Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEYK4H177N4CDKXRXTEGYM

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Duration:
11.3s
Cost:
$0.003281
Provider:
SambaNova

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air changed as they passed between the great oak standing stones. One moment, Rory was breathing the damp, petrol-tinged air of Richmond Park at dusk. The next, her lungs filled with the sweetness of decay and riotous, alien blooms. It was like stepping through a membrane, a subtle resistance giving way to a profound and sudden shift in reality. She stopped, her hand instinctively going to the Fae-forged dagger at her hip, its cold a reassuring anchor against her thigh. Nyx flowed to a halt beside her, their shadowy form seeming to drink the strange light. Their faintly glowing violet eyes scanned the grove. Isolde, who had guided them here, stood serene, her silver hair seeming to catch a light that came from nowhere and everywhere. “Welcome to the crossing place,” Isolde said, her voice a melody that hung in the air. “Mind your step. The path here remembers the tread of things far older than you.” The grove was nothing like the park outside. The sky above was a bruised, eternal twilight, a deep indigo shot through with veins of shimmering silver like a vast, celestial amethyst. No sun, no moon, no stars—just this constant, eerie gloaming. The ground underfoot was a carpet of moss so soft it felt like walking on a living thing, and it pulsed with a faint, rhythmic luminescence. Wildflowers, unlike any Rory had ever seen, bloomed in impossible profusion. Some had petals like spun glass that chimed softly as they brushed against each other in a breeze Rory couldn’t feel. Others were great, fleshy blossoms that throbbed with a deep, internal magenta light. “The light here…” Rory began, her own voice sounding small and blunt after Isolde’s. “It does not come from above,” Nyx whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering over stone. “It comes from within. Everything here is awake. Everything is watching.” They moved deeper. The air hummed with a low, resonant frequency that vibrated in Rory’s teeth. A stream cut through the center of the grove, but its water ran thick and clear as liquid crystal, and where it flowed over rocks, it sang a complex, watery chord. Rory crouched, dipping her fingers in. It was neither warm nor cold, but it carried a charge that made the fine hairs on her arm stand on end. “Do not drink it,” Isolde warned, not unkindly. “It holds memories that are not your own. You would not enjoy the dreams.” Rory pulled her hand back, wiping it on her jeans. The unease that had been a flicker in her gut now fanned into a steady flame. This place was beautiful, but its beauty was predatory. It was too perfect, too conscious. She felt the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist tingle, a nervous habit she thought she’d long outgrown. Out of the corner of her eye, she saw the shadows between the twisted, silver-barked trees deepen and stretch in ways that defied the consistent, sourceless light. Nyx seemed to find it comforting. They drifted toward a particularly deep pool of shadow beneath a tree whose branches drooped with heavy, golden fruit. Their form blurred at the edges, becoming less distinct, more a part of the ambient darkness. “This is a place of power for my kind,” they murmured, their voice gaining a strange resonance. “The barriers are… thinner. Softer. I could almost…” They reached a hand of solid shadow toward the dark, and the darkness seemed to reach back, coiling around their fingers like a affectionate pet. “Almost is a dangerous word here, child of nowhere,” Isolde said. Her lavender eyes were fixed on Nyx, her expression unreadable. “The paths that open for you may not be ones you wish to walk. You are a guest, not a native. Remember the difference.” Ahead, the grove opened into a wider clearing. At its center stood a ring of stones, smaller and darker than the oaks that had marked the entrance. They were slick with the same glowing moss, and carved with spiraling patterns that seemed to shift and writhe if Rory looked at them for too long. In the center of the ring, the air shimmered. It was a distortion, a flaw in the world, like heat haze off summer asphalt, but it crackled with silent energy. Rory’s Heartstone pendant, resting against her collarbone, gave a distinct, warm throb. “A rift,” she breathed, her scientific mind, trained for law, scrambling for a framework and finding none. “A tear.” “A thinning,” Isolde corrected. “A place where the Veil is worn to a thread. It is stable. For now. It is why this grove exists. It is a wellspring.” As they approached the stone circle, the humming in the air intensified. The wildflowers here were different—tall, slender stalks topped with blooms that looked like open, watching eyes, their irises shifting through a spectrum of colors. They turned, slowly, to follow the trio’s progress. Rory’s sense of wonder was now thoroughly braided with dread. Every step felt like an intrusion. The grove was not just a location; it was an entity, and they were bugs under its microscope. She saw things moving in the periphery—shapes that flitted between trees too quickly to be identified, a glint of something that might have been an eye, the rustle of something that was definitely not the chiming glass-flowers. She drew the Fae blade. The moonsilver glimmered in the twilight, and a wave of intense cold radiated from it, causing the nearest watching-eye flowers to snap shut with an audible *pop*. The unnatural silence that followed was more terrifying than the sounds. “You feel it,” Isolde observed, watching her. “The weight of ages. The gaze of the unseen. This is the truth of the world that lies beside your own. It is not all ballrooms and delicate politics in the Fae Courts, nor endless feasts in the amber halls of Dymas. This is the root and the bone of it. Wild. Old. Indifferent.” Nyx had drawn back from the shadows, their form coalescing into something more solid and defensive. The playful interaction with the darkness was gone, replaced by a wary stillness. The grove was no longer a curiosity; it was a revelation of scale, and their own smallness within it. Rory looked from the shimmering rift to the sentient flowers to the ancient, watching trees. The cool-headed logic she prided herself on was useless here. This required a different kind of thinking, a primal kind of listening. She wasn’t just a delivery girl from Cardiff or a refugee from a bad relationship. Standing in that impossible clearing, with a dagger of cold moonlight in her hand and a pulsing stone at her throat, she was something else entirely. She was a woman in a god’s garden, and she understood, with a clarity that was as frightening as it was absolute, that she was now part of its strange and terrible ecology. The exploration was over. They had been discovered.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.588
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
2"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1171
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"tinged"
count1
1
word"profound"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count1
8
word"complex"
count1
9
word"flicker"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"comforting"
count1
12
word"resonance"
count1
13
word"unreadable"
count1
14
word"shimmered"
count1
15
word"throb"
count1
16
word"framework"
count1
17
word"sense of"
count1
18
word"glint"
count1
19
word"silence"
count1
20
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"tinged"
1"profound"
2"scanned"
3"pulsed"
4"rhythmic"
5"throbbed"
6"vibrated"
7"crystal"
8"complex"
9"flicker"
10"perfect"
11"comforting"
12"resonance"
13"unreadable"
14"shimmered"
15"throb"
16"framework"
17"sense of"
18"glint"
19"silence"
20"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences67
matches
0"d with dread"
78.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences74
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1161
ratio0.001
matches
0"pop"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"A stream cut through the center of the grove, but its water ran thick and clear as liquid crystal, and where it flowed o…"
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount965
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.14
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Richmond1
Park1
Fae-forged1
Isolde7
Nyx5
Heartstone1
Fae2
Cardiff1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae-forged"
3"Fae"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore0.93
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"felt like walking on a living thing, an"
1"patterns that seemed to shift and writhe if Rory looked at them for too long"
2"looked like open, watching eyes, their ir"
3"felt like an intrusion"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.861
wordCount1161
matches
0"neither warm nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean55.29
std28.99
cv0.524
sampleLengths
060
167
231
3112
414
527
675
722
887
941
1050
1145
1296
1319
1429
1544
1671
1743
1861
1948
20119
89.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences67
matches
0"were fixed"
1"was gone"
2"been discovered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs154
matches
0"was breathing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences74
ratio0.068
matches
0"No sun, no moon, no stars—just this constant, eerie gloaming."
1"The wildflowers here were different—tall, slender stalks topped with blooms that looked like open, watching eyes, their irises shifting through a spectrum of colors."
2"The grove was not just a location; it was an entity, and they were bugs under its microscope."
3"She saw things moving in the periphery—shapes that flitted between trees too quickly to be identified, a glint of something that might have been an eye, the rustle of something that was definitely not the chiming glass-flowers."
4"The grove was no longer a curiosity; it was a revelation of scale, and their own smallness within it."
70.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount975
adjectiveStacks5
stackExamples
0"damp, petrol-tinged air"
1"deep, internal magenta light."
2"small crescent-shaped scar"
3"twisted, silver-barked trees"
4"different—tall, slender stalks"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03282051282051282
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010256410256410256
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences74
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences74
mean15.69
std8.94
cv0.57
sampleLengths
012
114
214
320
421
516
68
722
816
915
108
1123
1210
1326
1411
1521
1613
1714
1816
1911
203
2113
2231
236
2422
258
2614
2710
2816
299
306
3119
3227
336
3419
3516
3617
3733
3811
3910
4024
418
4219
4327
449
4521
4612
4717
482
494
52.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3783783783783784
totalSentences74
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.77% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences65
matches
0"It was like stepping through"
1"She stopped, her hand instinctively"
2"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
3"They moved deeper."
4"It was neither warm nor"
5"It was too perfect, too"
6"She felt the small crescent-shaped"
7"They drifted toward a particularly"
8"Their form blurred at the"
9"they murmured, their voice gaining"
10"They reached a hand of"
11"Her lavender eyes were fixed"
12"They were slick with the"
13"It was a distortion, a"
14"she breathed, her scientific mind,"
15"They turned, slowly, to follow"
16"She saw things moving in"
17"She drew the Fae blade."
18"She wasn’t just a delivery"
19"She was a woman in"
ratio0.323
21.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences65
matches
0"The air changed as they"
1"The next, her lungs filled"
2"It was like stepping through"
3"She stopped, her hand instinctively"
4"Nyx flowed to a halt"
5"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
6"Isolde, who had guided them"
7"Isolde said, her voice a"
8"The grove was nothing like"
9"The sky above was a"
10"The ground underfoot was a"
11"Wildflowers, unlike any Rory had"
12"Some had petals like spun"
13"Others were great, fleshy blossoms"
14"Rory began, her own voice"
15"Nyx whispered, the sound like"
16"They moved deeper."
17"The air hummed with a"
18"A stream cut through the"
19"Rory crouched, dipping her fingers"
ratio0.877
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
9.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Isolde, who had guided them here, stood serene, her silver hair seeming to catch a light that came from nowhere and everywhere."
1"Others were great, fleshy blossoms that throbbed with a deep, internal magenta light."
2"Out of the corner of her eye, she saw the shadows between the twisted, silver-barked trees deepen and stretch in ways that defied the consistent, sourceless lig…"
3"They were slick with the same glowing moss, and carved with spiraling patterns that seemed to shift and writhe if Rory looked at them for too long."
4"The wildflowers here were different—tall, slender stalks topped with blooms that looked like open, watching eyes, their irises shifting through a spectrum of co…"
5"She saw things moving in the periphery—shapes that flitted between trees too quickly to be identified, a glint of something that might have been an eye, the rus…"
6"The unnatural silence that followed was more terrifying than the sounds."
7"She was a woman in a god’s garden, and she understood, with a clarity that was as frightening as it was absolute, that she was now part of its strange and terri…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Isolde said, her voice a melody that hung in the air"
1"Rory began, her own voice sounding small and blunt after Isolde’s"
2"Nyx whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering over stone"
3"Isolde warned, not unkindly"
4"they murmured, their voice gaining a strange resonance"
5"They reached, and the darkness seemed to reach back, coiling around their fingers like a affectionate pet"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde warned (warn)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
3"she breathed (breathe)"
4"Isolde corrected (correct)"
5"Isolde observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.706
65.9053%