"The knock came at half past ten, sharp and deliberate — three raps that echoed through the narrow hallway and sent Ptolemy bolting from the kitchen counter with a indignated yowl."
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"The particular way he stood, weight slightly shifted, as if he'd been standing there longer than just those few knocks — as if he'd been gathering his nerve."
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"She undid the three locks — thumb turn, key, deadbolt — and pulled the door open."
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"His face was pale and sharp, those strange eyes — one amber, one black — catching the dim light from the bare bulb above."
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"Aurora became acutely aware of her own appearance — sweatpants, an old university hoodie with the Cardiff crest faded nearly to nothing, hair pulled into a messy knot that was already unraveling."
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"A silver chain with a tiny charm — a crescent moon, because she'd once told him her birthday was during a full moon, and he'd laughed and said she was chaos personified."
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"Something flickered across his face — hurt, maybe, or the memory of it."
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"\"Aurora.\" He stepped closer, just one step, close enough that she could smell his cologne — something dark and woody, expensive enough to fund a month's rent for this flat."
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"She knew — everyone in their circle knew — what Lucien was."
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"His fingers brushed her cheek, feather-light, and she felt the slight wrongness of his temperature — always a little too cool, a little too other."
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"He smelled like woodsmoke and money and something faintly sulfurous that she'd never noticed before — or maybe she'd noticed and simply ignored it, the way she ignored all the warning signs that said this was a man made of shadows and secrets."
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"Aurora looked at him — at the platinum hair that was finally starting to show some disorder, at the cane he'd set aside without seeming to notice, at the amber and black eyes that had haunted her dreams for months."
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"\"And—\" She stopped, because he was kissing her, finally, the way she'd been dreaming about for months — unhurried and certain, his hand cupping her face like she was something precious."
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"The knock came at half past ten, sharp and deliberate — three raps that echoed through the narrow hallway and sent Ptolemy bolting from the kitchen counter with…"
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"The particular way he stood, weight slightly shifted, as if he'd been standing there longer than just those few knocks — as if he'd been gathering his nerve."
2
"Aurora became acutely aware of her own appearance — sweatpants, an old university hoodie with the Cardiff crest faded nearly to nothing, hair pulled into a mess…"
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"She laughed, and it came out wet, and then she was crying, actually crying, and Lucien was pulling her into his arms with a sound that was half-sob and half-rel…"