, Luc. I’m not sure if I’m doing anything at all.” He stepped closer, the cane tapping a soft rhythm against the floor. “You’re doing exactly what you’re supposed to do. You’re solving problems, you’re protecting people. And… you’re here with me.” She felt a shiver travel down her spine, the scar on her wrist a vivid reminder of the accident that had left her with a permanent mark, a mark that now seemed to echo the bruises of her heart. She looked at the cat, Ptolemy, now curled up on the parchment, his tail flicking lazily. “Do you think,” she whispered, “that we can ever be… anything more than this? A partnership?” Lucien’s amber eye softened, the black eye deepening with a quiet resolve. “I think we can be whatever we want to be. If we want to be more, we have to make the choice together.” She took a breath, the scar on her wrist throbbing in time with her heartbeat. “Then let’s make that choice, Luc. Let’s see where this goes.” He reached out, his hand brushing against hers, the ivory cane’s tip resting lightly against the table. Their fingers touched, a spark of electricity that seemed to pulse through the room, through the books, through the very air. The cat, Ptolemy, opened his eyes, his amber gaze lingering on the two of them before he settled back into his slumber. The flat, cramped and cluttered, felt a little larger now, the walls echoing with the promise of something new. The morning light spilled across the pages, illuminating the inked words, the legal loophole that could change everything. Aurora felt the scar on her wrist, a reminder that she had survived, that she could endure, that she could love even when the world threatened to tear her apart. She turned the page, her eyes scanning the legal jargon, her mind a blade cutting through the tangled web. Lucien watched her, his amber eye reflecting the dim light, his black eye a void that seemed to hold a thousand unspoken words. The cat, Ptolemy, stretched, his tail flicking lazily as he settled into a comfortable position on the table. “Luc,” she said, her voice softer now, “if we’re going to do this, you have to be honest with me. No more secrets. No more half‑truths.” He nodded, the black eye deepening with resolve. “I promise. No more half‑truths.” She smiled, a small, genuine curve of her lips, the scar on her wrist catching the light. “Good. Then let’s get to work.” The night deepened, the flat’s cramped walls holding their breath as they pored over ancient legal texts, the scent of incense and curry mingling with the faint hum of the city outside. The cat, Ptolemy, fell asleep on the parchment, his breathing slow and steady, a reminder that even in the midst of chaos, there could be moments of quiet peace. Aurora felt the weight of the past lift, just a little, as she and Lucien worked side by side, their hands occasionally brushing over a page, a spark that seemed to ignite something deeper. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a reminder that she had survived, that she could endure, that she could love even when the world threatened to tear her apart. The dawn began to bleed through the cracked curtains, the first light of morning casting pale gold across the cramped flat. The scent of fresh bread from the curry house below drifted up, mingling with the lingering aroma of incense and ink. Ptolemy woke with a lazy stretch, his amber eyes half‑closed, and padded onto the table, nudging a stack of papers with his paw. Aurora blinked, the bright blue of her eyes meeting the soft morning light. She felt the scar on her wrist, a faint line of red that had faded with the night. She looked at Lucien, his charcoal suit now slightly rumpled, the ivory cane leaning against the table, its blade hidden but ever present. “Morning,” he said, his voice low, the black eye reflecting the new light. “Did you get any sleep?” She chuckled, a sound that surprised even her. “Barely. My mind was too busy untangling legal knots and… other things.” He smiled, a genuine curve that reached his eyes. “You always were the one who could think in the middle of chaos.” She shook her head, the scar on her wrist catching the light once more. “I’m not sure what I’m doing here, Luc. I’m not sure if I’m doing anything at all.” He stepped closer, the cane tapping a soft rhythm against the floor. “You’re doing exactly what you’re supposed to do. You’re solving problems, you’re protecting people. And… you’re here with me.” She felt a shiver travel down her spine, the scar on her wrist a vivid reminder of the accident that had left her with a permanent mark, a mark that now seemed to echo the bruises of her heart. She looked at the cat, Ptolemy, now curled up on the parchment, his tail flicking lazily. “Do you think,” she whispered, “that we can ever be… anything more than this? A partnership?” Lucien’s amber eye softened, the black eye deepening with a quiet resolve. “I think we can be whatever we want to be. If we want to be more, we have to make the choice together.” She took a breath, the scar on her wrist throbbing in time with her heartbeat. “Then let’s make that choice, Luc. Let’s see where this goes.” He reached out, his hand brushing against hers, the ivory cane’s tip resting lightly against the table. Their fingers touched, a spark of electricity that seemed to pulse through the room, through the books, through the very air. The cat, Ptolemy, opened his eyes, his amber gaze lingering on the two of them before he settled back into his slumber. The flat, cramped and cluttered, felt a little larger now, the walls echoing with the promise of something new. The morning light spilled across the pages, illuminating the inked words, the legal loophole that could change everything. Aurora felt the scar on her wrist, a reminder that she had survived, that she could endure, that she could love even when the world threatened to tear her apart. She turned the page, her eyes scanning the legal jargon, her mind a blade cutting through the tangled web. Lucien watched her, his amber eye reflecting the dim light, his black eye a void that seemed to hold a thousand unspoken words. The cat, Ptolemy, stretched, his tail flicking lazily as he settled into a comfortable position on the table. “Luc,” she said, her voice softer now, “if we’re going to do this, you have to be honest with me. No more secrets. No more half‑truths.” He nodded, the black eye deepening with resolve. “I promise. No more half‑truths.” She smiled, a small, genuine curve of her lips, the scar on her wrist catching the light. “Good. Then let’s get to work.” The night deepened, the flat’s cramped walls holding their breath as they pored over ancient legal texts, the scent of incense and curry mingling with the faint hum of the city outside. The cat, Ptolemy, fell asleep on the parchment, his breathing slow and steady, a reminder that even in the midst of chaos, there could be moments of quiet peace. Aurora felt the weight of the past lift, just a little, as she and Lucien worked side by side, their hands occasionally brushing over a page, a spark that seemed to ignite something deeper. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a reminder that she had survived, that she could endure, that she could love even when the world threatened to tear her apart. The dawn began to bleed through the cracked curtains, the first light of morning casting pale gold across the cramped flat. The scent of fresh bread from the curry house below drifted up, mingling with the lingering aroma of incense and ink. Ptolemy woke with a lazy stretch, his amber eyes half‑closed, and padded onto the table, nudging a stack of papers with his paw. Aurora blinked, the bright blue of her eyes meeting the soft morning light. She felt the scar on her wrist, a faint line of red that had faded with the night. She looked at Lucien, his charcoal suit now slightly rumpled, the ivory cane leaning against the table, its blade hidden but ever present. “Morning,” he said, his voice low, the black eye reflecting the new light. “Did you get any sleep?” She chuckled, a sound that surprised even her. “Barely. My mind was too busy untangling legal knots and… other things.” He smiled, a genuine curve that reached his eyes. “You always were the one who could think in the middle of chaos.” She shook her head, the scar on her wrist catching the light once more. “I’m not sure what I’m doing here, Luc. I’m not sure if I’m doing anything at all.” He stepped closer, the cane tapping a soft rhythm against the floor. “You’re doing exactly what you’re supposed to do. You’re solving problems, you’re protecting people. And… you’re here with me.” She felt a shiver travel down her spine, the scar on her wrist a vivid reminder of the accident that had left her with a permanent mark, a mark that now seemed to echo the bruises of her heart. She looked at the cat, Ptolemy, now curled up on the parchment, his tail flicking lazily. “Do you think,” she whispered, “that we can ever be… anything more than this? A partnership?” Lucien’s amber eye softened, the black eye deepening with a quiet resolve. “I think we can be whatever we want to be. If we want to be more, we have to make the choice together.” She took a breath, the scar on her wrist throbbing in time with her heartbeat. “Then let’s make that choice, Luc. Let’s see where this goes.” He reached out, his hand brushing against hers, the ivory cane’s tip resting lightly against the table. Their fingers touched, a spark of electricity that seemed to pulse through the room, through the books, through the very air. The cat, Ptolemy, opened his eyes, his amber gaze lingering on the two of them before he settled back into his slumber. The flat, cramped and cluttered, felt a little larger now, the walls echoing with the promise of something new. The morning light spilled across the pages, illuminating the inked words, the legal loophole that could change everything. Aurora felt the scar on her wrist, a reminder that she had survived, that she could endure, that she could love even when the world threatened to tear her apart. She turned the page, her eyes scanning the legal jargon, her mind a blade cutting through the tangled web. Lucien watched her, his amber eye reflecting the dim light, his black eye a void that seemed to hold a thousand unspoken words. The cat, Ptolemy, stretched, his tail flicking lazily as he settled into a comfortable position on the table. “Luc,” she said, her voice softer now, “if we’re going to do this, you have to be honest with me. No more secrets. No more half‑truths.” He nodded, the black eye deepening with resolve. “I promise. No more half‑truths.” She smiled, a small, genuine curve of her lips, the scar on her wrist catching the light. “Good. Then let’s get to work.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags90
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien’s hand tightened around [around]"
dialogueSentences131
tagDensity0.687
leniency1
rawRatio0.011
effectiveRatio0.011
80.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount5327
totalAiIsmAdverbs21
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count10
2
adverb"lightly"
count4
3
adverb"slightly"
count3
4
adverb"very"
count3
highlights
0"really"
1"lazily"
2"lightly"
3"slightly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount5327
totalAiIsms130
found
0
word"weight"
count13
1
word"flicked"
count2
2
word"reminder"
count28
3
word"pulse"
count7
4
word"unspoken"
count7
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"shimmered"
count1
8
word"stark"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count3
12
word"tension"
count3
13
word"could feel"
count5
14
word"echoing"
count4
15
word"fleeting"
count1
16
word"silk"
count1
17
word"eyebrow"
count1
18
word"echo"
count7
19
word"warmth"
count1
20
word"flickered"
count1
21
word"gleaming"
count1
22
word"potential"
count1
23
word"stomach"
count1
24
word"yearning"
count1
25
word"flicker"
count1
26
word"resolve"
count10
27
word"tracing"
count1
28
word"down her spine"
count4
29
word"determined"
count1
30
word"navigate"
count1
31
word"intrigue"
count1
32
word"comfortable"
count6
33
word"throbbed"
count5
34
word"scanning"
count5
highlights
0"weight"
1"flicked"
2"reminder"
3"pulse"
4"unspoken"
5"familiar"
6"perfect"
7"shimmered"
8"stark"
9"measured"
10"glinting"
11"whisper"
12"tension"
13"could feel"
14"echoing"
15"fleeting"
16"silk"
17"eyebrow"
18"echo"
19"warmth"
20"flickered"
21"gleaming"
22"potential"
23"stomach"
24"yearning"
25"flicker"
26"resolve"
27"tracing"
28"down her spine"
29"determined"
30"navigate"
31"intrigue"
32"comfortable"
33"throbbed"
34"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
80.96% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells13
narrationSentences246
matches
0"was scared"
1"a flicker of relief"
2"g with resolve"
3"felt a shiver"
4"g with resolve"
5"g with resolve"
6"g with resolve"
7"felt a shiver"
8"g with resolve"
9"felt a shiver"
10"g with resolve"
11"felt a shiver"
12"g with resolve"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount15
hedgeCount30
narrationSentences246
filterMatches
0"look"
1"know"
2"think"
3"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences247
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen127
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords5314
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions48
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions104
wordCount4699
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Ptolemy26
Lucien36
Moreau1
Aurora24
Frenchman1
London1
Evan1
Luc1
Avaros1
East1
End1
You6
Let3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Aurora"
5"Frenchman"
6"Evan"
7"Luc"
8"You"
9"Let"
places
0"London"
1"East"
2"End"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences173
glossingSentenceCount20
matches
0"quite reach his eyes"
1"whisper that seemed to carry an apology older than the present moment"
2"whisper that seemed to vibrate with the weight of unspoken apologies"
3"rhythm that seemed to echo the beat of her heart"
4"script that seemed to pulse with an ancient rhythm"
5"language that seemed to hum with hidden meaning"
6"quite reach his eyes but hinted at a relief that had been hidden for too long"
7"spark that seemed to ignite something deeper"
8"void that seemed to hold a thousand unspoken words"
9"spark that seemed to ignite something deeper"
10"void that seemed to hold a thousand unspoken words"
11"spark that seemed to ignite something deeper"
12"electricity that seemed to pulse through the room, through the books, through the very air"
13"void that seemed to hold a thousand unspoken words"
14"spark that seemed to ignite something deeper"
15"electricity that seemed to pulse through the room, through the books, through the very air"
16"void that seemed to hold a thousand unspoken words"
17"spark that seemed to ignite something deeper"
18"electricity that seemed to pulse through the room, through the books, through the very air"
19"void that seemed to hold a thousand unspoken words"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount5314
matches(empty)
0.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount18
totalSentences247
matches
0"notes that covered"
1"Scared that I’d"
2"survived, that she endure, that she"
3"survived, that she endure, that she"
4"survived, that she endure, that she"
5"survived, that she endure, that she"
6"survived, that she endure, that she"
7"survived, that she endure, that she"
8"survived, that she endure, that she"
9"survived, that she endure, that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs120
mean44.28
std22.18
cv0.501
sampleLengths
086
161
287
314
485
542
627
725
841
937
10101
1170
1240
1330
1437
1542
1660
1796
1827
1980
2077
2166
2239
2355
2428
2569
2648
2748
2841
2965
3044
3127
3282
3324
3463
3528
3631
3765
3835
3933
4050
4139
4232
4362
4458
4557
4653
4726
4813
4923
93.85% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount8
totalSentences246
matches
0"was broken"
1"was tailored"
2"been"
3"been hidden"
4"was determined"
5"supposed"
6"supposed"
7"supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount7
totalVerbs837
matches
0"were holding"
1"was jarring"
2"were trying"
3"were willing"
4"were unravelling"
5"were unravelling"
6"were unravelling"
50.32% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences247
ratio0.032
matches
0"She had learned to trust the three deadbolts on Eva’s flat—three clicks, a turn of the key, a weight that settled her mind."
1"The suit was tailored to his 5’11” frame, the fabric catching the glow of the hallway lamp in a way that made him look both polished and dangerous. His hair—slicked back platinum blond—shimmered faintly, a stark contrast to the dark hair that fell in loose strands around Aurora’s shoulders. One eye burned amber, the other a deep, unyielding black, the heterochromatic gaze that had haunted her thoughts for months."
2"Aurora watched the exchange, the scar on her wrist throbbing as if it were a pulse syncing with her heartbeat. She could feel the weight of the past pressing against her ribs—late nights in the cramped flat, the smell of incense and old books, the way Lucien’s hand had brushed hers when they’d sorted through a stack of arcane legal documents for a case that had never seen a courtroom. The memory of his laugh, low and warm, echoing off the walls of the flat, a laugh that had once seemed to promise something more than the fleeting connection they’d shared."
3"A client of mine—well, not exactly a client."
4"There’s a trial coming—one that could expose a lot of…"
5"She stared at the cane, the ivory handle gleaming in the dim light, the thin blade hidden within. The thought of that blade, the potential for violence, made her stomach twist. Yet there was something else—an ache that had settled deep in her chest, a yearning she had tried to smother with work and distance."
6"But you have to understand—this is not about us."
7"I’ll need the original documents, the amendments, the—”"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount4191
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount96
adverbRatio0.02290622763063708
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.005965163445478406
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences247
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences247
mean21.51
std22.97
cv1.068
sampleLengths
018
123
223
322
420
525
616
725
817
926
1019
119
125
1316
1469
1542
1627
1714
1811
1941
2037
21101
2270
2331
242
257
2626
274
2812
291
308
312
323
3310
341
3529
368
375
3846
396
408
4196
4216
431
442
458
4636
4711
485
496
44.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.18218623481781376
totalSentences247
uniqueOpeners45
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount7
totalSentences205
matches
0"Then we look at the"
1"Then let’s get to"
2"Then let’s get to"
3"Then let’s get to"
4"Then let’s get to"
5"Then let’s get to"
6"Then let’s get to"
ratio0.034
13.17% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount106
totalSentences205
matches
0"She had learned to trust"
1"She set the papers down,"
2"She turned the knob, the"
3"she called, the name a"
4"He lifted a hand, the"
5"he said, his voice low,"
6"I’m not in the habit"
7"He stepped forward, the cane’s"
8"he murmured, his voice a"
9"she asked, the question a"
10"He hesitated, the cane tapping"
11"I’m looking for a legal"
12"She stared at him, the"
13"You know the law doesn’t"
14"she said, the name a"
15"I’m not the same person"
16"He looked at her, the"
17"I know I left you"
18"I need your mind, your"
19"She took a step back,"
ratio0.517
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount164
totalSentences205
matches
0"The knock was soft, the"
1"Aurora’s fingers paused over the"
2"She had learned to trust"
3"The cat, Ptolemy, flicked his"
4"She set the papers down,"
5"The crescent-shaped mark was a"
6"She turned the knob, the"
7"The hallway beyond was a"
8"The door to the flat"
9"Aurora hesitated, one hand resting"
10"The quiet was broken by"
11"she called, the name a"
12"The suit was tailored to"
13"He lifted a hand, the"
14"he said, his voice low,"
15"Aurora cut in, the word"
16"I’m not in the habit"
17"He stepped forward, the cane’s"
18"he murmured, his voice a"
19"Aurora watched the exchange, the"
ratio0.8
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount6
totalSentences205
matches
0"If we don’t stop it,"
1"To be together"
2"If there’s a loophole, we’ll"
3"If we want to be"
4"If we want to be"
5"If we want to be"
ratio0.029
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences66
technicalSentenceCount37
matches
0"The cat, Ptolemy, flicked his tail from the windowsill, his amber eyes narrowing as if he sensed the shift before she did."
1"Aurora hesitated, one hand resting on the brass knob, the other hovering near the scar as if it might be a lever for some hidden mechanism."
2"He lifted a hand, the ivory-handled cane tapping the floor in a measured rhythm. The cane concealed a thin blade, the tip glinting just enough to catch Aurora’s…"
3"He stepped forward, the cane’s tip clicking against the wood. The cat, Ptolemy, arched his back, his tail puffed, and let out a low hiss. Lucien’s amber eye sof…"
4"Aurora watched the exchange, the scar on her wrist throbbing as if it were a pulse syncing with her heartbeat. She could feel the weight of the past pressing ag…"
5"Aurora’s gaze drifted to the cat, now settled on the windowsill, his tail flicking lazily. The flat was a chaos of books and scrolls, the walls lined with resea…"
6"She stared at the cane, the ivory handle gleaming in the dim light, the thin blade hidden within. The thought of that blade, the potential for violence, made he…"
7"The cat, Ptolemy, leapt onto the sill, his whiskers twitching as he stared at them both. The room felt smaller, the walls closing in, the books and scrolls now …"
8"Aurora’s breath hitched, the scar on her wrist now a vivid reminder of the accident that had left her with a permanent mark. She could feel the weight of the pa…"
9"She turned away, the scar on her wrist catching the light once more, a reminder that even the deepest wounds could be bandaged, if only you were willing to tend…"
10"She took the satchel, the weight of it grounding her. The scar on her wrist tingled, a reminder of the accident that had left her with a permanent mark, a mark …"
11"She felt a shiver run down her spine, the scar on her wrist a vivid line of red against her skin. She glanced at Ptolemy, now perched on the table, his tail fli…"
12"She didn’t answer, the scar on her wrist pulsing as if it were a heartbeat. She turned back to the parchment, the inked words a labyrinth she was determined to …"
13"The night stretched on, the flat’s walls humming with the soft rustle of pages, the occasional sigh of the cat, the faint clink of Lucien’s cane against the woo…"
14"Aurora’s mind worked in tight, precise bursts, each thought a dagger of logic, each conclusion a blade that cut through the tangled legal web. She could feel th…"
15"She glanced up, catching Lucien’s gaze. The amber eye met her bright blue, a silent acknowledgment passing between them. The unsaid things lingered in the space…"
16"Aurora felt the weight of the past lift, just a little, as she and Lucien worked side by side, their hands occasionally brushing over a page, a spark that seeme…"
17"The night stretched on, the flat’s walls humming with the soft rustle of pages, the occasional sigh of the cat, the faint clink of Lucien’s cane against the woo…"
18"She turned a page, her eyes scanning the legal jargon, her mind a blade cutting through the tangled web. Lucien watched her, his amber eye reflecting the dim li…"
19"Aurora felt the weight of the past lift, just a little, as she and Lucien worked side by side, their hands occasionally brushing over a page, a spark that seeme…"
20"The night stretched on, the flat’s walls humming with the soft rustle of pages, the occasional sigh of the cat, the faint clink of Lucien’s cane against the woo…"
21"She turned a page, her eyes scanning the legal jargon, her mind a blade cutting through the tangled web. Lucien watched her, his amber eye reflecting the dim li…"
22"Aurora felt the weight of the past lift, just a little, as she and Lucien worked side by side, their hands occasionally brushing over a page, a spark that seeme…"
23"She felt a shiver travel down her spine, the scar on her wrist a vivid reminder of the accident that had left her with a permanent mark, a mark that now seemed …"
24"He reached out, his hand brushing against hers, the ivory cane’s tip resting lightly against the table. Their fingers touched, a spark of electricity that seeme…"
25"The flat, cramped and cluttered, felt a little larger now, the walls echoing with the promise of something new. The morning light spilled across the pages, illu…"
26"She turned the page, her eyes scanning the legal jargon, her mind a blade cutting through the tangled web. Lucien watched her, his amber eye reflecting the dim …"
27"Aurora felt the weight of the past lift, just a little, as she and Lucien worked side by side, their hands occasionally brushing over a page, a spark that seeme…"
28"She felt a shiver travel down her spine, the scar on her wrist a vivid reminder of the accident that had left her with a permanent mark, a mark that now seemed …"
29"He reached out, his hand brushing against hers, the ivory cane’s tip resting lightly against the table. Their fingers touched, a spark of electricity that seeme…"
30"The flat, cramped and cluttered, felt a little larger now, the walls echoing with the promise of something new. The morning light spilled across the pages, illu…"
31"She turned the page, her eyes scanning the legal jargon, her mind a blade cutting through the tangled web. Lucien watched her, his amber eye reflecting the dim …"
32"Aurora felt the weight of the past lift, just a little, as she and Lucien worked side by side, their hands occasionally brushing over a page, a spark that seeme…"
33"She felt a shiver travel down her spine, the scar on her wrist a vivid reminder of the accident that had left her with a permanent mark, a mark that now seemed …"
34"He reached out, his hand brushing against hers, the ivory cane’s tip resting lightly against the table. Their fingers touched, a spark of electricity that seeme…"
35"The flat, cramped and cluttered, felt a little larger now, the walls echoing with the promise of something new. The morning light spilled across the pages, illu…"
36"She turned the page, her eyes scanning the legal jargon, her mind a blade cutting through the tangled web. Lucien watched her, his amber eye reflecting the dim …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags49
uselessAdditionCount17
matches
0"she called, the name a breath, her throat"
1"she asked, the question a blade wrapped in silk"
2"she said, the name a plea, a warning"
3"he said, his tone softening"
4"she said, her voice steadier than she felt"
5"he admitted, his voice low, almost a whisper"
6"she said, her voice steady,"
7"she said, her voice a low hum"
8"she said, her voice softer now,"
9"she said, her voice softer now,"
10"she said, her voice softer now,"
11"he said, his voice low, the black eye reflecting the new light"
12"she said, her voice softer now,"
13"he said, his voice low, the black eye reflecting the new light"
14"she said, her voice softer now,"
15"he said, his voice low, the black eye reflecting the new light"
16"she said, her voice softer now,"
96.56% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags25
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"She chuckled (chuckle)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"She chuckled (chuckle)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"She chuckled (chuckle)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences131
tagDensity0.191
leniency0.382
rawRatio0.28
effectiveRatio0.107
70.6631%