Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEZ3KCBJ9SHC8D06XDWRZQ

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Duration:
49.8s
Cost:
$0.001175
Provider:
SiliconFlow

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Tube station was a physical presence, a cocktail of damp concrete, rust, and something older, something metallic and sharp that made the back of Detective Harlow Quinn’s throat itch. Flickering emergency lights, jury-rigged to a petrol generator somewhere above, cast a sickly yellow pall over the platform. This was the Veil Market, or what was left of it. The usual stalls of strange trinkets, glowing vials, and whispering merchants were gone, leaving only discarded trash and the profound silence of a place recently and violently evacuated. Quinn stood at the edge of the platform, her hands tucked into the pockets of her trench coat. Her sharp jaw was set, her brown eyes missing nothing. The call had been cryptic, routed through channels she didn’t fully trust, mentioning a ‘disturbance’ at a known gathering point for fringe groups. She’d expected squatters, maybe a drug deal gone bad. This hollow, charged silence was worse. “Over here, Detective.” The voice came from the far end of the platform, near a tiled archway that once led to the tunnels. Sergeant Miller, a young officer with more enthusiasm than sense, waved a flashlight. Quinn approached with the quiet, military precision that defined her bearing. Her worn leather watch felt tight on her wrist. The scene was a tableau of wrongness. A circle of the platform’s dusty tiles had been meticulously swept clean. In the center sat a small, neat pile of personal effects: a pair of round, wire-framed glasses, a leather-bound notebook, and a worn leather satchel, its strap neatly folded beside it. A few feet away, a dark, viscous stain soaked into the grout between the tiles. Blood. But not enough for a fatal wound, and no spatter pattern, no drag marks. It was as if someone had bled a measured cup onto the floor and then vanished. “What do you make of it, Sarge?” Quinn asked, her voice low and even. Miller puffed out his chest. “Looks like a robbery gone wrong. Perp confronts the victim here, takes their stuff, maybe roughs them up. Victim drops their bag and glasses in the struggle, gets a bloody nose or a cut, then either runs off or is dragged off that way.” He pointed his flashlight beam toward a dark maintenance tunnel, its gate hanging open. “We’ve got the K-9 unit coming to track.” Quinn didn’t move. Her eyes traced the invisible lines of the scene. “Robbery. You take the bag, Sergeant. You take the notebook. Why leave them? They’re sitting there like a museum display. And the glasses…” She knelt, careful not to touch anything. The glasses were perfectly centered on a single tile. Not dropped. Placed. “Someone with poor eyesight is assaulted. Their glasses come off. They land… where? Not on the lens. Not folded neatly. They’re placed.” Miller shifted his weight. “Maybe the vic put them down to fight?” “With their satchel off, and the notebook out?” Quinn stood, her gaze sweeping the empty circle. “No signs of a struggle. No scuff marks in the dust outside this perfect clean circle. Someone swept this area. After the incident. Why?” She walked the perimeter. The market’s detritus formed a ring: a shattered clay pot leaking black soil, a ritualistic cleansing, or… to see something on the tiles.” She stepped closer to the blood. It was too dark, almost black in the low light. She pulled a pen from her pocket and gently touched the edge of the stain. It was tacky, but not fresh. A few hours old, maybe. And there, almost invisible against the dark grout, was a tiny, twisted piece of metal. Using the pen, she coaxed it out. It was a thin band of brass, warped as if by intense heat, etched with minute, intricate markings that made her head ache to look at for too long. “What’s that?” Miller asked, leaning in. “I don’t know.” But it felt important. It felt like evidence that didn’t belong in any robbery kit. She bagged it. “Harlow?” The new voice was familiar, tight with anxiety. Quinn turned to see Eva Kowalski standing at the platform entrance, held back by a uniformed officer. Eva’s curly red hair was a chaotic halo in the uneven light, her freckled face pale. She was tucking a strand behind her left ear repeatedly, her green eyes wide behind her own round glasses, fixed on the satchel on the ground. “Let her through,” Quinn said, her tone leaving no room for argument. Eva was her occasional, unofficial consultant on the strange and historical, a link to a world of old books and older secrets. Her presence here, now, was another piece that didn’t fit. Eva hurried over, her own worn satchel—a twin to the one on the ground—bouncing against her hip. “I heard the call on the scanner. The location… I had to come.” “You know this place?” Quinn asked, watching her closely. “By reputation. A black market. For things most people don’t believe in.” Eva’s eyes darted to the blood, to the neat pile, and a small, choked sound escaped her. “That’s Alistair’s bag. His notebook. He’s a… a colleague. From the Museum archives.” “Your occult researcher friend,” Quinn stated, remembering fragments of past conversations. “What was he doing here?” “Buying something. He was nervous about it. He said he’d found a lead on a… a tracking device. For his work.” Eva hugged herself, shivering despite the stagnant warmth of the station. “He called it a Veil Compass.” The term meant nothing to Miller, who snorted softly. Quinn ignored him. A compass. A twisted piece of brass. Her mind began to connect dots, forming a picture she didn’t like. “Sergeant Miller thinks it’s a robbery,” Quinn said, testing. Eva shook her head violently. “No. Look at it. It’s an altar. A leaving. Or a… a transaction that went sideways.” She pointed a trembling finger at the clean circle. “The circle is a ward, a basic containment field. He must have drawn it for safety. The blood isn’t from violence; it’s a payment. A somatic anchor. But it’s all wrong. The blood is here, but the anchor is gone. The Compass would have been the focus.” Miller laughed, a short, derisive bark. “A magic circle? Come on, Ms. Kowalski. This is a police investigation.” But Quinn was looking at Eva, then back at the scene. The meticulous cleanliness. The placed, not dropped, items. The specific, concentrated bloodstain with no trauma around it. The missing body. The twisted brass sigil. It clashed violently with the messy, chaotic narrative of a crime of opportunity. It was structured. It was intentional. “Say you’re right, Eva,” Quinn said, cutting off Miller’s next remark. “Say this was a ritual transaction. What does the missing compass, and the missing man, tell you?” Eva took a deep breath, her researcher’s mind grasping for logic in the illogical. “The Compass points to rifts. To thin places. If the ritual was disrupted, or if the artifact was more powerful than he realized… it wouldn’t just point. It could open. The blood was the key, the personal effects the offering to bind the transaction. If the circle failed, or was breached…” She trailed off, looking at the dark maintenance tunnel. “It wouldn’t have taken him anywhere a dog could follow.” Quinn felt a cold certainty settle in her gut, a feeling she’d last had three years ago, standing over another scene where the evidence taunted her, where the official report of her partner’s death read ‘cause undetermined’ and the things she’d seen in the shadows of that warehouse were dismissed as trauma. This had the same taste. The same profound wrongness. She looked at Miller’s skeptical, impatient face, then at Eva’s terrified, knowing one. Two interpretations of the same facts. One fit the world as the Metropolitan Police understood it. The other fit the evidence on the ground. “Sergeant,” Quinn said, her voice leaving no room for debate. “Call off the K-9. Secure the scene. No one touches anything. This is no longer a robbery investigation.” She looked at the dark tunnel mouth, then down at the twisted brass in the evidence bag. The etched sigils seemed to writhe in the flickering light. “We’re dealing with something else. Something that leaves a circle clean but takes everything inside it.” She finally understood what she’d missed at first glance: the scene wasn’t a disruption of order. It was the aftermath of a different kind of order, one with rules she was only beginning to perceive. And somewhere in the dark, a compass needle was pointing, and a man was lost.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.639
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1441
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"gently"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1441
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"profound"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"measured"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"shattered"
count1
8
word"etched"
count2
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"chaotic"
count2
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"disrupted"
count1
14
word"aftermath"
count1
highlights
0"profound"
1"silence"
2"charged"
3"measured"
4"traced"
5"weight"
6"perfect"
7"shattered"
8"etched"
9"intricate"
10"familiar"
11"chaotic"
12"warmth"
13"disrupted"
14"aftermath"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences91
matches
0"t with anxiety"
1"was nervous"
95.76% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences97
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen93
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1436
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"She stepped closer to the blood. It was too dark, almost black in the low light. She pulled a pen from her pocket and ge…"
73.74% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1049
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.53
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Detective1
Harlow1
Quinn16
Veil2
Market1
Miller8
Eva8
Kowalski2
Alistair1
Museum1
Compass1
Ms1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Secure1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Miller"
3"Eva"
4"Kowalski"
5"Alistair"
6"Compass"
7"Ms"
8"Police"
places
0"Museum"
globalScore0.737
windowScore0.833
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"It was as if someone had bled a measured cup onto the floor and then vanished"
1"felt like evidence that didn’t belong i"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1436
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean44.88
std31.37
cv0.699
sampleLengths
091
166
23
353
496
514
671
776
812
940
1027
1193
126
1321
141
1567
1644
1730
189
1942
2016
2138
2231
239
2477
2518
2654
2728
2884
2961
3037
31121
85.98% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences91
matches
0"were gone"
1"was structured"
2"was disrupted"
3"was breached…"
4"were dismissed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs201
matches
0"was tucking"
1"was looking"
2"was pointing"
83.95% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences97
ratio0.021
matches
0"Eva hurried over, her own worn satchel—a twin to the one on the ground—bouncing against her hip. “I heard the call on the scanner."
1"The blood isn’t from violence; it’s a payment."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1009
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.031714568880079286
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.01684836471754212
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences97
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences97
mean14.8
std16.5
cv1.115
sampleLengths
034
118
211
328
418
510
623
79
86
93
1020
1113
1211
139
147
1512
1631
1715
181
1914
2016
2114
225
2358
248
253
269
2730
289
292
301
3122
324
338
3416
3524
364
3717
386
3993
406
4121
421
4367
4444
4524
462
474
489
492
74.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4639175257731959
totalSentences97
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences79
matches
0"Her sharp jaw was set,"
1"She’d expected squatters, maybe a"
2"Her worn leather watch felt"
3"It was as if someone"
4"He pointed his flashlight beam"
5"Her eyes traced the invisible"
6"She knelt, careful not to"
7"She walked the perimeter."
8"She stepped closer to the"
9"I had to"
10"He was nervous about it."
11"He said he’d found a"
12"It’s an altar."
13"He must have drawn it"
14"it wouldn’t just point."
15"It could open."
16"She looked at Miller’s skeptical,"
ratio0.215
80.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences79
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"This was the Veil Market,"
2"The usual stalls of strange"
3"Quinn stood at the edge"
4"Her sharp jaw was set,"
5"The call had been cryptic,"
6"She’d expected squatters, maybe a"
7"This hollow, charged silence was"
8"The voice came from the"
9"Sergeant Miller, a young officer"
10"Quinn approached with the quiet,"
11"Her worn leather watch felt"
12"The scene was a tableau"
13"A circle of the platform’s"
14"It was as if someone"
15"Quinn asked, her voice low"
16"Miller puffed out his chest."
17"He pointed his flashlight beam"
18"Quinn didn’t move."
19"Her eyes traced the invisible"
ratio0.759
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount4
totalSentences79
matches
0"to see something on the"
1"To thin places."
2"If the ritual was disrupted,"
3"If the circle failed, or"
ratio0.051
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Quinn approached with the quiet, military precision that defined her bearing."
1"She stepped closer to the blood. It was too dark, almost black in the low light. She pulled a pen from her pocket and gently touched the edge of the stain. It w…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Quinn asked, her voice low and even"
1"He pointed, its gate hanging open"
2"Quinn stood, her gaze sweeping the empty circle"
3"Quinn said, her tone leaving no room for argument"
4"Quinn said, her voice leaving no room for debate"
66.67% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Quinn stated (state)"
1"Miller laughed (laugh)"
2"the missing man tell (the missing man tell)"
dialogueSentences36
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.556
rawRatio0.3
effectiveRatio0.167
84.0959%