Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEYQ0SRDM06G7G11VWJFHE

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Duration:
7.6s
Cost:
$0.000281
Provider:
Clarifai

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The brass knocker echoed like a gunshot in the cramped hallway, making Ptolemy, the tabby cat curled on the faded rug, bolt upright and stare with wide, accusatory green eyes. Aurora Carter, her back pressed against the doorframe of Eva’s flat, flinched. The knock wasn’t unexpected—she’d known he’d come—but the sheer, brutal force of it still made her heart stutter. She wiped her hands on her apron, the fabric rough against her skin, and took a deep breath. *Cool-headed, intelligent, quick out-of-the-box thinking.* She squared her shoulders, the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a souvenir from a childhood fall, tightening beneath her skin. She opened the door. The hallway light, weak and yellow, fell on Lucien Moreau. He stood framed in the doorway, an imposing silhouette against the gloom. His platinum blond hair, slicked back with an almost unnatural precision, caught the light, gleaming like spun silver. His tailored charcoal suit looked immaculate, untouched by the London grime. He didn’t smile. His amber eye, sharp and assessing, swept over her, lingering on the scar, then flicked away. The other, black and unreadable, held hers. He didn’t move forward, just stood there, the ivory-handled cane resting lightly against his thigh. “Aurora,” he said, his voice a low rumble, smooth as aged whiskey. “Or should I say, Rory? Laila? Malphora?” The names rolled off his tongue, each one a shard of a past she’d tried to bury. “I know you’re here. Eva’s flat is… well, it’s not exactly a fortress.” He gestured vaguely towards the door, his gaze never leaving hers. “Three deadbolts, but they’re not designed to keep someone like me out.” She didn’t flinch. Didn’t let the ghost of a smile touch her lips. “And what brings you here, Lucien? To the flat of a woman who left you? Or to the flat of a woman who’s trying to rebuild her life after a very public… departure?” She stepped back, holding the door open just enough to let the smell of curry and old paper drift out. The cat, sensing movement, padded silently into the hallway, its tail held high. “Public?” He followed her inside, his boots clicking on the worn linoleum. “I believe the term is ‘spectacularly messy.’ But that’s neither here nor there.” He paused near the small kitchen, his eyes scanning the clutter of books and scrolls that covered every surface. “You’ve changed your name again. Malphora. Interesting. Evocative.” He picked up a leather-bound tome, its spine cracked, and flipped it open. “Still chasing ghosts, I see. Or perhaps you’ve found a new quarry?” Aurora watched him, her cool exterior cracking just a fraction. The scent of old paper and something faintly metallic—his presence—filled her nostrils. She remembered the heat of his touch, the dangerous intelligence in his eyes. The scar on her wrist throbbed, a reminder of the fall that had ended their last, disastrous encounter. “I’m not chasing ghosts, Lucien. I’m delivering food. For a restaurant. Part-time. It’s… grounding.” She gestured towards the small table where a half-eaten plate of curry sat cold. “Would you like some? It’s cold, but it’s edible.” He closed the book with a soft snap, his amber eye meeting hers again. “Edible is a high bar, Rory. But I’m not here for curry. Or for your culinary skills.” He took a step closer, the ivory cane clicking softly on the floor. “I’m here because I need something. Something you might have.” His voice dropped, becoming a whisper that seemed to vibrate in the air. “A key. A code. Something Eva wouldn’t give me, but you… you always had a way of finding things.” Aurora felt the familiar heat rise in her cheeks, a blush that had nothing to do with the curry. The memory of his hands on her, the intensity of their last argument, flooded back. The hurt, the betrayal. She clenched her fists, the knuckles white. “And what if I don’t have it? What if I never did?” She took a step towards him, her voice low and dangerous. “What if I just… want you to go?” He didn’t flinch. He didn’t back down. He simply raised his cane, the ivory handle glinting in the dim light. “Then I’ll take it.” His smile was cold, predatory. “Or I’ll find someone who will tell me where it is. Someone less… stubborn.” The air crackled between them, thick with unspoken words and lingering desire. Ptolemy, sensing the tension, retreated to the safety of the bookshelf, his fur bristling. The deadbolts on the door seemed suddenly irrelevant. The world outside faded away, leaving only the sharp scent of Lucien Moreau and the ghost of a past that refused to stay buried. The door was open, but the path forward was a minefield. And Aurora, cool-headed though she was, knew she was standing right in the middle of it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
59.09% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.611
leniency1
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.182
75.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount818
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"very"
2"softly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount818
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"imposing"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"gleaming"
count1
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"unreadable"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"throbbed"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"encounter"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"glinting"
count1
14
word"unspoken"
count1
15
word"desire"
count1
16
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"imposing"
2"gloom"
3"gleaming"
4"flicked"
5"unreadable"
6"scanning"
7"throbbed"
8"reminder"
9"encounter"
10"whisper"
11"familiar"
12"intensity"
13"glinting"
14"unspoken"
15"desire"
16"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences47
matches(empty)
82.07% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences47
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences53
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen53
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords809
ratio0.006
matches
0"Cool-headed, intelligent, quick out-of-the-box thinking."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount602
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
Carter1
Eva1
Lucien2
Moreau2
London1
Aurora4
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Carter"
2"Eva"
3"Lucien"
4"Moreau"
5"Aurora"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences40
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"whisper that seemed to vibrate in the air"
1"seemed suddenly irrelevant"
76.39% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.236
wordCount809
matches
0"neither here nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences53
matches
0"scrolls that covered"
14.06% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean80.9
std16.11
cv0.199
sampleLengths
0109
192
272
379
477
590
686
776
843
985
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"was, knew"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs101
matches
0"was standing"
35.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences53
ratio0.038
matches
0"The knock wasn’t unexpected—she’d known he’d come—but the sheer, brutal force of it still made her heart stutter."
1"The scent of old paper and something faintly metallic—his presence—filled her nostrils."
91.70% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount610
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"wide, accusatory green eyes."
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.04262295081967213
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.013114754098360656
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences53
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences53
mean15.26
std8.96
cv0.587
sampleLengths
030
112
218
318
427
54
610
712
818
911
103
1116
127
1315
1412
1524
1624
1712
183
1910
2053
2113
2212
2332
2421
2512
2610
2712
2813
2918
3028
319
3214
3330
3423
3519
3619
3715
384
397
4023
418
423
434
4413
459
4614
4712
4814
498
51.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.37735849056603776
totalSentences53
uniqueOpeners20
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences47
matches
0"She wiped her hands on"
1"She opened the door."
2"He stood framed in the"
3"His platinum blond hair, slicked"
4"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
5"He didn’t smile."
6"His amber eye, sharp and"
7"He didn’t move forward, just"
8"he said, his voice a"
9"He gestured vaguely towards the"
10"She didn’t flinch."
11"She stepped back, holding the"
12"He followed her inside, his"
13"He paused near the small"
14"He picked up a leather-bound"
15"She remembered the heat of"
16"She gestured towards the small"
17"He closed the book with"
18"He took a step closer,"
19"His voice dropped, becoming a"
ratio0.553
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences47
matches
0"The brass knocker echoed like"
1"Aurora Carter, her back pressed"
2"The knock wasn’t unexpected—she’d known"
3"She wiped her hands on"
4"She opened the door."
5"The hallway light, weak and"
6"He stood framed in the"
7"His platinum blond hair, slicked"
8"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
9"He didn’t smile."
10"His amber eye, sharp and"
11"The other, black and unreadable,"
12"He didn’t move forward, just"
13"he said, his voice a"
14"The names rolled off his"
15"He gestured vaguely towards the"
16"She didn’t flinch."
17"She stepped back, holding the"
18"The cat, sensing movement, padded"
19"He followed her inside, his"
ratio0.936
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The scar on her wrist throbbed, a reminder of the fall that had ended their last, disastrous encounter."
1"Aurora felt the familiar heat rise in her cheeks, a blush that had nothing to do with the curry."
2"Ptolemy, sensing the tension, retreated to the safety of the bookshelf, his fur bristling."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, his voice a low rumble, smooth as aged whiskey"
1"He followed, his boots clicking on the worn linoleum"
2"He took, the ivory cane clicking softly on the floor"
3"She took, her voice low and dangerous"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
65.6236%