Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEVGT2PF2WCQBC6DWZE944

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Duration:
56.1s
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$0.000000
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Arcee AI

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station tasted of dust and damp concrete, thick with the weight of decades of neglect. Harlow Quinn stepped over the yellow police tape, her sensible shoes clicking against the platform edge with military precision. The forensic team had already marked the scene—numbered cones dotting the grimy tiles where evidence had been collected. "What have we got?" she asked, pulling on latex gloves. PC Davies, a young officer who still looked like he belonged in secondary school, swallowed hard. "Body in the tunnel, Detective. Third one this month with the same... symptoms." "Symptoms?" Quinn's brow furrowed as she followed him toward the dark mouth of the tunnel. Her worn leather watch caught the dim light—ten minutes past midnight. The station had been decommissioned in the sixties, its existence scrubbed from most maps. Perfect place for secrets. They found the body thirty feet in, sprawled across the tracks. The victim was male, mid-thirties, dressed in what had probably been expensive clothes before the decay set in. His skin had taken on a peculiar gray pallor, veins standing out in sharp relief beneath the surface. But it was the eyes that made Quinn pause—completely white, as if the irises had been bleached of all color. "Petechial hemorrhaging?" she asked, kneeling beside the corpse. "None, Detective," Davies replied. "No signs of strangulation. No defensive wounds either. It's like he just... collapsed." Quinn pulled out a small notebook, its pages already filled with observations from the previous two cases. Same location. Same symptoms. Same lack of obvious cause of death. She snapped on a flashlight and began examining the tunnel walls, running her gloved fingers along the grimy surface. "Detective Quinn?" A familiar voice echoed down the tunnel. "I heard you were working this one." She straightened, recognizing the red curls first as Eva Kowalski emerged from the shadows. The occult researcher carried her worn leather satchel, the one that always seemed to hold more books than physically possible. Round glasses caught the light as she approached. "What are you doing here, Evie?" Quinn kept her voice neutral, though her jaw tightened. She'd hoped to avoid this particular complication. Eva shrugged, tucking a stray curl behind her left ear—a nervous habit Quinn had noticed during their previous encounters. "Same as you, probably. Looking for answers that don't add up." Quinn gestured to the body. "This is police business. You shouldn't be here." "Police business that's been keeping me up at night," Eva countered. "Three bodies in a month, all found in locations tied to the Veil Market. That's not coincidence." "The Veil Market moved locations three weeks ago," Quinn said, though her stomach tightened at the confirmation. She'd been trying to keep that detail out of the official reports. "This station hasn't been active in decades." Eva knelt beside the body, pulling out a small magnifying glass from her satchel. "Tell me, Detective, have you noticed the pattern in the decay? It's accelerating. Each victim shows more advanced symptoms than the last." Quinn watched as Eva examined the corpse's hands, noting the peculiar gray discoloration that seemed to emanate from beneath the nails. "What are you suggesting?" "I'm suggesting someone's experimenting," Eva said, standing. "Testing the limits of whatever they're using. And they're getting better at it." A theory began forming in Quinn's mind, pieces clicking together like a puzzle she hadn't known she was solving. She moved to the tunnel wall, running her fingers along a particular section where the grime seemed... different. More concentrated. "What are you looking for?" Eva asked, joining her. Quinn pulled out her flashlight, angling it to catch the wall at a specific angle. There, barely visible in the grime, was a pattern of scratches—five parallel lines, repeated at intervals. She pulled a small evidence bag from her pocket, using tweezers to extract something from between the tiles. "What is it?" Eva leaned closer. Quinn held up the small brass object—a compass, its casing tarnished with verdigris, protective sigils etched into its face. The needle spun wildly, never settling on north. "I've seen this before," Eva breathed. "It's a Veil Compass. They're attuned to supernatural energy, used to navigate between realms." Quinn's mind raced back to her partner's disappearance three years ago. Morris had been investigating similar deaths, had found a compass just like this one clutched in a victim's hand. She'd always assumed it was a red herring, something to throw them off the trail. But now, standing in this abandoned station with three bodies and a pattern that refused to make sense, Quinn felt the first real crack in her carefully constructed worldview. "Where does it point?" she asked, watching the needle continue its erratic dance. Eva took the compass, holding it away from the metal rails. The needle jerked, then steadied, pointing deeper into the tunnel. "That way. But Detective..." She hesitated. "The Veil Market doesn't just move locations. It moves between realms. If this compass is leading somewhere, it might not be anywhere on Earth." Quinn's military training screamed at her to dismiss such nonsense. But her detective's instincts, honed over eighteen years on the force, whispered that Eva might be right. The evidence was right here, defying explanation through conventional means. She pulled out her radio. "Davies, I need the tunnel sealed. No one comes in or out without my authorization." The response crackled back, confused but compliant. Quinn turned to Eva, noting how the researcher's green eyes had gone wide behind her glasses. "You believe me," Eva said, almost wonderingly. "I believe the evidence," Quinn corrected, though her voice lacked its usual certainty. "But I need to know everything you know about these compasses. And about the Veil Market." Eva nodded, her fingers already reaching for her satchel. "There's something else, Detective. Something I didn't want to say in front of the others." She lowered her voice. "The decay pattern on these victims—it's similar to what happens when someone crosses between realms without proper protection. Like their bodies can't handle the transition." Quinn felt a chill that had nothing to do with the tunnel's temperature. "You're saying these people were trying to access the Veil Market directly?" "Not just access it," Eva said grimly. "I think they were trying to control it." The compass needle twitched in Quinn's hand, spinning faster now, as if responding to their conversation. She slipped it into an evidence bag, sealing it carefully. "Then we need to find out who's conducting these experiments," Quinn said, her voice hardening with purpose. "And why they're leaving bodies behind as they perfect their technique." Eva fell into step beside her as they made their way back toward the platform, the weight of unspoken understanding settling between them. For eighteen years, Quinn had built her career on facts, on evidence that could be measured and cataloged. But standing there, with the compass's wild needle pointing toward secrets she'd spent three years trying to forget, she realized some truths required a different kind of investigation. One that might lead them far beyond the boundaries of conventional police work. And possibly beyond the boundaries of their world entirely.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said grimly [grimly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.514
leniency1
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.053
87.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1198
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
highlights
0"completely"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1198
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"furrowed"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"navigate"
count1
8
word"raced"
count1
9
word"constructed"
count1
10
word"dance"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
12
word"unspoken"
count1
13
word"measured"
count1
14
word"cataloged"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"furrowed"
2"perfect"
3"familiar"
4"echoed"
5"stomach"
6"etched"
7"navigate"
8"raced"
9"constructed"
10"dance"
11"chill"
12"unspoken"
13"measured"
14"cataloged"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences74
matches
0"felt a chill"
84.94% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences74
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1190
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
27.34% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount856
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.45
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Quinn21
Davies2
Eva16
Kowalski1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Davies"
2"Eva"
3"Kowalski"
places(empty)
globalScore0.273
windowScore0.333
18.42% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like he belonged in secondary scho"
1"discoloration that seemed to emanate from beneath the nails"
2"as if responding to their conversation"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1190
matches(empty)
94.20% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"keep that detail"
1"whispered that Eva"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean29.02
std16.27
cv0.56
sampleLengths
058
110
229
344
467
58
617
747
816
942
1022
1130
1213
1328
1436
1536
1625
1720
1839
199
2049
216
2227
2320
2445
2529
2613
2751
2837
2920
3023
317
3229
3353
3425
3515
3626
3728
3869
3913
409
91.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences74
matches
0"been collected"
1"been decommissioned"
2"been bleached"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was solving"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences92
ratio0.065
matches
0"The forensic team had already marked the scene—numbered cones dotting the grimy tiles where evidence had been collected."
1"Her worn leather watch caught the dim light—ten minutes past midnight."
2"But it was the eyes that made Quinn pause—completely white, as if the irises had been bleached of all color."
3"Eva shrugged, tucking a stray curl behind her left ear—a nervous habit Quinn had noticed during their previous encounters."
4"There, barely visible in the grime, was a pattern of scratches—five parallel lines, repeated at intervals."
5"Quinn held up the small brass object—a compass, its casing tarnished with verdigris, protective sigils etched into its face."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount863
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.03244495944380069
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.012746234067207415
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean12.93
std5.96
cv0.461
sampleLengths
021
119
218
310
416
513
615
711
814
94
1011
1118
1218
1320
148
154
1613
1717
182
192
207
2119
229
237
2414
2520
268
2715
287
2919
3011
315
328
3311
3417
3517
3612
377
3814
3922
4021
414
427
4313
4419
4517
461
472
489
4915
72.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.44565217391304346
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences66
matches
0"she asked, pulling on latex"
1"Her worn leather watch caught"
2"They found the body thirty"
3"His skin had taken on"
4"she asked, kneeling beside the"
5"She snapped on a flashlight"
6"She straightened, recognizing the red"
7"She'd hoped to avoid this"
8"She'd been trying to keep"
9"She moved to the tunnel"
10"She pulled a small evidence"
11"She'd always assumed it was"
12"she asked, watching the needle"
13"She pulled out her radio."
14"She lowered her voice"
15"She slipped it into an"
ratio0.242
35.76% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences66
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Harlow Quinn stepped over the"
2"The forensic team had already"
3"she asked, pulling on latex"
4"PC Davies, a young officer"
5"Quinn's brow furrowed as she"
6"Her worn leather watch caught"
7"The station had been decommissioned"
8"They found the body thirty"
9"The victim was male, mid-thirties,"
10"His skin had taken on"
11"she asked, kneeling beside the"
12"Quinn pulled out a small"
13"She snapped on a flashlight"
14"A familiar voice echoed down"
15"She straightened, recognizing the red"
16"The occult researcher carried her"
17"Quinn kept her voice neutral,"
18"She'd hoped to avoid this"
19"Eva shrugged, tucking a stray"
ratio0.848
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.59% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Quinn watched as Eva examined the corpse's hands, noting the peculiar gray discoloration that seemed to emanate from beneath the nails."
1"But now, standing in this abandoned station with three bodies and a pattern that refused to make sense, Quinn felt the first real crack in her carefully constru…"
2"The compass needle twitched in Quinn's hand, spinning faster now, as if responding to their conversation."
19.74% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn kept, though her jaw tightened"
1"Quinn said, though her stomach tightened at the confirmation"
2"Quinn corrected, though her voice lacked its usual certainty"
3"Quinn said, her voice hardening with purpose"
95.95% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Eva breathed (breathe)"
1"Quinn corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.324
leniency0.649
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.108
74.8868%