Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEYQNTKWFJP8Y7V332FHGM

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Duration:
51.2s
Cost:
$0.001435
Provider:
SiliconFlow

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the grove had been cool, smelling of damp earth and night-blooming jasmine. The air that greeted them on the other side of the shimmering rift was warm, thick, and carried the scent of honey, roasted meat, and fermenting fruit. It was like stepping from a chapel into a tavern kitchen at the height of service. Aurora Carter—Rory—stumbled, the heel of her boot sinking into something soft. Not mud. She looked down. The ground was a velvety, moss-like covering in a deep burgundy, and it gave underfoot with a faint, springy resistance. It felt alive. “Steady,” a voice whispered, the sound seeming to form from the coalescing shadows beside her. Nyx solidified from a dark smear in the air into their familiar humanoid silhouette, their faintly glowing violet eyes surveying the new terrain. “The crossing is always… disorienting.” Rory straightened, her hand going instinctively to the silver chain at her throat. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against her skin, a slow, warm throb like a second heartbeat. “It’s warm here,” she murmured, already shrugging out of her jacket. The sky above was not a sky at all, not as she knew it. It was a dome of warm, luminous amber, shot through with slow-moving currents of deeper gold and copper. There was no sun, yet the light was diffuse and constant, casting long, rich shadows. “Time moves differently here as well,” Isolde said, her voice a melody that seemed to blend with the low, ambient hum of the place. The Half-Fae seer stood a few paces ahead, her silver hair almost glowing against the amber backdrop. She left no impression on the burgundy moss. “But the direction of its flow is less predictable than in my grove. An hour may be a minute, or a year. We should not linger aimlessly.” They were in a garden, but it was a garden from a delirious dream. Trees bore what looked like gilded pears and sapphire-hued apples, their skins so perfectly reflective they seemed to hold miniature versions of the strange sky within them. Flowers the size of dinner plates hung from creeping vines, their petals layered like ruffled silk in impossible gradients of color: crimson bleeding into gold, violet into emerald. The air buzzed, not with insects, but with a soft, chiming resonance, as if the very pollen drifting in the warm air was vibrating. “This is Dymas?” Rory asked, her voice hushed. “The realm of gluttony,” Nyx confirmed, their form flickering at the edges as a particularly dense shadow from a twisted, candelabra-like tree passed over them. “A place of eternal harvest. Do not eat anything. Do not drink anything. The indulgence is the trap.” They moved forward, the strange moss muffling their footsteps. Rory’s analytical mind, the one that had parsed legal texts and now navigated London’s labyrinthine streets for deliveries, began cataloguing. The geometry was wrong. Paths curved not around obstacles, but *through* them, with arches of woven vine forming tunnels through thickets of jewel-toned berries. A stream they crossed ran not with water, but with a clear, syrupy liquid that smelled intensely of elderflower and sunlight. Nyx flowed over it like smoke. Rory and Isolde stepped carefully on smooth, flat stones that seemed placed for that purpose. The wonder began to curdle into unease. It was too quiet, save for that ambient hum. Too perfect. No birds sang. No creatures scurried in the undergrowth. The bounty was staggering, overwhelming, yet it felt utterly sterile. It was a display, not an ecosystem. The garden gave way to a terraced expanse of vineyards. The grapes were black, each one the size of a small plum and glistening with a dewy sheen. Beyond the vines rose the first true structures they had seen: low, sprawling buildings of honey-colored stone, their roofs curved like the backs of resting beasts. Smoke, fragrant with wood spice and caramel, rose from countless chimneys. A wide, flagstone path led towards the largest of the buildings. As they approached, the sounds began. The clatter of pans, the hiss of steam, a cacophony of chopping, the murmur of a hundred simultaneous conversations. It was the soundtrack of a grand, endless banquet. They paused at the edge of a vast courtyard. Before them was an open-sided hall, its interior a scene of controlled, glorious chaos. Long tables groaned under platters of food so elaborately constructed they resembled architecture: castles of pastry, forests of carved vegetables, glazed meats arranged in sunburst patterns. Figures moved among the tables—some humanoid, their features blurred as if seen through heat haze, others more solid, dressed in simple tunics, their faces etched with a timeless, focused exhaustion. The helbound chefs. But it was the diners that stole Rory’s breath. They were shades of magnificence and decay. A woman in a gown of woven rose petals laughed, her teeth stained purple, juice dripping from her chin unheeded. A corpulent man with skin the texture of baked clay methodically stripped the flesh from a roast fowl with his hands, then began on the bones, crunching them with apparent delight. Their eyes were glassy, fixed on the next delicacy, the next goblet. There was no conversation of substance, only grunts of pleasure, demands for more. “The consumption is the worship here,” Isolde whispered, her pale lavender eyes wide. “They feed to feed the realm’s nature. They are both devotees and fuel.” A deep sense of revulsion twisted in Rory’s gut. This wasn’t hunger. It was a void. The pendant at her chest gave a sudden, sharper pulse, so warm it was nearly hot. She glanced down. The deep crimson gemstone was glowing from within, a faint light thrumming in time with the beat she felt against her skin. Nyx’s whisper was urgent. “The stone feels a portal. A working one. Not our entry point. Another.” “Where?” Nyx’s shadowy head inclined towards the far end of the grand hall. There, an archway led deeper into the complex, flanked by two immense statues. The statues were of a robust, crowned figure holding a cornucopia—Prince Belphegor, Rory assumed. But as she watched, the stone eyes of one statue seemed to track the journey of a serving platter carried by a bound soul. Not an illusion. The pupil, carved from a jet-black gem, swiveled minutely. “We cannot walk through that feast,” Rory said, her mind racing. “We’d be offered food, pressed to join. Or recognized.” “The shadows are deep at the edges,” Nyx murmured. “I can guide you. Stay close to the walls. Move as they move.” They gestured towards the helbound servants, who flowed along specific routes with their burdens, eyes downcast, never interacting with the feasters. Isolde nodded. “I am Fae-touched. Glamour is my nature. I will make us… uninteresting. A ripple in the corner of the eye, nothing more.” She breathed out a silver-tinged sigh, and the air around them seemed to waver, like the surface of a pond briefly disturbed. Together, they slipped into the shadow of a great brick oven, its heat blasting them in a wave. The smell was intoxicating—crusty bread, melting cheese, fragrant herbs. Rory’s stomach, pragmatic and earth-bound, growled treacherously. She clenched her jaw, focusing on the cold weight of the Fae-Forged Blade sheathed at her hip, a counterpoint to the Heartstone’s warmth. They moved like ghosts along the periphery, Isolde’s glamour making the feasters’ gazes slide over them. Rory saw details up close that were worse from a distance. The fine cracks in the clay-like skin of the diners. The way the woman in the rose-petal gown had thorns growing from her knuckles. The empty, endless hunger in every pair of eyes. The archway loomed. The stone sentinels upon it were even more unsettling up close. Their mouths were curved in benign smiles, but the craftsmanship was so fine Rory could see individual teeth, and something about the hollow of the throat suggested it was shaped to swallow sound, or light, or hope. As they passed directly between them, the Heartstone flared. A surge of heat, not painful but urgent, shot through the chain. Rory gasped. At the same moment, the jet-black eyes of both statues snapped down from their survey of the hall, fixing directly on the space where Rory stood. The glamour shattered. Isolde let out a soft, pained cry, as if the effort had been ripped from her. One of the statues shifted, not in posture, but in substance. The stone of its cornucopia seemed to liquefy, spilling not stone fruit, but a creeping, viscous shadow that began to drip onto the flagstones, moving against gravity towards them. A low, grinding rumble emanated from its chest, the sound of millstones turning deep within the earth. Nyx flowed forward, placing their incorporeal form between Rory and the animate stone. “Go,” they whispered, a sound like wind through a canyon. “The portal is close. The guardians stir to its call. I will delay them.” “Nyx—” “Go, Rory!” The whisper was a command. Nyx’s shadowy form expanded, deepening, becoming a wall of absolute darkness that swallowed the advancing, dripping shadow from the statue. Rory didn’t hesitate. Seizing Isolde’s arm, she sprinted through the archway, leaving the sounds of the feast and the silent, grinding struggle behind. They plunged into a narrower corridor, the amber light dimmer here. The pulse from the pendant was a frantic drum against her breastbone, pulling her forward, a compass needle pointing true into the heart of the alien, wondrous, and terrifying dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"They moved like [like]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.083
84.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1595
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"intensely"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
2"intensely"
3"carefully"
4"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1595
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"throb"
count1
3
word"predictable"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"resonance"
count1
6
word"footsteps"
count1
7
word"navigated"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"glistening"
count1
10
word"cacophony"
count1
11
word"constructed"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count2
15
word"whisper"
count2
16
word"complex"
count1
17
word"racing"
count1
18
word"tinged"
count1
19
word"stomach"
count1
20
word"weight"
count1
21
word"warmth"
count1
22
word"loomed"
count1
23
word"sentinels"
count1
24
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"pulsed"
2"throb"
3"predictable"
4"silk"
5"resonance"
6"footsteps"
7"navigated"
8"perfect"
9"glistening"
10"cacophony"
11"constructed"
12"etched"
13"sense of"
14"pulse"
15"whisper"
16"complex"
17"racing"
18"tinged"
19"stomach"
20"weight"
21"warmth"
22"loomed"
23"sentinels"
24"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
48.52% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences115
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1576
ratio0.001
matches
0"through"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1396
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Rory16
Nyx8
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Half-Fae1
London1
Isolde7
Prince1
Belphegor1
Together1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Heartstone"
4"Isolde"
5"Prince"
6"Belphegor"
places
0"Pendant"
1"London"
globalScore0.927
windowScore0.833
61.76% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"melody that seemed to blend with the low, ambient hum of the place"
1"looked like gilded pears and sapphire-hue"
2"seemed placed for that purpose"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords3.807
wordCount1576
matches
0"not with insects, but with a soft, chiming resonance, as if the very pollen drifti"
1"not around obstacles, but *through* them, with arches of woven vine forming tunnels th"
2"not with water, but with a clear, syrupy liquid"
3"not painful but urgent, shot through the chain"
4"not in posture, but in substance"
5"not stone fruit, but a creeping, viscous shadow"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences115
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean49.25
std25.68
cv0.522
sampleLengths
058
139
243
386
476
593
68
743
895
944
1065
1145
1282
1392
1426
1557
1617
171
1875
1920
2043
2146
2257
2360
2451
2549
2619
2757
2837
291
3027
3164
98.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences106
matches
0"were curved"
1"was shaped"
2"been ripped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs221
matches
0"was vibrating"
1"was glowing"
43.48% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences115
ratio0.035
matches
0"Aurora Carter—Rory—stumbled, the heel of her boot sinking into something soft."
1"Figures moved among the tables—some humanoid, their features blurred as if seen through heat haze, others more solid, dressed in simple tunics, their faces etched with a timeless, focused exhaustion."
2"The statues were of a robust, crowned figure holding a cornucopia—Prince Belphegor, Rory assumed."
3"The smell was intoxicating—crusty bread, melting cheese, fragrant herbs."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1419
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.023255813953488372
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.01127554615926709
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences115
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences115
mean13.7
std8.6
cv0.627
sampleLengths
015
127
216
311
42
53
620
73
815
923
105
1113
1215
1311
1414
1518
1615
1724
1817
198
2027
2114
2227
2328
2424
258
2625
2718
289
2920
304
3120
3221
336
3415
357
369
372
383
396
4010
417
4210
4318
4426
4511
4611
476
4819
499
42.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.30434782608695654
totalSentences115
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences101
matches
0"It was like stepping from"
1"She looked down."
2"It felt alive."
3"she murmured, already shrugging out"
4"It was a dome of"
5"She left no impression on"
6"They were in a garden,"
7"They moved forward, the strange"
8"It was too quiet, save"
9"It was a display, not"
10"It was the soundtrack of"
11"They paused at the edge"
12"They were shades of magnificence"
13"Their eyes were glassy, fixed"
14"It was a void."
15"She glanced down."
16"They gestured towards the helbound"
17"She breathed out a silver-tinged"
18"She clenched her jaw, focusing"
19"They moved like ghosts along"
ratio0.228
44.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences101
matches
0"The air in the grove"
1"The air that greeted them"
2"It was like stepping from"
3"Aurora Carter—Rory—stumbled, the heel of"
4"She looked down."
5"The ground was a velvety,"
6"It felt alive."
7"a voice whispered, the sound"
8"Nyx solidified from a dark"
9"Rory straightened, her hand going"
10"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against"
11"she murmured, already shrugging out"
12"The sky above was not"
13"It was a dome of"
14"Isolde said, her voice a"
15"The Half-Fae seer stood a"
16"She left no impression on"
17"They were in a garden,"
18"Trees bore what looked like"
19"Flowers the size of dinner"
ratio0.832
49.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"Before them was an open-sided"
ratio0.01
59.52% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The air that greeted them on the other side of the shimmering rift was warm, thick, and carried the scent of honey, roasted meat, and fermenting fruit."
1"The air buzzed, not with insects, but with a soft, chiming resonance, as if the very pollen drifting in the warm air was vibrating."
2"Rory and Isolde stepped carefully on smooth, flat stones that seemed placed for that purpose."
3"Figures moved among the tables—some humanoid, their features blurred as if seen through heat haze, others more solid, dressed in simple tunics, their faces etch…"
4"The stone of its cornucopia seemed to liquefy, spilling not stone fruit, but a creeping, viscous shadow that began to drip onto the flagstones, moving against g…"
5"Nyx’s shadowy form expanded, deepening, becoming a wall of absolute darkness that swallowed the advancing, dripping shadow from the statue."
6"The pulse from the pendant was a frantic drum against her breastbone, pulling her forward, a compass needle pointing true into the heart of the alien, wondrous,…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory asked, her voice hushed"
1"Rory said, her mind racing"
2"They moved like, Isolde’s glamour making the feasters’ gazes slide over them"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"a voice whispered (whisper)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Nyx confirmed (confirm)"
3"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
4"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
5"She breathed (breathe)"
6"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0.7
effectiveRatio0.667
71.0503%