| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.588 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.19% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1171 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 10.33% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1171 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "tinged" | | 1 | "profound" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "throbbed" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "crystal" | | 8 | "complex" | | 9 | "flicker" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "comforting" | | 12 | "resonance" | | 13 | "unreadable" | | 14 | "shimmered" | | 15 | "throb" | | 16 | "framework" | | 17 | "sense of" | | 18 | "glint" | | 19 | "silence" | | 20 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | | |
| 78.89% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 74 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 54 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1161 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "A stream cut through the center of the grove, but its water ran thick and clear as liquid crystal, and where it flowed o…" |
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| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 965 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.14 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 11 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Nyx | 5 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae-forged" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.93 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like walking on a living thing, an" | | 1 | "patterns that seemed to shift and writhe if Rory looked at them for too long" | | 2 | "looked like open, watching eyes, their ir" | | 3 | "felt like an intrusion" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.861 | | wordCount | 1161 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 21 | | mean | 55.29 | | std | 28.99 | | cv | 0.524 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 112 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 75 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 87 | | 9 | 41 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 45 | | 12 | 96 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 29 | | 15 | 44 | | 16 | 71 | | 17 | 43 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 119 |
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| 89.55% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "were fixed" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "been discovered" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 154 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 74 | | ratio | 0.068 | | matches | | 0 | "No sun, no moon, no stars—just this constant, eerie gloaming." | | 1 | "The wildflowers here were different—tall, slender stalks topped with blooms that looked like open, watching eyes, their irises shifting through a spectrum of colors." | | 2 | "The grove was not just a location; it was an entity, and they were bugs under its microscope." | | 3 | "She saw things moving in the periphery—shapes that flitted between trees too quickly to be identified, a glint of something that might have been an eye, the rustle of something that was definitely not the chiming glass-flowers." | | 4 | "The grove was no longer a curiosity; it was a revelation of scale, and their own smallness within it." |
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| 70.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 975 | | adjectiveStacks | 5 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "damp, petrol-tinged air" | | 1 | "deep, internal magenta light." | | 2 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 3 | "twisted, silver-barked trees" | | 4 | "different—tall, slender stalks" |
| | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.03282051282051282 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010256410256410256 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 74 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 74 | | mean | 15.69 | | std | 8.94 | | cv | 0.57 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 16 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 6 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 33 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 21 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 2 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 52.25% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3783783783783784 | | totalSentences | 74 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 90.77% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "It was like stepping through" | | 1 | "She stopped, her hand instinctively" | | 2 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 3 | "They moved deeper." | | 4 | "It was neither warm nor" | | 5 | "It was too perfect, too" | | 6 | "She felt the small crescent-shaped" | | 7 | "They drifted toward a particularly" | | 8 | "Their form blurred at the" | | 9 | "they murmured, their voice gaining" | | 10 | "They reached a hand of" | | 11 | "Her lavender eyes were fixed" | | 12 | "They were slick with the" | | 13 | "It was a distortion, a" | | 14 | "she breathed, her scientific mind," | | 15 | "They turned, slowly, to follow" | | 16 | "She saw things moving in" | | 17 | "She drew the Fae blade." | | 18 | "She wasn’t just a delivery" | | 19 | "She was a woman in" |
| | ratio | 0.323 | |
| 21.54% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | | 0 | "The air changed as they" | | 1 | "The next, her lungs filled" | | 2 | "It was like stepping through" | | 3 | "She stopped, her hand instinctively" | | 4 | "Nyx flowed to a halt" | | 5 | "Their faintly glowing violet eyes" | | 6 | "Isolde, who had guided them" | | 7 | "Isolde said, her voice a" | | 8 | "The grove was nothing like" | | 9 | "The sky above was a" | | 10 | "The ground underfoot was a" | | 11 | "Wildflowers, unlike any Rory had" | | 12 | "Some had petals like spun" | | 13 | "Others were great, fleshy blossoms" | | 14 | "Rory began, her own voice" | | 15 | "Nyx whispered, the sound like" | | 16 | "They moved deeper." | | 17 | "The air hummed with a" | | 18 | "A stream cut through the" | | 19 | "Rory crouched, dipping her fingers" |
| | ratio | 0.877 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 9.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde, who had guided them here, stood serene, her silver hair seeming to catch a light that came from nowhere and everywhere." | | 1 | "Others were great, fleshy blossoms that throbbed with a deep, internal magenta light." | | 2 | "Out of the corner of her eye, she saw the shadows between the twisted, silver-barked trees deepen and stretch in ways that defied the consistent, sourceless lig…" | | 3 | "They were slick with the same glowing moss, and carved with spiraling patterns that seemed to shift and writhe if Rory looked at them for too long." | | 4 | "The wildflowers here were different—tall, slender stalks topped with blooms that looked like open, watching eyes, their irises shifting through a spectrum of co…" | | 5 | "She saw things moving in the periphery—shapes that flitted between trees too quickly to be identified, a glint of something that might have been an eye, the rus…" | | 6 | "The unnatural silence that followed was more terrifying than the sounds." | | 7 | "She was a woman in a god’s garden, and she understood, with a clarity that was as frightening as it was absolute, that she was now part of its strange and terri…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her voice a melody that hung in the air" | | 1 | "Rory began, her own voice sounding small and blunt after Isolde’s" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered, the sound like dry leaves skittering over stone" | | 3 | "Isolde warned, not unkindly" | | 4 | "they murmured, their voice gaining a strange resonance" | | 5 | "They reached, and the darkness seemed to reach back, coiling around their fingers like a affectionate pet" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Isolde warned (warn)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 4 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 5 | "Isolde observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.471 | | leniency | 0.941 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.706 | |