| 66.67% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the seer said softly [softly]" | | 1 | "Her fingers hovered just [just]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.522 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.167 | | effectiveRatio | 0.167 | |
| 72.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 893 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "gently" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "lazily" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 893 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "stark" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "down her spine" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "trembled" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched her jaw" | | 1 | "hung thick in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 69 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 880 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 54.09% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 32 | | wordCount | 782 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.92 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Aurora | 15 | | Nyx | 6 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 4 | | Prince | 1 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Fae | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Gluttony" | | 4 | "Fae" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.541 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 50.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed steeped in it" | | 1 | "as if breathing" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 3.409 | | wordCount | 880 | | matches | | 0 | "not earth but something softer, yielding" | | 1 | "not seeds but tiny, blinking eyes" | | 2 | "not unpleasant, but it set Aurora’s teeth on edge" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 29 | | mean | 30.34 | | std | 18.41 | | cv | 0.607 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 63 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 71 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 46 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 42 | | 16 | 35 | | 17 | 50 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 46 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 32 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 69 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 134 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 80 | | ratio | 0.113 | | matches | | 0 | "She blinked, adjusting to the golden haze that suffused everything—the sky, the distant hills, even the very air seemed steeped in it." | | 1 | "Vineyards sprawled across rolling hills, heavy with clusters of fruit that shimmered like jewels—deep purples, vibrant reds, hues she had no name for." | | 2 | "Paths of crushed amber stone wound between orchards where trees bore fruit in shapes Aurora had never seen—some like teardrops, others spiraled like seashells." | | 3 | "The hunger had crept up on her without her realizing—a deep, gnawing pull in her stomach at the sight of so much richness." | | 4 | "The ground here was not earth but something softer, yielding—like well-kneaded dough beneath her boots." | | 5 | "Then—water." | | 6 | "Then—the hedges opened." | | 7 | "The man—if he could be called that—was draped in robes of saffron and crimson, his fingers lazily trailing through the fountain’s pool." | | 8 | "And somewhere beyond the courtyard, the ground trembled—as if the realm itself had taken a breath." |
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| 98.68% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 795 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 33 | | adverbRatio | 0.04150943396226415 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011320754716981131 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 80 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 80 | | mean | 11 | | std | 7.38 | | cv | 0.671 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 23 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 32 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 2 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 3 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 23 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 1 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 74.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4625 | | totalSentences | 80 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 55.56% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Then—the hedges opened." |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "She blinked, adjusting to the" | | 1 | "they whispered, their voice carrying" | | 2 | "She forced her gaze away." | | 3 | "They followed the pendant’s pull," | | 4 | "Their fingers passed through it" | | 5 | "Her fingers hovered just above" | | 6 | "She clutched it, feeling the" | | 7 | "she said, steering them away" | | 8 | "His skin had the same" | | 9 | "He looked up as they" | | 10 | "His gaze slid to Aurora," | | 11 | "He lifted his hand from" |
| | ratio | 0.2 | |
| 26.67% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "The air shimmered around her," | | 2 | "She blinked, adjusting to the" | | 3 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 4 | "they whispered, their voice carrying" | | 5 | "Aurora exhaled, her fingers brushing" | | 6 | "The metal was cold even" | | 7 | "The half-Fae tilted her head," | | 8 | "Isolde said, not a question" | | 9 | "The pendant’s warmth had intensified," | | 10 | "Vineyards sprawled across rolling hills," | | 11 | "The scent of ripe figs" | | 12 | "Paths of crushed amber stone" | | 13 | "Nyx drifted forward, their form" | | 14 | "The hunger had crept up" | | 15 | "She forced her gaze away." | | 16 | "They followed the pendant’s pull," | | 17 | "Laughter echoed from within, bright" | | 18 | "Isolde’s hand closed around Aurora’s" | | 19 | "the seer said softly" |
| | ratio | 0.867 | |
| 83.33% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them stretched a landscape" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "She blinked, adjusting to the golden haze that suffused everything—the sky, the distant hills, even the very air seemed steeped in it." | | 1 | "Behind her, Isolde stepped gracefully through the rift, her silver hair catching the strange light as if dusted with gold." | | 2 | "Vineyards sprawled across rolling hills, heavy with clusters of fruit that shimmered like jewels—deep purples, vibrant reds, hues she had no name for." | | 3 | "They followed the pendant’s pull, the path sloping gently downward toward a valley where a grand pavilion stood, its silken banners fluttering in a breeze that …" | | 4 | "Tiny fissures ran through it, pulsing faintly, as if breathing." | | 5 | "Trees bent toward them as if curious, their branches heavy with fruit that split open to reveal not seeds but tiny, blinking eyes." | | 6 | "A stream cut through the valley, its surface iridescent, swirling with colors that shifted like oil on water." | | 7 | "But Isolde was already kneeling at the bank, her reflection rippling in the strange current." | | 8 | "A courtyard stretched before them, paved in mosaics of glazed tile that depicted feasts and revelry, the figures in the artwork moving subtly, their painted mou…" | | 9 | "At its center stood a fountain, its basin overflowing with liquid that shimmered like molten gold." | | 10 | "Nyx stepped forward, their voice dropping to a whisper that slithered through the air." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "they whispered, their voice carrying that eerie, windborne quality" | | 1 | "Nyx observed, crouching to examine the soil" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "they murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 4 | "she murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 23 | | tagDensity | 0.348 | | leniency | 0.696 | | rawRatio | 0.625 | | effectiveRatio | 0.435 | |