| 56.25% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eva said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "Quinn said suddenly [suddenly]" | | 2 | "The clinical word felt right [right]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.593 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.188 | | effectiveRatio | 0.188 | |
| 75.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.64% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "echoing" | | 2 | "echoes" | | 3 | "chaotic" | | 4 | "standard" | | 5 | "scanned" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "crystal" | | 9 | "intricate" | | 10 | "quivered" | | 11 | "resonance" | | 12 | "glinting" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1430 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | 0 | "source" | | 1 | "through" | | 2 | "here" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1118 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.7 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 2 | | Town | 2 | | Tube | 1 | | Detective | 1 | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 19 | | Oxfords | 1 | | Eva | 10 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Museum | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Veil | 2 | | Compass | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Oxfords" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Kowalski" | | 5 | "Morris" | | 6 | "Compass" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Town" | | 2 | "Tube" | | 3 | "Museum" |
| | globalScore | 0.65 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 85.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed thicker here, somehow" | | 1 | "seemed immediately obvious a single, precise stab wound to the heart" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 2.797 | | wordCount | 1430 | | matches | | 0 | "Not to keep something in, but… to keep something out" | | 1 | "not the standard points of the compass, but tiny, spidery sigils" | | 2 | "not north, but directly at the scrawled symbols on the wall behind her, hol" | | 3 | "not the victim,” Quinn said suddenly, the words quiet but absolute" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 49.31 | | std | 29 | | cv | 0.588 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 60 | | 1 | 76 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 77 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 36 | | 6 | 65 | | 7 | 86 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 99 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 38 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 46 | | 17 | 84 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 79 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 108 | | 24 | 29 | | 25 | 83 | | 26 | 38 | | 27 | 55 | | 28 | 81 |
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| 82.31% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "were obscured" | | 1 | "was contained" | | 2 | "was relaxed" | | 3 | "was scrawled" | | 4 | "was contained" | | 5 | "been poured" | | 6 | "been, was" |
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| 90.71% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 183 | | matches | | 0 | "was staring" | | 1 | "was screaming was looking" |
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| 70.22% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "They meant nothing to Quinn – looping, interlocking lines and angular shapes that hurt the eyes if you stared too long." | | 1 | "On its face, beneath a crystal that was perfectly clear, were minute, intricate etchings – not the standard points of the compass, but tiny, spidery sigils." | | 2 | "The needle didn’t spin freely; it quivered, then jerked stubbornly to point not north, but directly at the scrawled symbols on the wall behind her, holding its position with an unnatural steadiness." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1120 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.03482142857142857 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016964285714285713 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 12.12 | | std | 8.53 | | cv | 0.704 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 29 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 45.48% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 18 | | diversityRatio | 0.3644067796610169 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 33.33% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, Detective Harlow Quinn caught" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 92.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "It didn’t smell of damp" | | 1 | "Her polished Oxfords clicked against" | | 2 | "Her curly red hair was" | | 3 | "She clutched the strap of" | | 4 | "She gave a small, quick" | | 5 | "She hadn’t requested a research" | | 6 | "His face was relaxed, eyes" | | 7 | "It looked staged." | | 8 | "Her gaze travelled upward." | | 9 | "They weren’t spray paint." | | 10 | "They looked burned into the" | | 11 | "They meant nothing to Quinn" | | 12 | "She didn’t write anything down." | | 13 | "It hadn’t seeped into the" | | 14 | "It hadn’t spattered." | | 15 | "It lay in a near-perfect" | | 16 | "She crouched, careful not to" | | 17 | "She looked back at the" | | 18 | "She stood, her height giving" | | 19 | "She snapped on a pair" |
| | ratio | 0.32 | |
| 40.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned" | | 1 | "It didn’t smell of damp" | | 2 | "Her polished Oxfords clicked against" | | 3 | "The shadows seemed thicker here," | | 4 | "The voice came from her" | | 5 | "Eva Kowalski stood just outside" | | 6 | "Her curly red hair was" | | 7 | "She clutched the strap of" | | 8 | "She gave a small, quick" | | 9 | "Quinn acknowledged, her voice flat" | | 10 | "She hadn’t requested a research" | | 11 | "Quinn found the whole idea" | | 12 | "Eva flinched slightly at the" | | 13 | "Quinn ducked under the tape." | | 14 | "The scene was contained within" | | 15 | "A man, mid-fifties, dressed in" | | 16 | "The cause of death seemed" | | 17 | "The surrounding fabric was a" | | 18 | "Quinn’s sharp brown eyes scanned" | | 19 | "The victim’s posture was almost" |
| | ratio | 0.84 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | | 0 | "To them, it was a" | | 1 | "To the forensics tech, it" | | 2 | "To Eva, it was an" |
| | ratio | 0.03 | |
| 40.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 42 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the abandoned Camden Town Tube station was cold enough to taste, a metallic chill that settled on the tongue and at the back of the throat." | | 1 | "Two uniformed officers stood sentry, their faces pale under the harsh glare of the portable floodlights that had been set up, chasing shadows into the archways …" | | 2 | "They meant nothing to Quinn – looping, interlocking lines and angular shapes that hurt the eyes if you stared too long." | | 3 | "On its face, beneath a crystal that was perfectly clear, were minute, intricate etchings – not the standard points of the compass, but tiny, spidery sigils." | | 4 | "A strange, staticky distortion in the CCTV footage that was never explained." | | 5 | "A crack that had swallowed Morris, and now had left this strange, impossible crime scene like a calling card." |
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| 31.25% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn acknowledged, her voice flat" | | 1 | "Eva breathed, her scholarly curiosity momentarily overriding her nerves" | | 2 | "Quinn said, her voice low" |
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| 1.85% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn acknowledged (acknowledge)" | | 1 | "Quinn stated (state)" | | 2 | "Eva murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Eva breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 27 | | tagDensity | 0.296 | | leniency | 0.593 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.296 | |