| 59.09% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She gestured vaguely [vaguely]" | | 1 | "They shifted again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.846 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |
| 72.94% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 924 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "very" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "carefully" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 924 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "oppressive" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "stark" | | 5 | "loomed" | | 6 | "vibrated" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "scanning" | | 10 | "palpable" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "throbbed" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "reminder" | | 15 | "racing" | | 16 | "tinged" | | 17 | "profound" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 32.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 39 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 67 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 920 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 30 | | wordCount | 728 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.96 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Gluttony | 2 | | Hel | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Nyx | 5 | | Varga | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Gluttony" | | 1 | "Carter" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Isolde" | | 6 | "Heartstone" | | 7 | "Pendant" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "shadow that seemed to absorb the light, their violet eyes fixed on the distant, shimmering vineyards that stretched towards the horizon like a sea of purple grapes" | | 1 | "murmur that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere" | | 2 | "as if expecting something to emerge from the shadows cast by the blood-red trees" | | 3 | "silhouette that seemed to melt into the shadows cast by the blood trees" | | 4 | "as if listening to the very heartbeat of the realm" |
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| 91.30% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.087 | | wordCount | 920 | | matches | | 0 | "not water, but a viscous, crimson liquid" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 41 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 21.54% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 10 | | mean | 92 | | std | 20.74 | | cv | 0.225 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 111 | | 1 | 114 | | 2 | 106 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 83 | | 5 | 80 | | 6 | 81 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 104 | | 9 | 120 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 41 | | ratio | 0.073 | | matches | | 0 | "“Or a nightmare. The Veil is thin here, Rory. Very thin.” She gestured vaguely towards the shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight – a faint, almost imperceptible ripple in the air, like heat haze over a desert, but colder, more alien." | | 1 | "The air vibrated with the low, rhythmic thrumming of distant music – the sound of feasting, of celebration, of something primal and insatiable." | | 2 | "“The closer we get to the source, the stronger the Veil’s pull becomes. It’s not just a barrier; it’s a prison. And here, it’s weakening.” They shifted again, becoming more incorporeal, their form blurring at the edges, a ghostly silhouette that seemed to melt into the shadows cast by the blood trees." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 732 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.036885245901639344 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01639344262295082 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 41 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 41 | | mean | 22.44 | | std | 12.43 | | cv | 0.554 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 28 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 44 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 20 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 42 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 48 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 52 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 27 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 12 | | 33 | 67 | | 34 | 25 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 28 | | 39 | 28 | | 40 | 16 |
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| 63.41% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 4 | | diversityRatio | 0.43902439024390244 | | totalSentences | 41 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 76.41% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "Her companion, Nyx, shifted restlessly" | | 1 | "Her voice was soft, almost" | | 2 | "She gestured vaguely towards the" | | 3 | "It spewed not water, but" | | 4 | "They moved with unnatural silence," | | 5 | "She took a step closer" | | 6 | "It had been a gift," | | 7 | "She looked down at it," | | 8 | "They shifted again, becoming more" | | 9 | "She glanced at Isolde, who" | | 10 | "she asked, her voice low" | | 11 | "She took a step back" | | 12 | "She looked at Nyx, who" | | 13 | "She looked at Isolde, the" |
| | ratio | 0.359 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "The ambersky bled into the" | | 1 | "Dymas, the realm of Gluttony," | | 2 | "Aurora Carter, Rory to her" | | 3 | "The scent of overripe fruit" | | 4 | "Her companion, Nyx, shifted restlessly" | | 5 | "Isolde Varga murmured, her silver" | | 6 | "Her voice was soft, almost" | | 7 | "She gestured vaguely towards the" | | 8 | "Nyx’s form flickered, solidifying into" | | 9 | "Rory’s gaze swept over the" | | 10 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 11 | "It spewed not water, but" | | 12 | "The air vibrated with the" | | 13 | "Nyx asked, their voice a" | | 14 | "They moved with unnatural silence," | | 15 | "Isolde replied, her pale lavender" | | 16 | "She took a step closer" | | 17 | "Isolde continued, her voice dropping" | | 18 | "Rory’s hand instinctively went to" | | 19 | "It had been a gift," |
| | ratio | 0.923 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 39 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, it throbbed with a" |
| | ratio | 0.026 | |
| 32.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 26 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The ambersky bled into the horizon, a molten gold that swallowed the last vestiges of twilight." | | 1 | "Her companion, Nyx, shifted restlessly beside her, a living shadow that seemed to absorb the light, their violet eyes fixed on the distant, shimmering vineyards…" | | 2 | "The ground beneath her boots was soft, yielding slightly, like rich, dark earth that had drunk deeply of something potent." | | 3 | "She glanced at Isolde, who stood motionless, her silver hair flowing like liquid moonlight, her eyes closed as if listening to the very heartbeat of the realm." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde replied, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the fountain" | | 1 | "Isolde continued, her voice dropping to a near-whisper," | | 2 | "Nyx said, their voice sharp, cutting through the thrumming music" | | 3 | "she asked, her voice low" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde Varga murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde continued (continue)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |