Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEY091ZQAPYMQ3EYCWRTQB

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Duration:
44.6s
Cost:
$0.001600
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station beneath Camden smelled of damp concrete and decayed iron. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the crumbling steps with military precision, her sharp jaw angled downward as her brown eyes scanned the scene. The worn leather watch on her left wrist ticked softly, a steady counterpoint to the faint drip of water echoing from the depths of the station. She adjusted her coat, the weight of her holster reassuringly familiar against her hip. The Veil Market, normally a hive of clandestine activity, was eerily still. Green emergency lights cast long shadows across the platform, illuminating stalls draped in tattered black cloth. The scent of incense lingered faintly, mingling with something metallic—blood, she noted with a grimace. A uniformed officer stood by the platform’s edge, his face pale beneath the flickering light. "Quinn," he greeted her with a nod. "It’s… different down here." "Different doesn’t begin to cover it," she muttered, stepping past him. A pool of blood gleamed darkly on the concrete, its edges disrupted by the subtle scuff of a shoe. Someone had tried to obscure footprints. She crouched, her gloved fingertips hovering just above the stain. The blood was fresh, no more than a few hours old. "Over here," came a voice she recognized. Eva Kowalski stood by a stall, her freckled complexion stark in the sickly light. Her round glasses caught the green glow, obscuring her eyes for a moment. The worn leather satchel slung across her shoulder bulged with books, its strap digging into her coat. She tucked a loose curl of red hair behind her ear—a nervous habit Quinn had noticed before. "What are you doing here, Kowalski?" Quinn asked, rising to her feet. Her tone was sharp, though she couldn’t entirely stifle her curiosity. Eva wasn’t just anyone; she knew more about the occult than anyone Quinn had met, and she had a knack for showing up where she wasn’t supposed to. "I was called in," Eva replied, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. "Detective Morris—when he died, they brought me in to consult. Someone thought this might be… similar." The name hit Quinn like a punch to the gut. Morris. Her partner, gone three years ago under circumstances no one could explain. She swallowed the ache in her throat and stepped closer. "What’s similar?" Eva gestured to the stall behind her. It was a modest setup, its shelves lined with jars of unidentifiable substances and trinkets that shimmered unnaturally in the light. Among the clutter, Quinn spotted a small brass compass, its casing etched with intricate sigils. The needle quivered faintly, pointing not north but toward the darkness of the tunnel. "Is that—?" Quinn started. "A Veil Compass," Eva confirmed. "It points to supernatural rifts or portals. And it’s been… tampered with." Quinn frowned, stepping closer to inspect the compass. The verdigris on its casing was chipped in places, as if someone had scraped it away. The sigils, once protective, were marred by deep scratches. "What does that mean?" she asked, though she dreaded the answer. "It’s been corrupted," Eva said softly. "Someone’s turned it into a lure, not a guide. Whatever it’s pointing to… it’s dangerous." Quinn’s gaze followed the compass needle into the shadows of the tunnel. "And the blood?" Eva hesitated, her green eyes flickering with unease. "I think someone tried to stop it. Whoever they were… they didn’t make it." Quinn scanned the scene again, her sharp eyes catching details others might miss. The scuff marks near the blood pool suggested a struggle. Fragments of broken glass glittered on the ground—a jar smashed in the fight. And there, near the edge of the platform, a faint smear of ash on the concrete. She crouched again, brushing her fingertips over the mark. It was cold, unnaturally so. "There’s more," Eva said, pulling a notebook from her satchel. She flipped it open to a page filled with hastily scribbled notes and sketches. "This isn’t the first time something like this has happened. There’s a pattern—broken sigils, corrupted artifacts, and disappearances. Always near places where the Veil is thin." "The Veil?" Quinn asked, though the word stirred a memory she couldn’t quite place. "The boundary between our world and… others," Eva explained. "It’s not something most people ever encounter. But lately, it’s been weakening." Quinn’s mind raced, piecing together the fragments of the scene. The broken compass, the ash, the blood—they weren’t just random elements. They were part of something larger, something sinister. "You think this was deliberate." Eva nodded. "Whoever did this knew what they were doing. They’re exploiting the Veil, using it for their own purposes." "And what purposes might those be?" Quinn asked, though she wasn’t sure she wanted the answer. Eva hesitated again, her fingers tightening around the notebook. "That’s the part I’m still figuring out. But whatever it is, it’s already cost lives." Quinn straightened, her sharp jaw set in determination. "Then we’ll stop it. Whatever it takes." Eva’s gaze met hers, and for a moment, Quinn saw something she couldn’t quite name—fear, yes, but also resolve. "Detective… there’s something else you should know." "Spit it out," Quinn said, her tone gruff. "The last time I saw a Veil Compass like this was three years ago," Eva said quietly. "It was found near Detective Morris." The words hung in the air like a curse. Quinn’s chest tightened, her breath coming in short, sharp bursts. Morris’s face flashed in her mind—his easy smile, the way he’d always had her back. And then the emptiness, the unanswered questions that had haunted her ever since. "You’re saying this is connected to his death," Quinn said, her voice low and hard. Eva nodded. "I think it’s all connected. The Veil, the compasses, the disappearances… and Morris." Quinn turned back to the tunnel, her brown eyes narrowing as she stared into the darkness. The compass needle quivered again, its point unwavering. Whatever lay in that tunnel, she knew she had to face it—not just for the sake of the case, but for Morris. "We’re going in," she said, her tone leaving no room for argument. Eva hesitated only for a moment before nodding. "I’ll follow your lead." Quinn stepped onto the tracks, her boots crunching on the gravel. The green lights faded behind them as they moved deeper into the tunnel, the air growing colder with every step. The compass needle steadied, pointing them onward. And somewhere in the darkness, something stirred.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
91.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva said softly [softly]"
1"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.118
90.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
12.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1084
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"scanned"
count2
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"depths"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"clandestine"
count1
6
word"disrupted"
count1
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"quivered"
count2
12
word"encounter"
count1
13
word"raced"
count1
14
word"sinister"
count1
15
word"resolve"
count1
16
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"echoing"
2"depths"
3"weight"
4"familiar"
5"clandestine"
6"disrupted"
7"stark"
8"shimmered"
9"etched"
10"intricate"
11"quivered"
12"encounter"
13"raced"
14"sinister"
15"resolve"
16"unwavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences75
matches
0"g with unease"
1"t in determination"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences92
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1075
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount820
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.44
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn20
Veil1
Market1
Eva15
Kowalski1
Morris3
persons
0"Camden"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Eva"
4"Kowalski"
5"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.28
windowScore0.167
70.63% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite place"
1"quite name—fear, yes, but also resolve"
13.95% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.86
wordCount1075
matches
0"not north but toward the darkness of the tunnel"
1"not just for the sake of the case, but for Morris"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean30.71
std19.51
cv0.635
sampleLengths
075
158
211
357
468
551
631
735
857
94
1017
1144
1221
1315
1422
1566
1650
1714
1821
1934
2020
2116
2224
2315
2426
258
2623
2747
2815
2915
3046
3112
3212
3338
347
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"was chipped"
1"were marred"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs141
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences92
ratio0.087
matches
0"The scent of incense lingered faintly, mingling with something metallic—blood, she noted with a grimace."
1"She tucked a loose curl of red hair behind her ear—a nervous habit Quinn had noticed before."
2"Eva wasn’t just anyone; she knew more about the occult than anyone Quinn had met, and she had a knack for showing up where she wasn’t supposed to."
3"Fragments of broken glass glittered on the ground—a jar smashed in the fight."
4"The broken compass, the ash, the blood—they weren’t just random elements."
5"Eva’s gaze met hers, and for a moment, Quinn saw something she couldn’t quite name—fear, yes, but also resolve."
6"Morris’s face flashed in her mind—his easy smile, the way he’d always had her back."
7"Whatever lay in that tunnel, she knew she had to face it—not just for the sake of the case, but for Morris."
95.85% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount827
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.044740024183796856
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.018137847642079808
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences92
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences92
mean11.68
std5.42
cv0.464
sampleLengths
013
122
226
314
412
516
615
715
87
94
1011
1119
126
1310
1411
157
1614
1713
1817
1917
2012
2111
2228
2315
2416
2510
261
2712
2810
292
307
3121
3215
3314
344
355
3612
378
3816
399
4011
416
4215
4312
443
458
4614
4713
4810
4913
49.28% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.31521739130434784
totalSentences92
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences69
matches
0"She adjusted her coat, the"
1"he greeted her with a"
2"she muttered, stepping past him"
3"She crouched, her gloved fingertips"
4"Her round glasses caught the"
5"She tucked a loose curl"
6"Her tone was sharp, though"
7"Her partner, gone three years"
8"She swallowed the ache in"
9"It was a modest setup,"
10"she asked, though she dreaded"
11"She crouched again, brushing her"
12"It was cold, unnaturally so."
13"She flipped it open to"
14"They were part of something"
15"she said, her tone leaving"
ratio0.232
10.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences69
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station beneath"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
2"The worn leather watch on"
3"She adjusted her coat, the"
4"The Veil Market, normally a"
5"The scent of incense lingered"
6"A uniformed officer stood by"
7"he greeted her with a"
8"she muttered, stepping past him"
9"A pool of blood gleamed"
10"Someone had tried to obscure"
11"She crouched, her gloved fingertips"
12"The blood was fresh, no"
13"Eva Kowalski stood by a"
14"Her round glasses caught the"
15"The worn leather satchel slung"
16"She tucked a loose curl"
17"Quinn asked, rising to her"
18"Her tone was sharp, though"
19"Eva wasn’t just anyone; she"
ratio0.899
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"It was a modest setup, its shelves lined with jars of unidentifiable substances and trinkets that shimmered unnaturally in the light."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Eva replied, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
1"Quinn asked, though the word stirred a memory she couldn’t quite place"
2"Quinn said, her voice low and hard"
3"she said, her tone leaving no room for argument"
61.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Eva confirmed (confirm)"
2"Eva explained (explain)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.412
leniency0.824
rawRatio0.214
effectiveRatio0.176
70.5482%