Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEW33M9ACRNKBBNH63ETP2

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Duration:
1m 34s
Cost:
$0.216360

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past midnight, three sharp raps that cut through the ambient noise of Brick Lane. Aurora paused, chopsticks hovering over her takeaway container. Nobody visited Eva's flat this late—especially not when Eva was in Prague chasing down some thirteenth-century grimoire. She set down the noodles and crept to the door, pressing her eye to the peephole. Her stomach dropped. Lucien Moreau stood in the narrow hallway, platinum hair gleaming under the flickering fluorescent light. His charcoal suit looked immaculate despite the late hour, though she noticed his ivory-handled cane bore more weight than usual. Aurora's hand hesitated on the first deadbolt. Six months. Six months since she'd told him exactly what she thought of his manipulative games, his careful omissions, his— Another knock, softer this time. "Rory. I know you're there." That accent still did things to her pulse she'd rather not examine. She flipped the deadbolts—all three—and cracked the door, keeping the chain on. "Eva's in Prague." "I'm not here for Eva." His heterochromatic eyes found hers, amber and black in the dim light. A thin cut traced his left cheekbone, still fresh enough to glisten. "Then you've wasted a trip." She started to close the door, but his hand shot out, palm flat against the wood. "Please." The word came out rough, un-Lucien-like in its rawness. "Five minutes." She should slam the door. She should tell him to go to hell—though given his parentage, that might be redundant. Instead, she found herself studying that cut on his face, the slight tremor in his cane hand, the way his usually perfect hair had begun to escape its styling. "You're bleeding," she said. "Occupational hazard." His lips quirked in that half-smile she'd once found irresistible. Now it just made her angry. "Not my problem anymore." "No," he agreed quietly. "It's not." Something in his tone made her pause. Lucien Moreau never admitted defeat, never showed weakness. Yet here he stood, bleeding and favoring his left leg, asking for five minutes like a man out of options. Ptolemy chose that moment to wind around her ankles, meowing plaintively. The traitorous cat had always liked Lucien. "Five minutes," she said, unhooking the chain. "And you're not dripping blood on Eva's carpet." He stepped inside, movements careful and controlled. Up close, she could see the damage better—the cut on his cheek, yes, but also the way he held his right arm close to his body, the slight hitch in his breathing that suggested bruised ribs. "Bathroom," she ordered, locking the door behind him. "Eva keeps a first aid kit under the sink." He followed her through the maze of books and research materials, his cane tapping a syncopated rhythm on the hardwood. The bathroom was barely large enough for one person; with both of them, the space felt charged, electric. Aurora grabbed the kit and pointed to the toilet lid. "Sit." "I didn't come here for—" "Sit, Lucien, or get out." He sat, setting his cane carefully against the wall. She pulled on latex gloves with perhaps more force than necessary and tilted his face toward the light. The cut was clean but deep, already trying to heal with that unsettling demon quickness. "Who?" she asked, dabbing antiseptic on a cotton pad. "The Corvelli family discovered I'd been feeding them false information about their smuggling routes." He didn't flinch as she cleaned the wound, though his jaw tightened. "They expressed their disappointment enthusiastically." "And you came here?" She pressed a butterfly bandage over the cut, trying to ignore how familiar this felt—patching him up after whatever scheme had gone sideways. "To Eva's flat, where anyone could have followed you?" "I wasn't followed." "You can't know that." His hand caught her wrist, gentle but firm. "Rory. I wasn't followed." She jerked away, stripping off the gloves. "Right. Because you're always so careful. So calculating. Never a move without three contingency plans." "You're angry." "Brilliant deduction." She threw the gloves in the bin harder than necessary. "What gave it away? The part where I haven't spoken to you in six months, or the part where I'm only helping you now because I'm not a complete monster?" He stood slowly, reaching for his cane. "I should go." "You should." But she didn't move from the doorway, blocking his exit. "Why are you really here, Lucien?" His eyes—one amber, one black—met hers with an intensity that made her breath catch. "The Corvellis know about you." Ice flooded her veins. "What?" "They know you were involved in disrupting their operations last winter. They know where you live, where you work." His knuckles whitened on the cane handle. "I've been keeping them distracted, feeding them false leads, but after tonight..." "You've been protecting me." The words tasted bitter. "For six months, you've been—why? Why would you do that?" "You know why." "No, I really don't." The anger was easier than the alternative, easier than acknowledging the fear threading through her chest. "You made it very clear that I was just another asset, another piece on your chessboard—" "You were never that." The words came out sharp, almost angry. "Whatever else you think of me, whatever lies you believe I told, you were never just an asset." "Then what was I?" She stepped closer, close enough to see the faint demonic flame that flickered in his black eye when his control slipped. "What am I?" He laughed, short and humorless. "The one thing I couldn't plan for. The variable that ruined every carefully laid scheme, simply by existing." "Don't." She backed away, hitting the sink. "Don't do this now. Don't show up bleeding and tell me the Corvellis want me dead and then—" "I love you." The words hung between them like a blade. "I have loved you," he continued, voice steady despite the way his hand trembled on the cane, "since the moment you threw a pint of Guinness in my face for lying about that pixie trafficking ring. I love your quick thinking and your terrible jokes and the way you eat lo mein with chopsticks even though you're awful at it. I love that you see through every facade I've ever constructed and still somehow thought I was worth knowing." Aurora's throat burned. "You lied to me. About the trafficking ring, about your connections, about—" "Yes." No excuses, no justifications. Just that single word, heavy with regret. "You used me to get to the Corvelli shipment." "Initially." He took a step closer, and she had nowhere left to retreat. "But by then, it was already too late. You'd already—" He stopped, jaw working. "It doesn't matter. I came to warn you. Pack what you need. I have a safe house prepared." "I'm not going anywhere with you." "Rory—" "No." The word came out stronger than she felt. "You don't get to do this. You don't get to waltz back into my life because some crime family wants me dead. I've handled worse than the Corvellis." "Not like this." His hand rose like he might touch her face, then dropped. "They have a blood mage, Rory. One drop of your blood and they can track you anywhere. Kill you from across the city." The fear she'd been suppressing bloomed cold in her chest. Blood magic was old, dangerous, and very, very illegal. "How long do I have?" "They'll move at dawn. They always do—something about the symbolic nature of new light bringing judgment." His laugh was bitter. "Criminals and their dramatics." Dawn. Less than five hours. "Eva's wards—" "Won't hold against blood magic. You know this." She did. Eva's protections were strong but specific, designed for the everyday supernatural threats of London. Blood magic was different. Older. Darker. Ptolemy meowed from the doorway, tail swishing anxiously. "Where's this safe house?" she asked finally. Relief flickered across his features before he controlled it. "Southwark. Warded by someone who owes me enough favors to keep quiet." "And after? Once the Corvellis realize I've gone to ground?" "I'll handle them." "Like you handled them tonight?" She gestured to his injuries. "Tonight I was caught off guard. That won't happen again." The black eye flared brighter, a promise of violence barely contained. "Pack light. We leave in twenty minutes." "We?" She pushed past him, heading for Eva's bedroom where she'd been sleeping. "I don't recall agreeing to 'we.'" He followed, that damned cane tapping against the floor. "You think I'd take you to the safe house and leave? They'll use you to get to me, Rory. The moment they realize I care—" "Do you?" She yanked a duffel bag from under the bed, shoving clothes in without looking at him. "Because six months ago, you made it very clear that caring was a liability in your line of work." "I was trying to protect you." "By breaking my heart?" The words escaped before she could stop them, raw and honest in the cluttered bedroom. Silence stretched between them, broken only by Ptolemy's anxious pacing. "Yes," he said quietly. "It seemed kinder than letting you love someone who could only bring danger to your door. Yet here we are, danger at your door anyway, and I... I find I'm too selfish to stay away any longer." She zipped the bag with shaking hands. "This doesn't change anything. Once the Corvelli situation is handled, we're done. I go back to my life, you go back to yours." "If that's what you want." "It is." She grabbed her jacket, her keys, the small knife Eva had enchanted for her. "Let's go." But as they prepared to leave Eva's flat, Aurora caught sight of them in the hallway mirror—her with her hastily packed bag and sleep-mussed hair, him elegant even when injured, both of them reflected in the glass like some twisted portrait. The woman who'd learned to guard her heart and the half-demon who'd taught her why. "For what it's worth," Lucien said softly, meeting her eyes in the mirror, "breaking your heart broke mine too." She looked away first, unable to process that admission with dawn approaching and death on their heels. "Save it for after we survive the night." "Optimistic of you to assume I'll survive what you'll do to me once you're safe." Despite everything, her lips twitched. "Extremely optimistic." He smiled then, that real smile she'd seen so rarely, the one that transformed his carefully composed features into something devastatingly genuine. "I've missed you too, Rory." She didn't trust herself to respond, so she pulled open the door instead, stepping into the narrow hallway. Behind them, Ptolemy meowed a mournful goodbye. They had four hours until dawn, a city full of enemies, and six months of unfinished business between them. Aurora gripped her bag tighter and followed Lucien into the London night, telling herself she was only doing this to survive. She'd always been a terrible liar.
total_cost0.21636

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags33
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"he agreed quietly [quietly]"
1"she asked finally [finally]"
2"he said quietly [quietly]"
3"Lucien said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences93
tagDensity0.355
leniency0.71
rawRatio0.121
effectiveRatio0.086
67.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1826
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count3
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count4
4
adverb"anxiously"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"slowly"
2"really"
3"very"
4"anxiously"
5"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1826
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"electric"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"calculating"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"disrupting"
count1
12
word"flickered"
count2
13
word"variable"
count1
14
word"trembled"
count1
15
word"facade"
count1
16
word"constructed"
count1
17
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"gleaming"
2"weight"
3"pulse"
4"traced"
5"perfect"
6"charged"
7"electric"
8"familiar"
9"calculating"
10"intensity"
11"disrupting"
12"flickered"
13"variable"
14"trembled"
15"facade"
16"constructed"
17"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences99
matches
0"y with regret"
1"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences157
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen79
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1810
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1062
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.56
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Eva6
Prague1
Moreau2
Lucien6
Aurora6
Dawn1
London2
Relief1
Silence1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Aurora"
4"Relief"
5"Silence"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Prague"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1810
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences157
matches
0"studying that cut"
1"chose that moment"
2"process that admission"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs89
mean20.34
std14.59
cv0.717
sampleLengths
044
119
235
327
410
527
629
721
812
949
104
1118
124
136
1435
1518
1615
1743
1817
1938
2011
215
225
2342
249
2531
2636
273
284
2912
3022
312
3242
3310
3418
3519
365
3738
3818
393
4036
4129
4228
4323
4425
453
468
4779
4815
4912
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs193
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences157
ratio0.057
matches
0"Nobody visited Eva's flat this late—especially not when Eva was in Prague chasing down some thirteenth-century grimoire."
1"Six months since she'd told him exactly what she thought of his manipulative games, his careful omissions, his—"
2"She flipped the deadbolts—all three—and cracked the door, keeping the chain on."
3"She should tell him to go to hell—though given his parentage, that might be redundant."
4"Up close, she could see the damage better—the cut on his cheek, yes, but also the way he held his right arm close to his body, the slight hitch in his breathing that suggested bruised ribs."
5"The bathroom was barely large enough for one person; with both of them, the space felt charged, electric."
6"\"And you came here?\" She pressed a butterfly bandage over the cut, trying to ignore how familiar this felt—patching him up after whatever scheme had gone sideways."
7"His eyes—one amber, one black—met hers with an intensity that made her breath catch."
8"But as they prepared to leave Eva's flat, Aurora caught sight of them in the hallway mirror—her with her hastily packed bag and sleep-mussed hair, him elegant even when injured, both of them reflected in the glass like some twisted portrait."
95.97% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1076
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.04460966542750929
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.01858736059479554
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences157
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences157
mean11.53
std9.55
cv0.829
sampleLengths
019
18
217
316
43
515
620
77
82
918
105
115
1212
1312
143
1517
1612
1721
1810
192
205
2115
2229
234
2412
256
264
274
282
297
308
3120
3211
337
347
358
367
3736
388
399
4020
4118
4210
431
445
455
469
4718
4815
499
76.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4713375796178344
totalSentences157
uniqueOpeners74
71.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"Instead, she found herself studying"
1"Just that single word, heavy"
ratio0.022
22.15% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences93
matches
0"She set down the noodles"
1"Her stomach dropped."
2"His charcoal suit looked immaculate"
3"She flipped the deadbolts—all three—and"
4"His heterochromatic eyes found hers,"
5"She started to close the"
6"She should slam the door."
7"She should tell him to"
8"His lips quirked in that"
9"he agreed quietly"
10"she said, unhooking the chain"
11"He stepped inside, movements careful"
12"she ordered, locking the door"
13"He followed her through the"
14"He sat, setting his cane"
15"She pulled on latex gloves"
16"she asked, dabbing antiseptic on"
17"He didn't flinch as she"
18"She pressed a butterfly bandage"
19"His hand caught her wrist,"
ratio0.495
19.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences93
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Aurora paused, chopsticks hovering over"
2"Nobody visited Eva's flat this"
3"She set down the noodles"
4"Her stomach dropped."
5"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
6"His charcoal suit looked immaculate"
7"Aurora's hand hesitated on the"
8"Another knock, softer this time."
9"That accent still did things"
10"She flipped the deadbolts—all three—and"
11"His heterochromatic eyes found hers,"
12"A thin cut traced his"
13"She started to close the"
14"The word came out rough,"
15"She should slam the door."
16"She should tell him to"
17"His lips quirked in that"
18"he agreed quietly"
19"Something in his tone made"
ratio0.882
53.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences93
matches
0"Now it just made her"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His eyes—one amber, one black—met hers with an intensity that made her breath catch."
64.39% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags33
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She started, but his hand shot out, palm flat against the wood"
1"He didn't, though his jaw tightened"
2"The black eye flared, a promise of violence barely contained"
3"She grabbed, her keys, the small knife Eva had enchanted for her"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he agreed quietly (agree)"
1"she ordered (order)"
2"She pressed (press)"
3"he continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences93
tagDensity0.108
leniency0.215
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.086
83.9407%