Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEZ2V790R4WAFH33SR3Z8D

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Duration:
36.6s
Cost:
$0.002288
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The Heartstone pendant pulsed against Aurora’s collarbone like a second heartbeat as she stepped through the rift. The air shimmered around her, thick as honey, before giving way to a warmth that settled over her skin like sunlight through amber glass. She blinked, adjusting to the golden haze that suffused everything—the sky, the distant hills, even the very air seemed steeped in it. "Bloody hell," she murmured. Nyx materialized beside her, their shadowy form flickering at the edges like smoke caught in a breeze. "Dymas," they whispered, their voice carrying that eerie, windborne quality. "The realm of Gluttony." Aurora exhaled, her fingers brushing the hilt of the Fae-forged blade at her belt. The metal was cold even through the fabric of her jacket, a stark contrast to the warmth of this place. Behind her, Isolde stepped gracefully through the rift, her silver hair catching the strange light as if dusted with gold. The half-Fae tilted her head, lavender eyes scanning the horizon. "You feel it," Isolde said, not a question. Aurora nodded. The pendant’s warmth had intensified, a quiet thrum against her skin. "It’s leading us somewhere." Before them stretched a landscape of impossible abundance. Vineyards sprawled across rolling hills, heavy with clusters of fruit that shimmered like jewels—deep purples, vibrant reds, hues she had no name for. The scent of ripe figs and spiced wine hung thick in the air, cloying and sweet. Paths of crushed amber stone wound between orchards where trees bore fruit in shapes Aurora had never seen—some like teardrops, others spiraled like seashells. Nyx drifted forward, their form solidifying briefly as they touched a low-hanging branch. "Nothing here is as it seems," they murmured. "Taste nothing. Touch nothing unless you must." Aurora swallowed. The hunger had crept up on her without her realizing—a deep, gnawing pull in her stomach at the sight of so much richness. She forced her gaze away. They followed the pendant’s pull, the path sloping gently downward toward a valley where a grand pavilion stood, its silken banners fluttering in a breeze that carried the faintest strains of music. Laughter echoed from within, bright and unrestrained. Isolde’s hand closed around Aurora’s wrist before she could take another step. "Look down," the seer said softly. Aurora did. The ground here was not earth but something softer, yielding—like well-kneaded dough beneath her boots. Tiny fissures ran through it, pulsing faintly, as if breathing. She recoiled. "The land is alive," Nyx observed, crouching to examine the soil. Their fingers passed through it like mist. "Or perhaps dreaming." Aurora’s skin prickled. The further they walked, the more the world seemed to warp at the edges. Trees bent toward them as if curious, their branches heavy with fruit that split open to reveal not seeds but tiny, blinking eyes. A shudder ran down her spine. Then—water. A stream cut through the valley, its surface iridescent, swirling with colors that shifted like oil on water. Nyx held up a hand as Aurora moved toward it. "Don’t." But Isolde was already kneeling at the bank, her reflection rippling in the strange current. "It remembers," she murmured. "The water here remembers every soul that’s touched it." Her fingers hovered just above the surface. "It would show you things. Secrets. Hungers." Aurora’s throat tightened. The pendant burned suddenly against her skin, sharp enough to make her gasp. She clutched it, feeling the gemstone’s pulse quicken. "This way," she said, steering them away from the water’s edge. The path narrowed, winding between towering hedges that hummed faintly, as if filled with bees. The sound was not unpleasant, but it set Aurora’s teeth on edge. Nyx moved ahead, their shadow stretching long in the golden light, flickering at the edges where the realm’s magic brushed against their form. Then—the hedges opened. A courtyard stretched before them, paved in mosaics of glazed tile that depicted feasts and revelry, the figures in the artwork moving subtly, their painted mouths opening in silent laughter. At its center stood a fountain, its basin overflowing with liquid that shimmered like molten gold. And seated at the fountain’s edge was a figure. Aurora’s breath caught. The man—if he could be called that—was draped in robes of saffron and crimson, his fingers lazily trailing through the fountain’s pool. His skin had the same golden hue as the sky, his eyes dark and depthless. He looked up as they approached, a slow smile curving his lips. "Visitors," he purred. "How rare." Nyx stepped forward, their voice dropping to a whisper that slithered through the air. "Belphegor." The Prince of Gluttony chuckled, the sound rich and indulgent. "And you’ve brought me such interesting guests, little shadow." His gaze slid to Aurora, lingering on the pendant at her throat. "Ah. You carry a piece of my brother’s favor. How... curious." Aurora’s fingers tightened around the Fae blade. The cold of it grounded her. "We’re just passing through." Belphegor’s smile widened. "Aren’t we all?" He lifted his hand from the fountain, droplets of gold falling like syrup from his fingertips. "But you’ll find nothing in Dymas comes without a taste." The hunger surged in her gut again, sudden and sharp. Aurora clenched her jaw. The pendant burned. And somewhere beyond the courtyard, the ground trembled—as if the realm itself had taken a breath.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
66.67% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"the seer said softly [softly]"
1"Her fingers hovered just [just]"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.522
leniency1
rawRatio0.167
effectiveRatio0.167
72.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount893
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"gently"
2"softly"
3"suddenly"
4"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount893
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"shimmered"
count3
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"down her spine"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"shimmered"
2"warmth"
3"stark"
4"scanning"
5"stomach"
6"echoed"
7"down her spine"
8"pulse"
9"whisper"
10"trembled"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"clenched her jaw"
1"hung thick in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords880
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
54.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount782
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.92
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Aurora15
Nyx6
Fae-forged1
Isolde4
Prince1
Gluttony1
Fae3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Gluttony"
4"Fae"
places(empty)
globalScore0.541
windowScore0.833
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed steeped in it"
1"as if breathing"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.409
wordCount880
matches
0"not earth but something softer, yielding"
1"not seeds but tiny, blinking eyes"
2"not unpleasant, but it set Aurora’s teeth on edge"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean30.34
std18.41
cv0.607
sampleLengths
063
14
231
364
48
517
671
728
830
939
1018
1129
1221
1346
1430
1542
1635
1750
183
1946
209
2152
225
2315
2442
2517
2632
2717
2816
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"was draped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences80
ratio0.113
matches
0"She blinked, adjusting to the golden haze that suffused everything—the sky, the distant hills, even the very air seemed steeped in it."
1"Vineyards sprawled across rolling hills, heavy with clusters of fruit that shimmered like jewels—deep purples, vibrant reds, hues she had no name for."
2"Paths of crushed amber stone wound between orchards where trees bore fruit in shapes Aurora had never seen—some like teardrops, others spiraled like seashells."
3"The hunger had crept up on her without her realizing—a deep, gnawing pull in her stomach at the sight of so much richness."
4"The ground here was not earth but something softer, yielding—like well-kneaded dough beneath her boots."
5"Then—water."
6"Then—the hedges opened."
7"The man—if he could be called that—was draped in robes of saffron and crimson, his fingers lazily trailing through the fountain’s pool."
8"And somewhere beyond the courtyard, the ground trembled—as if the realm itself had taken a breath."
98.68% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount795
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.04150943396226415
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.011320754716981131
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean11
std7.38
cv0.671
sampleLengths
017
124
222
34
417
510
64
714
820
920
1010
118
122
1311
144
158
1623
1716
1824
1913
208
217
222
2323
245
2532
267
2712
286
292
3015
3110
322
3311
347
353
363
3714
3823
396
401
4118
4210
431
4415
454
4616
477
483
4913
74.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4625
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners37
55.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Then—the hedges opened."
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences60
matches
0"She blinked, adjusting to the"
1"they whispered, their voice carrying"
2"She forced her gaze away."
3"They followed the pendant’s pull,"
4"Their fingers passed through it"
5"Her fingers hovered just above"
6"She clutched it, feeling the"
7"she said, steering them away"
8"His skin had the same"
9"He looked up as they"
10"His gaze slid to Aurora,"
11"He lifted his hand from"
ratio0.2
26.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences60
matches
0"The Heartstone pendant pulsed against"
1"The air shimmered around her,"
2"She blinked, adjusting to the"
3"Nyx materialized beside her, their"
4"they whispered, their voice carrying"
5"Aurora exhaled, her fingers brushing"
6"The metal was cold even"
7"The half-Fae tilted her head,"
8"Isolde said, not a question"
9"The pendant’s warmth had intensified,"
10"Vineyards sprawled across rolling hills,"
11"The scent of ripe figs"
12"Paths of crushed amber stone"
13"Nyx drifted forward, their form"
14"The hunger had crept up"
15"She forced her gaze away."
16"They followed the pendant’s pull,"
17"Laughter echoed from within, bright"
18"Isolde’s hand closed around Aurora’s"
19"the seer said softly"
ratio0.867
83.33% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"Before them stretched a landscape"
ratio0.017
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"She blinked, adjusting to the golden haze that suffused everything—the sky, the distant hills, even the very air seemed steeped in it."
1"Behind her, Isolde stepped gracefully through the rift, her silver hair catching the strange light as if dusted with gold."
2"Vineyards sprawled across rolling hills, heavy with clusters of fruit that shimmered like jewels—deep purples, vibrant reds, hues she had no name for."
3"They followed the pendant’s pull, the path sloping gently downward toward a valley where a grand pavilion stood, its silken banners fluttering in a breeze that …"
4"Tiny fissures ran through it, pulsing faintly, as if breathing."
5"Trees bent toward them as if curious, their branches heavy with fruit that split open to reveal not seeds but tiny, blinking eyes."
6"A stream cut through the valley, its surface iridescent, swirling with colors that shifted like oil on water."
7"But Isolde was already kneeling at the bank, her reflection rippling in the strange current."
8"A courtyard stretched before them, paved in mosaics of glazed tile that depicted feasts and revelry, the figures in the artwork moving subtly, their painted mou…"
9"At its center stood a fountain, its basin overflowing with liquid that shimmered like molten gold."
10"Nyx stepped forward, their voice dropping to a whisper that slithered through the air."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"they whispered, their voice carrying that eerie, windborne quality"
1"Nyx observed, crouching to examine the soil"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"they murmured (murmur)"
3"Nyx observed (observe)"
4"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences23
tagDensity0.348
leniency0.696
rawRatio0.625
effectiveRatio0.435
70.1976%