Run: 2026-02-17-01KHNEZZDAA34Q2G0FKA6VKD1H

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26.3s
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You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

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The knock came at half past ten — too late for deliveries, too early for neighbours with complaints. Aurora set down her coffee mug and crossed the cramped living room, Ptolemy winding between her ankles in protest at the disturbance. Three deadbolts. She undid them one by one, the familiar ritual of Eva's security second nature after three months of crashing on the sofa bed. The door swung open, and the air left her lungs. Lucien stood in the hallway lighting, a vision in charcoal wool and immaculate tailoring, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane. His platinum hair was slicked back as always, every strand in its precise place. But it was his eyes that stopped her breath — the amber one catching the warm light from the corridor, the black one fixed on her with an intensity that hadn't dimmed. "Rory." Her name in his voice, that velvet roll of the r, undid something in her chest. She hadn't heard it in four months. She'd told herself she didn't want to. "What are you doing here?" "May I come in?" The question was polite, controlled, as if he weren't standing at the door of a flat above a curry house in East London, as if the last time she'd seen him hadn't been in the aftermath of the mess with the Ashworth circle, as if he hadn't kissed her in the alley behind Silas' bar and then vanished for weeks until the silence became its own answer. "No." The word came out sharper than she intended. Or perhaps exactly as sharp as she intended. "You don't get to show up unannounced and ask to come in." He didn't flinch. Of course he didn't. Lucien Moreau had survived demon courts and human politics and whatever complicated thing he was — half of something most people didn't believe existed. A refusal was nothing to him. "Then I'll stand here." He tilted his head, and the amber eye seemed to catch fire. "You look tired." "People usually do at half ten at night." "You look beautiful." The compliment landed like a punch. Aurora stepped back, arms crossing over her chest, suddenly aware of her paint-stained jumper and the leggings she'd been wearing since that morning. She hadn't dressed for visitors. She hadn't dressed for him. "You didn't answer my question." "I know where you live," he said, as if that explained anything. When she stared at him, he continued, "I've known for weeks. I wasn't sure if you'd want to see me." "And now you decided to find out by showing up on my friend's doorstep?" "I decided to find out by showing up." He shifted his weight, and for the first time, she saw the flicker of uncertainty in him — a slight tension in his jaw, a microscopic relaxation of his shoulders that meant he was preparing for rejection. "I apologize for the method." "You apologize." "I mean it." Aurora laughed, a brittle sound that surprised even her. "You mean it. That's good. That's really good, Lucien. Do you know what would have been better? A phone call. A letter. A carrier pigeon. Anything except—" She gestured at him, at the perfect suit, the perfect hair, the perfect way he stood there like he had every right to be in her doorway. "This." "I called. You didn't answer." "Because I changed my number." "I know." "Then you could have—" "Sent a message through channels I know you'd intercept? Asked Silas? Called in favours with the people who owe me?" He shook his head slowly. "I didn't want to come to you through machinery, Rory. I wanted to see your face." Something in her cracked. She hated it — the way her eyes burned, the way her throat tightened. Four months of telling herself she'd dodged a bullet, that whatever had been building between them was just proximity and danger and the particular intimacy of surviving impossible things together. Four months of waking up in Eva's cramped flat and not thinking about amber eyes and the way his hand had felt cupping her face in that alley. "Why?" The word came out small. "Why now? Why here?" Lucien was quiet for a moment. In the silence, she heard the muffled sounds of the curry house below — pots clattering, the distant murmur of customers. Ptolemy wound around her ankle again, oblivious to the tension, and she wondered if she could simply close the door, lock the three deadbolts, and pretend this had never happened. But she wouldn't. She knew she wouldn't. That was the problem. "There was a job," he said finally. "Information gathering. A nest of lesser demons operating out of a warehouse in Limehouse. I handled it." "Good for you." "But while I was there, I found something. A record. A name." He paused, and his black eye seemed to darken. "Your ex. Evan." The name hit her like ice water. She hadn't heard it spoken aloud in months — had spent years building walls between herself and the memory of his hands, his voice, the slow suffocation of loving someone who treated her like property. She'd left Cardiff because of Evan. She'd fled to London because of Evan. She'd changed her name, her number, her entire life because of Evan. "What about him?" "He was there. At the warehouse. I don't know how he's connected to the demon operation, but he was there, and he's still in London, and—" Lucien stopped, his jaw tightening. "I should have told you sooner. I should have found a way to contact you properly. But I needed to see you first. To make sure you were safe." "I'm not safe." The words came out automatic, the defence mechanism she'd built in Cardiff. "I'm never safe. That's the whole point, isn't it? That's why people like you—" "People like me what?" "Deal in information. Sell it to the highest bidder. Show up at people's doors at half ten at night because they think they know what's best." She was shaking now, she realized. Fine tremors running through her hands. "You don't get to do this. You don't get to disappear for months and then come back with information about my abusive ex and expect me to fall into your arms." "I don't expect anything." "Then what do you want?" The question hung between them. Lucien looked at her — really looked, with both eyes, the amber and the black — and for a moment, the mask slipped. She saw the exhaustion beneath the polish, the worry carved into the lines around his mouth. He looked older than thirty-two. He looked like he hadn't slept in weeks. "I want," he said slowly, "to stop dreaming about you. I want to stop waking up in my flat in Shoreditch and reaching for a space where you should be. I want—" He broke off, laughed softly, a sound she'd never heard from him before. Defeated. Human. "I want to stop pretending I don't care whether you hate me." The confession cracked through her defences like a battering ram. Aurora felt her hands unclench, felt the tight fist around her heart loosen just slightly. She wanted to hate him. She wanted to slam the door and lock it and never see him again. But she couldn't, and they both knew it. "I don't hate you," she said quietly. "That's the worst part." Lucien closed his eyes. When he opened them again, there was something raw in his expression — something that made him look less like the impeccably dressed fixer and more like a man standing in a doorway, hoping. "May I come in now?" Aurora looked at him — at the man she'd been trying to forget, the man who'd kissed her like she mattered and then vanished like she didn't, the man who'd just travelled across London to tell her that her past had found her again. She thought about the three deadbolts. She thought about Eva's books scattered across every surface, the research notes for the case they'd been working before everything fell apart. She thought about the way her heart beat faster when he was near, even after everything. She stepped aside. The door closed behind him, and she reached up to touch his face without thinking, her thumb brushing the sharp line of his cheekbone. He leaned into her touch, and his eyes fluttered closed, and for a moment, they were just two people standing in a cramped flat above a curry house, pretending the world outside didn't exist. "I've missed you," she whispered. "I know." His voice was rough. "I've missed you too." And then his mouth was on hers, and the four months of silence collapsed into nothing, and she decided — just for tonight — to stop asking questions and start believing in the possibility of something other than running.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
90.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"he said slowly [slowly]"
2"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.68
rawRatio0.176
effectiveRatio0.12
76.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1474
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"really"
2"slowly"
3"softly"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.12% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1474
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"aftermath"
count1
4
word"silence"
count3
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"tension"
count2
8
word"perfect"
count3
9
word"fluttered"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"intensity"
2"velvet"
3"aftermath"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"flicker"
7"tension"
8"perfect"
9"fluttered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
87.20% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1485
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1043
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.58
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
Eva3
East1
London3
Ashworth1
Moreau1
Aurora5
Lucien6
Cardiff2
Evan3
Fine1
Defeated1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like he hadn't slept in weeks"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1485
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean28.02
std25.61
cv0.914
sampleLengths
065
110
270
31
430
55
64
767
829
937
1019
118
123
1339
145
1532
1614
1750
182
193
2064
215
225
232
244
2541
2676
2710
2857
2911
3024
313
3224
3367
343
3560
3629
374
3869
394
405
4157
4259
4352
4411
4538
465
4788
483
4958
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"was slicked"
87.64% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs178
matches
0"weren't standing"
1"was preparing"
2"was shaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences110
ratio0.1
matches
0"The knock came at half past ten — too late for deliveries, too early for neighbours with complaints."
1"But it was his eyes that stopped her breath — the amber one catching the warm light from the corridor, the black one fixed on her with an intensity that hadn't dimmed."
2"Lucien Moreau had survived demon courts and human politics and whatever complicated thing he was — half of something most people didn't believe existed."
3"\"I decided to find out by showing up.\" He shifted his weight, and for the first time, she saw the flicker of uncertainty in him — a slight tension in his jaw, a microscopic relaxation of his shoulders that meant he was preparing for rejection."
4"She hated it — the way her eyes burned, the way her throat tightened."
5"In the silence, she heard the muffled sounds of the curry house below — pots clattering, the distant murmur of customers."
6"She hadn't heard it spoken aloud in months — had spent years building walls between herself and the memory of his hands, his voice, the slow suffocation of loving someone who treated her like property."
7"Lucien looked at her — really looked, with both eyes, the amber and the black — and for a moment, the mask slipped."
8"When he opened them again, there was something raw in his expression — something that made him look less like the impeccably dressed fixer and more like a man standing in a doorway, hoping."
9"Aurora looked at him — at the man she'd been trying to forget, the man who'd kissed her like she mattered and then vanished like she didn't, the man who'd just travelled across London to tell her that her past had found her again."
10"And then his mouth was on hers, and the four months of silence collapsed into nothing, and she decided — just for tonight — to stop asking questions and start believing in the possibility of something other than running."
99.03% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1046
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount43
adverbRatio0.04110898661567878
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.011472275334608031
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean13.5
std12.68
cv0.94
sampleLengths
018
122
22
323
410
524
614
732
81
916
107
117
125
134
1467
159
168
1712
183
194
2024
216
2216
233
248
253
266
2723
285
295
305
3112
3220
3314
3445
355
362
373
389
3954
401
415
425
432
444
4525
4616
474
4814
4930
43.64% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats17
diversityRatio0.35454545454545455
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners39
45.66% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Of course he didn't."
ratio0.014
28.22% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences73
matches
0"She undid them one by"
1"His platinum hair was slicked"
2"Her name in his voice,"
3"She hadn't heard it in"
4"She'd told herself she didn't"
5"He didn't flinch."
6"He tilted his head, and"
7"She hadn't dressed for visitors."
8"She hadn't dressed for him."
9"he said, as if that"
10"He shifted his weight, and"
11"She gestured at him, at"
12"He shook his head slowly"
13"She hated it — the"
14"She knew she wouldn't."
15"he said finally"
16"He paused, and his black"
17"She hadn't heard it spoken"
18"She'd left Cardiff because of"
19"She'd fled to London because"
ratio0.479
42.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences73
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Aurora set down her coffee"
2"She undid them one by"
3"The door swung open, and"
4"Lucien stood in the hallway"
5"His platinum hair was slicked"
6"Her name in his voice,"
7"She hadn't heard it in"
8"She'd told herself she didn't"
9"The question was polite, controlled,"
10"The word came out sharper"
11"He didn't flinch."
12"Lucien Moreau had survived demon"
13"A refusal was nothing to"
14"He tilted his head, and"
15"The compliment landed like a"
16"Aurora stepped back, arms crossing"
17"She hadn't dressed for visitors."
18"She hadn't dressed for him."
19"he said, as if that"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"But it was his eyes that stopped her breath — the amber one catching the warm light from the corridor, the black one fixed on her with an intensity that hadn't …"
1"She hadn't heard it spoken aloud in months — had spent years building walls between herself and the memory of his hands, his voice, the slow suffocation of lovi…"
2"When he opened them again, there was something raw in his expression — something that made him look less like the impeccably dressed fixer and more like a man s…"
3"The door closed behind him, and she reached up to touch his face without thinking, her thumb brushing the sharp line of his cheekbone."
36.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"the last time she'd, as if he hadn't kissed her in the alley behind Silas' bar and then vanished for weeks until the silence became its own answer"
1"he said, as if that explained anything"
2"Lucien stopped, his jaw tightening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.04
77.6684%