Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEZDX75A1MW9SM9W45FKV3

Run Details

Duration:
1m 6s
Cost:
$0.001644
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came down in silver sheets, turning the cobblestones into a mosaic of shimmering black mirrors. Detective Harlow Quinn leaned into the wind, her salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her forehead as she sprinted down Dean Street. The neon glare of the Raven’s Nest threw an emerald wash across the wet pavement behind her - the last place she’d spotted Tomás Herrera before he bolted like a startled deer. Her leather boots skidded on the slick pavement as she rounded the corner into an alley. The faint jingle of a medallion and the slap of wet footfalls echoed off the brick walls ahead. She could just make out the shadow of his olive-skinned forearm flashing between dumpsters, the scar along it catching the yellow light of a security lamp. Harlow tapped her earpiece. "Suspect heading east toward Charing Cross. Requesting backup." Static hissed in response. She cursed under her breath - the damn rain must be messing with the signal again. The alley dumped her out onto a wider thoroughfare where the glow of streetlights warred with the storm. A black cab swerved, horn blaring, as Herrera dashed across the road without looking. Harlow barely registered the driver's shouted curse as she followed, the worn leather band of her watch digging into her wrist with each pumping arm motion. She was gaining on him now. The former medic wasn't built for sustained sprints - his breath came in ragged gasps that carried over the drumming rain. Then suddenly he veered left, disappearing down a set of rusted metal stairs into an alleyway so narrow Harlow had to turn sideways to follow. The stairs led to a service entrance marked with faded Underground signage. The door stood slightly ajar, casting an ominous yellow wedge of light onto the wet steps. Harlow hesitated, hand hovering near her service pistol. No badge, no backup, no idea what lay beyond that door. But then she heard the distinctive clink of Herrera's medallion bouncing against his chest as he ran deeper into whatever labyrinth waited below. A metallic taste flooded her mouth. She'd been here before, chasing leads into the dark three years ago. DS Morris had hesitated at a similar threshold - a decision that cost him everything. Harlow set her sharp jaw, drew her weapon, and pushed through the door. The air changed immediately - the sterile rain scent replaced by something damp and organic, like soil after a thaw. The tunnel sloped downward, the concrete walls giving way to curved brickwork from some abandoned Tube station annex. Flickering LED strands illuminated a crude path through the archways, casting jumping shadows that made Harlow's pulse thrum in her throat. Distant sounds swirled up the tunnel - the murmur of voices, the clink of glassware, and something else... a low, resonant hum that vibrated in her molars. Her boots scraped against the uneven floor as she crept forward, keeping to the damp patches where her steps wouldn't echo. The tunnel opened abruptly into a cavernous space that stole Harlow's breath. The abandoned station platform teemed with figures in hooded robes and rain-spattered coats haggling at makeshift stalls. One vendor displayed rows of vials filled with swirling liquids that defied color names - hues that appeared and disappeared when viewed from different angles. Another sold what looked like ceremonial daggers, their blades etched with symbols that made Harlow's eyes water if she stared too long. A handcart stacked with antique bone carvings blocked her path temporarily, giving her cover to observe. And there - twenty yards ahead - Herrera stood talking urgently with a tall figure in a long black coat, their hands exchanging something small that glinted in the low light. Harlow moved without thinking, military precision carrying her past a stall selling what appeared to be jars of preserved moths. The vendor's head snapped up as she passed, nostrils flaring like he'd caught her scent. She pivoted, putting a cluster of shoppers between them, but when she refocused on Herrera's position, both men had vanished. A door in the far wall swung gently on its hinges. Harlow edged closer, catching a glimpse of another tunnel beyond. From within came whispers in a language that scraped at the back of her skull, along with a scent like burning hair. Her service pistol felt suddenly inadequate in her hand, the weight all wrong against the wrongness of this place. She couldn't articulate why her feet carried her forward into that darker passage, why every survival instinct screaming at her to retreat couldn't overpower the need to know. Maybe it was the memory of Morris' unanswered questions. Maybe it was the way Herrera had looked at her in the Raven's Nest before he ran - not with guilt, but with something like pity. The passage narrowed, the walls closing in until the brickwork brushed her shoulders. Somewhere ahead, a door clicked shut with finality. Harlow quickened her pace, her watch strap creaking with the movement. The last turn revealed a dead end - just a blank wall with a single rusted pipe protruding at eye level. She was reaching for it when a voice behind her said, "You shouldn't be here, Detective." Harlow spun, weapon rising automatically. Tomás Herrera stood framed in the tunnel's mouth, his Saint Christopher medallion swinging gently. Only now she noticed the markings on it weren't Christian symbolism at all, but something much older. "Tell me what this place is," Harlow demanded, her back pressed to the damp bricks. "What you're involved in." Herrera's expression turned sad. He reached into his coat pocket, and for a heart-stopping moment Harlow thought he might draw a weapon. Instead he produced a bone-white token, identical to the ones she'd seen changing hands at the market stalls. "Everyone pays to cross the veil," he said softly. "The question is, are you buying... or are you merchandise?" The pipe behind her groaned like a living thing. Harlow barely registered the cool metal against her neck before the world dissolved into swirling shadows and the distant sound of wings.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
25.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
70.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1006
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"gently"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.27% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1006
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"mosaic"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"pumping"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"mosaic"
1"echoed"
2"pumping"
3"pulse"
4"vibrated"
5"echo"
6"etched"
7"weight"
8"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences61
matches
0"t with guilt"
72.60% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences61
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1011
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
67.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount969
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.65
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow16
Quinn1
Dean1
Street1
Raven2
Nest2
Tomás2
Herrera8
Underground1
Morris1
Tube1
Saint1
Christopher1
Christian1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Raven"
3"Nest"
4"Tomás"
5"Herrera"
6"Morris"
7"Saint"
8"Christopher"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
globalScore0.674
windowScore0.833
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like ceremonial daggers, their bla"
1"something like pity"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.989
wordCount1011
matches
0"not with guilt, but with something like pity"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
57.86% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean48.14
std16.97
cv0.353
sampleLengths
069
160
232
358
452
570
646
759
848
976
1047
1155
1262
1363
1453
1516
1636
1719
1840
1919
2031
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs155
matches
0"was gaining"
1"was reaching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences63
ratio0.159
matches
0"The neon glare of the Raven’s Nest threw an emerald wash across the wet pavement behind her - the last place she’d spotted Tomás Herrera before he bolted like a startled deer."
1"She cursed under her breath - the damn rain must be messing with the signal again."
2"The former medic wasn't built for sustained sprints - his breath came in ragged gasps that carried over the drumming rain."
3"DS Morris had hesitated at a similar threshold - a decision that cost him everything."
4"The air changed immediately - the sterile rain scent replaced by something damp and organic, like soil after a thaw."
5"Distant sounds swirled up the tunnel - the murmur of voices, the clink of glassware, and something else..."
6"One vendor displayed rows of vials filled with swirling liquids that defied color names - hues that appeared and disappeared when viewed from different angles."
7"And there - twenty yards ahead - Herrera stood talking urgently with a tall figure in a long black coat, their hands exchanging something small that glinted in the low light."
8"Maybe it was the way Herrera had looked at her in the Raven's Nest before he ran - not with guilt, but with something like pity."
9"The last turn revealed a dead end - just a blank wall with a single rusted pipe protruding at eye level."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount967
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03516028955532575
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.014477766287487074
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean16.05
std6.62
cv0.413
sampleLengths
017
120
232
316
418
526
64
712
816
918
1014
1126
126
1321
1425
1512
1616
178
1811
1923
206
2112
2215
2313
2420
2518
2621
2718
289
2921
3012
3117
3225
3322
3416
3531
3620
3715
3820
3911
4010
4122
4219
4328
449
4526
4613
478
4811
4921
63.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners27
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences61
matches
0"Then suddenly he veered left,"
1"Maybe it was the memory"
2"Maybe it was the way"
3"Somewhere ahead, a door clicked"
4"Only now she noticed the"
5"Instead he produced a bone-white"
ratio0.098
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences61
matches
0"Her leather boots skidded on"
1"She could just make out"
2"She cursed under her breath"
3"She was gaining on him"
4"She'd been here before, chasing"
5"Her boots scraped against the"
6"She pivoted, putting a cluster"
7"Her service pistol felt suddenly"
8"She couldn't articulate why her"
9"She was reaching for it"
10"He reached into his coat"
11"he said softly"
ratio0.197
66.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount48
totalSentences61
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn leaned into"
2"The neon glare of the"
3"Her leather boots skidded on"
4"The faint jingle of a"
5"She could just make out"
6"Harlow tapped her earpiece."
7"Static hissed in response"
8"She cursed under her breath"
9"The alley dumped her out"
10"A black cab swerved, horn"
11"Harlow barely registered the driver's"
12"She was gaining on him"
13"The former medic wasn't built"
14"The stairs led to a"
15"The door stood slightly ajar,"
16"Harlow hesitated, hand hovering near"
17"A metallic taste flooded her"
18"She'd been here before, chasing"
19"DS Morris had hesitated at"
ratio0.787
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.87% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The former medic wasn't built for sustained sprints - his breath came in ragged gasps that carried over the drumming rain."
1"DS Morris had hesitated at a similar threshold - a decision that cost him everything."
2"Flickering LED strands illuminated a crude path through the archways, casting jumping shadows that made Harlow's pulse thrum in her throat."
3"One vendor displayed rows of vials filled with swirling liquids that defied color names - hues that appeared and disappeared when viewed from different angles."
4"And there - twenty yards ahead - Herrera stood talking urgently with a tall figure in a long black coat, their hands exchanging something small that glinted in …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Static hissed (hiss)"
1"Harlow demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
76.8661%