Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEZG7PDRTNC80JSC2R86SQ

Run Details

Duration:
1m 43s
Cost:
$0.001426
Provider:
SambaNova

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air changed the moment they stepped between the oak standing stones. The thick, damp scent of Richmond Park—wet earth and decaying leaves—vanished, replaced by something sweet, clean, and utterly alien. A heavy, profound silence settled around them, broken only by the sound of their own breathing and the soft crunch of their footsteps on a carpet of moss that hadn’t been there a second before. Rory stopped, her hand instinctively reaching for the cold weight of the Fae-Forged Blade at her belt. Beside her, Nyx’s form solidified, the shifting shadows that made up their body coalescing into something more distinctly humanoid, their faintly glowing violet eyes sweeping the grove with keen interest. “We are elsewhere,” Nyx whispered, their voice the soft rustle of leaves in a distant wood. That was an understatement. They stood in a clearing that defied reason. Wildflowers in impossible shades of silver and deep violet bloomed in profusion, their petals seeming to drink the muted light. The trees were ancient oaks, but their bark was smooth and pale as bone, and their leaves rustled with a sound like chiming glass. There was no sun, no discernible source of light, yet the grove was bathed in a perpetual, gentle twilight. The air hummed with a low, resonant energy that made the fine hairs on Rory’s arms stand on end. “Isolde?” Rory called out, her own voice swallowed by the immense, watchful quiet. A figure detached itself from the deeper shadows beneath one of the bone-white oaks. She moved with a preternatural grace, her steps making no impression on the soft moss. Her silver hair cascaded down her back like a waterfall of mercury, and her pale lavender eyes held an ageless weariness. This was the Seer. “You found the path,” Isolde said, her voice melodic and distant. “Not all who seek it do.” “You said you had answers,” Rory said, her grip tightening on the blade’s hilt. The Heartstone Pendant against her chest was inert, a simple cold stone. They were far from any Hel portal here. “I have truths,” Isolde corrected gently, a faint, unreadable smile touching her lips. “Answers are for you to find. Come. The grove is restless tonight. It feels your purpose.” She turned and glided away without another word, leading them deeper into the unnatural wood. Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, who gave a slight, shadowy shrug before flowing after the Half-Fae. Rory followed, her senses on high alert. The further they went, the more the grove revealed its strangeness. They passed a stream where the water ran not with water, but with liquid silver, bubbling softly over smooth, dark stones. The trees began to twist into archways and natural corridors, their branches woven together overhead like the vaulted ceiling of a cathedral. Bioluminescent fungi clung to the roots, casting pools of soft blue and green light onto the path. “Time is… thin here,” Nyx observed, their whisper close to Rory’s ear. They reached out a hand of solid shadow to brush against the trunk of a tree. “It flows like the silver stream, but not in one direction. Can you feel it?” Rory could. It was a disorienting pull, a sense that moments were stretching and compressing around them. A shiver, not entirely from the chill, traced its way down her spine. This was wonder, yes, but it was a dangerous, unsettling wonder. It felt like standing on the edge of a precipice she couldn’t see. They emerged into another, larger clearing. At its center stood a shallow pool, its surface as still and black as polished obsidian. Around it, the ground was bare except for a circle of flat, rune-carved stones. The air here was different—heavier, charged with static. Isolde stood at the pool’s edge, her reflection a perfect, ghostly duplicate and what may yet be.” “A scrying pool,” Nyx murmured, their form flickering with clear interest. “A powerful focus. Such things are rare, even between realms.” “Look into it,” Isolde said, her lavender eyes fixed on Rory. “Seek your question in the darkness.” Hesitantly, Rory approached the black water. She felt a deep resistance, a primal fear of what she might see. Her childhood scar on her wrist itched faintly. She knelt, the cold of the Fae blade’s hilt a grounding presence in her palm. She leaned over, her own face a pale, anxious moon in the impossible darkness of the pool. For a long moment, there was nothing. Just her reflection, her bright blue eyes wide with apprehension. Then the image rippled and dissolved. The black water showed her a sprawling vineyard under a warm amber sky. She saw tables groaning under the weight of impossible feasts, chefs with blank, focused eyes preparing elaborate dishes. She felt a pang of recognition, a bizarre homesickness for a place she’d never been. Dymas. The pendant on her chest remained cold and still. This was a memory, not a present threat. The scene shifted again, violently. The amber sky darkened to a bruised purple. The lavish feast halls were empty, the tables overturned. A figure, tall and cloaked in absolute shadow, stood amidst the ruins, and from it radiated a cold, devouring hunger that made her want to recoil. It was a presence of pure, ravenous absence. The image in the water fractured into a thousand shards, each showing a different, terrifying possibility: London streets cracking open, her friends screaming, Silas’s bar in flames, Eva reaching for her— Rory jerked back from the pool as if burned, her heart hammering against her ribs. The tranquil beauty of the grove now felt like a thin veneer over a bottomless terror. “What was that?” she breathed, her voice unsteady. “A path,” Isolde said, her expression unreadable. “One of many. The threads of fate are tangled around you, Aurora Carter. You have drawn the attention of… an appetite.” Nyx moved to stand between Rory and the pool, their solid form a welcome barrier. “The Gluttony princedom is in turmoil. The vision confirms it. A power struggle. A vacuum.” Their glowing eyes narrowed. “And vacuums… attract.” “The pendant was a key,” Isolde said, her gaze falling to the crimson stone at Rory’s throat. “And a tether. It does not only sense portals. It calls to the one who seeks its pair. You carry a piece of a broken contract into a realm that thrives on them.” The wonder of the grove had curdled into a profound unease. The chiming leaves now sounded like warnings. The sweet air tasted of ominous portent. They had come for answers and found only a deeper, more terrifying maze of questions. Rory stood up, her knees weak. She had fled one life of danger and obligation in Cardiff only to be thrust into the center of something infinitely larger and more hungry. She looked from the enigmatic Seer to the shifting form of Nyx, then down at the black mirror that held such terrible promise. They weren't just explorers in a wondrous place anymore. They were pieces on a board she couldn’t see, and the game had already begun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde corrected gently [gently]"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.071
83.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1188
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"hesitantly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"gently"
2"softly"
3"hesitantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
20.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1188
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"profound"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"footsteps"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"unreadable"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"down her spine"
count1
9
word"charged"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"apprehension"
count1
12
word"pang"
count1
13
word"amidst"
count1
14
word"fractured"
count1
15
word"enigmatic"
count1
highlights
0"profound"
1"silence"
2"footsteps"
3"weight"
4"unreadable"
5"whisper"
6"chill"
7"traced"
8"down her spine"
9"charged"
10"perfect"
11"apprehension"
12"pang"
13"amidst"
14"fractured"
15"enigmatic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences66
matches
0"e with apprehension"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen71
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1181
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1076
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.3
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Nyx7
Rory14
Seer2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
Half-Fae1
Isolde6
Hesitantly1
Fae3
London1
Silas1
Eva1
Aurora1
Carter1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Hesitantly"
4"Silas"
5"Eva"
6"Aurora"
7"Carter"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.849
windowScore0.833
20.69% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences58
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like standing on the edge of a pre"
1"felt like a thin veneer over a bottomle"
2"sounded like warnings. The sweet air taste"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.847
wordCount1181
matches
0"not with water, but with liquid silver, bubbling softly over smooth, dark stones"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean40.72
std20.63
cv0.507
sampleLengths
066
147
216
394
413
554
617
734
829
939
1071
1143
1254
1344
1417
1521
1617
1759
1823
1964
2056
2131
2231
238
2428
2537
2650
2771
2847
94.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"was bathed"
1"are tangled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs163
matches
0"were stretching"
18.63% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences69
ratio0.043
matches
0"The thick, damp scent of Richmond Park—wet earth and decaying leaves—vanished, replaced by something sweet, clean, and utterly alien."
1"The air here was different—heavier, charged with static."
2"The image in the water fractured into a thousand shards, each showing a different, terrifying possibility: London streets cracking open, her friends screaming, Silas’s bar in flames, Eva reaching for her—"
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1027
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"over smooth, dark stones."
1"flat, rune-carved stones."
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.034079844206426485
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.014605647517039922
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean17.12
std13.91
cv0.813
sampleLengths
012
119
235
317
430
516
64
78
820
924
1019
1119
1213
1314
1415
1521
164
1711
186
1914
2012
218
2213
2316
2415
2517
267
2711
2821
2922
3017
3112
3216
3315
342
3515
3613
3711
3813
396
4016
4114
428
4317
4414
457
4617
4759
4823
4964
63.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.43478260869565216
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners30
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Hesitantly, Rory approached the black"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences62
matches
0"They stood in a clearing"
1"She moved with a preternatural"
2"Her silver hair cascaded down"
3"They were far from any"
4"She turned and glided away"
5"They passed a stream where"
6"They reached out a hand"
7"It was a disorienting pull,"
8"It felt like standing on"
9"They emerged into another, larger"
10"she breathed, her voice unsteady"
11"You have drawn the attention"
12"It does not only sense"
13"It calls to the one"
14"You carry a piece of"
15"She looked from the enigmatic"
ratio0.258
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences62
matches
0"The air changed the moment"
1"The thick, damp scent of"
2"A heavy, profound silence settled"
3"Rory stopped, her hand instinctively"
4"Nyx whispered, their voice the"
5"That was an understatement."
6"They stood in a clearing"
7"Wildflowers in impossible shades of"
8"The trees were ancient oaks,"
9"The air hummed with a"
10"Rory called out, her own"
11"A figure detached itself from"
12"She moved with a preternatural"
13"Her silver hair cascaded down"
14"This was the Seer."
15"Isolde said, her voice melodic"
16"Rory said, her grip tightening"
17"The Heartstone Pendant against her"
18"They were far from any"
19"Isolde corrected gently, a faint,"
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"A heavy, profound silence settled around them, broken only by the sound of their own breathing and the soft crunch of their footsteps on a carpet of moss that h…"
1"Beside her, Nyx’s form solidified, the shifting shadows that made up their body coalescing into something more distinctly humanoid, their faintly glowing violet…"
2"Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, who gave a slight, shadowy shrug before flowing after the Half-Fae."
3"It was a disorienting pull, a sense that moments were stretching and compressing around them."
4"The scene shifted again, violently. The amber sky darkened to a bruised purple. The lavish feast halls were empty, the tables overturned. A figure, tall and clo…"
5"Rory jerked back from the pool as if burned, her heart hammering against her ribs. The tranquil beauty of the grove now felt like a thin veneer over a bottomles…"
6"She looked from the enigmatic Seer to the shifting form of Nyx, then down at the black mirror that held such terrible promise. They weren't just explorers in a …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"Isolde said, her voice melodic and distant"
1"Rory said, her grip tightening on the blade’s hilt"
2"Nyx observed, their whisper close to Rory’s ear"
3"Nyx murmured, their form flickering with clear interest"
4"Isolde said, her lavender eyes fixed on Rory"
5"she breathed, her voice unsteady"
6"Isolde said, her expression unreadable"
7"Isolde said, her gaze falling to the crimson stone at Rory’s throat"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Rory called out (call out)"
2"Isolde corrected gently (correct)"
3"Nyx observed (observe)"
4"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
5"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.524
leniency1
rawRatio0.545
effectiveRatio0.545
71.1468%