Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEXK4P9GEXRVED96HHJ3DC

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Duration:
8.2s
Cost:
$0.000291
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain lashed the London streets likea thousand tiny whips, turning the pavement into a mirror that reflected the sickly yellow glow of streetlamps and the blurred neon sign of The Raven’s Nest—a green beacon in the Soho gloom. Detective Harlow Quinn, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull beneath a soaked fedora, moved with the predatory silence of a stalking panther. Her worn leather watch ticked steadily on her left wrist, a metronome marking the seconds as she closed the gap between herself and her quarry. The man ahead, Tomás Herrera, a former paramedic with olive skin and a scar like a livid worm on his forearm, stumbled over a puddle, his breath coming in ragged gasps that mingled with the drumming rain. “Harlan!” Tomás wheezed, his voice raw. “You don’t understand what he’s done!” He fumbled in his jacket, fingers trembling as he pulled free a small, worn medallion—Saint Christopher, its bronze surface slick with rainwater. “He’s not human, Detective! He’s—” Quinn’s boot struck the pavement with a sharp *crack*, sending a spray of dirty water up. She didn’t break stride. “Human or not, he’s a killer, Herrera. And you helped him.” Her sharp jawline was set in a line of grim determination, her eyes, brown and unreadable in the gloom, fixed on his back. “Where is he?” Tomás’s eyes darted wildly, landing on a narrow alley choked with overflowing dumpsters and the stench of decay. “Through here! He went down!” He pushed through a sagging fire escape ladder, pulling Quinn after him. The rain grew heavier, a curtain of water that blurred the world into streaks of grey and black. They burst into the alley, the sound of the city receding behind them. Tomás stumbled towards a crumbling brick wall, his movements desperate. “The Veil Market!” he gasped. “He’s got a bone token! He’s got to get in!” Quinn’s hand shot out, catching his arm just as he reached for a seemingly ordinary brick in the wall. “Bone token?” she demanded, her voice low and dangerous. “What kind of token?” “For the Market,” Tomás panted, his breath coming in short bursts. “For the Veil. It’s—” He froze, his eyes wide with terror as he saw the cold, unwavering gaze fixed on him. “He’s waiting for you there, Detective. He wants you to come in.” The Veil Market. The hidden supernatural black market beneath Camden, moving locations every full moon, accessible only by a bone token. Quinn’s mind raced. Her partner, DS Morris, had died under unexplained circumstances three years ago, a death she suspected was tied to this very underworld. The supernatural origins she didn’t yet understand clawed at the edges of her consciousness. But the man ahead, the one who had orchestrated Morris’s death, was down there. And Tomás Herrera, the man she’d been chasing, was his key. The brick wall before them wasn’t just brick. A faint, almost imperceptible shimmer played across its surface, like heat haze over hot tarmac. Tomás’s fingers brushed the medallion against his chest, a silent prayer. “He’s waiting, Harlan. He knows you’re coming. He wants you to follow him into the Market. It’s a trap.” Quinn’s gaze swept the alley, searching for any sign of the entrance. The rain hammered down, obscuring everything. The decision hung in the air, thick and heavy as the damp night. Follow the suspect into the unknown, into the heart of the supernatural underworld she suspected was responsible for her partner’s death, or cut her losses and let him vanish into the shadows? The bone token in Tomás’s trembling hand seemed to pulse with a faint, unnatural light. “Where’s the token?” Quinn asked, her voice cutting through the rain’s roar. “Show me.” Tomás hesitated, then pulled the Saint Christopher medallion free again. He pressed it against the shimmering brick wall. A low, resonant hum vibrated through the concrete, and the brick shifted, revealing a narrow, dark passage. Beyond it, the air shimmered with an unnatural chill, carrying the faint, cloying scent of ozone and something else—something ancient and hungry. “He’s in there,” Tomás whispered, his voice barely audible over the rain. “He’s waiting.” Quinn looked at the passage, then at Tomás’s terrified face, then back at the shimmering darkness. The watch on her wrist ticked on, a relentless countdown. The rain continued its assault, a constant reminder of the world outside, the world she knew. But the man who had killed her partner, the man who had orchestrated the supernatural events that shattered her life, was down there. And Tomás Herrera, the man she’d been chasing, was the only bridge to him. The choice was hers. Step into the Veil Market, into the heart of the unknown, where the rules were different and the dangers were primal, or let the suspect slip away into the night, leaving her with more questions and a deeper sense of dread. The rain didn’t care. The shadows in the alley didn’t care. Only Quinn, with her sharp jawline set and her worn watch ticking, stood at the precipice, the weight of her partner’s memory and the hunt for the truth pressing down on her. The Veil Market waited.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount864
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.19% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount864
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"beacon"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"unreadable"
count1
4
word"unwavering"
count1
5
word"raced"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"vibrated"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count1
12
word"sense of"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"beacon"
1"gloom"
2"silence"
3"unreadable"
4"unwavering"
5"raced"
6"pulse"
7"vibrated"
8"shimmered"
9"chill"
10"reminder"
11"shattered"
12"sense of"
13"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences51
matches
0"e with terror"
86.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences51
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences59
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords859
ratio0.001
matches
0"crack"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
71.16% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount761
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Tomás"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Tomás"
discoveredNames
London1
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn9
Tomás12
Herrera3
Saint2
Christopher2
Veil3
Market3
Camden1
Morris2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Market"
8"Morris"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Veil"
globalScore0.712
windowScore0.833
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"reached for a seemingly ordinary brick in t"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount859
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs15
mean57.27
std29.02
cv0.507
sampleLengths
0124
139
257
353
438
532
644
785
853
978
1014
1157
1214
1379
1492
98.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences51
matches
0"was tied"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs107
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences59
ratio0.051
matches
0"The rain lashed the London streets likea thousand tiny whips, turning the pavement into a mirror that reflected the sickly yellow glow of streetlamps and the blurred neon sign of The Raven’s Nest—a green beacon in the Soho gloom."
1"“You don’t understand what he’s done!” He fumbled in his jacket, fingers trembling as he pulled free a small, worn medallion—Saint Christopher, its bronze surface slick with rainwater."
2"Beyond it, the air shimmered with an unnatural chill, carrying the faint, cloying scent of ozone and something else—something ancient and hungry."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount766
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.0195822454308094
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.010443864229765013
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences59
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences59
mean14.56
std9.56
cv0.657
sampleLengths
039
123
225
337
46
528
65
716
84
934
103
1118
1217
1318
1413
1510
165
1710
1819
199
204
2111
2221
2312
243
2518
263
2722
2814
2914
3011
318
3215
3311
3419
3512
366
3713
3832
3915
4012
412
4210
438
4417
4522
4612
472
4816
4910
57.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.4067796610169492
totalSentences59
uniqueOpeners24
66.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences50
matches
0"Only Quinn, with her sharp"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences50
matches
0"Her worn leather watch ticked"
1"He fumbled in his jacket,"
2"She didn’t break stride."
3"Her sharp jawline was set"
4"He pushed through a sagging"
5"They burst into the alley,"
6"she demanded, her voice low"
7"He froze, his eyes wide"
8"Her partner, DS Morris, had"
9"He pressed it against the"
ratio0.2
40.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences50
matches
0"The rain lashed the London"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn, her salt-and-pepper"
2"Her worn leather watch ticked"
3"The man ahead, Tomás Herrera,"
4"Tomás wheezed, his voice raw"
5"He fumbled in his jacket,"
6"Quinn’s boot struck the pavement"
7"She didn’t break stride."
8"Her sharp jawline was set"
9"Tomás’s eyes darted wildly, landing"
10"He pushed through a sagging"
11"The rain grew heavier, a"
12"They burst into the alley,"
13"Tomás stumbled towards a crumbling"
14"Quinn’s hand shot out, catching"
15"she demanded, her voice low"
16"Tomás panted, his breath coming"
17"He froze, his eyes wide"
18"The Veil Market."
19"The hidden supernatural black market"
ratio0.84
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
73.73% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The rain lashed the London streets likea thousand tiny whips, turning the pavement into a mirror that reflected the sickly yellow glow of streetlamps and the bl…"
1"The man ahead, Tomás Herrera, a former paramedic with olive skin and a scar like a livid worm on his forearm, stumbled over a puddle, his breath coming in ragge…"
2"But the man who had killed her partner, the man who had orchestrated the supernatural events that shattered her life, was down there."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Tomás wheezed, his voice raw"
1"she demanded, her voice low and dangerous"
2"Tomás panted, his breath coming in short bursts"
3"Quinn asked, her voice cutting through the rain’s roar"
4"Tomás whispered, his voice barely audible over the rain"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Tomás wheezed (wheeze)"
1"he gasped (gasp)"
2"she demanded (demand)"
3"Tomás panted (pant)"
4"Tomás whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.833
effectiveRatio0.556
76.4556%