Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEV8PZME7WCGY807CV719X

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Duration:
2m 14s
Cost:
$0.001749
Provider:
SambaNova

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock on the door was wrong. It wasn’t Eva’s cheerful, syncopated rap, or the heavy, impatient thud of a takeaway delivery. This was three sharp, precise, almost arrogant taps. Rory, curled on the lumpy sofa with a volume of pre-Roman Celtic folklore, went still. Ptolemy, the tabby, raised his head from her lap, ears swiveling toward the sound. Her heart did a slow, heavy roll in her chest. No one else came here. Eva was a fortress of esoteric knowledge and strange hours, not a social hub. The knock came again, identical, a demand more than a request. Setting the heavy book aside, she padded to the door, her bare feet silent on the worn floorboards. Her fingers hesitated over the three deadbolts, a cold prickle of unease tracing her spine. She peered through the fisheye lens, the world distorting into a warped, circular view of the dimly lit hallway. And there he was. Lucien Moreau. The breath caught in her throat. He looked exactly the same, which was its own particular kind of insult. Impeccable. A charcoal suit that cost more than her entire year's rent, tailored to fit his lean frame like a second skin. His platinum hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place. He held his ivory-handled cane lightly in one gloved hand, his expression one of bored patience, as if he were waiting for a tardy subordinate and not standing outside a book-cluttered flat in East London. Her hand trembled as she slid the first bolt back. The rasp of metal was loud in the tense silence. Then the second. The third. She took a steadying breath, the ghost of the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist seeming to pulse, a reminder of older, simpler hurts. She pulled the door open a few inches, the chain still latched. The hallway’s poor lighting did nothing to diminish him. Up close, she saw the faint lines of exhaustion around his eyes, the only crack in the perfect facade. And then there were the eyes themselves: one a warm, startling amber, the other a void of absolute black. They fixed on her now, and the bored patience evaporated, replaced by an unnerving intensity. "Aurora," he said. Her name was a soft exhale on his lips, flavored with that faint, unshakable French accent. It sounded like a relic, a thing she hadn't realized she’d missed hearing. "Lucien." Her voice was flat, a defensive wall she’d spent months building. "What are you doing here?" "A social call," he said, the corner of his mouth quirking. It wasn't quite a smile. It was the ghost of one, the echo of a dozen shared secrets and one spectacular, painful ending. "This isn't a social neighborhood. You stick out like a diamond in a coal mine." She made no move to unlatch the chain. "Charming as ever, *ma chère*. May I come in? I assure you, my business is... pressing." His gaze flickered past her, taking in the teetering stacks of books, the scrolls spilling off the coffee table, the tabby cat now observing him with feline disdain from the back of the sofa. "I see your taste in accommodations remains... eclectic." "It's Eva's. I'm just... staying." The admission felt like a weakness. He knew why she'd left Cardiff. He knew about Evan. He’d been the one to help her vanish, a fact that now felt like a hookAfter a long moment, her fingers fumbled with the chain. It slid free with a final, metallic clink. She opened the door fully and stepped back, granting him entry into the small, chaotic space. He moved past her, and the air in the room changed. It became charged, thinner. He brought the scent of rain, expensive cologne, and something else, something metallic and old—the scent of his other half, the part he tried so hard to conceal beneath Savile Row tailoring. He made the cramped flat seem even smaller, his presence overwhelming the clutter. He didn't sit. He leaned his cane against the arm of the sofa and began to slowly remove his leather gloves, finger by finger. The ritual of it was infuriatingly deliberate. Ptolemy gave a low growl. "He doesn't care for new people," Rory said, crossing her arms over her chest. "Animals are often the best judges of character," Lucien replied mildly, placing the gloves neatly on a stack of books about Mesopotamian demonology. "It seems I am found wanting." "What do you want, Lucien?" He turned to face her fully, his heterochromatic gaze trapping hers. "I need your particular talents, Rory." A cold laugh escaped her. "My talents? You mean my ability to deliver pork buns and spring rolls without spilling the sweet and sour sauce? I'm afraid I'm booked solid." "Don't be obtuse. It doesn't suit you." His voice had lost its playful edge, turning serious, hard. "The thinking. The quick, lateral thinking that sees solutions in the cracks everyone else overlooks. I have a problem." "And I'm sure you have a dozen half-demons, witches, and information brokers who can solve it for you. You don't need me." She turned away, pretending to straighten a pile of papers that didn't need straightening. She could feel his eyes on her back, could feel the weight of all the things they hadn't said the last time they stood in a room together. "I do need you," he said, and the simple admission was so unlike him that it made her still. "This is... delicate. It involves a book. An old one. One that shouldn't be in the hands it's currently in." She turned back. "So steal it. That's what you do." "It's not that simple. The... individual who has it is protected. Magically, physically. A direct approach is impossible. It requires finesse. It requires a mind they won't see coming." He took a step toward her. The space between them shrank, charged with the memory of the last time he’d been this close. The heat of his hand on the small of her back as they’d ducked through a hidden door in an alleyway. The way his amber eye had seemed to glow in the dark. "You left, Lucien." The words were out before she could stop them, sharp and wounded. "You got what you needed from that job and you were just... gone. No word. Nothing." A shadow crossed his face. "It was for the best." "For whom? You?" "For you!" The words were a sudden, sharp crack in his controlled demeanor. He ran a hand through his perfect hair, a rare sign of agitation. "That job, the things we did... it attracted attention. The wrong kind. The kind that doesn't just go away. My disappearing act was a distraction. A lure. I led them on a merry chase across three continents so they would follow *me* and not look back at the brilliant, infuriatingly clever human girl who helped me." She stared at him, the defensive wall she’d so carefully maintained showing its first fissures. The anger was still there, a hot coal in her stomach, but now it was mixed with something else, something frighteningly like hope. "You... you never said." "Would you have believed me?" he asked softly, taking another step. He was close enough now that she could see the faint striations of gold in his amber eye, the impossible depth of the black one. He smelled of danger and safety all at once, a paradox she had never been able to resolve. "You were so angry. So hurt. You thought I'd used you and discarded you. It was a more effective cover story than anything I could have invented." He lifted a hand, slowly, as if approaching a skittish animal. His fingertips brushed a stray strand of hair from her cheek. The touch was electric, a jolt that went straight through her. She flinched, but didn't pull away. "I thought about you," he murmured, his voice a low rumble. "Every damn day. Wondering if you were safe. If you were happy delivering those damned noodles." The confession hung between them, fragile and immense. All the unsaid things rushed into the space: the attraction that had hummed between them during late-night planning sessions, the way his laughter had felt like a rare victory, the devastating emptiness she’d felt when he was gone. "You hurt me," she whispered, the words thick. "I know." His hand cupped her cheek, his thumb stroking her skin. His touch was warmer than a human's, a testament to the fire in his blood. "And I would do it again if it meant keeping you safe. But I am here now, asking for your help, because there is no one else I trust. And because this... this thing between us isn't finished." His head dipped, his forehead resting against hers. She could feel the tension in him, the careful leash he kept on his power, on his desire. Her own resistance crumbled, the careful architecture of her anger collapsing into dust. She had missed this. Missed *him*. The intelligence, the danger, the frustrating, intoxicating complexity of him. "Tell me about the book," she said, her voice barely a breath. A genuine smile, small and relieved, touched his lips. "It's tedious. Dangerous. And it will require every ounce of that magnificent mind of yours." "Good," she said. And then, before she could lose her nerve, she closed the final inch between them and kissed him. It wasn't a gentle kiss. It was months of frustration, of hurt and longing, poured into a single, searing connection. His arms went around her, crushing her to him, his cane forgotten on the floor. He kissed her back with a desperation that mirrored her own, a hunger that spoke of things denied for far too long. Outside, the London rain began to fall, tapping against the windowpane of the cluttered, book-strewn flat, sealing them in their own temporary, complicated world.
created_at"2026-02-17T09:30:19.219522+00:00" 2/17/2026, 9:30:19 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
44.74% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"The admission felt like [like]"
1"Lucien replied mildly [mildly]"
2"She turned away [away]"
3"he asked softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.211
effectiveRatio0.211
84.94% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1660
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"slowly"
2"carefully"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1660
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count2
6
word"facade"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"chaotic"
count1
11
word"charged"
count2
12
word"could feel"
count3
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"resolve"
count1
16
word"electric"
count1
17
word"testament"
count1
18
word"tension"
count1
19
word"desire"
count1
20
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"trembled"
2"silence"
3"pulse"
4"reminder"
5"perfect"
6"facade"
7"intensity"
8"echo"
9"flickered"
10"chaotic"
11"charged"
12"could feel"
13"weight"
14"stomach"
15"resolve"
16"electric"
17"testament"
18"tension"
19"desire"
20"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences100
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords1653
ratio0.002
matches
0"ma chère"
1"me"
2"him"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1230
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.16
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Celtic1
Moreau1
East1
London2
French1
Cardiff1
Evan1
Savile1
Row1
Lucien2
Mesopotamian1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Evan"
3"Row"
4"Lucien"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"sounded like a relic, a thing she hadn't r"
1"felt like a weakness"
2"felt like a hookAfter a long moment, he"
3"as if approaching a skittish animal"
4"felt like a rare victory, the devastati"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1653
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean39.36
std24.93
cv0.633
sampleLengths
059
140
252
34
42
588
660
762
832
917
1034
1123
1258
1370
1460
1536
1614
1729
185
1917
2030
2136
2264
2339
2410
2585
2631
2710
283
2982
3042
3181
3239
3327
3446
358
3665
3755
3812
3924
4021
4181
94.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"was slicked"
1"was mixed"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs198
matches
0"were waiting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences118
ratio0.008
matches
0"He brought the scent of rain, expensive cologne, and something else, something metallic and old—the scent of his other half, the part he tried so hard to conceal beneath Savile Row tailoring."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1236
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"own temporary, complicated world."
adverbCount41
adverbRatio0.03317152103559871
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012135922330097087
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean14.01
std9.67
cv0.69
sampleLengths
07
115
28
315
414
510
65
714
811
918
1015
1119
124
132
146
1513
161
1721
1812
1935
2010
2110
223
232
2423
2512
269
2719
2819
2915
303
3116
3213
3312
345
3511
365
3718
3823
3950
408
4111
426
434
4425
458
4616
4711
484
4932
41.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3135593220338983
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners37
35.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Then the second."
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount58
totalSentences94
matches
0"It wasn’t Eva’s cheerful, syncopated"
1"Her heart did a slow,"
2"Her fingers hesitated over the"
3"She peered through the fisheye"
4"He looked exactly the same,"
5"His platinum hair was slicked"
6"He held his ivory-handled cane"
7"Her hand trembled as she"
8"She took a steadying breath,"
9"She pulled the door open"
10"They fixed on her now,"
11"Her name was a soft"
12"It sounded like a relic,"
13"Her voice was flat, a"
14"he said, the corner of"
15"It wasn't quite a smile."
16"It was the ghost of"
17"She made no move to"
18"His gaze flickered past her,"
19"He knew why she'd left"
ratio0.617
7.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences94
matches
0"The knock on the door"
1"It wasn’t Eva’s cheerful, syncopated"
2"This was three sharp, precise,"
3"Rory, curled on the lumpy"
4"Ptolemy, the tabby, raised his"
5"Her heart did a slow,"
6"Eva was a fortress of"
7"The knock came again, identical,"
8"Her fingers hesitated over the"
9"She peered through the fisheye"
10"The breath caught in her"
11"He looked exactly the same,"
12"A charcoal suit that cost"
13"His platinum hair was slicked"
14"He held his ivory-handled cane"
15"Her hand trembled as she"
16"The rasp of metal was"
17"She took a steadying breath,"
18"She pulled the door open"
19"The hallway’s poor lighting did"
ratio0.904
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He held his ivory-handled cane lightly in one gloved hand, his expression one of bored patience, as if he were waiting for a tardy subordinate and not standing …"
1"He lifted a hand, slowly, as if approaching a skittish animal."
2"All the unsaid things rushed into the space: the attraction that had hummed between them during late-night planning sessions, the way his laughter had felt like…"
19.74% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, the corner of his mouth quirking"
1"he murmured, his voice a low rumble"
2"His hand cupped, his thumb stroking her skin"
3"she said, her voice barely a breath"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.263
leniency0.526
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.105
74.8265%