Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEXN37CD574KB07KCZ69KA

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Duration:
32.5s
Cost:
$0.003286
Provider:
AtlasCloud

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past ten, sharp and deliberate — three raps that echoed through the narrow hallway and sent Ptolemy bolting from the kitchen counter with a indignated yowl. Aurora set down her coffee mug, the steam still curling from its surface, and frowned at the door. Eva wasn't expecting anyone. Neither was she, not at this hour, not without warning. Three deadbolts. The woman was paranoid about security, and rightly so, given what they all dabbled in. She crossed the room in bare feet, mindful of the stack of papers threatening to avalanche from the coffee table, and pressed her eye to the peephole. Her heart stopped. Through the distorted glass, she could make out the sharp line of shoulders beneath a charcoal coat, platinum hair catching the hallway light. The ivory handle of a cane. The particular way he stood, weight slightly shifted, as if he'd been standing there longer than just those few knocks — as if he'd been gathering his nerve. Lucien. Her hand hovered over the deadbolt. The rational thing would be to turn around, walk back to the kitchen, finish her coffee, and pretend she'd never heard anything. Rational had never been her strong suit, though. Not where he was concerned. She undid the three locks — thumb turn, key, deadbolt — and pulled the door open. The hallway smelled of curry powder and old wood, but Lucien filled her vision completely. He looked exactly as he had six months ago, when he'd walked out of her life without a word of explanation: immaculate in a suit the color of storm clouds, his cane in one hand, the other tucked into his pocket. His face was pale and sharp, those strange eyes — one amber, one black — catching the dim light from the bare bulb above. "Rory," he said. Her name in his voice was a knife she'd forgotten she was holding. She leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed, because the alternative was doing something stupid like reaching for him. "You have the wrong flat." "I don't." "Eva's not here." "I didn't come to see Eva." The silence between them was a living thing. Ptolemy meowed somewhere behind her, oblivious to the tension thick enough to cut. Aurora became acutely aware of her own appearance — sweatpants, an old university hoodie with the Cardiff crest faded nearly to nothing, hair pulled into a messy knot that was already unraveling. She looked like someone who'd been trying to read through a hangover and failing. He looked like he'd stepped off a runway. "How did you find me?" she asked. "I have my ways." "That's not an answer." "It's the only one you're getting." She laughed, the sound hollow. "You haven't changed at all." "Neither have you." His gaze dropped to her wrist, to the small crescent scar visible where the sleeve had ridden up, then back to her face. "You're still not wearing the bracelet I gave you." The bracelet. A silver chain with a tiny charm — a crescent moon, because she'd once told him her birthday was during a full moon, and he'd laughed and said she was chaos personified. She'd thrown it at his chest the night he'd disappeared, watched it clatter to the floor of the restaurant kitchen where they'd been hiding like teenagers stealing moments between orders and deliveries. "I sold it," she lied. "Needed the money." Something flickered across his face — hurt, maybe, or the memory of it. "You're a terrible liar, Aurora." "Don't call me that." "Aurora." He stepped closer, just one step, close enough that she could smell his cologne — something dark and woody, expensive enough to fund a month's rent for this flat. "I need to talk to you." "We talked. Last time I checked, that's what people do before they vanish for half a year. Talk. Or at least, one person talks while the other walks away without explanation." "I had reasons—" "You had reasons." She pushed off the doorframe, suddenly furious, the anger she'd been nursing for months rising like a tide. "You had reasons, so you didn't bother sharing them. You had reasons, so you left me standing in that kitchen like an idiot, wondering what I'd done wrong. I replayed every conversation in my head, Lucien. Every moment. I looked for the part where I'd been too much or not enough, where I'd scared you off somehow—" "You didn't—" "Then what?" She was shaking. She hated that she was shaking. "What could possibly be important enough to just disappear? To not return my calls, my texts, to have your whole bloody network suddenly pretend they don't know who I'm talking about—" "My father." The word landed like a stone in still water. Aurora's mouth closed. She knew — everyone in their circle knew — what Lucien was. Half-demon. The son of something from Avaros, a realm she'd never seen and didn't want to. It was the reason he moved through London's supernatural underworld like a ghost, the reason his information network was so vast and so reliable. It was also the reason he'd never fully touched her, never let himself stay the night, always vanishing before dawn with some excuse about business. "Your father," she repeated. "He found out about you." The hallway seemed to contract. Aurora became aware of the weight of the words, of what they might mean. "Found out what, exactly?" "That I was..." He paused, and for the first time since he'd arrived, he looked uncertain. The mask slipped, just for a moment, and she saw the exhaustion underneath. "That I was falling in love with you. That I'd been compromised." She should have felt triumph, maybe, or vindication. Instead she felt sick. "Compromised." "It's what he calls it. What his kind calls it." Lucien smiled, but there was no humor in it. "A human. A distraction. A weakness. He made it very clear that such attachments were... inconvenient. For both of us." "So you left to protect me." "I left because he threatened to hurt you. Not to scare you, not to warn you off — to hurt you. To make me watch." His voice was flat, recounting something clearly rehearsed. "He's been watching. These past six months, I've been making sure he couldn't find you. Moving pieces. Cutting channels. Making myself so boring that he's lost interest." "By disappearing." "By making sure there was nothing left for him to leverage." He looked at her then, really looked, and the intensity in those mismatched eyes made her breath catch. "I was going to come back. I was always going to come back." "You didn't know that." "I knew it the way I know my own name." He reached out, slowly, giving her time to pull away. His fingers brushed her cheek, feather-light, and she felt the slight wrongness of his temperature — always a little too cool, a little too other. "I knew it the way I knew that I couldn't stay away forever. That I'd tried, and I'd failed, and that the only thing left was to come here and beg you to listen." Aurora's eyes burned. She wasn't going to cry. She absolutely was not going to cry, not in front of him, not over this. "Beg," she said instead, her voice thick. "You're begging." "Yes." "The great Lucien Moreau, information broker, fixer, the most put-together man I've ever met. Begging." "Desperately." He smiled, and this time it reached his eyes, that crooked half-smile that had made her stupid in the first place. "I've missed you. I've missed your terrible jokes and your stubborn refusal to ask for help and the way you snore when you fall asleep on the couch." "I don't snore." "You do. It's terrible. I loved it." She laughed, and it came out wet, and then she was crying, actually crying, and Lucien was pulling her into his arms with a sound that was half-sob and half-relief. He smelled like woodsmoke and money and something faintly sulfurous that she'd never noticed before — or maybe she'd noticed and simply ignored it, the way she ignored all the warning signs that said this was a man made of shadows and secrets. "I hate you," she muttered into his shoulder. "I know." "I hate that you're half-demon and your father is terrifying and I still—" She broke off, pressing her face harder against his coat. "I still want to know what happens next." Lucien pulled back just enough to look at her. His thumb brushed the tear track down her cheek, gentle as a promise. "What happens next is that I stay. If you'll let me. No more disappearing, no more silence. Just... us. Whatever us is." "Us is complicated." "I know." "Like, legally complicated. I'm on the run from my ex, you're a half-demon with a scary father, and I deliver Chinese food for a living." "I know." He was grinning now, properly grinning, the expression so unguarded that it made her chest ache. "I've never cared less about complications in my life." Aurora looked at him — at the platinum hair that was finally starting to show some disorder, at the cane he'd set aside without seeming to notice, at the amber and black eyes that had haunted her dreams for months. She thought about Evan, about the fear that still caught in her throat when someone knocked too hard. She thought about her parents in Cardiff, about the law degree she'd abandoned, about the strange and terrible and wonderful world she'd stumbled into when she'd run to London. She thought about Lucien, and all the ways he could break her heart. Then she thought about all the ways he'd already broken it, and how she'd survived, and how maybe survival was its own kind of hope. "One week," she said. "You get one week to prove you're not going to disappear again. And you're explaining everything — the Avaros thing, your father, all of it. No more secrets." "Done." "And you're buying me dinner. The good place on the corner, not the takeaway." "Done." "And—" She stopped, because he was kissing her, finally, the way she'd been dreaming about for months — unhurried and certain, his hand cupping her face like she was something precious. Ptolemy yowled from somewhere behind them, offended by the intrusion on his territory, and Aurora laughed against Lucien's mouth. "Welcome back," she said. Lucien Moreau, half-demon, information broker, and most complicated man she'd ever met, smiled at her like she'd given him the world. "It's good to be home," he said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.29
leniency0.58
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.029
80.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1762
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"very"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"completely"
2"suddenly"
3"very"
4"really"
5"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.79% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1762
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"unraveling"
count1
5
word"charm"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"intensity"
count1
8
word"absolutely"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"tension"
4"unraveling"
5"charm"
6"flickered"
7"intensity"
8"absolutely"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of the words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1771
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1175
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy3
Lucien9
Cardiff2
Avaros1
London2
Aurora7
Evan1
Moreau1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
3"Evan"
4"Moreau"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Avaros"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like someone who'd been trying to"
1"looked like he'd stepped off a runway"
2"smelled like woodsmoke and money and somet"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1771
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"hated that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs73
mean24.26
std24.34
cv1.003
sampleLengths
031
149
227
33
457
51
641
716
880
916
1023
112
123
136
1475
157
164
174
186
1910
2035
2166
228
2318
244
2536
2631
273
2878
292
3042
312
329
3380
344
355
3623
3741
3813
3939
406
4160
422
4342
444
4579
4623
479
481
4915
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"was concerned"
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount9
totalVerbs205
matches
0"wasn't expecting"
1"was holding"
2"was doing"
3"was shaking"
4"was shaking"
5"was crying, was pulling"
6"was grinning"
7"was kissing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences129
ratio0.101
matches
0"The knock came at half past ten, sharp and deliberate — three raps that echoed through the narrow hallway and sent Ptolemy bolting from the kitchen counter with a indignated yowl."
1"The particular way he stood, weight slightly shifted, as if he'd been standing there longer than just those few knocks — as if he'd been gathering his nerve."
2"She undid the three locks — thumb turn, key, deadbolt — and pulled the door open."
3"His face was pale and sharp, those strange eyes — one amber, one black — catching the dim light from the bare bulb above."
4"Aurora became acutely aware of her own appearance — sweatpants, an old university hoodie with the Cardiff crest faded nearly to nothing, hair pulled into a messy knot that was already unraveling."
5"A silver chain with a tiny charm — a crescent moon, because she'd once told him her birthday was during a full moon, and he'd laughed and said she was chaos personified."
6"Something flickered across his face — hurt, maybe, or the memory of it."
7"\"Aurora.\" He stepped closer, just one step, close enough that she could smell his cologne — something dark and woody, expensive enough to fund a month's rent for this flat."
8"She knew — everyone in their circle knew — what Lucien was."
9"His fingers brushed her cheek, feather-light, and she felt the slight wrongness of his temperature — always a little too cool, a little too other."
10"He smelled like woodsmoke and money and something faintly sulfurous that she'd never noticed before — or maybe she'd noticed and simply ignored it, the way she ignored all the warning signs that said this was a man made of shadows and secrets."
11"Aurora looked at him — at the platinum hair that was finally starting to show some disorder, at the cane he'd set aside without seeming to notice, at the amber and black eyes that had haunted her dreams for months."
12"\"And—\" She stopped, because he was kissing her, finally, the way she'd been dreaming about for months — unhurried and certain, his hand cupping her face like she was something precious."
86.93% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1165
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount64
adverbRatio0.054935622317596564
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.015450643776824034
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean13.73
std11.32
cv0.825
sampleLengths
031
118
24
310
42
515
627
73
823
96
1028
111
126
1322
148
155
1616
1715
1841
1924
203
2113
2218
235
242
253
266
278
2813
2932
3014
318
327
334
344
356
365
375
3826
399
402
4132
4232
435
443
4513
465
474
4830
496
46.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.34108527131782945
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners44
93.90% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Instead she felt sick."
1"Then she thought about all"
ratio0.028
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences71
matches
0"She crossed the room in"
1"Her heart stopped."
2"Her hand hovered over the"
3"She undid the three locks"
4"He looked exactly as he"
5"His face was pale and"
6"Her name in his voice"
7"She leaned against the doorframe,"
8"She looked like someone who'd"
9"He looked like he'd stepped"
10"She laughed, the sound hollow."
11"His gaze dropped to her"
12"She'd thrown it at his"
13"He stepped closer, just one"
14"She pushed off the doorframe,"
15"She was shaking"
16"She hated that she was"
17"She knew — everyone in"
18"It was the reason he"
19"It was also the reason"
ratio0.563
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences71
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Aurora set down her coffee"
2"Eva wasn't expecting anyone."
3"Neither was she, not at"
4"The woman was paranoid about"
5"She crossed the room in"
6"Her heart stopped."
7"The ivory handle of a"
8"The particular way he stood,"
9"Her hand hovered over the"
10"The rational thing would be"
11"She undid the three locks"
12"The hallway smelled of curry"
13"He looked exactly as he"
14"His face was pale and"
15"Her name in his voice"
16"She leaned against the doorframe,"
17"The silence between them was"
18"Ptolemy meowed somewhere behind her,"
19"Aurora became acutely aware of"
ratio0.93
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The knock came at half past ten, sharp and deliberate — three raps that echoed through the narrow hallway and sent Ptolemy bolting from the kitchen counter with…"
1"The particular way he stood, weight slightly shifted, as if he'd been standing there longer than just those few knocks — as if he'd been gathering his nerve."
2"Aurora became acutely aware of her own appearance — sweatpants, an old university hoodie with the Cardiff crest faded nearly to nothing, hair pulled into a mess…"
3"She laughed, and it came out wet, and then she was crying, actually crying, and Lucien was pulling her into his arms with a sound that was half-sob and half-rel…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said instead, her voice thick"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she lied (lie)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences69
tagDensity0.13
leniency0.261
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.087
75.6396%