Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEVZDSVEF4JB2V30A8X4NG

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Duration:
8.1s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Aurora slipped the silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt, feeling the faint thrum of warmth against her wrist. The deep crimson stone pulsed rhythmically, as if matching the quickening beat of her own heart. She had never seen the grove before; the map Eva had handed her was a smear of ink and a single, trembling arrow. The oak standing stones loomed ahead, their bark blackened by centuries, the roots twisting like ancient fingers into the earth. Nyx moved beside her, a silhouette of shifting shadow that seemed to drink the dim light. Their form flickered between solid and vapor, a whisper of violet light tracing the outline of a face that never quite settled. When they spoke, the words were carried on a wind that no one else could hear. “The Veil thins where the stones stand,” they said, and the air around the stones shivered, a ripple of distortion that made the world tilt for a heartbeat. Isolde Varga stood a few steps beyond the stones, her silver hair spilling over her shoulders in a cascade that caught the faint moonlight filtering through the canopy. Her eyes were pale lavender, reflecting a depth that seemed older than the grove itself. She lifted a hand, and the wildflowers around her swayed as if in response to a silent song. “The path you tread is a thread of moonlight,” she murmured, her voice a riddle wrapped in a sigh. “Follow it, and the veil will part.” Aora’s breath fogged in the cool night air, and she could feel the weight of the Fae‑Forged Blade at her hip, the moonsilver dagger cold to the touch. The blade’s faint luminescence glowed brighter as they approached the stones, a thin line of light that seemed to cut through the darkness. She tightened her grip on the hilt, the metal humming against her palm. The stones themselves were ancient, their surfaces etched with runes that pulsed faintly in the moonlight. Each rune was a tiny, flickering ember, a language Aurora could not read but could feel. She stepped forward, the pendant’s warmth intensifying, as if the stone recognized the proximity to the boundary between worlds. The air grew thick, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something sweet, like honeyed incense. A low hum resonated from the stones, a vibration that traveled through the ground into Aurora’s bones. She glanced at Nyx, whose shadowy form seemed to merge with the darkness, becoming one with the night. “Do you feel it?” Aurora asked, voice barely above a whisper. Nyx’s voice answered, a breath that brushed her ear. “The Veil is a veil of light and shadow, thin here, thick elsewhere. It watches, and it is watched.” Isolde stepped forward, her feet leaving no footprints, the grass bending around her as if reluctant to be touched. “The Veil is a barrier, but also a doorway,” she said, her words echoing in a pattern that felt like a puzzle. “It bends for those who carry the heart of the earth and the blade of moonlight.” Aurora’s eyes darted to the pendant, its crimson glow now a steady ember. She could see a faint distortion in the air, a shimmering ripple that stretched like a mirage across the clearing. It was the Veil, visible only to those with supernatural sight. The distortion pulsed in time with her heartbeat, a slow, steady rhythm that seemed to draw her forward. She took a step, then another, feeling the ground shift beneath her. The wildflowers around them bent, their petals turning a luminous violet as if acknowledging the presence of the shade. The air grew colder, and the scent of pine mingled with the sweet perfume of the blossoms. Aurora could hear the distant sound of water, a trickle that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once. The Fae‑Forged Blade in her hand tingled, its cold surface now emitting a faint blue light that matched the violet glow of Nyx’s eyes. She drew the dagger, the moonlight catching the edge, and the blade sang a soft, crystalline note that rang through the clearing. The sound was a chord that resonated with the runes on the stones, causing them to flare brighter for a heartbeat before settling into a steady glow. A low, guttural rumble rose from the earth, and the ground beneath the stones cracked open, revealing a narrow fissure that glowed with an inner amber light. The sky above the grove, usually a muted twilight, shifted to a warm amber hue, the color of a dying sun. Aurora felt a tug at her consciousness, as if the fissure were a mouth waiting to be fed. Nyx’s form coalesced into a more solid shape, their violet eyes narrowing. “A portal,” they whispered. “The heart of Dymas, the realm of gluttony, lies beyond. The Veil is thin here, but it is not a doorway to be entered lightly.” Isolde smiled, a thin, knowing curve of her lips. “The heart of gluttony is a feast of excess, but also a trap of desire. The Heartstone will guide you, but it will also test you.” Aurora felt the pendant’s pulse quicken, a rapid thrum that matched the rhythm of the fissure’s glow. She glanced at the dagger, its coldness now a comforting presence. She could sense the pull of the portal, an invitation to step into a world of indulgence and peril. The air around the fissure smelled of ripe fruit and burnt sugar, an intoxicating blend that made her stomach flutter. She took a breath, letting the scent fill her lungs, and felt the weight of her past— the abusive ex she had fled, the part‑time deliveries, the flat above Silas’ bar—settle like a stone in her gut. She thought of Eva’s desperate call, of the night she had run away, of the unknown benefactor who had given her the pendant. All of it converged into a single purpose: to see what lay beyond the veil. “Are you ready?” Nyx asked, their voice a rustle of leaves. Aurora nodded, the motion small but decisive. She stepped toward the fissure, feeling the ground give way beneath her boots. The moment her foot crossed the threshold, the amber light surged, enveloping her in a warm glow that seemed to seep into her skin. The world tilted, the grove’s wildflowers blurring into a swirl of colors, the oak stones stretching into elongated shadows. The portal’s interior was a cavern of opulent excess. Tables of polished obsidian stretched as far as the eye could see, laden with platters of exotic foods that glimmered with an otherworldly sheen. The air was thick with the scent of roasted meats, spiced honey, and fermented fruits, a perfume that both enticed and repelled. In the distance, a massive throne of crystal sat upon a raised dais, its surface reflecting the amber sky in a kaleidoscope of light. Aurora’s eyes widened, and she could feel the pendant’s warmth surge, a gentle pressure against her wrist as if urging her forward. The dagger in her hand hummed louder, its cold edge now a beacon that cut through the haze. She could hear a low murmur of voices, a chorus of laughter and conversation that seemed to echo from the walls themselves. “Welcome, traveler,” a voice boomed, resonant and deep, reverberating off the stone. “You have entered Dymas, the realm of gluttony. Here, desire is the law, and excess is the currency.” The voice seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere, a disembodied presence that filled the cavern. Aurora turned, trying to locate its source, but the shadows clung to the corners, shifting like living things. Nyx’s silhouette flickered at her side, their violet glow dimming as they slipped into the shadows, becoming one with the darkness. Isolde’s voice floated to her, a whisper that seemed to ride on a breeze that never touched the air. “Remember the Veil, child of earth and moon. The heart will guide, but the feast will test.” Aurora tightened her grip on the dagger, the moonsilver cool against her palm. She could feel the pulse of the Heartstone Pendant syncing with the rhythm of the cavern, a steady beat that matched the thrum of the ancient stone tables. The amber light around her seemed to pulse in time, a living rhythm that guided her steps. She moved deeper, the floor beneath her feet slick with a thin film of oil that glimmered like liquid amber. The tables were empty, yet the scent of food lingered, a phantom feast that teased her senses. In the distance, a figure emerged from the shadows—a tall, gaunt man with a crown of twisted vines and a grin that never reached his eyes. He wore a robe of deep crimson, stitched with threads of gold that caught the light and threw it back in dazzling patterns. “Prince Belphegor,” Aurora whispered, the name echoing in her mind from the codex she had read in a forgotten tome. The prince’s eyes were twin pits of darkness, his smile a slash of malice. “Ah, a mortal with a heart of stone,” Belphegor crooned, his voice a silky rasp. “What brings you to my banquet?” Aurora lifted the dagger, the blade’s cold light cutting through the amber haze. “I seek a passage,” she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her throat. “The Veil is thin, and I have a… gift.” Belphegor chuckled, a sound that sounded like clinking glass. “A gift, you say? The Heartstone? A relic of the mortal realm, pulsing with warmth. You think it will buy you a seat at my table?” The pendant glowed brighter, a crimson flare that illuminated the cavern’s walls. The light seemed to push back the shadows, revealing murals painted in gold and blood—scenes of feasts, of gluttonous revelry, of souls bound in chains of desire. Aurora felt a chill crawl up her spine as she recognized faces from her own past—people she had known, now twisted into grotesque caricatures of excess. Nyx’s whisper brushed her ear, a warning carried on a wind that no one else could hear. “The Veil is a barrier, not a road. You must not be consumed.” Aurora’s mind raced, the riddles of Isolde echoing in her thoughts. “The Veil is a doorway, but also a trap,” she muttered, recalling the half‑elf’s words. She felt the dagger’s edge vibrate, a resonance that seemed to align with the runes on the stone tables. She stepped forward, the amber light swirling around her feet, and placed the dagger on a table. The blade’s cold touched the stone, and a shiver ran through the cavern. The runes on the table ignited, a cascade of violet and amber light that surged upward, forming a vortex of energy that spiraled toward the throne. Belphegor’s grin faltered as the vortex grew, the amber light coalescing into a column that pierced the ceiling, a crack in the realm of gluttony. The scent of excess turned sour, the sweet perfume of the banquet turning to ash. The shadows recoiled, the violet glow of Nyx intensifying as they surged forward, a wave of darkness that seemed to swallow the light. Isolde’s voice rose, a riddle that now felt like a chant. “The heart of the feast is the heart of the stone. When the blade cuts the veil, the feast ends, and the night is reborn.” Aurora felt the pendant’s pressure increase, a gentle but insistent push against her wrist. She lifted the dagger, now humming with an ethereal resonance, and thrust it toward the vortex. The blade sliced through the amber column, a clean, precise cut that split the light like a knife through silk. The vortex shuddered, and the cavern trembled. The amber light fractured, shards of glow raining down like meteors. The tables collapsed, the feasting plates shattering into a spray of glittering dust. Belphegor’s form wavered, his crown of vines unraveling, his grin dissolving into a howl of rage. The shadows surged, but Nyx’s violet form expanded, a protective veil that wrapped around Aurora, shielding her from the darkness. The Heartstone Pendant flared, a crimson beacon that pulsed in rhythm with Aurora’s heartbeat. The dagger’s cold touch became a conduit, a bridge that linked the broken veil to the world beyond. The space around them rippled, the distortion of the Veil thinning to a translucent membrane that shimmered like heat over a desert road. Through the membrane, Aurora could see the grove again—the ancient oak stones, the wildflowers, the moonlit sky. The amber glow of Dymas faded, replaced by the soft, silvery luminescence of the Fae realm. The air smelled of pine and night-blooming jasmine, a scent that calmed her racing pulse. Nyx’s voice, now a comforting whisper, brushed her ear. “You have cut the veil, child of earth and moon. The path is open, but the journey is yours to choose.” Aurora looked at the pendant, its crimson glow now steady, a heart beating in time with the world. She glanced at the dagger, its moonsilver blade still cold, now humming with a faint, lingering resonance. The shadows around her receded, the violet light of Nyx dimming as the darkness dissolved into the night. Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair shimmering in the moonlight, her eyes reflecting the pale lavender of the Fae realm. “You have walked the thread of moonlight and heart,” she said, her voice a riddle wrapped in a sigh. “Now, the veil is yours to guard.” Aurora felt the weight of the moment settle upon her shoulders like a cloak. The ancient oak stones stood silent, their runes now dimmed, the veil between worlds repaired but not sealed. The grove’s wildflowers swayed, their petals catching the moon’s gentle glow, as if acknowledging her triumph. She slipped the Heartstone Pendant back beneath her shirt, the warmth against her wrist now a quiet, steady pulse. The dagger rested at her side, its coldness a comforting reminder of the night’s battle. Nyx’s shadow lingered at the edge of the clearing, a silent guardian, while Isolde’s voice faded into the night, a promise of riddles yet to be solved. Aurora inhaled the crisp air, feeling the night settle around her like a soft blanket. The world beyond the grove seemed to hold its breath, the veil humming faintly with the memory of the portal she had closed. She turned, her eyes scanning the ancient stones, the path that had led them here, and the road that stretched ahead, unseen but waiting. The night was quiet, save for the distant rustle of leaves and the faint, lingering echo of a heartbeat that belonged not to a mortal, but to the world itself. Aurora smiled, a thin, determined line, and stepped forward, the Fae‑Forged Blade catching the moonlight as she walked toward the unseen future.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2479
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
1"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2479
totalAiIsms67
found
0
word"warmth"
count5
1
word"pulsed"
count4
2
word"loomed"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count5
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count4
7
word"weight"
count3
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"resonated"
count2
10
word"echoing"
count3
11
word"crystalline"
count1
12
word"desire"
count3
13
word"pulse"
count5
14
word"comforting"
count3
15
word"peril"
count1
16
word"stomach"
count1
17
word"otherworldly"
count1
18
word"crystal"
count1
19
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
20
word"beacon"
count2
21
word"echo"
count2
22
word"chill"
count1
23
word"raced"
count1
24
word"resonance"
count3
25
word"silk"
count1
26
word"trembled"
count1
27
word"fractured"
count1
28
word"wavered"
count1
29
word"unraveling"
count1
30
word"shimmered"
count1
31
word"racing"
count1
32
word"reminder"
count1
33
word"scanning"
count1
34
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"loomed"
3"flickered"
4"whisper"
5"tracing"
6"could feel"
7"weight"
8"etched"
9"resonated"
10"echoing"
11"crystalline"
12"desire"
13"pulse"
14"comforting"
15"peril"
16"stomach"
17"otherworldly"
18"crystal"
19"kaleidoscope"
20"beacon"
21"echo"
22"chill"
23"raced"
24"resonance"
25"silk"
26"trembled"
27"fractured"
28"wavered"
29"unraveling"
30"shimmered"
31"racing"
32"reminder"
33"scanning"
34"determined"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
2
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"The air was thick with"
2"the weight of the moment"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences124
matches
0"felt a tug"
1"felt a chill"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount14
narrationSentences124
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2473
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.50% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount2162
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Pendant4
Eva2
Isolde8
Varga1
Aora1
Blade3
Aurora24
Nyx13
Veil2
Belphegor4
Dymas1
Fae5
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Eva"
2"Isolde"
3"Varga"
4"Aora"
5"Blade"
6"Aurora"
7"Nyx"
8"Veil"
9"Belphegor"
10"Dymas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.945
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences123
glossingSentenceCount17
matches
0"as if matching the quickening beat of her own heart"
1"shadow that seemed to drink the dim light"
2"seemed older than the grove itself"
3"light that seemed to cut through the darkness"
4"felt like a puzzle"
5"rhythm that seemed to draw her forward"
6"as if acknowledging the presence of the shade"
7"trickle that seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once"
8"glow that seemed to seep into her skin"
9"as if urging her forward"
10"conversation that seemed to echo from the walls themselves"
11"whisper that seemed to ride on a breeze that never touched the air"
12"sounded like clinking glass"
13"resonance that seemed to align with the runes on the stone tables"
14"darkness that seemed to swallow the light"
15"felt like a chant"
16"as if acknowledging her triumph"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.404
wordCount2473
matches
0"not to a mortal, but to the world itself"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences138
matches(empty)
50.71% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean53.76
std17.61
cv0.327
sampleLengths
080
182
287
364
468
546
628
757
862
968
1073
1166
1241
1335
1467
1575
1611
1763
1879
1962
2030
2155
2236
2358
2486
2534
2621
2737
2835
2965
3030
3145
3256
3363
3436
3557
3660
3755
3848
3930
4053
4146
4248
4361
4462
4552
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences124
matches
0"were carried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs328
matches(empty)
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences138
ratio0.043
matches
0"She had never seen the grove before; the map Eva had handed her was a smear of ink and a single, trembling arrow."
1"She took a breath, letting the scent fill her lungs, and felt the weight of her past— the abusive ex she had fled, the part‑time deliveries, the flat above Silas’ bar—settle like a stone in her gut."
2"In the distance, a figure emerged from the shadows—a tall, gaunt man with a crown of twisted vines and a grin that never reached his eyes."
3"The light seemed to push back the shadows, revealing murals painted in gold and blood—scenes of feasts, of gluttonous revelry, of souls bound in chains of desire."
4"Aurora felt a chill crawl up her spine as she recognized faces from her own past—people she had known, now twisted into grotesque caricatures of excess."
5"Through the membrane, Aurora could see the grove again—the ancient oak stones, the wildflowers, the moonlit sky."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2176
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.015165441176470588
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.003216911764705882
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
66.64% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean17.92
std5.67
cv0.317
sampleLengths
021
116
223
320
416
522
616
728
828
915
1018
1119
127
1328
1423
1513
1616
1716
1819
1917
2017
2118
2211
239
2419
2519
2622
2716
2813
2920
3011
3118
3212
3319
3417
3520
3624
3722
3827
3927
4021
4118
4212
434
4425
459
4626
4717
4811
4919
37.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.21014492753623187
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences123
matches
0"She had never seen the"
1"Their form flickered between solid"
2"they said, and the air"
3"Her eyes were pale lavender,"
4"She lifted a hand, and"
5"she murmured, her voice a"
6"She tightened her grip on"
7"She stepped forward, the pendant’s"
8"She glanced at Nyx, whose"
9"she said, her words echoing"
10"She could see a faint"
11"It was the Veil, visible"
12"She took a step, then"
13"She drew the dagger, the"
14"She glanced at the dagger,"
15"She could sense the pull"
16"She took a breath, letting"
17"She thought of Eva’s desperate"
18"She stepped toward the fissure,"
19"She could hear a low"
ratio0.26
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences123
matches
0"Aurora slipped the silver chain"
1"The deep crimson stone pulsed"
2"She had never seen the"
3"The oak standing stones loomed"
4"Nyx moved beside her, a"
5"Their form flickered between solid"
6"they said, and the air"
7"Isolde Varga stood a few"
8"Her eyes were pale lavender,"
9"She lifted a hand, and"
10"she murmured, her voice a"
11"Aora’s breath fogged in the"
12"The blade’s faint luminescence glowed"
13"She tightened her grip on"
14"The stones themselves were ancient,"
15"Each rune was a tiny,"
16"She stepped forward, the pendant’s"
17"The air grew thick, heavy"
18"A low hum resonated from"
19"She glanced at Nyx, whose"
ratio0.959
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences104
technicalSentenceCount32
matches
0"The deep crimson stone pulsed rhythmically, as if matching the quickening beat of her own heart."
1"Nyx moved beside her, a silhouette of shifting shadow that seemed to drink the dim light."
2"Isolde Varga stood a few steps beyond the stones, her silver hair spilling over her shoulders in a cascade that caught the faint moonlight filtering through the…"
3"Her eyes were pale lavender, reflecting a depth that seemed older than the grove itself."
4"The blade’s faint luminescence glowed brighter as they approached the stones, a thin line of light that seemed to cut through the darkness."
5"She stepped forward, the pendant’s warmth intensifying, as if the stone recognized the proximity to the boundary between worlds."
6"Isolde stepped forward, her feet leaving no footprints, the grass bending around her as if reluctant to be touched."
7"She could see a faint distortion in the air, a shimmering ripple that stretched like a mirage across the clearing."
8"The distortion pulsed in time with her heartbeat, a slow, steady rhythm that seemed to draw her forward."
9"The wildflowers around them bent, their petals turning a luminous violet as if acknowledging the presence of the shade."
10"The Fae‑Forged Blade in her hand tingled, its cold surface now emitting a faint blue light that matched the violet glow of Nyx’s eyes."
11"She drew the dagger, the moonlight catching the edge, and the blade sang a soft, crystalline note that rang through the clearing."
12"The sound was a chord that resonated with the runes on the stones, causing them to flare brighter for a heartbeat before settling into a steady glow."
13"A low, guttural rumble rose from the earth, and the ground beneath the stones cracked open, revealing a narrow fissure that glowed with an inner amber light."
14"She thought of Eva’s desperate call, of the night she had run away, of the unknown benefactor who had given her the pendant."
15"The moment her foot crossed the threshold, the amber light surged, enveloping her in a warm glow that seemed to seep into her skin."
16"Tables of polished obsidian stretched as far as the eye could see, laden with platters of exotic foods that glimmered with an otherworldly sheen."
17"Aurora’s eyes widened, and she could feel the pendant’s warmth surge, a gentle pressure against her wrist as if urging her forward."
18"She could hear a low murmur of voices, a chorus of laughter and conversation that seemed to echo from the walls themselves."
19"She could feel the pulse of the Heartstone Pendant syncing with the rhythm of the cavern, a steady beat that matched the thrum of the ancient stone tables."
20"The amber light around her seemed to pulse in time, a living rhythm that guided her steps."
21"She moved deeper, the floor beneath her feet slick with a thin film of oil that glimmered like liquid amber."
22"The runes on the table ignited, a cascade of violet and amber light that surged upward, forming a vortex of energy that spiraled toward the throne."
23"The shadows recoiled, the violet glow of Nyx intensifying as they surged forward, a wave of darkness that seemed to swallow the light."
24"Belphegor’s form wavered, his crown of vines unraveling, his grin dissolving into a howl of rage."
25"The shadows surged, but Nyx’s violet form expanded, a protective veil that wrapped around Aurora, shielding her from the darkness."
26"The space around them rippled, the distortion of the Veil thinning to a translucent membrane that shimmered like heat over a desert road."
27"The air smelled of pine and night-blooming jasmine, a scent that calmed her racing pulse."
28"Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair shimmering in the moonlight, her eyes reflecting the pale lavender of the Fae realm."
29"The grove’s wildflowers swayed, their petals catching the moon’s gentle glow, as if acknowledging her triumph."
30"She turned, her eyes scanning the ancient stones, the path that had led them here, and the road that stretched ahead, unseen but waiting."
31"The night was quiet, save for the distant rustle of leaves and the faint, lingering echo of a heartbeat that belonged not to a mortal, but to the world itself."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"she murmured, her voice a riddle wrapped in a sigh"
1"Aurora asked, voice barely above a whisper"
2"Nyx asked, their voice a rustle of leaves"
3"Belphegor crooned, his voice a silky rasp"
4"she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her throat"
5"she said, her voice a riddle wrapped in a sigh"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
3"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.308
61.0264%