Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEWMRRZZ12PN734KVBCPFW

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Duration:
5m 49s
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$0.001363
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Parasail

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain fell in silver sheets, washing the sodium glare of London’s streetlamps into oily rivers on the pavement. Detective Harlow Quinn moved with a predator’s grace, her boots slapping against wet concrete, her breath a steady plume in the chill air. Ahead, a shadow—a man in a dark coat—ducked around the corner of a shuttered music shop in Soho. He was fast, but Quinn had eighteen years of chasing shadows. She’d memorised his gait, the hitch in his right shoulder, the way his head swivelled like a frightened bird’s. This one was different. Not some common mugger or drug peddler. He was a courier for the Veil Market, or so her informant’s shaky whisper had claimed. Her informant was now in the ICU, his throat slit with something that left edges too clean for any steel she knew. She followed, her hand resting on the butt of her service weapon beneath her waxed jacket. The streets were nearly empty, the downpour driving sensible people indoors. Her sharp jaw was set, her brown eyes scanning not just the fleeing man, but the windows, the alleys, the overflowing bins. She’d learned the hard way that the obvious threat was rarely the only one. The memory of Morris—his laugh, the sudden silence where it should have been—was a cold stone in her gut. She’d never found what took him. Only a crime scene that made no sense, and a case file that was now classified above her pay grade. The courier vanished down a set of greasy, wrought-iron steps leading to a service door for the Camden Town tube station. Not a main entrance. A maintenance hatch, painted a grimy black. Quinn paused at the top, the worn leather strap of her watch tight against her wrist. Following him underground, alone, at night, was a violation of a dozen protocols. It was also, possibly, the only way to get answers. She went down. The door was unlocked, left slightly ajar. A faint, coppery smell hit her, underneath the damp and mildew. Not blood. Something else. Metallic, but sweet. She drew her pistol, holding it low and tight as she slipped inside. The service corridor was narrow, lit by sputtering fluorescent tubes that cast more shadow than light. The sound of the rain faded, replaced by a distant, rhythmic dripping and the hum of machinery. She could hear footsteps echoing ahead, moving fast. She followed, her military-precise steps silent on the grimy floor tiles. The corridor opened abruptly into a vast, cathedral-like space. An abandoned tube platform. But it was not abandoned now. Quinn stopped, her back against a tiled pillar, and stared. The Veil Market was a riot of clandestine life. Stalls constructed from scrap wood and moth-eaten velvet lined the curved walls where advertisements for Bovril and wartime bonds had faded to ghosts. Caged bioluminescent fungi hung from the arched ceiling, casting a sickly, pulsing green light over everything. The air was thick with the scent of strange incense, ozone, and the earthy smell of wet fur. Figures haggled in low tones—some looked human, others… weren’t. A woman with skin like polished bark, a man whose shadow moved independently of his body. The courier she’d been chasing melted into the crowd, turning once to glance back in her direction with a smirk before disappearing behind a stall selling what looked like bottled lightning. Her heart hammered against her ribs. This was it. The hidden layer. The place Morris’s notes, scribbled in his frantic final days, had alluded to. *‘Not a place on any map. A bazaar for things that shouldn’t be.’* A hand touched her elbow. She whirled, pistol coming up half an inch before she registered the man in front of her. He was human, or seemed to be. Olive skin, warm brown eyes framed by worry lines. He had short, curly dark brown hair, damp from the atmosphere. A faint scar ran along his left forearm, visible where his sleeve was rolled up. A Saint Christopher medallion gleamed at his throat. “Easy,” he said, his voice low, carrying a soft Spanish accent. “You are holding that like you know how to use it. That will draw attention you do not want.” “Metropolitan Police,” Quinn said, the authority in her voice automatic, though it felt absurd here. “Who are you?” “Tomás Herrera. I am a medic.” His eyes flicked to her badge, then back to her face, assessing. “You are a long way from your jurisdiction, Detective.” “I’m pursuing a suspect.” “The man in the grey coat? He is gone. Into the Warrens.” Tomás nodded towards a dark archway at the far end of the platform, from which even the strange green light seemed to shy away. “You do not want to follow him there. Not without a guide. And not without a token.” He held up a small, off-white object. It looked like a domino, but pitted and aged. A bone token. Her informant had choked out those words, too, before the blood filled his mouth. “Why help me?” Quinn asked, her gaze unwavering. She’d learned trust was the first thing to get you killed in situations that defied reason. Tomás’s expression tightened. “I was a paramedic. NHS. I lost my license because I treated patients who could not go to a regular hospital. People caught on the edges of… all this.” He gestured at the market. “I help who I can. And you look like someone who has seen the wrong edge of something. You have the eyes.” *Morris’s eyes, in the morgue, staring at nothing.* Quinn shoved the memory down. “What is this place?” “A crossroads. A grey market. You can buy a love potion, a cursed lock of hair, or information on how to kill a creature that has no business living.” His voice was matter-of-fact. “The couriers run messages and packages for the powerful. Your suspect, he is a small fish. But the package he carries tonight is for a very big, very nasty fish. If you take it, or him, you will have that fish’s attention forever.” The choice crystallised before her, cold and stark. She could turn back. File a report no one would believe, mark the case another dead end in a career that was becoming defined by them. Or she could step forward, into the green, pulsating light, and finally see the thing that had been lurking in the periphery of her life for three years. “The man I’m looking for,” she said, her voice barely above a whisper. “My partner. His name was Morris. Did he come here?” Tomás’s face changed. The professional neutrality faded, replaced by a deep, weary sorrow. He glanced around before leaning closer. “I remember a detective. Loud, friendly. Asking too many questions about bone tokens and a place called the Raven’s Nest. He bought a map of warding sigils from a stall run by a Haint. He never came back.” The Raven’s Nest. Silas’s bar. She knew it. Another place from Morris’s notes. It was all connected, a sinister web she’d only been brushing against. “The courier,” Quinn said, decision hardening in her veins like ice. “Where is his drop?” Tomás studied her for a long moment. He saw the resolve, the grief, the precision. He sighed, a sound of surrender. “The alchemist’s stall. By the old ticket booth. He is making the exchange now. If you move, you must move like you belong. Do not look surprised by anything. Do not stare. And for God’s sake, put the gun away. It is useless here against what you might actually need to shoot.” Quinn slowly holstered her weapon. The weight of it was a comfort, but Tomás was right. It hadn’t saved Morris. She needed something else now. Knowledge. “Stay close to me,” Tomás said, palming the bone token. “You are with me. You are… a new client. In need of specialized remedies. Understood?” She gave a sharp nod. Together, they stepped out from the pillar and into the flow of the market. The sensory assault was immediate. A vendor hissed at her, offering dried nightshade in a velvet pouch. Something small and many-legged skittered over her boot. She kept her eyes forward, on Tomás’s back, on the Saint Christopher medallion bouncing against his collarbone. Ahead, by a boarded-up ticket booth reinforced with iron bands, the courier stood at a stall draped in black cloth. The proprietor was a gaunt figure whose hands seemed to be made of moving glass and mercury, pouring a viscous silver liquid into a vial. The courier was handing over a sealed parchment scroll. This was it. The package. The information. Maybe the key. Quinn broke from Tomás’s side. She didn’t run; she walked with purpose, cutting through the crowd, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull from the rain above. The courier looked up, his eyes widening in recognition and panic. He snatched the vial from the alchemist’s mercurial hands and bolted, not towards the Warrens, but back the way Quinn had come—towards the surface. She gave chase, the strange market a blur of green light and staring eyes. Tomás called out behind her, but she was already at the service corridor, pounding up the steps after the clattering footsteps. The rain hit her face like a slap as she burst back out onto the street. The courier was twenty yards ahead, slipping on the wet pavement, righting himself. “Stop! Police!” she yelled, the familiar call a talisman in the unfamiliar night. He glanced back, terrified, and hurled the silver vial into the open mouth of a storm drain. It vanished with a faint, sizzling plop. He then darted into an alley beside a familiar building—one with a distinctive green neon sign buzzing against the brickwork. The Raven’s Nest. Quinn skidded to a halt at the alley’s entrance, chest heaving. The courier was gone, presumably through a back door. The green light from the sign above painted the raindrops falling through its glow an eerie emerald. She could go in. Confront Silas. Demand answers. But she remembered Tomás’s warning. *‘You will have that fish’s attention forever.’* The courier had destroyed the package. The direct link was gone. She was standing on the threshold, soaked and alone, with only the ghost of her partner and the word of a disgraced medic to guide her. Going into the Nest now would be walking into a spider’s parlour with no proof, no backup, and no understanding of the rules. Harlow Quinn stood in the downpour, the worn leather of her watchband digging into her skin. She looked from the green neon sign to the dark gape of the storm drain where the evidence had vanished. The detective in her screamed to pursue, to break down the door. The survivor, forged in the unexplained loss of Morris, counseled a sharper, more patient strategy. She took a deep breath, the cold air and rain clearing the last of the market’s strange incense from her lungs. She turned her back on the Raven’s Nest and walked away, into the anonymity of the rain-washed night. She wasn’t retreating. She was regrouping. She had a name now—Tomás Herrera. She had a location—the Veil Market. And she had finally seen the world she needed to investigate. The chase was over. The hunt, however, had just truly begun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.417
leniency0.833
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1909
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"barely above a whisper"
3"slowly"
4"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1909
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"predator"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"rhythmic"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count2
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"clandestine"
count1
9
word"constructed"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count2
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"unwavering"
count1
13
word"stark"
count1
14
word"sinister"
count1
15
word"resolve"
count1
16
word"weight"
count1
17
word"pounding"
count1
18
word"familiar"
count2
highlights
0"predator"
1"chill"
2"whisper"
3"scanning"
4"silence"
5"rhythmic"
6"footsteps"
7"echoing"
8"clandestine"
9"constructed"
10"velvet"
11"flicked"
12"unwavering"
13"stark"
14"sinister"
15"resolve"
16"weight"
17"pounding"
18"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences145
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences158
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen52
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords28
totalWords1889
ratio0.015
matches
0"‘Not a place on any map. A bazaar for things that shouldn’t be.’"
1"Morris’s eyes, in the morgue, staring at nothing."
2"‘You will have that fish’s attention forever.’"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1534
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity0.85
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow2
Quinn13
Soho1
Veil3
Market3
Morris6
Camden1
Town1
Bovril1
Saint2
Christopher2
Spanish1
Tomás11
Raven3
Nest4
Warrens1
Silas2
Herrera1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Saint"
4"Christopher"
5"Tomás"
6"Raven"
7"Silas"
8"Herrera"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Market"
3"Camden"
4"Town"
5"Nest"
6"Warrens"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like bottled lightning"
1"looked like a domino, but pitted and aged"
94.12% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.059
wordCount1889
matches
0"not just the fleeing man, but the windows, the alleys, the overflowing bins"
1"not towards the Warrens, but back the way Quinn had come"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences158
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean41.98
std27.89
cv0.664
sampleLengths
090
149
2108
371
43
538
652
719
810
9122
1038
1172
1230
1318
1427
154
1653
1733
1824
1959
2017
2176
2262
2323
2457
2525
2615
2773
2826
2925
3061
3154
3210
3362
3464
3513
3644
373
3837
398
4049
4123
4263
4368
4411
95.58% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences145
matches
0"been—was"
1"was rolled"
2"was gone"
3"was gone"
90.26% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs243
matches
0"was handing"
1"was standing"
2"wasn’t retreating"
3"was regrouping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences158
ratio0.051
matches
0"Ahead, a shadow—a man in a dark coat—ducked around the corner of a shuttered music shop in Soho."
1"The memory of Morris—his laugh, the sudden silence where it should have been—was a cold stone in her gut."
2"Figures haggled in low tones—some looked human, others…"
3"She didn’t run; she walked with purpose, cutting through the crowd, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull from the rain above."
4"He snatched the vial from the alchemist’s mercurial hands and bolted, not towards the Warrens, but back the way Quinn had come—towards the surface."
5"He then darted into an alley beside a familiar building—one with a distinctive green neon sign buzzing against the brickwork."
6"She had a name now—Tomás Herrera."
7"She had a location—the Veil Market."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1574
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"sharper, more patient strategy."
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.025412960609911054
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.012706480304955527
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences158
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences158
mean11.96
std8.67
cv0.725
sampleLengths
019
123
218
311
419
54
67
716
822
916
1011
1122
1214
1319
146
1520
1621
174
187
1916
2013
2110
223
237
2411
252
262
273
2813
2916
3017
318
3211
339
344
356
3610
379
3823
3916
4018
418
421
4316
4431
456
463
473
4813
496
37.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.2974683544303797
totalSentences158
uniqueOpeners47
49.75% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences134
matches
0"Only a crime scene that"
1"Maybe the key."
ratio0.015
64.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences134
matches
0"He was fast, but Quinn"
1"She’d memorised his gait, the"
2"He was a courier for"
3"Her informant was now in"
4"She followed, her hand resting"
5"Her sharp jaw was set,"
6"She’d learned the hard way"
7"She’d never found what took"
8"It was also, possibly, the"
9"She went down."
10"She drew her pistol, holding"
11"She could hear footsteps echoing"
12"She followed, her military-precise steps"
13"Her heart hammered against her"
14"She whirled, pistol coming up"
15"He was human, or seemed"
16"He had short, curly dark"
17"he said, his voice low,"
18"His eyes flicked to her"
19"He held up a small,"
ratio0.388
19.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount118
totalSentences134
matches
0"The rain fell in silver"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn moved with"
2"He was fast, but Quinn"
3"She’d memorised his gait, the"
4"This one was different."
5"He was a courier for"
6"Her informant was now in"
7"She followed, her hand resting"
8"The streets were nearly empty,"
9"Her sharp jaw was set,"
10"She’d learned the hard way"
11"The memory of Morris—his laugh,"
12"She’d never found what took"
13"The courier vanished down a"
14"A maintenance hatch, painted a"
15"Quinn paused at the top,"
16"It was also, possibly, the"
17"She went down."
18"The door was unlocked, left"
19"A faint, coppery smell hit"
ratio0.881
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The service corridor was narrow, lit by sputtering fluorescent tubes that cast more shadow than light."
1"Or she could step forward, into the green, pulsating light, and finally see the thing that had been lurking in the periphery of her life for three years."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, his voice low, carrying a soft Spanish accent"
1"Quinn asked, her gaze unwavering"
2"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"Quinn said, decision hardening in her veins like ice"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she yelled (yell)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.292
leniency0.583
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.083
78.4516%