Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEXN0PMW08HX27FGDR4J33

Run Details

Duration:
56.5s
Cost:
$0.002215
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pulsed warm against Aurora’s chest as she stepped through the shimmering Veil. The air itself seemed to ripple around her like water disturbed by a stone, and for a moment, she felt weightless, suspended in a space that wasn’t quite Earth and wasn’t quite anything else. Beside her, Nyx’s shadowy form flickered, their violet eyes glowing faintly in the dim light. Isolde, ever ethereal, moved ahead with silent grace, her silver hair catching the strange amber glow of the sky above. The ground beneath Aurora’s feet was soft and yielding, like moss, but it glittered faintly, as though embedded with tiny crystals. As she crouched to touch it, she noticed the texture was unlike anything she had ever felt — cool and smooth, yet somehow alive, pulsing gently beneath her fingertips. She straightened quickly, brushing her hands on her jeans, and glanced at Nyx. “Where exactly are we?” she asked, her voice low, almost reverent. “Dymas,” Nyx replied, their voice a whisper that seemed to echo from everywhere and nowhere at once. “A realm of Gluttony. Be cautious. Excess has its own dangers here.” Aurora nodded, her bright blue eyes scanning the horizon. The sky was a warm amber, like liquid honey, streaked with clouds that shimmered faintly gold. In the distance, she could see towering structures — impossible buildings that twisted and coiled like vines, their surfaces smooth and organic, as though grown rather than built. The air was thick with the scent of something sweet and decadent, like caramelized sugar and ripe fruit, but beneath it lingered a faint metallic tang that made her uneasy. Isolde led the way, her bare feet leaving no marks on the glittering ground. Her pale lavender eyes were distant, as though she were seeing something the others could not. “Stay close,” she murmured, her voice melodic but laced with warning. “The paths here are… fluid. What appears before you may not remain so.” As they walked, the landscape shifted subtly around them. The ground beneath their feet changed from glittering moss to smooth, polished stone etched with intricate patterns that seemed to writhe and shift when looked at directly. Strange plants lined their path — towering stalks with bulbous, translucent fruits that pulsed faintly with inner light, and vines that twisted and coiled around each other in hypnotic patterns. Aurora reached out to touch one of the fruits, but Isolde caught her wrist with a surprisingly firm grip. “Do not,” the seer said softly. “Everything here is more than it seems. Even the air can ensnare you if you are not careful.” Aurora pulled her hand back, her heart pounding. She glanced at Nyx, who was observing their surroundings with the detached curiosity of someone who had seen far too much to be easily impressed. “Have you been here before?” she asked. “Once,” Nyx replied. “Long ago. It was different then. More… restrained. But realms of Gluttony are always evolving, always seeking more.” Ahead, the path opened into a vast clearing dominated by a towering fountain. The fountain’s base was carved from a deep, crimson stone that seemed to glow faintly, and from its center rose a column of water that shimmered like liquid gold. The water flowed without sound, defying gravity as it twisted and coiled in impossible shapes before cascading down into the basin below. Around the fountain grew a garden unlike anything Aurora had ever seen. Flowers in hues she couldn’t name bloomed in profusion, their petals shifting colors as she watched. Trees with bark that gleamed like polished metal bore fruits that looked like jewels, perfectly shaped and impossibly bright. “It’s beautiful,” Aurora murmured, unable to keep the awe from her voice. “Beautiful, yes,” Isolde said, her tone cautionary. “But beauty here is often a lure. Do not forget why we’ve come.” Aurora nodded, her hand instinctively touching the Fae-Forged Blade at her side. The cold metal was a grounding presence, a reminder of the dangers they faced. She glanced back at the garden, her gaze lingering on a cluster of flowers that seemed to pulse faintly, as though alive. The scent they gave off was intoxicating, a mix of honey and spice that made her head swim. “We should keep moving,” Nyx said, their voice cutting through her thoughts. “The longer we linger, the stronger its hold on us.” They pressed on, leaving the garden and fountain behind. The path ahead was narrower, lined with tall, crystalline hedges that cast strange, shifting shadows. The air grew warmer, thicker, filled with the heady scent of roasting meat and spiced wine. Aurora’s stomach growled despite herself, and she clenched her fists, forcing herself to focus. The path opened into a grand courtyard filled with long, low tables piled high with food. Platters of roasted meats glistened with juices, bowls of exotic fruits glowed with inner light, and towering cakes decorated with edible flowers and spun sugar stood like works of art. Around the tables, figures moved — some humanoid, others less so, their forms shifting and changing as they reached for the food. Their laughter was a cacophony, a sound that was both joyful and unnerving. “This is a trap,” Nyx said, their voice firm. “Do not partake.” “I wasn’t planning to,” Aurora muttered, though the sight of the food made her mouth water. She tore her gaze away, focusing instead on the far end of the courtyard, where a massive archway led deeper into the realm. As they moved through the courtyard, one of the figures turned to face them. It was a woman with skin the color of polished bronze and eyes like molten gold. She smiled, revealing teeth that were sharp and pointed, and held out a goblet filled with a liquid that shimmered like starlight. “You look hungry,” the woman said, her voice honey-sweet. “Join us.” “We’re not here to feast,” Nyx replied coldly, their violet eyes glowing brighter. The woman’s smile faltered, and her gaze flicked to Isolde. “A seer,” she murmured, her tone shifting. “And you… you carry a Fae blade. Interesting company you keep, shade.” “We’re leaving,” Aurora said firmly, stepping forward. The woman’s gaze snapped to her, and Aurora felt a chill run down her spine as those molten gold eyes met hers. “You wear a Heartstone,” the woman said, her voice soft but edged with something dangerous. “Be careful, little mortal. Not all gifts are freely given.” Before Aurora could respond, Isolde stepped between them, her silver hair catching the light like a shield. “We mean no harm,” the seer said, her voice calm but firm. “Let us pass.” The woman’s smile returned, though it was colder now. “As you wish.” They moved quickly through the courtyard, the sounds of laughter and feasting fading behind them. Aurora’s heart was racing, her hand gripping the Fae blade tightly. She glanced at Nyx, who seemed unperturbed, their shadowy form flickering faintly. “What was that?” she asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “A test,” Nyx replied. “One you passed.” “Barely,” Isolde added, her gaze still distant. “This place will continue to tempt you. Stay focused.” Aurora nodded, taking a deep breath to steady herself. The path ahead was darker, the amber sky giving way to a deep indigo streaked with faint silver light. The air was cooler here, though the scent of food lingered faintly, a reminder of the dangers they had left behind. As they walked, the ground beneath their feet became uneven, the smooth stone giving way to something that felt almost like living tissue, pulsing faintly with each step. Aurora tried not to think too hard about it, focusing instead on the faint glow of the Heartstone against her chest. It pulsed in time with her heartbeat, a steady reminder of their purpose. Ahead, the path opened into a vast chamber dominated by a massive throne carved from the same crimson stone as the fountain. The throne was empty, but the air around it was thick with an oppressive, almost suffocating energy. “This is the heart of Dymas,” Nyx said, their voice barely audible. “Be ready.” Aurora’s grip tightened on the Fae blade, her eyes scanning the chamber for any sign of movement. The silence was deafening, broken only by the faint hum of energy that seemed to emanate from the walls themselves. And then, she felt it — a presence, vast and ancient, watching them from the shadows. “Show yourself,” Nyx called, their voice echoing through the chamber. For a moment, there was nothing. Then, the air before them shimmered, and a figure emerged from the darkness — tall and imposing, with eyes that burned like twin suns. “Welcome,” the figure said, their voice resonating with power. “I’ve been expecting you.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
84.78% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"the seer said softly [softly]"
1"Nyx replied coldly [coldly]"
2"Aurora said firmly [firmly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.59
leniency1
rawRatio0.13
effectiveRatio0.13
72.43% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1451
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"coldly"
count1
5
adverb"tightly"
count1
6
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"quickly"
2"softly"
3"perfectly"
4"coldly"
5"tightly"
6"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1451
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count2
5
word"shimmered"
count4
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"pounding"
count1
9
word"restrained"
count1
10
word"cascading"
count1
11
word"reminder"
count3
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"crystalline"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"cacophony"
count1
16
word"flicked"
count1
17
word"firmly"
count1
18
word"chill"
count1
19
word"down her spine"
count1
20
word"racing"
count1
21
word"oppressive"
count1
22
word"silence"
count1
23
word"echoing"
count1
24
word"imposing"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"flickered"
2"whisper"
3"echo"
4"scanning"
5"shimmered"
6"etched"
7"intricate"
8"pounding"
9"restrained"
10"cascading"
11"reminder"
12"pulse"
13"crystalline"
14"stomach"
15"cacophony"
16"flicked"
17"firmly"
18"chill"
19"down her spine"
20"racing"
21"oppressive"
22"silence"
23"echoing"
24"imposing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"silence was deafening"
count1
2
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
1"The silence was deafening"
2"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"felt a chill"
40.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1455
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1254
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Aurora17
Veil1
Earth1
Nyx12
Isolde7
Ahead2
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Fae3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places(empty)
globalScore0.822
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"quite Earth and wasn’t quite anything else"
1"quite anything else"
2"whisper that seemed to echo from everywhere and nowhere at once"
3"patterns that seemed to writhe and shift when looked at directly"
4"stone that seemed to glow faintly, and from its center rose a column of water that shimmered like liquid gold"
5"looked like jewels, perfectly shaped and"
6"flowers that seemed to pulse faintly, as though alive"
7"seemed unperturbed their shadowy form flickering faintly"
8"energy that seemed to emanate from the walls themselves"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1455
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean36.38
std25.73
cv0.707
sampleLengths
083
163
211
329
483
554
685
724
840
921
10111
1112
1220
1366
1422
1554
1681
1712
1839
1952
2011
2113
2229
2329
2425
2532
2612
2738
2811
297
3016
3149
3262
3339
3414
3537
3616
3710
3830
3913
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"was carved"
53.16% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs227
matches
0"were seeing"
1"was observing"
2"was intoxicating"
3"was racing"
4"was deafening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences100
ratio0.06
matches
0"As she crouched to touch it, she noticed the texture was unlike anything she had ever felt — cool and smooth, yet somehow alive, pulsing gently beneath her fingertips."
1"In the distance, she could see towering structures — impossible buildings that twisted and coiled like vines, their surfaces smooth and organic, as though grown rather than built."
2"Strange plants lined their path — towering stalks with bulbous, translucent fruits that pulsed faintly with inner light, and vines that twisted and coiled around each other in hypnotic patterns."
3"Around the tables, figures moved — some humanoid, others less so, their forms shifting and changing as they reached for the food."
4"And then, she felt it — a presence, vast and ancient, watching them from the shadows."
5"Then, the air before them shimmered, and a figure emerged from the darkness — tall and imposing, with eyes that burned like twin suns."
93.03% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1250
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount59
adverbRatio0.0472
lyAdverbCount26
lyAdverbRatio0.0208
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean14.55
std7.15
cv0.492
sampleLengths
014
134
215
320
421
529
613
711
817
912
109
1116
1228
1330
1414
1516
1611
1713
189
1927
2030
2119
226
2318
248
2525
267
273
2818
2913
3029
3122
3212
3316
3419
3512
367
3713
3812
3914
4022
4118
4212
4310
449
4515
4616
4714
4816
4930
69.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.44
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners44
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Then, the air before them"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences81
matches
0"She straightened quickly, brushing her"
1"she asked, her voice low,"
2"Her pale lavender eyes were"
3"she murmured, her voice melodic"
4"She glanced at Nyx, who"
5"She glanced back at the"
6"They pressed on, leaving the"
7"Their laughter was a cacophony,"
8"She tore her gaze away,"
9"It was a woman with"
10"She smiled, revealing teeth that"
11"she murmured, her tone shifting"
12"They moved quickly through the"
13"She glanced at Nyx, who"
14"she asked, her voice barely"
15"It pulsed in time with"
ratio0.198
52.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences81
matches
0"The Heartstone pulsed warm against"
1"The air itself seemed to"
2"Isolde, ever ethereal, moved ahead"
3"The ground beneath Aurora’s feet"
4"She straightened quickly, brushing her"
5"she asked, her voice low,"
6"Nyx replied, their voice a"
7"Aurora nodded, her bright blue"
8"The sky was a warm"
9"The air was thick with"
10"Isolde led the way, her"
11"Her pale lavender eyes were"
12"she murmured, her voice melodic"
13"The ground beneath their feet"
14"Aurora reached out to touch"
15"the seer said softly"
16"Aurora pulled her hand back,"
17"She glanced at Nyx, who"
18"The fountain’s base was carved"
19"The water flowed without sound,"
ratio0.815
61.73% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Before Aurora could respond, Isolde"
ratio0.012
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount18
matches
0"The air itself seemed to ripple around her like water disturbed by a stone, and for a moment, she felt weightless, suspended in a space that wasn’t quite Earth …"
1"The ground beneath Aurora’s feet was soft and yielding, like moss, but it glittered faintly, as though embedded with tiny crystals."
2"The sky was a warm amber, like liquid honey, streaked with clouds that shimmered faintly gold."
3"In the distance, she could see towering structures — impossible buildings that twisted and coiled like vines, their surfaces smooth and organic, as though grown…"
4"The air was thick with the scent of something sweet and decadent, like caramelized sugar and ripe fruit, but beneath it lingered a faint metallic tang that made…"
5"Her pale lavender eyes were distant, as though she were seeing something the others could not."
6"The ground beneath their feet changed from glittering moss to smooth, polished stone etched with intricate patterns that seemed to writhe and shift when looked …"
7"Strange plants lined their path — towering stalks with bulbous, translucent fruits that pulsed faintly with inner light, and vines that twisted and coiled aroun…"
8"She glanced at Nyx, who was observing their surroundings with the detached curiosity of someone who had seen far too much to be easily impressed."
9"The fountain’s base was carved from a deep, crimson stone that seemed to glow faintly, and from its center rose a column of water that shimmered like liquid gol…"
10"Trees with bark that gleamed like polished metal bore fruits that looked like jewels, perfectly shaped and impossibly bright."
11"The path ahead was narrower, lined with tall, crystalline hedges that cast strange, shifting shadows."
12"Their laughter was a cacophony, a sound that was both joyful and unnerving."
13"She smiled, revealing teeth that were sharp and pointed, and held out a goblet filled with a liquid that shimmered like starlight."
14"Aurora’s heart was racing, her hand gripping the Fae blade tightly."
15"She glanced at Nyx, who seemed unperturbed, their shadowy form flickering faintly."
16"As they walked, the ground beneath their feet became uneven, the smooth stone giving way to something that felt almost like living tissue, pulsing faintly with …"
17"The silence was deafening, broken only by the faint hum of energy that seemed to emanate from the walls themselves."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount15
matches
0"she asked, her voice low, almost reverent"
1"she murmured, her voice melodic but laced with warning"
2"Aurora murmured, unable to keep the awe from her voice"
3"Nyx said, their voice cutting through her thoughts"
4"Nyx said, their voice firm"
5"the woman said, her voice honey-sweet"
6"Nyx replied coldly, their violet eyes glowing brighter"
7"she murmured, her tone shifting"
8"the woman said, her voice soft but edged with something dangerous"
9"the seer said, her voice calm but firm"
10"she asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
11"Isolde added, her gaze still distant"
12"Nyx said, their voice barely audible"
13"Nyx called, their voice echoing through the chamber"
14"the figure said, their voice resonating with power"
41.30% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
2"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
3"she murmured (murmur)"
4"Isolde added (add)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.59
leniency1
rawRatio0.217
effectiveRatio0.217
68.6406%