Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEX1MT0N0XQS07XYNJK9PP

Run Details

Duration:
31.4s
Cost:
$0.001817
Provider:
SiliconFlow

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pendant pulsed against Rory's collarbone like a second heartbeat as she stepped between the oak standing stones. The air shimmered, tasting of burnt honey and fresh rain, and then they were through. Behind them, the familiar shapes of Richmond Park dissolved into swirling mist. Aurora took a shaky breath, her fingers brushing the cold metal of the moonsilver dagger at her belt. The ground beneath her boots felt wrong—springy like moss but warm as living flesh. She wiggled her toes inside her sneakers, fighting the urge to take them off. "God's teeth," Eva muttered, staring at the impossible sky where twin moons hung low, one violet, one amber, casting conflicting shadows. Their light filtered through towering trees with bark that shifted patterns like a kaleidoscope—one moment resembling Celtic knots, the next fracturing into geometric runes. "The Grove remembers visitors," Nyx whispered from beside them, their shadow-form stretching unnaturally long in the double moonlight. A cluster of floating orbs drifted past—will-o'-the-wisps that paused to circle Aurora's wrist where her crescent scar peeked from her sleeve. They pulsed in approval before darting into the undergrowth. Eva reached for Rory's arm. "Did you see that? They—" Her words died as the path ahead revealed itself. Wildflowers uncurled from buds, their petals blooming in reverse color—deep indigo centers fading to pale edges. The air hummed with unseen energy, raising the fine hairs on Aurora's neck. Nyx melted into the dappled shadows beneath an archway of intertwined branches. "The Seer's abode lies beyond." Aurora hesitated at the threshold where the path split in three. The left fork smelled of baking bread and woodsmoke—comforting, domestic. The middle route glistened with dew-slick stones leading into mist. The rightmost path... Aurora's pendant flared hot against her skin. That way, the flowers grew black and twisted, their stems too long, curled like grasping fingers. "Trick of the Grove," Nyx murmured, appearing suddenly at her shoulder. Their violet eyes glowed brighter. "Choices here have weight. The safe road is rarely straight." Eva nudged the middle path with her boot. "We're down to forty-three minutes real-world time. Whatever clock you're on, tick-tock." Following instinct, Aurora stepped onto the dew-covered stones. The moment her foot touched, the mist dissolved to reveal a perfect circle of white mushrooms. Within it stood Isolde, silver hair cascading over shoulders draped in cobweb-thin silk. Her lavender eyes tracked them without blinking. "You came the grateful way," the Seer said, voice like wind through reeds. Her bare feet left no impression on the moss. "Wise. The angry path leads to teeth. The hungry road... well. Even shadows must eat." She smiled at Nyx, who inclined their head. Aurora's fingers tightened around the Heartstone. "We need—" "To find the rift before Belphegor's chefs carve another starveling," Isolde finished. She plucked a flower that hadn't existed moments before—its petals the exact crimson of Aurora's pendant. "Dymas waits beneath London's hunger. But tonight..." She scattered petals that froze midair, rearranging into a map. "The Veil thins where joy curdles." Eva made a frustrated noise. "Can you maybe not speak in fortune cookies for five—" A chorus of chimes cut her off. The standing stones at the Grove's edge began vibrating, their surfaces splitting open like vertical mouths. Isolde went very still. "You've been followed." Nyx's form rippled violently. "Wardens." Aurora yanked the Fae blade free as the first skeletal figure emerged from a stone. Its ribcage housed a swirling nebula of dark energy. The smell hit—ozone and rotting plums. Her pendant burned white-hot. "Run!" Nyx's voice fractured into echoes as they surged forward, shadows elongating into barbed tendrils. "Third petal points true!" The Grove convulsed around them. Tree roots upheaved, forming a tunnel that smelled of damp earth and lightning. Aurora grabbed Eva's wrist and dove in, the shriek of the Wardens dissolving into wind. The roots knitted shut behind them, plunging them into absolute blackness. Then—light. Glowing mushrooms spiraled up the tunnel walls, revealing carvings that told stories in no language Aurora recognized. One panel showed a crowned figure feasting while cities burned in its open palm. The Heartstone's pulse synced with the faint luminescence. Eva exhaled shakily. "So. Demons, Fae riddles, skeleton cops. Anything else I should—" A bone-rattling screech cut through the tunnel. Something massive moved in the dark beyond the mushrooms' glow. Aurora pressed them flat against the carvings as monstrous breathing echoed—wet, labored. The smell of charred sugar flooded the passage. The beast passed within inches without seeing them. Later, Rory would recall the feel of its shadow—how it wasn't cold like Nyx's, but thick as congealing syrup. How her pendant had throbbed in warning, the Fae blade frosting over in her grip. When silence returned, they crawled forward until the tunnel spat them out beneath the twin moons once more. Before them stretched a ruined feasting table—its surface etched with familiar symbols. Aurora touched the nearest carving: a perfect match for her pendant. Eva's sharp intake of breath made her turn. There, slumped against the table's far end, Nyx's shadow-form flickered weakly, their silhouette pierced by glowing silver arrows. Aurora's stomach dropped. "Wardens," Nyx managed, voice fading. "Used my true name." Their form collapsed inward like a dying star, condensing into a small obsidian vial that clattered to the moss. Aurora caught it before it could roll away. The glass burned cold against her palm. "She's playing both sides," Eva whispered, pointing to the table's center. Among rotted delicacies lay a playing card—Isolde's face smiled up from the queen of hearts, her lavender eyes knowing. The ground trembled. One of the twin moons winked out. Aurora pocketed the vial, glancing at the petal-map still floating above her palm. Its third point now pulsed over an illustration of a gilded cage. Somewhere in the dark, a familiar chime began again. Hands shaking, Aurora unsheathed the Fae blade. Its glow intensified, revealing creeping tendrils of black ivy that hadn't been there moments before. The vines moved with sinister purpose, coiling around the ruined table legs. Dymas was waking up.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1031
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"shimmered"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count3
3
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
4
word"comforting"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count2
7
word"cascading"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"fractured"
count1
10
word"echoes"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"throbbed"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
15
word"etched"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"stomach"
count1
18
word"trembled"
count1
19
word"sinister"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"shimmered"
2"familiar"
3"kaleidoscope"
4"comforting"
5"weight"
6"perfect"
7"cascading"
8"silk"
9"fractured"
10"echoes"
11"pulse"
12"echoed"
13"throbbed"
14"silence"
15"etched"
16"flickered"
17"stomach"
18"trembled"
19"sinister"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1005
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
57.41% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount864
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.85
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Rory3
Richmond1
Park1
Celtic1
Wildflowers1
Aurora16
Isolde4
Seer1
Nyx9
Eva8
Grove2
Fae3
Wardens1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Wildflowers"
3"Aurora"
4"Isolde"
5"Seer"
6"Nyx"
7"Eva"
8"Wardens"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Grove"
globalScore0.574
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1005
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
87.63% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean32.42
std14.81
cv0.457
sampleLengths
046
146
245
348
448
517
657
726
820
944
1045
118
1251
1315
1430
155
1634
1719
1844
1940
2013
2137
2242
2341
2429
259
2634
2730
2844
2934
304
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs165
matches
0"was waking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences94
ratio0.128
matches
0"The ground beneath her boots felt wrong—springy like moss but warm as living flesh."
1"Their light filtered through towering trees with bark that shifted patterns like a kaleidoscope—one moment resembling Celtic knots, the next fracturing into geometric runes."
2"A cluster of floating orbs drifted past—will-o'-the-wisps that paused to circle Aurora's wrist where her crescent scar peeked from her sleeve."
3"Wildflowers uncurled from buds, their petals blooming in reverse color—deep indigo centers fading to pale edges."
4"The left fork smelled of baking bread and woodsmoke—comforting, domestic."
5"She plucked a flower that hadn't existed moments before—its petals the exact crimson of Aurora's pendant."
6"The smell hit—ozone and rotting plums."
7"Then—light."
8"Aurora pressed them flat against the carvings as monstrous breathing echoed—wet, labored."
9"Later, Rory would recall the feel of its shadow—how it wasn't cold like Nyx's, but thick as congealing syrup."
10"Before them stretched a ruined feasting table—its surface etched with familiar symbols."
11"Among rotted delicacies lay a playing card—Isolde's face smiled up from the queen of hearts, her lavender eyes knowing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount903
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.0221483942414175
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.005537098560354375
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean10.69
std5.36
cv0.501
sampleLengths
019
115
212
318
414
514
621
724
818
921
109
115
1214
1316
1413
1512
165
1711
1810
1910
203
217
2216
2311
245
2510
268
2712
288
2916
3013
317
3213
339
3423
356
362
3712
3816
3917
406
415
4210
437
4416
454
463
474
481
4915
73.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.46808510638297873
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners44
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Somewhere in the dark, a"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences81
matches
0"She wiggled her toes inside"
1"Their light filtered through towering"
2"They pulsed in approval before"
3"Her words died as the"
4"Their violet eyes glowed brighter."
5"Her lavender eyes tracked them"
6"Her bare feet left no"
7"She smiled at Nyx, who"
8"She plucked a flower that"
9"She scattered petals that froze"
10"Its ribcage housed a swirling"
11"Her pendant burned white-hot."
12"Their form collapsed inward like"
13"Its third point now pulsed"
14"Its glow intensified, revealing creeping"
ratio0.185
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences81
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant pulsed against"
1"The air shimmered, tasting of"
2"Aurora took a shaky breath,"
3"The ground beneath her boots"
4"She wiggled her toes inside"
5"Eva muttered, staring at the"
6"Their light filtered through towering"
7"Nyx whispered from beside them,"
8"A cluster of floating orbs"
9"They pulsed in approval before"
10"Eva reached for Rory's arm."
11"Her words died as the"
12"Wildflowers uncurled from buds, their"
13"The air hummed with unseen"
14"Nyx melted into the dappled"
15"Aurora hesitated at the threshold"
16"The left fork smelled of"
17"The middle route glistened with"
18"The rightmost path..."
19"Aurora's pendant flared hot against"
ratio0.852
61.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Before them stretched a ruined"
ratio0.012
7.72% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Their light filtered through towering trees with bark that shifted patterns like a kaleidoscope—one moment resembling Celtic knots, the next fracturing into geo…"
1"Wildflowers uncurled from buds, their petals blooming in reverse color—deep indigo centers fading to pale edges."
2"She plucked a flower that hadn't existed moments before—its petals the exact crimson of Aurora's pendant."
3"The standing stones at the Grove's edge began vibrating, their surfaces splitting open like vertical mouths."
4"Glowing mushrooms spiraled up the tunnel walls, revealing carvings that told stories in no language Aurora recognized."
5"Their form collapsed inward like a dying star, condensing into a small obsidian vial that clattered to the moss."
6"Its glow intensified, revealing creeping tendrils of black ivy that hadn't been there moments before."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Nyx's voice fractured, shadows elongating into barbed tendrils"
1"Nyx managed, voice fading"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Eva muttered (mutter)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
3"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.227
leniency0.455
rawRatio0.8
effectiveRatio0.364
76.5146%