Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEZXHHQXR8PGQJEPMV34JE

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Duration:
1m 1s
Cost:
$0.002382
Provider:
Novita

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System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt slid back with a heavy clunk. Aurora Carter paused, her hand hovering over the doorknob. There was only silence from the other side now, a silence that felt heavier than the three separate locks she’d just undone. Eva was away on a research trip to Edinburgh, and no one else had any reason to be here. Except, perhaps, one person. She pulled the door open a cautious few inches, the chain latch still engaged. He filled the narrow frame of the doorway, his silhouette sharp against the muted yellow glow of the Brick Lane streetlamp. Lucien Moreau. Dressed, as always, in a charcoal suit so impeccably tailored it looked like it had been woven onto him. The platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place despite the faint drizzle clinging to the evening air. And in his right hand, the familiar ivory handle of his cane gleamed. For a long moment, they just looked at each other through the crack. His heterochromatic eyes—one a warm, predatory amber, the other a bottomless black—held hers. She saw no surprise in them. He’d known she’d be here. “Rory,” he said. Her name was soft on his tongue, a quiet contrast to the London traffic humming distantly below. “Lucien.” Her own voice was flat, a practiced neutrality she’d perfected during her Pre-Law days. It was a shield. “Eva’s not here.” “I know.” He didn’t smile. “I came to see you.” The admission hung between them, simple and dangerous. Aurora’s fingers tightened on the edge of the door. The small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a relic from a fall off a garden wall in Cardiff, seemed to pulse with a phantom ache. The last time they’d spoken, it had been in this very flat, the air thick with things said and things left screamingly unsaid. He’d asked for something she couldn’t give, not then, maybe not ever. And she had told him to leave. “How did you know I was here?” she asked, stalling. A faint, almost imperceptible smile touched his lips. “I make it my business to know things. Especially things that concern you.” His gaze flicked past her, into the cluttered flat. “May I come in? It’s starting to rain in earnest.” It was a lie. The drizzle was barely a mist. But it was a polite lie, an offering of a normal excuse for an profoundly abnormal situation. Aurora hesitated, her mind racing through the out-of-the-box solutions it was known for, and finding none that didn’t end with her slamming the door or letting him in. With a sigh that felt like a surrender, she slid the chain free and opened the door fully. “Fine. But wipe your feet. Eva’s fussy about the carpets.” He stepped inside, and the flat seemed to shrink around his presence. He meticulously wiped the soles of his polished shoes on the worn doormat, a gesture of such mundane civility it was almost jarring. He leaned his cane against the wall by the door, and Aurora’s eyes tracked the movement. She knew what was concealed within that elegant piece of wood. Knew the lethal precision of the man who carried it. He took in the room: the towers of books threatening to topple from every surface, the scrolls unfurled across the small dining table, the faint, perpetual scent of old paper and turmeric from the restaurant below. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby cat, uncurled from a nest of parchment on the sofa, stretched, and then trotted over to wind himself figure-eights around Lucien’s ankles, purring like a small engine. “Traitor,” Aurora muttered under her breath. Lucien bent down, scratching the cat behind its ears with a surprising gentleness. “He remembers who brings the expensive salmon.” He straightened up, his amber eye catching the lamplight. “You’re staying here while Eva is away?” “It’s quieter than my place above Silas’s bar,” she said, crossing her arms over her chest. She was still in her delivery uniform—a dark t-shirt and jeans—and felt acutely underdressed next to his sartorial perfection. “What do you want, Lucien?” He didn’t answer immediately. Instead, he walked slowly towards the table, his gaze scanning the titles of the books. His fingers, long and elegant, hovered over a cracked leather spine but didn’t touch. He had a respect for knowledge, she’d learned that much about him. “There is… a situation,” he began, his voice low. “A delicate matter involving a client. It requires a particular kind of insight. Your kind of insight.” “My insight?” She let out a short, bitter laugh. “You mean my ‘cool-headed, out-of-the-box thinking’? I’m a delivery driver, Lucien. I bring people their sweet and sour pork. I’m not in your world.” “Aren’t you?” He turned to face her fully, and the intensity in his mismatched eyes pinned her to the spot. “You have been since the moment you walked away from that life in Cardiff. Since the moment you came to London. This city has a underside, Rory, and you’ve been living on its edge whether you admit it or not.” He took a step closer. The air grew thick, charged with the memory of their last encounter. She could smell his cologne, something clean and sharp like bergamot and ozone, a scent that had haunted her for weeks after he’d left. “I told you I was done,” she said, her voice quieter now, the bravado fading. “After the thing with the Smuggler’s Guild… I can’t do that again. I won’t.” “This isn’t about the Guild. This is about a girl. A human girl, like you. She’s missing. Her family can’t go to the police for… reasons. They came to me.” He paused, letting the implication hang in the air. “I need someone who can think like she would think. Someone who understands the fear of being in over their head. Someone with a conscience I, frankly, lack.” It was a calculated appeal, and it was working. He knew her Achilles’ heel—a stubborn, frustrating need to help, a relic from her mother’s nurturing nature that had survived her father’s ruthless logic and Evan’s abuse. He was using it against her. “Why now?” she whispered, looking away from his penetrating gaze, focusing instead on a crack in the plaster near the ceiling. “Why come to me now, after all these weeks?” He was silent for so long she thought he wouldn’t answer. When he finally spoke, his voice was stripped of its usual polished veneer, raw and quieter than she’d ever heard it. “Because I have tried to forget the sound of your voice, Aurora Carter. I have tried to forget the way you look at a problem, as if you can see all the hidden gears turning. I have tried, and I have failed.” He took another step, closing the distance between them until she could feel the warmth radiating from him. “So I decided to stop trying.” Her breath caught in her throat. She dared to look at him again. The amber eye was molten gold, burning with a heat that had nothing to do with his demonic heritage and everything to do with the man. The black eye was an abyss, promising secrets and dangers she knew she should run from. The attraction was a live wire between them, a force that had always been there, humming beneath the surface of every conversation, every shared glance. It was the reason their parting had been so agonizing. The hurt was there, too—a fresh wound from his absence, an older bruise from his demand for a commitment to a world she feared. “You can’t just say things like that,” she said, her own voice unsteady. “You can’t show up here and… and use a missing girl to tell me you missed me.” “It’s not a tactic, Rory. It’s the truth. The job is real. My reason for bringing it to you is… complicated.” He lifted a hand, slowly, as if approaching a skittish animal. His fingertips brushed a strand of her straight black hair away from her face, the contact sending a jolt through her system. His touch was warm. Surprisingly human. “I am not a good man. You have always known this. But my regard for you is the truest thing I possess.” Tears she hadn’t known she was holding back pricked at the corners of her bright blue eyes. She was angry at him for his timing, for his brutal honesty, for the way his mere presence unraveled the careful peace she’d built. But the wall around her heart, the one she’d reinforced after Evan, after the terrifying brush with the Smuggler’s Guild, was cracking under the weight of his words. “Tell me about the girl,” she said finally, the words a surrender and an accusation. A shadow of relief crossed his features. He didn’t smile, but the tension in his jaw eased slightly. His hand fell back to his side. “Her name is Elara,” he began, his voice returning to its usual, composed cadence, though it remained soft. “She worked as a conservator at the British Museum. She disappeared three nights ago from a restricted section of the library. The only thing out of place was a single book left open on a desk. A bestiary. And it was open to an entry on a creature from Avaros.” Aurora’s blood ran cold. Avaros. His father’s realm. This was no ordinary missing persons case. This was a thread pulled from the fabric of his own tangled history, and he was handing her the other end. She looked from his serious face to the chaotic, safe, mundane mess of Eva’s flat, and knew with a terrifying certainty that her quiet life was once again over. The door had been opened, and Lucien Moreau had walked back in, bringing all the complication, danger, and undeniable allure of the shadows with him.
created_at"2026-02-17T09:31:38.709616+00:00" 2/17/2026, 9:31:38 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"she said finally [finally]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.05
effectiveRatio0.05
87.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1653
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Elara"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1653
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"racing"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"intensity"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"encounter"
count1
9
word"implication"
count1
10
word"calculated"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count1
13
word"weight"
count1
14
word"tension"
count1
15
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"familiar"
2"pulse"
3"flicked"
4"racing"
5"scanning"
6"intensity"
7"charged"
8"encounter"
9"implication"
10"calculated"
11"could feel"
12"warmth"
13"weight"
14"tension"
15"chaotic"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
1
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
1"the weight of his words"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences92
matches
0"was angry"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences92
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences108
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1645
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1189
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Edinburgh1
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau2
London1
Pre-Law1
Cardiff1
Aurora6
Eva3
Lucien4
Evan1
Smuggler1
Guild1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Moreau"
2"Aurora"
3"Eva"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
6"Smuggler"
places
0"Edinburgh"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like it had been woven onto him"
1"felt like a surrender, she slid the cha"
2"as if approaching a skittish animal"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1645
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences108
matches
0"learned that much"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean45.69
std26.62
cv0.583
sampleLengths
063
114
277
337
420
522
610
785
810
940
1073
1110
1272
1366
146
1536
1640
1745
1826
1933
2060
2141
2229
2367
2442
2530
2632
2766
28114
2930
3082
3169
3215
3325
3468
3590
82.38% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences92
matches
0"been woven"
1"was slicked"
2"was known"
3"was concealed"
4"was molten"
5"been opened"
20.79% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was working"
1"was using"
2"was holding"
3"was cracking"
4"was handing"
37.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences108
ratio0.037
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one a warm, predatory amber, the other a bottomless black—held hers."
1"She was still in her delivery uniform—a dark t-shirt and jeans—and felt acutely underdressed next to his sartorial perfection."
2"He knew her Achilles’ heel—a stubborn, frustrating need to help, a relic from her mother’s nurturing nature that had survived her father’s ruthless logic and Evan’s abuse."
3"The hurt was there, too—a fresh wound from his absence, an older bruise from his demand for a commitment to a world she feared."
85.77% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1222
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"chaotic, safe, mundane mess"
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.0425531914893617
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.013911620294599018
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences108
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences108
mean15.23
std10.22
cv0.671
sampleLengths
09
19
222
319
44
514
621
72
819
922
1013
1113
1213
136
145
153
1617
1715
184
193
205
215
228
239
2426
2523
2612
277
2810
298
3022
3110
324
336
3417
3528
3618
3710
3812
3923
4016
4111
4210
4336
4430
456
4613
4716
487
4916
51.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.37037037037037035
totalSentences108
uniqueOpeners40
37.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Instead, he walked slowly towards"
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences88
matches
0"She pulled the door open"
1"He filled the narrow frame"
2"His heterochromatic eyes—one a warm,"
3"She saw no surprise in"
4"He’d known she’d be here."
5"Her name was soft on"
6"Her own voice was flat,"
7"It was a shield."
8"He didn’t smile"
9"He’d asked for something she"
10"she asked, stalling"
11"His gaze flicked past her,"
12"It was a lie."
13"He stepped inside, and the"
14"He meticulously wiped the soles"
15"He leaned his cane against"
16"She knew what was concealed"
17"He took in the room:"
18"He straightened up, his amber"
19"she said, crossing her arms"
ratio0.58
28.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences88
matches
0"The third deadbolt slid back"
1"Aurora Carter paused, her hand"
2"Eva was away on a"
3"She pulled the door open"
4"He filled the narrow frame"
5"The platinum blond hair was"
6"His heterochromatic eyes—one a warm,"
7"She saw no surprise in"
8"He’d known she’d be here."
9"Her name was soft on"
10"Her own voice was flat,"
11"It was a shield."
12"He didn’t smile"
13"The admission hung between them,"
14"Aurora’s fingers tightened on the"
15"The small, crescent-shaped scar on"
16"The last time they’d spoken,"
17"He’d asked for something she"
18"she asked, stalling"
19"A faint, almost imperceptible smile"
ratio0.864
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Aurora hesitated, her mind racing through the out-of-the-box solutions it was known for, and finding none that didn’t end with her slamming the door or letting …"
1"The attraction was a live wire between them, a force that had always been there, humming beneath the surface of every conversation, every shared glance."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He straightened up, his amber eye catching the lamplight"
1"he began, his voice low"
2"she said, her voice quieter now, the bravado fading"
3"she said, her own voice unsteady"
4"she said finally, the words a surrender and an accusation"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.229
leniency0.457
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.114
72.3193%