Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEVHR6VW0APFVY0E3KJGVE

Run Details

Duration:
27.4s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Arcee AI

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The forest around them seemed to shift and breathe as they moved deeper into Richmond Park. The air grew thick with the scent of honeysuckle and something else — something ancient and faintly metallic, like blood mixed with moonlight. Rory felt a prickle along her skin, the same sensation she'd experienced when holding Isolde's pendant too long. The Heartstone was warm against her chest, pulsing gently as if trying to match the rhythm of her heartbeat. "Stay close," Nyx murmured, their form shifting between shadow and solidity as they moved. "The Grove doesn't like strangers." The trees here were different from the ones they'd passed earlier. These were ancient oaks with bark like weathered stone, their branches twisting into shapes that seemed almost deliberate — faces and symbols carved by time itself. Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors, petals that shimmered between purple and silver as the light caught them. Rory reached out to touch one, and it dissolved into mist at her fingertips. "Careful," Isolde warned, her silver hair catching the dappled light that filtered through the canopy. "The flora here responds to intent. Curiosity is welcome. Greed is not." They emerged into a clearing where standing stones rose from the earth like silent sentinels. The stones were carved with swirling patterns that seemed to move when Rory wasn't looking directly at them. At the center of the clearing stood a single massive oak, its trunk wider than a car and its branches reaching toward the sky like fingers grasping for stars. Isolde stepped forward, her bare feet making no sound on the mossy ground. "Welcome to the boundary between worlds," she said, her voice carrying the weight of centuries. "The Veil is thin here. You can almost see it, can't you?" Rory squinted, and for a moment she thought she saw it — a faint shimmering in the air, like heat rising from pavement on a summer day, but with colors that didn't exist in the natural world. Violet and silver and something deeper, darker. The Heartstone pulsed faster against her skin. Nyx moved to the base of the great oak, their shadow-form flowing up the bark like ink in water. "The portal is active," they whispered, their voice carrying that strange echo that always accompanied them. "Someone has been here recently." "Impossible," Isolde said sharply. "This grove is hidden even from the Fae. Only those with the Sight can find it, and even then, only if I wish to be found." Rory felt a chill despite the warm afternoon air. She'd learned to trust Isolde's certainty, but something about the way Nyx's violet eyes glowed told her they weren't wrong. Someone had been here. Recently. The clearing began to change around them. The standing stones seemed to lean closer, their carved patterns glowing with an inner light. The wildflowers rose higher, their stems thickening into something more substantial. Rory's breath caught in her throat as she realized the flowers weren't just responding to their presence — they were watching. "We should leave," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "This doesn't feel right." Isolde's expression softened with understanding. "The Grove tests all who enter. It wants to know if you're worthy of its secrets." She turned to face Rory directly, her pale lavender eyes intense. "But you're right to be cautious. The longer we stay, the more the boundaries blur." Nyx was already moving, their form solidifying into something more human as they approached one of the standing stones. They placed a shadowy hand against the carved surface, and the patterns there flared bright. "There's a trace of Fae magic here," they said, their voice tight with concentration. "But mixed with something else. Something darker." Rory stepped closer, the Heartstone burning hot against her skin now. She could feel the pendant pulling her forward, toward the standing stone where Nyx stood. The carved patterns seemed to call to her, whispering secrets in a language she didn't understand but somehow recognized. "Don't—" Isolde started, but Rory was already reaching out. Her fingers brushed the stone, and the world exploded into sensation. Images flooded her mind — a winter solstice ceremony, Fae nobles in glittering armor, a ritual circle drawn in blood, and at the center of it all, a figure in shadow with eyes like dying stars. The vision shifted, showing her the same figure standing in this very clearing, their hand raised in a gesture of power that made the air itself scream. Rory stumbled back, gasping for breath. The Heartstone was searing against her chest, and when she looked down, she saw that the crimson gem was glowing with an intensity that made her wince. The silver chain felt warm, almost alive against her skin. "What did you see?" Nyx asked, their voice urgent. Rory shook her head, trying to clear the remnants of the vision. "A ritual. Something about the solstice. And someone — someone powerful. Someone who shouldn't be here." Isolde moved to stand beside her, her expression grave. "The winter solstice is approaching. The Veil will be at its weakest then." She glanced at the Heartstone, her eyes widening slightly. "That pendant — where did you get it?" Rory's hand went to the pendant instinctively. "I don't know. It was left for me. With a note that just said 'protect this.'" "The Heartstone of Dymas," Isolde breathed. "Prince Belphegor's own sigil. If what you've seen is true, then someone is planning to use it to tear open the Veil completely." The clearing seemed to darken around them, though the sun was still high in the sky. The wildflowers wilted and then rebloomed in shades of crimson and black. The standing stones groaned as if awakening from a long slumber. "We need to leave," Nyx said, their form already beginning to dissolve into shadow. "Now." But Rory couldn't move. The Heartstone was pulling her toward the great oak at the center of the clearing, its warmth now a steady, comforting presence. She could feel something there — a presence, ancient and patient, waiting for her. Isolde caught her arm. "Rory, no. The Grove is trying to claim you." But Rory was already walking, drawn forward by a force she couldn't name. The Heartstone led her to the base of the oak, where the roots formed natural steps leading down into darkness. She could see now that the tree wasn't just a tree — it was a gateway, its hollow trunk opening into a space that seemed to exist in multiple dimensions at once. "The portal to Dymas," Isolde whispered behind her. "But it's been sealed for centuries." Rory reached the entrance and paused, looking back at her companions. Nyx was fully shadow now, their violet eyes the only solid point in their form. Isolde stood with her hand outstretched, her expression torn between fear and something like hope. "The solstice is three days away," Rory said, her voice steady despite the racing of her heart. "If someone is planning to use the Heartstone to open the Veil, we need to know why. And we need to stop them." She stepped into the darkness of the oak's hollow, the Heartstone blazing like a star against her chest. The last thing she heard before the world folded in on itself was Isolde's voice, soft but clear: "Be careful what you seek, Aurora Carter. Some doors, once opened, can never be closed again."
created_at"2026-02-17T09:28:41.657615+00:00" 2/17/2026, 9:28:41 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said sharply [sharply]"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.469
leniency0.938
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.063
75.57% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1228
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"sharply"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"very"
4"slightly"
5"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1228
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"echo"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count2
8
word"searing"
count1
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"almost alive"
count1
11
word"grave"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"comforting"
count1
14
word"racing"
count1
15
word"the last thing"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"sentinels"
2"weight"
3"pulsed"
4"echo"
5"chill"
6"whisper"
7"could feel"
8"searing"
9"intensity"
10"almost alive"
11"grave"
12"warmth"
13"comforting"
14"racing"
15"the last thing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences69
matches
0"felt a prickle"
1"felt a chill"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1236
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.32% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount956
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.67
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Isolde13
Heartstone8
Rory16
Nyx8
Fae1
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.663
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"as if trying to match the rhythm of her heartbeat"
1"seemed almost deliberate faces and symbols carved by time itself"
2"patterns that seemed to move when Rory wasn't looking directly at them"
3"as if awakening from a long slumber"
4"space that seemed to exist in multiple dimensions at once"
5"something like hope"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1236
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"saw that the"
97.85% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean37.45
std18.45
cv0.492
sampleLengths
076
119
268
327
462
540
651
740
830
934
1054
1115
1247
1355
1445
159
1674
1743
189
1928
2039
2123
2229
2339
2415
2540
2613
2765
2814
2941
3040
3136
3216
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"were carved"
9.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs175
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"were watching"
2"was searing was glowing"
3"was pulling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences86
ratio0.081
matches
0"The air grew thick with the scent of honeysuckle and something else — something ancient and faintly metallic, like blood mixed with moonlight."
1"These were ancient oaks with bark like weathered stone, their branches twisting into shapes that seemed almost deliberate — faces and symbols carved by time itself."
2"Rory squinted, and for a moment she thought she saw it — a faint shimmering in the air, like heat rising from pavement on a summer day, but with colors that didn't exist in the natural world."
3"Rory's breath caught in her throat as she realized the flowers weren't just responding to their presence — they were watching."
4"Images flooded her mind — a winter solstice ceremony, Fae nobles in glittering armor, a ritual circle drawn in blood, and at the center of it all, a figure in shadow with eyes like dying stars."
5"She could feel something there — a presence, ancient and patient, waiting for her."
6"She could see now that the tree wasn't just a tree — it was a gateway, its hollow trunk opening into a space that seemed to exist in multiple dimensions at once."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount950
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03263157894736842
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011578947368421053
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean14.37
std7.52
cv0.523
sampleLengths
016
123
218
319
414
55
611
726
817
914
1015
1112
1215
1318
1429
1513
1615
1712
1837
197
207
2119
2216
235
244
2526
269
2720
284
291
307
3115
3211
3321
3411
354
365
3727
3815
3919
4015
4114
427
4311
4415
4519
469
4711
4836
4927
51.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.36046511627906974
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences67
matches
0"They emerged into a clearing"
1"she said, her voice carrying"
2"they whispered, their voice carrying"
3"She'd learned to trust Isolde's"
4"she said, her voice barely"
5"She turned to face Rory"
6"They placed a shadowy hand"
7"they said, their voice tight"
8"She could feel the pendant"
9"Her fingers brushed the stone,"
10"She glanced at the Heartstone,"
11"She could feel something there"
12"She could see now that"
13"She stepped into the darkness"
ratio0.209
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences67
matches
0"The forest around them seemed"
1"The air grew thick with"
2"Rory felt a prickle along"
3"The Heartstone was warm against"
4"Nyx murmured, their form shifting"
5"The trees here were different"
6"These were ancient oaks with"
7"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors,"
8"Rory reached out to touch"
9"Isolde warned, her silver hair"
10"They emerged into a clearing"
11"The stones were carved with"
12"Isolde stepped forward, her bare"
13"she said, her voice carrying"
14"Rory squinted, and for a"
15"Violet and silver and something"
16"The Heartstone pulsed faster against"
17"Nyx moved to the base"
18"they whispered, their voice carrying"
19"Isolde said sharply"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The Heartstone was warm against her chest, pulsing gently as if trying to match the rhythm of her heartbeat."
1"Wildflowers bloomed in impossible colors, petals that shimmered between purple and silver as the light caught them."
2"At the center of the clearing stood a single massive oak, its trunk wider than a car and its branches reaching toward the sky like fingers grasping for stars."
3"Rory squinted, and for a moment she thought she saw it — a faint shimmering in the air, like heat rising from pavement on a summer day, but with colors that did…"
4"Nyx was already moving, their form solidifying into something more human as they approached one of the standing stones."
5"The vision shifted, showing her the same figure standing in this very clearing, their hand raised in a gesture of power that made the air itself scream."
6"The Heartstone was searing against her chest, and when she looked down, she saw that the crimson gem was glowing with an intensity that made her wince."
7"The standing stones groaned as if awakening from a long slumber."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"Nyx murmured, their form shifting between shadow and solidity as they moved"
1"she said, her voice carrying the weight of centuries"
2"they whispered, their voice carrying that strange echo that always accompanied them"
3"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
4"they said, their voice tight with concentration"
5"Nyx asked, their voice urgent"
6"She glanced, her eyes widening slightly"
7"Nyx said, their form already beginning to dissolve into shadow"
8"Rory said, her voice steady despite the racing of her heart"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde warned (warn)"
2"they whispered (whisper)"
3"Isolde breathed (breathe)"
4"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences32
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.417
effectiveRatio0.313
61.2929%