Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEYXEJCNY978P24ASWC89Y

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48.9s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Camden Town Tube station was cold enough to taste, a metallic chill that settled on the tongue and at the back of the throat. It didn’t smell of damp and decay, as it should have. Instead, Detective Harlow Quinn caught the faint, incongruous scent of ozone and old parchment, undercut by something sharper, coppery. Blood. Her polished Oxfords clicked against the grimy tile with military precision, the sound echoing in the vast, dark hollow of the ticket hall. Yellow police tape was a garish splash of colour cordoning off the old ticket kiosk. Two uniformed officers stood sentry, their faces pale under the harsh glare of the portable floodlights that had been set up, chasing shadows into the archways of defunct gate lines. The shadows seemed thicker here, somehow. More substantive. “Detective Quinn.” The voice came from her left, quieter than the echoes. Eva Kowalski stood just outside the ring of light, looking for all the world like a student who’d taken a wrong turn. Her curly red hair was a chaotic halo, her round glasses reflecting the floodlights so her green eyes were obscured. She clutched the strap of her worn leather satchel with both hands, her freckled face tight with anxiety. She gave a small, quick wave, then tucked a stray coil of hair behind her left ear. “Kowalski,” Quinn acknowledged, her voice flat. She hadn’t requested a research assistant from the Museum, but the call had mentioned “esoteric elements,” and someone upstairs had decided Eva was the closest thing to a consultant they had. Quinn found the whole idea dubious. “Walk me through it. Your version.” Eva flinched slightly at the tone but nodded, falling into step beside Quinn as they approached the tape. “The call came in as a suspected homicide. Anonymous tip. When the first responders arrived, they found… this.” Quinn ducked under the tape. The scene was contained within the shell of the old wooden kiosk. A man, mid-fifties, dressed in an expensive but now-ruined charcoal grey suit, lay sprawled on his back. The cause of death seemed immediately obvious: a single, precise stab wound to the heart. The surrounding fabric was a dark, wet crimson. No visible murder weapon. Standard, almost textbook. Except. Quinn’s sharp brown eyes scanned the area. No signs of a struggle. The victim’s posture was almost peaceful, arms slightly splayed. His face was relaxed, eyes closed. It looked staged. Her gaze travelled upward. Above the kiosk, where the station’s old maps would have been, the wall was scrawled with symbols. They weren’t spray paint. They looked burned into the plaster, a deep, charred black. They meant nothing to Quinn – looping, interlocking lines and angular shapes that hurt the eyes if you stared too long. “The symbols,” Eva said quietly, hovering at Quinn’s elbow. “They’re a form of binding script. Not to keep something in, but… to keep something out. A ward. A powerful one.” “Graffiti,” Quinn stated, pulling a small notebook and pen from her coat pocket. She didn’t write anything down. “It’s not.” Eva’s voice gained a sliver of strength. “It’s etched with a thermal energy I can’t explain. The plaster isn’t just scorched, it’s… reconstituted. And look at the blood.” Quinn had already seen it. That was the thing that didn’t add up. The pool around the victim was contained, too contained. It hadn’t seeped into the cracks in the old floorboards. It hadn’t spattered. It lay in a near-perfect circle, the edges slightly raised, as if it had been poured into a mould and had set. She crouched, careful not to touch, and peered at the victim’s wound. The edges of the slit in his suit jacket and shirt were crisp, not torn. The blood there was tacky, but the pool beneath him had a strange, gel-like cohesion. “Time of death?” Quinn asked one of the forensics techs. “Rough estimate? Between two and four this morning, Detective.” Quinn looked at her worn leather watch. 10:17 AM. She looked back at the blood. In a damp, cool environment, it should still be mostly liquid, especially a volume that large. This had the consistency of cold gravy. “Your colleagues think it’s a drug deal gone wrong,” Eva murmured, her satchel of books seeming to pull her off balance. “This place is known for that. They think the symbols are gang tags.” Quinn didn’t answer. She stood, her height giving her a vantage over the kiosk counter. There, almost hidden in the shadow where a ticket roller might have once been, was a small, metallic gleam. She snapped on a pair of latex gloves and reached for it. It was a compass. Small, brass, its casing mottled with a greenish patina. It was cold, far colder than the ambient air. On its face, beneath a crystal that was perfectly clear, were minute, intricate etchings – not the standard points of the compass, but tiny, spidery sigils. She shook it gently. The needle didn’t spin freely; it quivered, then jerked stubbornly to point not north, but directly at the scrawled symbols on the wall behind her, holding its position with an unnatural steadiness. “That’s a Veil Compass,” Eva breathed, her scholarly curiosity momentarily overriding her nerves. “They’re… rare. It doesn’t point north. It points to sources of supernatural resonance. Rifts. Portals. Active workings.” She pointed at the needle, aimed at the wall. “Like that.” Quinn’s jaw tightened. Supernatural resonance. The words felt absurd in this setting of police procedure and floodlights. Yet… the evidence was absurd. The perfect blood pool. The peaceful corpse with a fatal wound. The burned-in symbols. The compass pointing at a wall. Her mind, trained on patterns and contradictions, scrabbled for purchase. A drug deal wouldn’t leave this. A gang killing wouldn’t involve this level of theatrical, inexplicable staging. She thought of Morris, her old partner. The case three years ago that had ended with him gone, his body never found, the official report a masterpiece of obfuscation. The scene had felt wrong, too. A lingering smell of ozone. A strange, staticky distortion in the CCTV footage that was never explained. “He’s not the victim,” Quinn said suddenly, the words quiet but absolute. Eva blinked. “What?” “He’s the *source*.” Quinn turned the cold compass over in her palm. “Look at him. No defensive wounds. No struggle. Expensive suit, but no wallet, no phone. He was brought here. He was placed here. This wasn’t a fight. It was a… a ritual. A termination.” The clinical word felt right. “The blood isn’t behaving like blood because it’s not just blood anymore. It’s part of the working. The compass isn’t pointing at the symbols on the wall.” She turned, following the line the needle indicated. It went through the wall. “It’s pointing at what’s *through* the wall. Or what was. This kiosk, this spot, is the epicenter.” Eva was staring at her, round glasses glinting. “You’re saying the ward on the wall was to contain the energy released by his death? To keep it from spreading?” “I’m saying the knife that killed him wasn’t steel,” Quinn said, her voice low. “It was something else. And the reason there’s no murder weapon is because it was never *here* in the conventional sense. It was used from somewhere else. Through something else.” She held up the Veil Compass. “This was his. He had it. He knew he was walking into a place of… resonance. He was measuring it. And someone killed him for it, using the very thing he was studying.” The two uniformed officers by the tape shuffled their feet, bored. To them, it was a body in a weird place. To the forensics tech, it was a collection of samples. To Eva, it was an occult puzzle. But to Harlow Quinn, it was a crack in the world. A crack that had swallowed Morris, and now had left this strange, impossible crime scene like a calling card. The evidence didn’t add up because it wasn’t meant to add up in a mortal ledger. It was evidence for a different kind of court. She slipped the Veil Compass into an evidence bag, the brass already fogging the plastic from its unnatural cold. The needle, trapped inside, remained fixed, pointing relentlessly at the charred symbols, a silent arrow accusing a reality Quinn was only beginning to perceive. She didn’t believe in ghosts, or portals, or magic. But she believed in evidence. And the evidence on the grimy floor of the abandoned Camden Town station was screaming that she was looking at the wrong world entirely.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
56.25% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Eva said quietly [quietly]"
1"Quinn said suddenly [suddenly]"
2"The clinical word felt right [right]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.593
leniency1
rawRatio0.188
effectiveRatio0.188
75.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
2"gently"
3"suddenly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.64% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"echoing"
count1
2
word"echoes"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"standard"
count2
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count2
8
word"crystal"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"quivered"
count1
11
word"resonance"
count3
12
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"echoing"
2"echoes"
3"chaotic"
4"standard"
5"scanned"
6"etched"
7"perfect"
8"crystal"
9"intricate"
10"quivered"
11"resonance"
12"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences107
matches
0"t with anxiety"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1430
ratio0.002
matches
0"source"
1"through"
2"here"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1118
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden2
Town2
Tube1
Detective1
Harlow2
Quinn19
Oxfords1
Eva10
Kowalski1
Museum1
Morris2
Veil2
Compass2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Oxfords"
3"Eva"
4"Kowalski"
5"Morris"
6"Compass"
places
0"Camden"
1"Town"
2"Tube"
3"Museum"
globalScore0.65
windowScore0.5
85.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed thicker here, somehow"
1"seemed immediately obvious a single, precise stab wound to the heart"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.797
wordCount1430
matches
0"Not to keep something in, but… to keep something out"
1"not the standard points of the compass, but tiny, spidery sigils"
2"not north, but directly at the scrawled symbols on the wall behind her, hol"
3"not the victim,” Quinn said suddenly, the words quiet but absolute"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences118
matches
0"screaming that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean49.31
std29
cv0.588
sampleLengths
060
176
212
377
449
536
665
786
830
918
1030
1199
1210
139
1438
1534
1646
1784
1841
1942
2079
2112
223
23108
2429
2583
2638
2755
2881
82.31% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences107
matches
0"were obscured"
1"was contained"
2"was relaxed"
3"was scrawled"
4"was contained"
5"been poured"
6"been, was"
90.71% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs183
matches
0"was staring"
1"was screaming was looking"
70.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences118
ratio0.025
matches
0"They meant nothing to Quinn – looping, interlocking lines and angular shapes that hurt the eyes if you stared too long."
1"On its face, beneath a crystal that was perfectly clear, were minute, intricate etchings – not the standard points of the compass, but tiny, spidery sigils."
2"The needle didn’t spin freely; it quivered, then jerked stubbornly to point not north, but directly at the scrawled symbols on the wall behind her, holding its position with an unnatural steadiness."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1120
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.03482142857142857
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.016964285714285713
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean12.12
std8.53
cv0.704
sampleLengths
029
111
219
31
423
515
630
76
82
912
1022
1120
1218
1317
146
1531
166
176
1818
1918
205
2112
2217
2315
248
254
263
271
287
295
309
316
323
334
3417
354
3610
3721
389
3921
4013
415
429
4321
445
458
469
4710
483
4922
45.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.3644067796610169
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners43
33.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"Instead, Detective Harlow Quinn caught"
ratio0.01
92.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences100
matches
0"It didn’t smell of damp"
1"Her polished Oxfords clicked against"
2"Her curly red hair was"
3"She clutched the strap of"
4"She gave a small, quick"
5"She hadn’t requested a research"
6"His face was relaxed, eyes"
7"It looked staged."
8"Her gaze travelled upward."
9"They weren’t spray paint."
10"They looked burned into the"
11"They meant nothing to Quinn"
12"She didn’t write anything down."
13"It hadn’t seeped into the"
14"It hadn’t spattered."
15"It lay in a near-perfect"
16"She crouched, careful not to"
17"She looked back at the"
18"She stood, her height giving"
19"She snapped on a pair"
ratio0.32
40.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences100
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"It didn’t smell of damp"
2"Her polished Oxfords clicked against"
3"The shadows seemed thicker here,"
4"The voice came from her"
5"Eva Kowalski stood just outside"
6"Her curly red hair was"
7"She clutched the strap of"
8"She gave a small, quick"
9"Quinn acknowledged, her voice flat"
10"She hadn’t requested a research"
11"Quinn found the whole idea"
12"Eva flinched slightly at the"
13"Quinn ducked under the tape."
14"The scene was contained within"
15"A man, mid-fifties, dressed in"
16"The cause of death seemed"
17"The surrounding fabric was a"
18"Quinn’s sharp brown eyes scanned"
19"The victim’s posture was almost"
ratio0.84
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences100
matches
0"To them, it was a"
1"To the forensics tech, it"
2"To Eva, it was an"
ratio0.03
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The air in the abandoned Camden Town Tube station was cold enough to taste, a metallic chill that settled on the tongue and at the back of the throat."
1"Two uniformed officers stood sentry, their faces pale under the harsh glare of the portable floodlights that had been set up, chasing shadows into the archways …"
2"They meant nothing to Quinn – looping, interlocking lines and angular shapes that hurt the eyes if you stared too long."
3"On its face, beneath a crystal that was perfectly clear, were minute, intricate etchings – not the standard points of the compass, but tiny, spidery sigils."
4"A strange, staticky distortion in the CCTV footage that was never explained."
5"A crack that had swallowed Morris, and now had left this strange, impossible crime scene like a calling card."
31.25% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Quinn acknowledged, her voice flat"
1"Eva breathed, her scholarly curiosity momentarily overriding her nerves"
2"Quinn said, her voice low"
1.85% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn acknowledged (acknowledge)"
1"Quinn stated (state)"
2"Eva murmured (murmur)"
3"Eva breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.296
leniency0.593
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.296
74.5162%