Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEV9PNC267NMPG3JWFKX0P

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Duration:
9.0s
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$0.000000
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Stealth

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora’s breath caught on the edge of the ancient stone archway, the cool night air of Richmond Park pressing against her cheek even as the faint scent of wildflowers drifted from the hidden grove beyond. The oak standing stones that marked the boundary of Isolde’s realm loomed like sentinels, their bark etched with symbols that seemed to pulse in the half‑light. She could feel the weight of the silver chain around her neck, the tiny crimson Heartstone Pendant thrum against her skin—a soft, warm pulse that grew steadier with each step toward the doorway. The veil between worlds was thinner here, she knew, a fact that had drawn Isolde to this place in the first place. The half‑fae’s pale lavender eyes flickered with a light that was neither sun nor moon, and her silver hair brushed the moss‑covered stones as she moved, leaving no footprints behind. “The hour you seek is not measured by the sun,” Isolde whispered, her voice a riddle that seemed to hang in the air like a lingering perfume. “When the amber sky bleeds, the feast will rise.” Nyx hovered at Aurora’s side, a silhouette of living shadow that shifted between solid and incorporeal with each breath. Their faintly glowing violet eyes watched the archway, the whisper of their voice carried on an unseen wind. “The path is a mouth, but the bite is unseen,” Nyx murmured, the words barely audible over the rustle of leaves. Aurora’s bright blue eyes narrowed as she examined the arch. The stone was covered in a tapestry of vines that bore fruit of impossible hue—emerald grapes that glowed from within, amber figs that seemed to melt into light when touched. The arch itself was adorned with carvings of feasting figures, their bodies elongated, their mouths forever open in a silent scream of hunger. She felt a familiar tug at the scar on her left wrist, the crescent‑shaped reminder of a childhood accident, now tingling as if the stone were trying to draw her in. She slipped the Heartstone Pendant from under her shirt, feeling its faint inner glow pulse in rhythm with her own heartbeat. The pendant’s warmth intensified, a silent signal that the veil was indeed fraying at this point. The air grew heavier, the amber sky above the arch shifting from a warm glow to a deep, liquid gold, as if the sun itself were melting into the horizon. “Ready?” she asked, her voice low but steady. She could hear the faint clink of the moonsilver blade at her belt, the Fae‑Forged Blade Isolde had given her. The dagger was always cold to the touch, a thin leaf‑shaped edge that seemed to hum with latent power. She drew it slowly, feeling the chill spread up her forearm, the metal singing against the stone. Isolde stepped forward, her feet barely disturbing the grass, and placed a hand on the arch. The vines recoiled, as if recognizing an old friend, and a low, resonant hum filled the clearing. The hum grew, a low chord that vibrated through the ground, and the arch began to ripple like water disturbed by a stone. Nyx’s form flickered, becoming more solid, their violet eyes reflecting the shifting light. Aurora pressed the pendant against the stone. The crimson gem glowed brighter, a pulse that seemed to sync with the arch’s hum. A crack opened, a wound in the veil that revealed a glimpse of another world—a sky of amber, endless vineyards stretching beyond the horizon, tables set with platters of food that defied gravity, floating in mid‑air like constellations. She took a breath, inhaling the sweet perfume of ripe fruit and the faint metallic tang of something ancient, something alive. The veil’s edge crackled, and a wave of warmth washed over her, the kind of heat that made the skin tingle, like standing near a hearth in a winter night. She felt the scar on her wrist pulse in response, a reminder that she was not merely a visitor but a participant in something far larger than herself. “Through,” she said, her voice barely more than a whisper, but firm enough to cut through the humming. She stepped forward, the Heartstone Pendant’s glow intensifying until it bathed her in a soft, crimson light. The arch swallowed her, and the world shifted. Aurora found herself standing on a vast marble floor, the surface polished to a mirror sheen that reflected the amber sky above. The air was thick with the scent of honey and spice, a perfume that seemed to cling to every breath. Around her, towering columns rose like the trunks of ancient trees, their surfaces etched with scenes of feasting and excess. The walls were lined with mosaics of fruit and meat, each tile catching the light and throwing it back in a kaleidoscope of colors. She could hear the distant clatter of plates, the low murmur of voices that seemed to echo from nowhere and everywhere at once. The sound was both comforting and unsettling, a reminder that this place was alive, that it fed on something beyond mere sustenance. The sky above was a warm amber, the sun a molten disc that hung low, casting long shadows that seemed to move of their own accord. Nyx moved beside her, their form now solid enough to cast a faint silhouette on the marble. Their violet eyes scanned the surroundings, catching the flicker of a distant fire that burned without flame. “The banquet is eternal,” Nyx said, the whisper sounding like wind through a canyon. “But the appetite is never sated.” Isolde appeared a few steps away, her silver hair flowing as if underwater, her lavender eyes fixed on a distant altar at the center of the hall. The altar was a slab of black stone, covered in a thin layer of crimson dust that seemed to pulse with a heartbeat of its own. She raised a hand, and the dust swirled, forming a pattern that resembled a map of constellations. “The feast is a mirror,” Isolde intoned, her voice a riddle that seemed to echo off the marble. “What is taken is given, what is devoured is fed. Seek the heart that beats beneath the stone, and the veil will close.” Aurora felt the weight of the moonsilver blade at her side, its coldness a grounding presence. She drew it, the edge catching the amber light and reflecting it in a faint, silvery sheen. The blade seemed to hum, a low vibration that resonated with the hum of the arch that had brought them here. She slipped the dagger into her hand, feeling the familiar chill spread up her arm, a reminder that she could cut through magical wards if needed. She walked toward the altar, each step echoing on the marble like a drumbeat. The floor beneath her feet was warm, the heat radiating from the stone itself, as if the very ground were alive. The Heartstone Pendant at her throat pulsed in rhythm with the hum of the hall, a soft, warm glow that seemed to guide her forward. As she approached the altar, she noticed a series of carvings along its base—tiny figures of humans and fae, each holding a different object: a chalice, a crown, a key. The key was a small, silver thing, its teeth intricate, almost too delicate to be functional. Aurora’s fingers brushed the pendant, and the pendant’s glow flared, illuminating the key in a crimson light. She reached out, the cold of the blade against her palm, and lifted the key. The moment her fingers closed around it, the amber sky above flickered, a ripple of darkness spreading across the horizon. The hum of the hall rose in pitch, a chorus of unseen voices that seemed to chant in a language she could not understand. “Do not let the feast consume you,” Nyx warned, their voice a whisper that seemed to come from every corner of the hall. “The hunger is a veil that feeds on desire.” Aurora’s mind raced. She thought of the scar on her wrist, the accident that had left her with a crescent mark, a reminder that she had survived pain. She thought of the Heartstone Pendant, the unknown benefactor who had given it to her, and the Fae‑Forged Blade that Isolde had entrusted to her. She thought of the veil, the thin barrier between worlds that weakened at the winter solstice, now perhaps at its weakest point. She pressed the key into the altar’s center. The stone gave way with a soft, resonant click, and a hidden compartment opened, revealing a small, obsidian sphere that pulsed with an inner light. The sphere’s surface was smooth, but as she stared, patterns of vines and fruit began to crawl across it, moving like living ink. “Your heart is the portal,” Isolde said, her voice a riddle that seemed to echo in the marble. “When the stone beats, the veil will close, and the feast will end.” Aurora felt the Heartstone Pendant’s pulse quicken, the crimson glow intensifying until it bathed the entire hall in a warm, red light. The amber sky above dimmed, the sun’s molten disc collapsing into a dark sphere that hung low, like a dying ember. The hum of the hall rose to a crescendo, then fell into a deep, resonant silence. She lifted the obsidian sphere, feeling its weight in her hand. The sphere’s glow seemed to sync with the pendant, both beating in unison like a heart. She could feel the veil’s tension, a thin membrane that stretched across the space between worlds. With a decisive motion, she placed the sphere on the altar’s surface, the impact sending a ripple through the marble that spread outward like a stone dropped in a pond. The marble floor cracked, fissures spreading like veins, each one glowing with a faint violet light. The vines on the walls recoiled, their fruit wilting into dust that drifted down like ash. The amber sky cracked, and a thin line of silver light—like a sliver of moon—pierced the darkness, a reminder of the Veil’s presence. Nyx’s form flickered, their violet eyes widening as the veil began to close. “The feast ends,” they whispered, the sound a sigh of relief that seemed to lift the oppressive weight from the hall. Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair flowing as if caught in a gentle breeze that did not exist. She placed a hand on Aurora’s shoulder, her touch cool and comforting. “You have taken the heart,” she said, her voice a riddle that now felt like a promise. “Now the veil will mend, and the hunger will be sated.” Aurora felt the Heartstone Pendant’s pulse slow, the crimson glow dimming to a gentle, steady warmth. The cold of the moonsilver blade returned to her palm, a reminder that she still held the power to cut through wards if needed. She looked around the hall, now empty of the endless banquet, the tables cleared, the vines withered. The marble floor was cracked, but the cracks glowed with a soft violet light, a reminder of the veil’s repair. She turned to Nyx, who now stood fully solid, their shadow form solid as stone. “What will happen to the realm?” Aurora asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “The feast will be a memory,” Nyx replied, their voice a wind that seemed to carry the scent of distant seas. “And the hunger will be a lesson.” Isolde smiled, a faint, enigmatic curve of her lips. “Remember, the veil is strongest at the solstice. When the sun reaches its peak, the worlds will be apart. When it wanes, they will draw close. Keep the pendant close, and the blade near. They will guide you when the veil thins again.” Aurora nodded, feeling the weight of the Heartstone Pendant against her chest, the cold of the blade at her side. She glanced at the obsidian sphere, now dormant, its inner light a faint ember. She could hear the distant rustle of leaves outside the grove, the ordinary world waiting beyond the ancient stones. She stepped back through the arch, the doorway closing behind her with a soft sigh, as if the ancient place exhaled. The amber sky faded, replaced by the familiar green of Richmond Park, the wildflowers blooming year‑round, the ancient oak standing stones silent once more. The veil was whole again, the barrier restored, but the memory of the feast lingered in her mind like a taste that would not fully fade. Nyx’s form dissolved into the shadows, their violet eyes lingering for a moment before disappearing into the night. Isolde’s silver hair caught the moonlight as she turned and walked away, her steps leaving no footprints, her riddles echoing in Aurora’s thoughts. Aurora stood alone for a moment, the Heartstone Pendant warm against her skin, the moonsilver blade cold in her hand. She lifted her gaze to the sky, the stars beginning to prick the darkness. The night was quiet, but she could still feel the faint hum of the veil, a reminder that the worlds were never truly separate. She tucked the pendant deeper beneath her shirt, feeling the scar on her wrist pulse once more, a silent promise that she would be ready when the veil thinned again. She turned and walked toward her flat above Silas’ bar, the streets of London humming with the ordinary sounds of a city that never truly slept. The night air carried the scent of distant food stalls, the clatter of delivery carts, the low murmur of voices. Aurora slipped the Fae‑Forged Blade back into its sheath, the cold metal a comforting weight against her thigh. As she passed the entrance to the bar, a faint violet glow caught her eye—a reminder of Nyx’s lingering presence, a whisper of shadow that seemed to linger just beyond the edge of perception. She smiled, the scar on her wrist catching a glint of streetlight, and stepped inside, the door closing behind her with a soft click that sounded, in its own way, like the final note of a forgotten song.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.65
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2354
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
1"very"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2354
totalAiIsms82
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"etched"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count9
4
word"could feel"
count2
5
word"weight"
count6
6
word"flickered"
count4
7
word"measured"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count6
9
word"tapestry"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count3
11
word"reminder"
count10
12
word"warmth"
count3
13
word"chill"
count2
14
word"vibrated"
count1
15
word"marble"
count8
16
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
17
word"echo"
count3
18
word"comforting"
count3
19
word"scanned"
count1
20
word"flicker"
count1
21
word"resonated"
count1
22
word"echoing"
count2
23
word"pulsed"
count2
24
word"intricate"
count1
25
word"desire"
count1
26
word"raced"
count1
27
word"silence"
count1
28
word"tension"
count1
29
word"oppressive"
count1
30
word"enigmatic"
count1
31
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"sentinels"
2"etched"
3"pulse"
4"could feel"
5"weight"
6"flickered"
7"measured"
8"whisper"
9"tapestry"
10"familiar"
11"reminder"
12"warmth"
13"chill"
14"vibrated"
15"marble"
16"kaleidoscope"
17"echo"
18"comforting"
19"scanned"
20"flicker"
21"resonated"
22"echoing"
23"pulsed"
24"intricate"
25"desire"
26"raced"
27"silence"
28"tension"
29"oppressive"
30"enigmatic"
31"glint"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences109
matches
0"a wave of warmth"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount22
narrationSentences109
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2348
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions65
wordCount2146
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.75
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Isolde12
Heartstone9
Pendant9
Nyx11
Aurora16
Blade3
Veil1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Pendant"
2"Nyx"
3"Aurora"
4"Blade"
5"Veil"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences108
glossingSentenceCount19
matches
0"symbols that seemed to pulse in the half‑light"
1"riddle that seemed to hang in the air like a lingering perfume"
2"figs that seemed to melt into light when touched"
3"edge that seemed to hum with latent power"
4"as if recognizing an old friend, and a low, resonant hum filled the clearing"
5"pulse that seemed to sync with the arch’s hum"
6"perfume that seemed to cling to every breath"
7"voices that seemed to echo from nowhere and everywhere at once"
8"shadows that seemed to move of their own accord"
9"dust that seemed to pulse with a heartbeat of its own"
10"riddle that seemed to echo off the marble"
11"glow that seemed to guide her forward"
12"voices that seemed to chant in a language she could not understand"
13"whisper that seemed to come from every corner of the hall"
14"riddle that seemed to echo in the marble"
15"relief that seemed to lift the oppressive weight from the hall"
16"felt like a promise"
17"wind that seemed to carry the scent of distant seas"
18"shadow that seemed to linger just beyond the edge of perception"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.852
wordCount2348
matches
0"neither sun nor"
1"not merely a visitor but a participant in something far larger than herself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
42.17% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean61.79
std18.39
cv0.298
sampleLengths
094
188
258
394
467
564
669
760
879
935
1094
1171
1254
1370
1441
1580
1660
1763
1859
1932
2075
2156
2231
2359
2473
2555
2634
2758
2877
2929
3028
3152
3253
3371
3441
3588
3664
3772
95.61% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences109
matches
0"was covered"
1"was adorned"
2"were lined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs313
matches
0"were trying"
1"were melting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences117
ratio0.051
matches
0"She could feel the weight of the silver chain around her neck, the tiny crimson Heartstone Pendant thrum against her skin—a soft, warm pulse that grew steadier with each step toward the doorway."
1"The stone was covered in a tapestry of vines that bore fruit of impossible hue—emerald grapes that glowed from within, amber figs that seemed to melt into light when touched."
2"A crack opened, a wound in the veil that revealed a glimpse of another world—a sky of amber, endless vineyards stretching beyond the horizon, tables set with platters of food that defied gravity, floating in mid‑air like constellations."
3"As she approached the altar, she noticed a series of carvings along its base—tiny figures of humans and fae, each holding a different object: a chalice, a crown, a key."
4"The amber sky cracked, and a thin line of silver light—like a sliver of moon—pierced the darkness, a reminder of the Veil’s presence."
5"As she passed the entrance to the bar, a faint violet glow caught her eye—a reminder of Nyx’s lingering presence, a whisper of shadow that seemed to linger just beyond the edge of perception."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2170
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount47
adverbRatio0.02165898617511521
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.005069124423963134
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
81.22% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean20.07
std7.09
cv0.353
sampleLengths
035
126
233
322
430
527
69
719
818
921
1010
1130
1223
1331
1421
1516
1630
178
1820
1919
2017
2116
2217
2323
2413
257
2615
2738
2821
2930
3028
3118
3217
338
3422
3520
3620
3724
3823
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4026
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4217
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446
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32.05% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.1794871794871795
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.89% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences109
matches
0"She could feel the weight"
1"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
2"She felt a familiar tug"
3"She slipped the Heartstone Pendant"
4"she asked, her voice low"
5"She could hear the faint"
6"She drew it slowly, feeling"
7"She took a breath, inhaling"
8"She felt the scar on"
9"she said, her voice barely"
10"She stepped forward, the Heartstone"
11"She could hear the distant"
12"Their violet eyes scanned the"
13"She raised a hand, and"
14"She drew it, the edge"
15"She slipped the dagger into"
16"She walked toward the altar,"
17"She reached out, the cold"
18"She thought of the scar"
19"She thought of the Heartstone"
ratio0.33
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount105
totalSentences109
matches
0"Aurora’s breath caught on the"
1"The oak standing stones that"
2"She could feel the weight"
3"The veil between worlds was"
4"The half‑fae’s pale lavender eyes"
5"Isolde whispered, her voice a"
6"Nyx hovered at Aurora’s side,"
7"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
8"Nyx murmured, the words barely"
9"Aurora’s bright blue eyes narrowed"
10"The stone was covered in"
11"The arch itself was adorned"
12"She felt a familiar tug"
13"She slipped the Heartstone Pendant"
14"The pendant’s warmth intensified, a"
15"The air grew heavier, the"
16"she asked, her voice low"
17"She could hear the faint"
18"The dagger was always cold"
19"She drew it slowly, feeling"
ratio0.963
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences91
technicalSentenceCount26
matches
0"The oak standing stones that marked the boundary of Isolde’s realm loomed like sentinels, their bark etched with symbols that seemed to pulse in the half‑light."
1"She could feel the weight of the silver chain around her neck, the tiny crimson Heartstone Pendant thrum against her skin—a soft, warm pulse that grew steadier …"
2"The half‑fae’s pale lavender eyes flickered with a light that was neither sun nor moon, and her silver hair brushed the moss‑covered stones as she moved, leavin…"
3"Nyx hovered at Aurora’s side, a silhouette of living shadow that shifted between solid and incorporeal with each breath."
4"The stone was covered in a tapestry of vines that bore fruit of impossible hue—emerald grapes that glowed from within, amber figs that seemed to melt into light…"
5"She felt a familiar tug at the scar on her left wrist, the crescent‑shaped reminder of a childhood accident, now tingling as if the stone were trying to draw he…"
6"The air grew heavier, the amber sky above the arch shifting from a warm glow to a deep, liquid gold, as if the sun itself were melting into the horizon."
7"The dagger was always cold to the touch, a thin leaf‑shaped edge that seemed to hum with latent power."
8"The vines recoiled, as if recognizing an old friend, and a low, resonant hum filled the clearing."
9"A crack opened, a wound in the veil that revealed a glimpse of another world—a sky of amber, endless vineyards stretching beyond the horizon, tables set with pl…"
10"The veil’s edge crackled, and a wave of warmth washed over her, the kind of heat that made the skin tingle, like standing near a hearth in a winter night."
11"Aurora found herself standing on a vast marble floor, the surface polished to a mirror sheen that reflected the amber sky above."
12"She could hear the distant clatter of plates, the low murmur of voices that seemed to echo from nowhere and everywhere at once."
13"The sky above was a warm amber, the sun a molten disc that hung low, casting long shadows that seemed to move of their own accord."
14"Isolde appeared a few steps away, her silver hair flowing as if underwater, her lavender eyes fixed on a distant altar at the center of the hall."
15"The altar was a slab of black stone, covered in a thin layer of crimson dust that seemed to pulse with a heartbeat of its own."
16"The floor beneath her feet was warm, the heat radiating from the stone itself, as if the very ground were alive."
17"The Heartstone Pendant at her throat pulsed in rhythm with the hum of the hall, a soft, warm glow that seemed to guide her forward."
18"She thought of the scar on her wrist, the accident that had left her with a crescent mark, a reminder that she had survived pain."
19"She thought of the Heartstone Pendant, the unknown benefactor who had given it to her, and the Fae‑Forged Blade that Isolde had entrusted to her."
20"The amber sky above dimmed, the sun’s molten disc collapsing into a dark sphere that hung low, like a dying ember."
21"The vines on the walls recoiled, their fruit wilting into dust that drifted down like ash."
22"She stepped back through the arch, the doorway closing behind her with a soft sigh, as if the ancient place exhaled."
23"Isolde’s silver hair caught the moonlight as she turned and walked away, her steps leaving no footprints, her riddles echoing in Aurora’s thoughts."
24"As she passed the entrance to the bar, a faint violet glow caught her eye—a reminder of Nyx’s lingering presence, a whisper of shadow that seemed to linger just…"
25"She smiled, the scar on her wrist catching a glint of streetlight, and stepped inside, the door closing behind her with a soft click that sounded, in its own wa…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Nyx murmured, the words barely audible over the rustle of leaves"
1"she asked, her voice low but steady"
2"Nyx said, the whisper sounding like wind through a canyon"
3"she said, her voice a riddle that now felt like a promise"
4"Aurora asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"Nyx warned (warn)"
3"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.55
leniency1
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.364
59.8328%